Arshi ff I've Had Enough pt 11 updated pg 24 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow khushi is baxk in action.
Khushi wants to torture arnav and he should regret for his begaviours very badly
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Posted: 8 years ago
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TEASER FOR NEXT UPDATE

Few weeks later

Everyone in Raizada mansion had grown a liking towards Arav ! After years the Raizadas has got a chance to pamper a kid and they were taking full advantage of it pampering arav and unknowingly acting the way Sheetal wanted .

Due to the overpampering by Raizadas Arav and Sheetal had started showing their attitude . Though Arav was a child he had started being quite rude n mannerless but everyone had not taken it to their hear thinking of him jus as a child ! Though no one liked Sheetal coz she had insulted their Khushi but Sheetal apologized to everyone as she can't afford to b in their bad books. So everyone was jus civil towards her.

One morning everyone assembled for breakfast ! Hp was arranging breakfast on table and accidentally he hit the glass of juice and that juice fell on Arav and he got up from his chair and created a big fuss !

HP : arre ! Maaf karna Arav baba galti se hogaya ( HP apologised politely)


Arav : Wat the hell ! Hey u! Can't u do ur work properly?! R u blind ? U idiotic servant ! ( he shouted )

Everyone were jus shocked at the way he reacted and his choice of word ! No doubt the Raizadas were hell angry . Though Hp was their servant but he was treated like their family member in fact he was one ! Arnav was about to blast on Arav until they heard someone screaming n everyone was jus rooted to their sits seeing the person they least expected!
Edited by angel1cdevil - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
please update soon ..can't wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
I'm hoping that was Khushi screaming!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Wow wat a teaser. Cant wait fr the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
wowww awesome chaps and teaser... 😊
Please update soon... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome teaser
Can't wait for update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Nice teaser.
I am sure that person is khushi.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 10

Arnav looked at Khushi stunned but Khushi was all calm and composed n staring at Arnav ryt in eye. Arnav recalled Wat all Khushi said to him jus now. He didn't know what to think because ryt now it was like he is dealing with a new person ! But wen Khushi said YOUR house that caught his attention .
He thought " y did Khushi say lyk this? As if she has no right in this house?"

Khushi noticed his confused look and sighed ! "Wat should I do with this guy?!" And she thought to clear his confusion !

Khushi : u urself cleared it to me Mr Raizada in the morning it self that I should stay in my limits n not to interfere in ur n ur family matters as its YOUR house!

Arnav looked at Khushi dumbstruck n felt as if someone dropped a heavy stone on his heart . He cursed himself and his big mouth. He thought to himself " dammit ! How could I say such things to her?! Agreed she did a mistake but how could I act so cruel ? But I have done this before also n Khushi knows that I never mean anything Wat I say in anger then y is she reacting lyk this now? He opened his mouth to talk to Khushi n noticed she had left already .

Arnav : Wat the!

He sat on the recliner with a thud . He doesn't know y he is already getting a feeling as if he had lost something precious . He thought about what all happened in past 24hrs . Shyam coming home , his di's reaction , the way he dragged Khushi and accused her n now the way he hurt Khushi my bringing Sheetal ! And on top of that he went ahead and told her about his so called ex relationship!
How could I stoop so low?! In my momentary anger I destroyed everything ! Damn me ! And Khushi how heartbroken she must have felt ? Especially wen that Bimbo sheetal said nonsense about her and I her husband did not even say anything! How could I? I couldn't bear anyone even pointing at my Khushi n now Wat happened to me? Is my anger my ego more important then my love? NO! But haven't u proved otherwise ASR?

Arnav was busy in his own thoughts ! He was feeling ashamed of himself ! He didn't realize wen tears started flowing from his eyes wen he thought about how he hurt his Khushi ! "Wat was her mistake? Did she benefit by bringing that shyam home? In fact she will b the one to bear that moron and on top of that I shouted at her only?! She sacrificed so much for MY sister ! Did not think abt her happiness but thought about me and my sister n this is Wat I give her?! N Wat did I say ? I vent my anger on her every time n she every time understand me then wats wrong this time?! You r jus so great ASR ! U expect her to forgive u every time u do some mistake n wen she did mistake once U gave her this cruel words of urs forget forgiveness! She's a human god dammit ! She too has feelings which u hurt every given chance !

I don't deserve her at all ! But still I m selfish ! Wat can I do? I love her ! She's more important to me then my next breadth ! She's reason for my existence ! But did u ever show this to her? All u have done is taken her for granted ! She's the most important person in ur life but u showed her as if her importance in ur life is less then even hariprakash!

Oh god ! Wat have I done ?! N its not even a day dammit ! How could I commit so many unforgivable mistakes in such a short time ?! Y m I lyk this mom?! And y only in her case?! I should b awarded for creating so many mistakes in such a short time ! And on top of that I brought that Sheetal home! Now I can't even tel her to get out ! It will b rude ! And Khushi ..she won't even luk at my face !

How will I woo her? Will she forgive me this time? I have crossed my limits this time! I don't deserve forgiveness but Mom plz jus tel her to give me one last chance ! I promise mom I'll be gud to her ! I won't take her for granted ! But how will I ask her forgiveness? This Khushi is so alien to me not my usual ever forgiving Khushi! Its like I don't even matter to her anymore . And that thought itself was horrifying for him . I think I should give her sometime . She won't listen to me now wen she's do hurt ! I'll do my level best to woo my love ! She may act the way she want pretend however she wants but she doesn't know that her heart belongs to me and it will always behave the way I want ! She's mine and will always be jus mine lyk m Only hers! I committed a mistake by bringing that Sheetal home but now I won't commit anymore mistakes ! I won't let my Khushi feel insecure coz of that bimbo ! I know now she won't even tel me nor show me that she's hurt now I myself have to understand her ! Which I failed to do before ! But not anymore jaan . Plz forgive ur laad governer one last time !

But in all this he forgot abt Khushi speaking in fluent English ! And was all engrossed in thinking about wooing her.

Few weeks later


Everyone in Raizada mansion had grown a liking towards Arav! After years the Raizadas has got a chance to pamper a kid and they were taking full advantage of it pampering Arav and unknowingly acting the way sheetal wanted.

Due to the overpampering by Raizadas Arav and sheetal had started showing their attitude. Though Arav was a child he had started being quite rude n mannerless but everyone had not taken it to their heart thinking of him jus as a child! Though no one liked sheetal coz she had insulted their Khushi but sheetal apologized to everyone as she can't afford to b in their bad books. So everyone were jus civil towards her.

One morning everyone assembled for breakfast! Hp was arranging breakfast on table and accidentally he hit the glass of juice and that juice fell on Arav and he got up from his chair and created a big fuss!

Hp: arre! Maaf karna Arav baba galti se hogaya ( Hp apologised politely)

Arav : Wat the hell ! Hey u! Can't u do ur work properly?! R u blind? U idiotic servant! ( he shouted )

Everyone were shocked at the way he reacted and his choice of words ! No doubt the Raizadas were hell angry. Though Hp was their servant but he was treated like their family member in fact he was one ! Arnav was about to blast on Arav until they heard someone screaming n everyone was jus rooted to their sits seeing the person they least expected!

Khushi : Enough ! How dare u?! Who the he'll do u think u r? Huh? Some Prince ? Don't u know how to speak to elder people? ( Khushi roared )

Everyone were shocked looking at Khushi . They never expected their ever so loving Khushi to behave like a lioness . Sheetal and Shyam were jus watching as if they had seen a ghost . Arav was shivering badly but that didn't affect Khushi ! She had taken enough from this kid who was no way behaving according to his age . Sheetal got up before anything could go bad for her.

Sheetal : Arav ! Is this the way to behave to elders? So Wat if he is jus a servant ? He apologized ryt? Now don't make so much fuss have ur breakfast n change ur clothes !

Everyone were surprised looking at the way sheetal spoke ! No wonder the child is mannerless !

Arnav : mind u sheetal Hp is one of my family member not a servant ! And I won't tolerate any Outsider hurting my family ! Tell ur son to apologize to Hp ryt Now !

Sheetal was shocked to hear this ! But she didn't want to upset Arnav so she told Arav to say sorry to Hp n he did meekly and gave a scared look to Khushi who was glaring at him !

Arnav looked at Khushi but she jus ignore him like usual and Arnav felt sad ! He was receiving this treatment from her for weeks now but he won't back off ! He will woo his jaan by hook or crook !


Thank u for the comments..hope u all like this chappy😊

Edited by angel1cdevil - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Nice update!! Arnav is going to repent for so many things.. can't wait to read further...

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