Arnav-Khushi: Hold me like I'm more than just a friend (Part 10 - p55)

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Interesting start. There is more to the story than the obvious. How the story unfolds will be interesting to read.

Waiting to read the next part

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teja21

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

interesting dear

thanx frr d pm

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Pdrover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Interesting story
Arnav definitely protecting someone from his family by not revealing anything

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Zania

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

I really hope tht child is not his.
Cont soon.

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VarshaPretty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Woww...the narration of this story is so amazing...

& Arnav has no right to keep secrets to Khushi when she has every right to know about his past...especially now...when it's affecting their present.Because whatever the reasons, without sharing how would she understand him let alone welcoming the child with open arms...though welcome she did.

He is taking Khushi for granted when all she needs is love& acknowledgement in this world& from her marriage.

Very well written dear👍🏼

Edited by VarshaPretty - 8 years ago

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Sandya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

What a fantastic piece of writing! I could feel Khushi's anguish and heartbreak. Arnav was being deliberately ambiguous about the child's paternity wasn't he? Looking forward to Khushi's growth as a woman as opposed to the child that everyone saw in her and to the development of love and understanding amongst the couple,

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Unimagineably wonderful story...waiting for the plot to unravel with baited breath !

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Aashisrivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Hey

Ur story line is amazing...

Plz continue this soon...and add me tp ur buddy list sending you request...

Plz add me

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PagliTitli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

This was very interesting! Really felt bad for Khushi, to be dealt such a shock is one thing and then to be stonewalled and receive no answers is another, especially coming from a person who had begun to mean more to you than you seemingly mean to him. And yet despite how hurt she is because of Arnav's actions, there's still a part of her that cares for him. Loved that Khushi didn't mince her words to Arnav after returning to RM because he deserved it, though there must be some backstory there. Looking forward to more soon!

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whimsical

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Thank you all so much for such a wonderful response, and for the heartwarming welcome from those of you who have read my previous works! Truly overwhelmed.

I wish I could reply to you all individually, but it's a busy time right now 😔

And also, some of the Sherlock Holmes amongst you have come quite close to uncovering the direction the plot might take (which is very impressing!), and I wonder how I will be able to maintain the suspense I was hoping to create if I were to reply individually to you 😉 (Although I'm sure even this response would have sparked something or the other in those ingenious brains of yours).

But thank you all once again! It really means a lot to me that you feel so engaged with the story and its characters 😳 I will try to post long updates as regularly as I can.

Some trivia to leave you with - the title is taken from my favourite Adele song. It's not her most popular song, but the lyrics speak the most to me. If you want to check it out, the song's called "All I ask"

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