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Posted: 18 years ago
hey. dats gr8 and amazing. cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part 👏 👏
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
HEY YOU GUYS ILL POST A PART IN 2 HOURS KK LOVE YALL
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Posted: 18 years ago
Kripa- angad I don't want you to leave me again
Angad- I promise I will never leave you ever again
Kripa- but what about papa he is probably looking for me
Angad- I know do you want to go back
He said caressing her as a little child
Kripa- no, angad I have an idea
Angad- What?

Kripa tells him the plan but it is mute and we cant hear a thing

Angad- no kripa I will not let you do that
Kripa- angad we have to ok
Angad- fine but let me just tell Josh the happy news
Kripa laughs
Kripa- ok, that long I will get everything ready
Angad- ok

PART 16—

Angad ran down the stairs in such a speed that he could run over a person like a speeding car.
Angad- JOSH, JOSH, WHERE ARE YOU MAN
He yelled. No answer
Angad was about to yell once again but was cut off by josh
Josh- Dude chill im right behind you
Angad- sorry, anyways I got something to tell you
Josh- it sure looks like it you look like you took a puff of weed
Angad- shutup man, its even better
Josh laughs
Josh- ok ok what is it
Angad- remember that girl I always told you about
Josh- ya the girl you left at the wedding church
Angad- ya her I never told you her name right
Josh- ya what was it
Angad- it was kripa
Josh- WHAT!!!!! &nb sp;
Angad- ya I never told you because then you would make me go back and apologize to her. And we just got back together. Soon we are going to get married.
Josh- that's great and youll finally be settling down and not being a murderer any more
Angad- ok ok enough, lets get to business now
Josh- oh boy I know that look what are you going to tell me
Angad- well you know that kripas parents are going to be looking for her right
Josh- well im not sure of that Linda chick but her dad maybe
Angad- well kripa doesn't want to leave so she has a plan
Josh- o..ok what is it
Angad- im sorry but I cant tell you but kripa will lets go to her
Josh- ok lets go
Josh and angad go to kripa's bedroom, but she isn't there. Suddenly kripa walks in with tears in her eyes. Running like tap water down her cheeks.
Angad- Kripa whats wrong, what happened sweety
Kripa- a…angad *sniff* j…Josh……………


I think I might post another part today if not today then maybe later

Love yall

Avantika
Kripa- angad I don't want you to leave me again
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Posted: 18 years ago
Angad- well kripa doesn't want to leave so she has a plan
Josh- o..ok what is it
Angad- im sorry but I cant tell you but kripa will lets go to her
Josh- ok lets go
Josh and angad go to kripa's bedroom, but she isn't there. Suddenly kripa walks in with tears in her eyes. Running like tap water down her cheeks.
Angad- Kripa whats wrong, what happened sweety
Kripa- a…angad *sniff* j…Josh……………

PART 17---


Josh- what…… what about me, to let you know I did not do anything
Angad- wait, kripa talk what happened
He yelled. Kripa still did not stop crying but she took a picture out and showed it to them
Kripa- that's me and my brother why does josh have this picture
Josh- what are you talking about this is my sister and me
Kripa- this is me
Josh- prove it, what was her pet name that I used to call her?
Kripa- gudiya because I used to be you little doll
Josh was shocked. He started to walk backwards. He fell on the bed
Josh- so……so you're my………my………my little………sis…ter……sister
He said while his eyes started to get watery. He stood up to take in what was happening
Kripa couldn't handle it anymore so she ran into his arms and cried like a little girl who lost her parents.
Kripa- where did you go you left me with that man in the dark who kept on touching me everywhere. You promised you would protect me but you didn't instead you left with mom and left me there alone with that man
Josh- im sorry, I tried to come back but she stopped me by saying that you didn't need me, I still tried to come back but she dragged me out and took me to a hospital saying that I need help and that you where dead
Kripa- so where is she
Angad- she's dead
Kripa stared at angad in shock, which soon turned into anger
Kripa- YOU KNEW ABOUT THIS
Angad- im sorry
Kripa- WHAT SORRY YOU KNEW THAT JOSH WAS MY BROTHER YET YOU DIDN'T TELL ME
Angad- I found out when I left you
Kripa fell to the floor crying
Kripa- How could you do this angad you of all people I didn't expect to hurt me
She cried and said in a whisper
Angad signaled josh to leave them alone for a while. Josh understood that they needed some time together so he left. Angad kneeled down towards kripa and hugged her. kripa kept crying and tried to push him away but soon hugged him back very tight.
Kripa- why angad, I loved you, and I still do, and always will. Did you not love me to that you had to hurt me in such a way
Angad- im sorry kripa, im so sorry
Kripa- I hate you
Angad- no you don't you love me and I love you
Kripa- no I hate you
Angad- no you don't
Kripa- yes I do
Angad- no you don't don't
Kripa looked up at angad with her bright red eyes and said
Kripa- I hate you so much but I love you to this is so confusing
Angad- fine should I leave
Kripa- no I want you to hold me and stay with me all night long
Angad- as you wish princess
Kripa cried and cried but soon she stopped and just stared at angad
Kripa- angad you didn't tell me because you didn't want to see me cry right
Angad- yes im sorry
Kripa- now shut up and carry me to the bed
Angad smiled
Angad- madame is that a demand or request
Kripa- I don't know but you're my little slave and I want you to carry me all the way to the bed
Angad- first the word and the spell
Kripa- fine please
Angad- your wish is my command
Kripa laughed as angad scooped her off of the floor and into his arms. Swung her around and danced all the way to the bed. He put her down and was about to leave when something held him back. He turned. It was kripa in tears. He hated tears in her eyes.
Kripa- stay here angad sleep here with me please im scared
Angad- as you say
Angad slid into bed with kripa and held her in his arms unaware of what was going to happen in bed tonight.

hey this is the part for tuesday ok next part maybe tommorow in the afternoon or else on wednesday.


Love yall

Avantika
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey. i just read ur whole fan fic. n its totally AWESOME!!!!! its a great plot.
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Posted: 18 years ago
man this is really confusing...
angand & kripa were abt 2 get married when the dumbo left her.
kripa & josh r brother & sis...
& what man is kripa talking about????
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazng part
glad angad and kripa are together
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ur ff is really good 👏
plzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
next part in 10 minutes 😳

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