~Fiction: Chand Chhupa Badal Mein ~ A New Beginning ~ Pg 33 - Page 18

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Loved it Shanu dear awesome part

Love you lots 🤗

Finally deer aaaye par durust aaye ... Was waiting for the update

I am glad that Noor took this decision of breaking off with Zeeshan ... But it seems things are not easy

Her parents are so excited for the engagement ... That too to a person who doesn't care about their daughter

Poor Noor doesn't know what to say to her parents in this situation it will surely break them to the core

Even I loved how Zeshaan father knocked some sense into his head but he didn't budged a bit

I think it will create more complication for Noor and her parents

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: rai-kishori.

This update was just amazing! <3

Originally posted by: sharda_123

Superb awesome lovely amazing update dear

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: akriti154

Lovely update

Zee is actually so mean

Noor is battling with herself seeing her parents excitement but I think she should tell Dem d truth now

His father's blackmailing him

This would only worsen it

All d best for your exams, n wish me too mine r also starting next week

Just a lil req update zehnaseeb wen u get free time

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: chik

Thanks Shanaya... loved it... wish Noor cancels it.. and Zeeshan has yet to realize her worth...Can't wait for the next part

Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra

Super Sorry Shano and Nandini for being super late 😳. Maybe you gals should just change my name to Ms Late Lateef 😆

I think its a little too late for it 😆, but All the Best for your Exam Nandini 👍🏼

Sehar! 🤗

Trust us, your comments on the thread is all what it matters, no worries even if it's a bit late. :*

Nandu's exams went well. 😆😆

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Now coming to the the FF.

I have a series of emoticons for what I want to do with the crap-bag also known as Zeeshan Ahmad

Someone really needs to kick this piece of crap in his special place. He has no sense or morals whatsoever.

Those emojis cracked us up so bad! 🤣🤣

And here, all our efforts to show Zeeshan as a grey shaded, self centered character are worth.

Cuz in the beginning, some found his jealousy and dictatorship cute. 😆😆

I feel so sorry for Noor, someone needs to hug this girl super tight and let her cry her heart out. Keeping it inside will depress her even further 😭. The way she smiled for her parents' happiness is heartbreaking. She wanted to tell them, she just couldn't shatter their dreams just the way her's were a few hours ago.

Noor through all these years has put up with worst of Zeeshan just because he mattered to her, but this time he has smashed her self respect to pieces which is very precious to her.

I wanted to give a hug to my girl, so bad. Her dreams, Her hopes are all broken but she can't afford to tell her parents about it cuz they'll take it to heart. 😭

Zeeshan barging in his home and his Angry-Young-Man-King-Of-The-World attitude is very off putting. I'm not at all in favour of hitting your children, but some form of discipline is very important. I reckon after Ahmad and his wife separated, he felt guilty for Zee's state of mind regarding all his antics and anger as a phase which would pass with age. But that phase actually turned into lifelong commitment issues. That little boy needed professional help to deal with his issues. (Or Maybe I'm over analyzing stuff 😆).

You said it, even I don't believe in physical manhandling of children but you need to be strict to make them a better human.

And what's more off putting is even after being at fault, he tries to put as if the whole world is being wrong to him! 😡

His parents and their separation had a deep effect on Zeeshan and Ahmed knows it but yes, that little boy meeded professional help.

Also his words of wisdom to Zee telling him of how good Noor will be for him, reminded me of Asher and his dad's convo about Khirad 😃.

We're glad you loved it and connected with it the way we wanted the readers to do. <3

Ahmad's challenge to Zee of proving his worth or be disowned is utterly absurd 😡😡. I get that its coming from a good heart, but how can he ruin Noor's life just to get Zeeshan on the right path. Even a half-awake person can see Zeeshan's anger and disinterest in this entire fiasco, so why force him and wreck someone else's happiness?

Parents think that if they're a bit strict, maybe their kids will have a better life and that's what Ahmed wants too.

If a bit of strictness can make his son's life worthwhile, he is ready to do that too, but only to have disastrous consequences.

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You gals are rock-stars, you know that right 😳😳

The transitioning from Noor's to Zeeshan's home was fantastic, from her tears to his anger, from her silence to his screams 👏👏👏

As someone who grew up in a place with ample amount of Urdu, I feel so happy when I read it and understand every single word of it. Those Urdu words and lines add such "thehrav" and poise to it.

Happy and Thankful that you loved it so much. ❤️

Even I love, and understand the beauty of Urdu so much having my roots in a place that has been the pivot of the language. :')

Love you. <3

Stay Tuned.