Arshi FF: Holding it together- Completed-Note pg 114 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Nice chapter i really liked arnav's family the arnav in past was a jovial person but after the tregedy he became like this i think meghna left him bcoz she was not able to settle in india n had issues.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So somethings happened in past made him this bad...this double flashback is interesting...but why did khushi tried to commit suicide?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjs

wow, so they were gonna get married and something happened to her ? Did she die ? Earlier i thought she probably cheated on him.

So his father already knows about Anju and Akash ? But I think Akash loves Khushi and will say no to the rishta, making Arnav more livid. Why do i feel that its going to complicate things more for Arnav and Khushi.

I was dreading reading this chapter, post reading chapter 4th ending, where Arnav had decided to pay LA a visit. I always dread reading Arnav indulging in mindless physical intimacy with other women, esp to keep Khushi away.

And hence didn't like that he decided to do it to keep Khushi's thoughts away. Thankfully, you didn't write that part in detail and assuming from the way his date ended, I am sure it didnt go on the physical part.


Thank you for your lovely comment!

Incidents and experiences change people in unexpected ways.
Arnav's father does not realize that Anju has feelings for Akash. He thinks of Akash because they are working together and Akash is a very eligible guy.
I highly doubt if I can put in words, detailed physical intimacy scenes :).
My Arnav is not a bad person nor does he have any disrespect for women. He is just a man who is in a lot of emotional pain. He is attracted to Khushi both physically and emotionally but whether he wants to be is the question.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Arilip

So somethings happened in past made him this bad...this double flashback is interesting...but why did khushi tried to commit suicide?


Incidents and Experiences change people in unexpected ways...and as to why Khushi tried to commit suicide..please keep reading 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: amadea

good chapter

what happened to meghna
please update regulary


Absolutely! I will try to update atleast once a week.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Is Khushi Akash lost sister or something?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi!! Finished reading all the chapters. I love how it is building up. Arnav desires Khushi!! That is going to be interesting. I wonder if La is going to be a recurring character. I would like some depth to her character if she is. Also, loved how you built up Arnav's family. Anjali in love with Akash?? Well!! It took me a while to digest. I am waiting for Akash and Khushi's relationship to come out in the open. It was a good read. I will wait for the next chapter.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_panipuri

Hi!! Finished reading all the chapters. I love how it is building up. Arnav desires Khushi!! That is going to be interesting. I wonder if La is going to be a recurring character. I would like some depth to her character if she is. Also, loved how you built up Arnav's family. Anjali in love with Akash?? Well!! It took me a while to digest. I am waiting for Akash and Khushi's relationship to come out in the open. It was a good read. I will wait for the next chapter.


Thank you!
I know, Akash and Anjali, a litte difficult to digest right? 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just started reading the FF
Sounds interesting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Awesome...
Loved this story
Waiting for the next update

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