TUJH PE DIL QURBAAN S - III [COMPLETED] - Page 21

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Awesome Update Goldie. Love you lots!🤗

Though Krishna and Ajintya are mentally strong but still such things can be emotionally draining and I understand if they're taking time in adjusting to the new phase of their relationship.
But with siblings like Krishna and Shaurya, I'm sure they'll accept each other gladly.😳

Finally, the research for Antidote becomes a success and this Sanyal is suspected to be the mole. Though I so admire Ajintya's brains that he didn't involve the precautions for Ozonika in the copy and anyone who tries it will be finished in seconds!👏👏
Krishna is such a sweet soul, the way she cares for Sameer and Aisha is very overwhelming.❤️
I hope Shaurya stops running after girls and values this beautiful girl. <3
Though I love how they're planning to make Ajintya Aarohi's bond stronger.

Though I love how Aarohi calls Shaurya Bhukkad!😆😆
And Shaurya's Acchi Biwi Bannogi and Unke Liye!🤣🤣
Krishna's Bhabhi was cute.😆😆
And Aarohi is brave enough to catch the intruder!👏👏
Let's see who he is.

Thanx For Pm.
Update Soon.




Thanks Shanu dear glad you liked it
Love you lots 🤗
Yes it's all emotional draining for them and quite awakward too and yes specially Aarohi and Ajintya are taking time to sort things in between them as they don't want anything to go wrong & with siblings like Krishna and Shaurya they will get full support even Krishna and Shaurya too want this relationship to bloom as they think both are perfect for each other 😊
True research results came out good and yes Sanyaal involvement will create more complications for ETF and for Ajintya and Krishna saftey . Ajintya no doubt is intelligent and sensible he knew that such things can create big ficaso if are not handled properly and that is why he didn't included the precautions 😊
True Krishna is a sweet and pious soul she after loosing her parents has seen Sameer and Aisha caring for her like their own kids so she in return does what all is required to keep them happy... Well Shaurya already values Krishna for her beautiful nature and for her sister he decides to help her too 😊
Yes in their own way they are making Aarohi and Ajintya realize that they are perfect for each other 😊
Aarohi be jise pakda Hai is not intruder but someone well known ... That in next part
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update diii
Love it.
So finally Arohi & Ajinkya got engaged
Who attack Ajinkya par Arohi n phele hi use pakad Liya
Arohi is really a brave girl
So someone is back stabber in NCB
Plzzz update soon
Thanks for pm dii
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shalvisharma97

Awesome update diii

Love it.
So finally Arohi & Ajinkya got engaged
Who attack Ajinkya par Arohi n phele hi use pakad Liya
Arohi is really a brave girl
So someone is back stabber in NCB
Plzzz update soon
Thanks for pm dii


Thanks Shalvi dear glad you liked it
Yes both are in an awakward position after engagement
That in the next part you will see who it is
True Aarohi is a brave cop aise hi ETF cheif thodi Hai 😉
Yes Sanyaal is a mole sab pata chalega
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Very interesting update

Continue plz

Thanks Dear 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the last two parts..
Interesting..
That scene where Krishna calls arohi his bhabhi and ajintya reacts was funny though
Update soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

Loved the last two parts..

Interesting..
That scene where Krishna calls arohi his bhabhi and ajintya reacts was funny though
Update soon
Thanks for the pm


Thanks Yashfeen dear glad you liked it
Yes more interesting turns are on the way
That's bound to happen 😆 & Krishna didn't said anything illogical Aarohi is her Bhabhi 😉
Stay tuned and keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago



PART 9 A

Ajintya exclaimed in shock "Ye to Rishabh ka lab assistant hai?"

Aarohi said in affirmation "Ji haan! yahi Lab assistant sab kuch kar raha tha"

She turned to Lab assistant in stern voice yelled grabbing his neck "Haan to Mr. Kamble! 3 saal se aap is ETF Lab main Rishabh ko assist kar rahe hai ... mujhe aur saari team ko acche se jaante hai to fir ye galti karne ki himmat kaise hui?"

Kamble said trembling "Madam! Mujhe maaf kar deejiye main ye sab nahi karna chahta tha ... meri maasoom bacchi unke kabze main hai ... unhone mujhe dhamki di thi yadi maine Dr. Aacharya ko un tak nahi paunchaya to wo meri bacchi ko khatam kar deenge"

Ajintya in a disgusted voice "I just can't believe this! Ye loog itna neeche gir sakte hai"

By the time entire ETF team reached conference room & saw Aarohi grabbing the neck of lab assistant. Shaurya with a surprised voiced "Kya hua hai yaha?"

Aarohi said "Ye Dr. Aacharya ko behosh karke le jaana chahta tha"

Shaurya said shocked "what! par ye kaise ..."

Aarohi said cutting him short "Shaurya! Calm down ... kuch nahi hua hai ... ise iski beti ka kidnap karke majboor kiya gaya tha"

Ajintya asked perplexed "Par aapko kaise pata chala ki ye mujhpe attack karne waala hai?"

Aarohi smiled & replied "iski harkaton se ... ye sab hume training main sikhaya jaata hai Dr. Aacharya ... well I guess hume ab koi concrete step lena chahiye ...

warna ye loog isi tarah humare employees ko manipulate kar ke kuch bhi karwaa leenge ... inki himmat itni bad gayi hai ki ye loog humare hi aadmiyoo ko humare khilaaf manipulate karke use karna chahte hai"

Shaurya replied "Right! I think hume unhe ab unki bhasha main jawaab dena chahiye"

Entire team started thinking fast after a while thinking Shaurya said "Kyu na hum unka plan successful karwaa de ... isse ho sakta hai unke kuch thikaano ka pata ya koi aur vital information bhi mill jaaye"

Aarohi said opposing the idea "No Shaurya! Hum kham kha aise cheezon ke liye Dr. Aacharya ko khatre main nahi daal sakte"

Ajintya said "Aarohi ji! Khtre main to hum sab hai yadi aap dhyan na deti to ab tak main us gang ki giraft main hota"

Aarohi said explaining "Dr. Aacharya! I really appreciate your thoughts par ye sab utna bhi aasan nahi hai jitna aap samajh rahe hai ... ye khud ki jaan se khelne waali baat hogi"

Ajintya said with an adamant voice "mujhe koi parwaah nahi hai ... meri vajah aap main se kisi ko kuch hoo I won't let that happen"

Aarohi could see that there is no use of arguing as Ajintya will surely not listen to her, she sighed & said "Ok Fine! Shaurya tum Back-up team ko inform karo"

Shaurya nodded & left the conference room & after that Aarohi said to Kamble "Use call lagao aur bolo tum Dr. Aacharya ko behosh karke laa rahe hoo aur tumhari beti tumhe wahi chahiye"

Kamble nodded & dialed the number as directed by Aarohi & they agreed readily to what Kamble said. Aarohi announced clutching her gun "Shaurya! Tum back-up force ko guide karna aur mere signal ka wait karna ... aur Dr. Aacharya main aapke peeche rahungi aur aapko cover karungi"

All nodded & started preparations to leave for the hide out, After a while Kamble reached the directed place along with Ajintya who acted to be unconscious, their men supported Ajintya & took them inside the hideout & Aarohi too entered the hideout escaping their eyes.

After that they were taken to Sattar & Saboor in the main chamber & Sattar said in a commanding tone "Kamble is Doctor ko le aaye tum?"

Kamble said in shaky tone "Haan main le aaya hoon ab to please meri bacchi ko chood deejiye"

Sattar commanded his men to bring his daughter & after a while they got Kamble's daughter & Kamble tried to leave the place but was stopped by Sattar saying "Ruko! Ek baat yaad rakhna yadi ye baat kisi ko pata chali ya fir tumne koi chaalaaki karne ki koshish kari to tumhare parivaar main se koi zinda nahi bachega"

Kamble nodded & took her daughter out of the hide out where Back-up force was ready & were waiting for Aarohi's order to attack along with Shaurya. As soon as Kamble exited the hide our Aarohi signaled the Back-up force & heavy firing started.

Without giving them time Ajintya & Aarohi covering each other started to hit their men along with Shaurya & Back -up team. After a while when Sattar & Saboor saw their plan back firing as most of their man were killed or arrested by Back-up forces & they had very few men left alive.

Seeing this Sattar shot towards Aarohi but before bullet could pierce her Ajintya in a swift move covered her in his arms pushing her on the ground. Both rolled on the ground saving each other from the firing. Finally they got up dusting their clothes & Aarohi asked in bit concerned voice "Dr. Aacharya aap theek hai na?"

Ajintya nodded & both started to continue their work, they after a while gunning down most of their men who were at the finish when Shaurya spotted Saboor running out of the hideout.

Shaurya ran behind him catch him, soon Shaurya caught hold of him & both started to scuffle hard. Saboor Suddenly twisted Shaurya's wrist & got hold of his pulse & applied pressure on his pulse point resulting his hold become lose & next moment Saboor pushed him hard & ran with full force.

Here Shaurya didn't let him go easily & catches him again but this time his hands were on Saboor's Shirt & in a scuffle when Saboor pushed Shaurya back his shirt pocket got torn & with a jerk & things in his pocket got scattered.

Before Shaurya could do anything Saboor ran outside & vanished in his car driving fast. Shaurya immediately informed the local Police stations nearby along with number of the car so that he can be nabbed.

Here at the same time Aarohi & Ajintya were scanning the place accordingly as Sattar was still hiding behind the cartoon boxes placed in the hide out in a chance to attack both of them.

While scanning suddenly hidden Sattar took a chance & tried to overpower Ajintya but Aarohi at the right time came in between grabbed his arm strongly & finally she grabbed Sattar's neck & said "maine tumhe kaha tha ki mere rehte tum Dr. Aacharya ka kuch bigaad nahi paaoge ... par lagta hai seedhi kahi hui baat tumhari smaajh main nahi aati"

She gave few good blows making him fall aside. She again grabbed his neck & said "tujhe kya lagta hai mujhe pata nahi tha ki tu kya kar sakta hai aur kis haddh tak jaa sakta hai ... tum jaise loog kannon ko khilona samajhte ho aur chand logo ko khareed kar samjhte ho ki kanoon ko bhi khareed liya hai ... lekin har cheez bikau nahi hoti hai Sattar"

Sattar said grabbing her back "tum Khaaki vardi waalo ko marne ki bahut jaldi hoti hai shayad"

Aarohi said freeing herself from his hold "Is khaki vardi ke do hi matlab hote hai Sattar ya to desh ke dushmano ko khaak main mila dena ya khud khaak main mil jaana ... par tum jaise logo ko ye baat shayad kabhi smajh nahi aayegi"

She took out her mouser & said taking him at her gun point "ab marna hai ya surrender karna hai tumpar hai ... tumhara wo boss to tumhe majhdhaar main chodkar chala gaya"

Sattar finally gave up & raised his hands in surrender & Aarohi said pushing him "Now move ... bahut hua ye chuhe billi ka khel" with that she started to drag him to the police jeep standing outside.

She pushed him inside & started waiting for Shurya who was completing formalities, but here Sattar started thinking fast and suddenly taking a chance he took out his knife from the back pocket & tried to stab Ajintya.

Aarohi was vigilant & seeing his shadow she immediately came between Ajintya & Sattar holding his wrist, Sattar with full force tried to overpower her & stab Ajintya but it was not that easy for him.

Ajintya was actually blown a bit seeing Aarohi like this as he has not seen anyone risking his / her life just to save him, here Aarohi was trying hard to push him back but suddenly with a jerk in a scuffle knife with full force hit Aarohi's shoulders just near her neck but to everyone's surprise she still did not leave her place but kept on struggling with Sattar to save Ajintya & this surprised him more.

Finally with full force she pushed him back on the seat & shot Sattar dead with her mouser. She lay back on the seat panting heavily holding her shoulders in pain as knife was still inserted inside.
















SCROLL DOWN FOR PART 9 B 😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago



PART 9 B

Ajintya with light hands took out the pierced knife keeping in mind not to hurt her. Aarohi screeched in pain when knife came out of her body & she started bleeding profusely as the wound was quite deep.

Shaurya after trying hard reached the SUV where she found injured Aarohi bleeding profusely & Ajintya was holding her numbly. Shaurya shook numb Ajintya lightly & said "Di ko kya hua Dr. Aacharya?"

Ajintya came back to his senses and said "wo Sattar ne mujhe maarne ki koshish ki par Aarohi ji beech main aagayi aur unhe chaaku lag gaya"

Shaurya said in a assuring voice "Aap Di ko jaldi ghar le ke jaayiye warna condition aur serious ho jaayegi ... waise bhi Dr. Krishna is waqt ghar pe akeli hoongi Mummy Papa ko kisi zaroori conference main jaana tha wo nikal chuke hoonge ... main ye sab arrange karke ghar aata hoon"

Ajintya nodded & took Aarohi home immediately as she needed medical attention. Here after sending both of them home Shaurya started to scan the entire hide out, he called Rishabh immediately for forensic help as few things which he saw needed clarification which Rishabh can provide him.

After Rishabh arrived & both started their job & Rishabh said checking "Shaurya! Tum sahi the ... is area main ye jo ajeeb si badboo hai ye extracted gases ki hai ... inki shayad koi personal lab hoo yaha pe..." with that they started searching & after few minutes found a secret cabinet & as soon as they entered the cabinet they were shocked ... they could see a proper lab set-up even they found traces of drugs.

Rishabh said exclaiming in surprise "My God! Ye to shayad inki personal lab hai inhone sab kuch pehle se set kar ke rakha tha ..." checking the traces of Drugs "ye loog to khud Drugs bhi banate the ... I just can't believe this ki ye loog ye sab kar rahe hai ... hume to shayad sirf unke hathiyaaron ke business ke baare main jaankaari thi"

Shaurya replied "Tabhi tumhe urgently bulaya taaki pata lag sake ki ye loog aur kya kya kar rahe hai" Suddenly something struck his mind & he exclaimed "Rishabh! Ek minute tum mere saath chalo" he dragged Rishabh to the place where he had a tiff with Saboor & started searching for something.

Rishabh asked confused "Shaurya kya hua kya dhoond raha hai?"

Shaurya replied "Saboor ko maine yahi pakda tha ... humari hatha pai hui thi ... usne meri muthhi kholne ke liye meri nase dabayi aur meri pakad dheeli ho gayi maine use waapis pakadna chaha to mera haath uski jeb pe pada aur wo fat gayi usne mujhe jaldi main dhakka diya aur yaha se farrar ho gaya ... uski jeb se kuch gira tha yahi kahi hona chhaiye wahi dhoond raha hoon"

After few minutes of search Shaurya found a black pocket diary along with a medicine packet. Shuarya said checking the diary "Ye to blank hai?"

Rishabh said analyzing it "Nahi Shaurya! Ye chemical se likhi gayi hai mere saath aao" he took him to the lab again & checked for ammonia compound, he dipped the brush in the compound & applied on the pages & now they could see what was written on it.

Shaurya asked astonished "ye kya hai?"

Rishabh replied "choti si scientific trick ... isliye use ki taaki kisi ko kuch pata na chale yadi galti se diary kahi choot jaaye ya gir jaaye to isme kya hai kisi ko pata na chale"

Shurya said "Ye to inke thikaano ka pata aur saari details hai good ... Rishabh evidences collect karke lab le jaao maine back-up forces ke saath jaata hoon shayad us Saboor ka kuch pata laga hoo ... Mujhe Di ke liye bahut darr lag raha hai unhe kaafi chot lagi hai main wahi se ghar nikal jaaunga" Rishabh nodded & both started to complete their work.

Here at the same time Ajintya enters the Rathore mansion with unconscious Aarohi in his arms. Krishna opens the door & is stunned to see Aarohi injured & bleeding profusely in her brother's arms.

She exclaimed voicing "Bhai! Ye kya hua Aarohi ji koo ... kitna khoon beh raha hai?"

Ajintya said "sab batata hoon! pehle first aid kit leke aao mera bag bhi"

Ajintya hurriedly placed unconscious Aarohi in her room & Krishna brought First aid kit & bag. Ajintya first covered her wound properly and stopped the flow of blood & with shaky hands he was about to stitch her wound when Krishna said "Bhai! Aap jaayiye main karti hoon"

Ajintya with a defeated nod went to his room to fresh up & change clothes by the time he was back Krishna had stitched Aarohi's wound & changed her blood stained clothes. Krishna could see his clam & composed brother shaken from the time he had entered the house.

Krishna aked "Kya baat hai Bhai ... aap itne pareshaan kyu hai"

Ajintya said fumbling a bit "nahi kuch nahi bas wo ..."

Krishna said bit irritated cutting him short "Oh come on Bhai! Jhoot usse bolte hai jo aapko na jaanta hoo ... saaf saaf kyu nahi kehte ki Aarohi ji ko aisa dekh ke aap pareshaan hai ... chot to unhe lagi hai par dard unse zayada aapko hoo raha hai ... aaj tak maine stitches lagate hue aapke haath kaapte hue nahi dekhe ...

aapne to hamesha mujhe sikhaya hai ki patient se pyar aur care ek doctor ki kamzoori hoti hai ... to aaj aap kyu kamzoor pad gaye ... Main batati hoon kyuki aapke dil main bhi kahi na kahi unke liye jazbaat hai ... feelings hai"

Ajintya voiced in a defeated tone "Haan Krishna! aaj sach main main kamzoor pad gaya ... wo mujhe maarna chahta tha aur wo kaamyaab bhi ho jata yadi Aarohi beech main nahin aati ...

Aaj tak kisi ne mere upar hua vaar apne upar nahi liya ... mujhe nahi pata ye sab dekh kar mujhe kya ho gaya hai; par yadi aaj unhe kuch ho jaata to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf kar paata"

Krishna said with a smile "unhe kuch nahi hoga ... aap unke paas baithiye main aapke liye coffee laati hoon"

Ajintya took a deep sigh & went to her room to keep a check on her when he saw her gaining conscious back & getting up. Ajintya next instance ran to her holding her closer to himself & said in a bit irritated voice "Aap ETF ki chief zaroor hoongi ... par aapka koi haqq nahi ki aap patient hoke ek doctor ka kehna na mane"

Aarohi with a soft smile controlling her pain replied "aacha! to aap daantte bhi hai"

Ajintya with a bit annoyed voice "Ji haan! jo patients mera kehna nahi maante main unhe acche se daantta hoon ... aur aapko kya zaroorat thi beech main aane ki ... pata nahi kya ho gaya tha aapko ... yadi Uncle Aunty ne bhi aapko aise daanta hota to aap aise zidd nahi karti"

Aarohi with a smile shook her head saying "Dr. Aacharya! maine pehle hi kaha tha ki aapko waha nahi aana chahiye ... aap please itna guilty feel mat kariye ye sab humare kaam ka hissa hai ... doosri baat ki aap waha mere bharose pe gaye the aur aapko protect karna meri zimmedaari thi"

Ajintya replied more irritated "aapko ye ek baar bhi nahi laga yadi aapko kuch ho jata to uncle aunty ko kya kehta main?"

Aarohi said with a painful smile "Mere Mummy Papa mujhe acchi tarah jaante hai Dr. Aacharya aapko unhe kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai"

Before Ajintya could reply Krishna entered the room with 2 cups for Ajintya & Aarohi having coffee & Milk. Ajintya checked her properly & once satisfied said "Thank God! Sab theek hai aapne mujhe seriously dara diya tha ... Uncle Aunty bahar conference ke liye gaye hai aap aaram keejiye wo subah laut aayenge"

Krishna said "Right! waise bhi aap chahe na chahe aapko aaram karna hi padega kyuki aapke doodh main maine pain killer aur neend ki dava already mila di hai"

Ajintya with a smile said "Thanks Krishna ... ab tum bhi aaram karo main yahi rukta hoon"

Aarohi said protesting "Dr. Aacharya its fine! aap bhi aaram keejiye main theek hoon"

Ajintya said glaring back "lagta hai mujhe Uncle Aunty ko phone karana hi padega"

Aarohi made a funny face & tried to lay down but could not due to pain Ajintya with a smile shaking his head pulls Aarohi towards himself & supports her back & shoulders & made her lay properly on bed & covers her with comforter.

Aarohi sleeps under the effect of medicines & Krishna leaves to her room, Ajintya is watching her calm angelic face thinking of what Krishna had said to him & in all this he didn't realize when sleep engulfed him too.

Ajintya who was sitting on a stool next to bed his head too landed on the pillow on which Aarohi was sleeping Ajintya held her hand gently in sleep.

Near dawn Sameer & Aisha walked into the after completing the conference & were shocked to see Aarohi & Ajintya sleeping like this, Sameer roared in anger breaking their sleep "Ye kya ho raha hai yaha?"























So how was it guys please drop in your comments as I write for you guys so please do let me know all your bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love you all


Regards Goldie 😊😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 8 years ago
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Awesome update
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Superb
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