ArHi || The Reason I Breath Is You || Chap 1 - Page 20

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BroknAngel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Why is Mr gupta calling arnv arnav jee. Thats awkward

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Awesome part :)

Who clicked the photos??

Feelung sad for khushi

Happy that arnav decided to marry her

Waiting for next part

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@infinity_flame

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176
Nice update
So arnav saved khushi from being molested
But here it was trick to trap arnav n khushi in photos but by who ??? Is it someone who wants revenge or wants khushis marriage to stop maybe some obssessed stalker???
Poor arnav n khushi they never did any thanks no wrong n here they're being forced by their families to marry
Hope in his frustration arnav doesn't blame khushi it's people who pick society over their own family members happiness
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Thanks dear nd keep reading

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: nisha_mehta
Khushi and her family have been through a lot.
Arnav has agreed to marry khushi but will khushi agree.
Waiting to see what happens next

Hmm.. Will update soon

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ayat

@ayat20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Something different

Interesting concept

Loved it

PLZZ update soon

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Superb update 😊

Can't wait to read more 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: varsha2KD
Superb update😊
Can't wait to read more😃

Thanks

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mukta43

@mukta43

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Very nice updt we'll written do cont soon

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Ahida

@noya28

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Nice update

Continue soon , waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the pm

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Megha

@arshilicious.M

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

first regards...this font and size is very straining...!
the prologue font and size is very good...i dont really to understand the story...so i think i would catch up after few updates (approx 12 chaps) !

it was a very twisted one and i dint really get the story properly! arnav's reluctance to marry khushi wasn't really showed...if that wud have then it may have been much more intruiging!

madhumati's careless words.. "i dont know anything" at this fragile situation dosent really add good emotions..until she is really very evil to not care about her neice!

even anjali's dialogues weren't properly written and felt very much rushed up..as though she has already joined hands with the evil of the story and know the jist of the commotion going to happen already!

shashi's dialogue to the society gossip aunty was very apt...i felt it was the best slap given! however he being calm..and NOT devastated of his daughter's life looks very odd! did he expect it already??

garima's character was much aptly written...she being devastated for her daughter...crying...panicking...begging..demanding..accusing!

this update mostly concentrated on the flashback than the real emotion too be shown!

yes we audience love to read the drama more..but v would even like to read what is going on in people's heads!

the last line...the raizada's gets to know the wedding!...what was it indicating...it dint looks like a mysterious line trying to hook ppl..rather it looked not a well written thing!

on other side raizadas get to know the weding???!! which wedding? what wedding? khushi's broken one? or arnav's reluctant decision? and dint anjali take it upon her to take care of familial issues arising due to arnav's decision that she forced upon him!

i know i have written a lot! too many mistake vd harldy 1 or 2 gud points! i m a critisizer...showing the truth of story to the writter! i hardly like stories!

if u have made me a friend then bare my criticizing behaviour..if not..then unbuddy me...i wouldnt mind!

regards,
arshilicious.M