Fiction : ~Once Upon A Summer.~ (Page 12.) - Page 7

So Sayali was frank with Alan and he graciously accepted it...Great, now line clear for Ayedin Not that would have stopped him from pursuing her 😉 Curious to see Sayali's reaction when she comes to know of Ayedin's feelings 🤔

Awesome update love you lots 🤗

I liked Siyali upfront view for Alien

Jack was really sweet with her too

Alen proposed Siyali and I loved how he put his point of view for this alliance

Even what he said was exactly correct ... A normal man would obvious think this way

Aby was irritated with his mother

Her mother seems to be class conscious

Let's see how this goes forward

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

Okay first of all a happy dance

We've waited so long for this update 😃

Here goes my review of it (I'm kinda turning into that Rajeev Masand person 😆 ):

I love how Sayali is so normal, any girl can relate to her emotions and her gestures. Her hesitance of being on a date with Alan and interacting more with Jack was so natural. Same way her views on being independent and earning to support herself and the family, it shows that she's a traditional girl with a modern outlook towards things. And I absolutely love this about her.

The date venue beneath the twinkling stars sounds so romantic

Alan sounds like a thorough gentleman, the old world types; who have chivalry and manners in their blood. I like such men 😳 . He obviously sounded a little heartbroken when he talked of his divorce and the toll it took on Jack .

Though he did take it a little too far 🤣 . Ever heard of the 3-date rule Mr Alan? I understand his desperation but dropping a nuclear missile on Sayali's head was too much too soon

Sayali handled the entire situation so brilliantly 👏 . A standing ovation for the girl for all she said. She didn't mince words and conveyed everything amazingly well 👏👏

And Alan took her response really well. I too hope he finds someone as nice as him 😃

Meanwhile in another land,

A seductress trying to get her hands on Ayedin . His reaction to her gestures was so funny 😆, he was so un-interested in Ms Ruby 🤣

Steven's reaction was so us LMAO 🤣🤣

The boys having a loving family moment with their Mum was adorable. They seem like a cheerful bunch 😃. And that unified "Yup" to the Spaghetti question 😆. Save some for me too Ms Servat but without the meatballs 😳😆

The dinner and the marriage convo,such a relate-able topic of discussion 🤣. Servat and her high society jargon. So she'll be the Kebab Mein Haddi in our Ayedin/Sayali story. Ooh Can't wait for the real life Spaghetti and Meatball aka Sayali and Ayedin

The end of the date was so fitting to the entire evening, sweet and subtle 😳

Sayali's sensibility is really praise-worthy at times. 😳 Lmao I cracked up at Ayedin & even Steven making faces on Ruby's OTT flirty actions. 🤣

Lo ji Ayedin's mother is so gonna be an interesting character 😆😆 I wanna read more of her. 😛

Thanks for the PM. 🤗 Update soon. :D

Shanocim Where art thou??

Sorry Sweetheart, have been busy with some stuff. <3

Will update soonest.

Sorry sweetie, have been busy with some other stuff. <3

Will update soonest.

I just couldn't believe its been 2 months 😆

Sayali, I guess has always been very frank about her feelings with Alan and avoided any kind of outing with him. If he hadn't mentioned to bring Jack along, she would've declined this date too.

Alan being a gentleman accepted it graciously. <3

Well for Ayedin, let's just say it won't be easy for him at all considering Sayali is a very strong woman both in her values and character. 😆

Servat definitely has more flavors to her, and Steven is the typical little brother.

Stay Tuned.

Sayali was honest about her feelings with Alan and he appreciated that.

Servat has much more to her.

Stay Tuned.