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Sarthi Sharda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#181

Awesome superb lovely fabulous update dear

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Posted: 7 years ago

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proteeti

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Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Wow! Their engagement scenes were so great! Can't wait to read further!

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Akriti154

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Posted: 7 years ago

#184

This was a brilliant update.

So he did realize she wasn't happy with the engagement either

Glad she didn't forgave him like always

He has had enough of taking her granted

Continue soon

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sehar mehrotra

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Posted: 6 years ago

#185

*Res*

Been AWOL for a while now, will defo post a super long review ASAP 😉

P.S. Shanocim did I miss your bday? Shoot 😭, Sorry Hun and Happy Belated Bday 🤗

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904129

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Posted: 6 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra
P.S. Shanocim did I miss your bday? Shoot 😭, Sorry Hun and Happy Belated Bday 🤗

Aww, it's okay Chan.

Thank you for your wishes. 🤗

Edited by .Archangel. - 6 years ago

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sehar mehrotra

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Posted: 6 years ago

#187

Been super busy lately, so I've been reading the entire FF in parts 😆

But I didn't want to torture everyone with my part per part review lmao, so here's the entire one now 😳

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Those aunties talking about Noor's engagement is so typical, lol I can so relate to these women. They are present everywhere 😆

Nor and her Bae, OMG that so reminded me of a one Mr Elephant ahem ahem that I used to ahem ahem have 😆

Zee's reaction and yelling at his help was kinda expected, he's angry at the very thought of being tied up in this relationship forever. I guess thats why he's acting out like a fish outta water 😆. But its fine, any sort of suffering is good for a man like him. He deserves to be punished for the kinda ass he's been to Noor. But this entire fiasco of changing him with marriage challenge is way too nasty, not to him (he toh deserves like a 5 yr imprisonment 😆) but to our sweet, delicate cutie pie. She deserves so much better than this. A loveless marriage with a guy who wants nothing to do with her 😭

Zee's annoyed at Noor, yup that seems to be the going theme 🤣 Noor's silence and unhappiness is quite visible in the way she stood still and lifeless at the ceremony. That jerk

Ahmad dictating every antic of Zee, its not possible for him to keep doing it all his life. He's not a kid now and Ahmad needs to accept the fact and stop ruining Noor's life with a false hope of his son changing and everyone living happily ever after 😡

Zeeshan's inner state of mind, goes like one of those scenes where a Devil and Saint version of you appears and has a conversation 🤣. Glad he realizes he's been a douche to her 😡

Girls at the college fangirling over the ring and Zee 😆😆 and Noor's absolutely not interesting in it 👏

I esp love love love the last part. Such badass attitude from our gal. Zee couldn't even in his wildest dream have anticipated such a cold and raging treatment from Noor. His shock was quite visible when all he could get outta his mouth was "Pretense" 😆. This was much needed, she need to put him in place, he needed to hear that she's not some doll he can toy around with. They both needed this conversation, she so that she can get all the insult and humiliation out of her system 👏👏 and he, well mostly cause he's a douche 😆

Zee's hot-cold treatment just shows how casual he is towards her. He loves her, that is a fact. As much as I don't like him, but he does love her. She's been his support all through his life and the only solace he had. She's been his rock, his friend, the only in this world he can truly call his own. The problem lies in the fact that he doesn't respect her at all! In his head he owns Noor, and thats where lies all the problem. I'm pretty sure its too late for him to realize that. Honestly, I think its Noor's fault too. She let him dictate the last 20 something years of her life, she mistook all of it for love, put up with all his crap. Its only now that she realizes that! Is it too late for them to change it all? I wonder 😕

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Posted: 6 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: GOLD3009
Loved it dear
Awesome part ...
Excellent mind blowing and bang on! ... Noor well done girl
I am dam happy what Noor did in the end
Zeeshan deserved this from Noor ... Being insulted in public like he did
Well I can understand her plight and agony of Noor
She could not disgrace her parents in front of all and had to do this engagement
Good that she vent out every frustration on the right person
Zeeshan was still taking it lightly but good Noor made him realize the reality that its not that light
Waiting to read more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

I'm so glad you loved it so much Goldie. ❤️

Noor is a self-respecting woman and would give back to anyone who would cross the line. Zeeshan got what he deserved for humiliating her like that in public.

Zeeshan didn't realize the gravity of the situation but he would now. He took her for granted for very long time and Noor has learned her lesson. Things are about to change for good!

Keep Reading. ❤️