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Posted: 18 years ago
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interesting intro! do post the first part soon 😃 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol dont worry guys Angad will show up but latter lol u'll just have to wait and see 😉




Luts of luv and sugar
Hina
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: goldi2

lol dont worry guys Angad will show up but latter lol u'll just have to wait and see 😉




Luts of luv and sugar
Hina

trust us!!! it's worth the wait 4 angad😊, and srry to keep u guys waiting.....

love ya lots,

Nalni

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice concept 😊


bring angu sooon 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: hello64

nice concept 😊


bring angu sooon 😭

trust me i would bring angad in as soon as possible. actually i would love too but hina would kill me at school.😆 but when we start u will 4get about him, he'll enter unexpected😛. can't say anymore. the only thing i can say is hope u like it.😃

lot's of love

Nalni😊

Edited by nkdidi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hope u guys r excited for our first part 2morrow. i am not sure about hina but i am dying of nervousness. it's our first fanfic, so we both hope u like it.please support us and leave possitive comments. that will help us alot...... thnx for the nice comments we have recieved already. hina will post the 1st part 2morrow. so, please support us!!!
lots of love,
Nalni 😊
Edited by nkdidi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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DIARY

Part 1

Sunday September 6th 2000

Dear Diary,

Finally the day that I have been waiting for all summer long arrives. Exactly 12 hours from now I'll be a student of Gordon High! I have always dreamed of going to Gordon high ever since I was a little girl and now when first day starts tomorrow I'm so nervous but still excited. Mom says everything will be ok, and some where deep down I know everything will be alright after all I have Sahil and Shiv if I ever need anything. BUT I'm still nervous but I guess mom's right it happens every year on the night before school. Hmmm… I'm tired now

Kripa then closes her diary and then the lamp and sunaggles in her bed and falls asleep

next morning

Gyatri: Kripa… wake up hun u don't want to be late for the first day of school

Hearing her mom talk Kripa jerked up and quickly looked at her clock. It was only 7:30

Kripa: PERFECT!! she thought

Gyatri: I'm going to go wake up Sahil, hurry up and come down and o ya Shiv just called a minute ago he said he was on his way

Kripa yawned and rolled her eyes

Kripa: ya let that dork come gosh hes so annoying mom why do we even let him in our house.

Gyatri: haha o come on Kripa stop when he doesn't come you always like "mom shiv is such a dork he's so annoying why he doesn't come gosh"

Kripa once again rolled her eyes as she walked to the bathroom then kind of smiled at her sillyness.

After about 30 more minutes Kripa quickly got dressed for school…she wakled down the stairs fixing her hair just to catch up with her brother sahil.

Kripa: hey bahi

Sahil: good morning sis u ready

Kripa: yap but im starving bahi I hope mom made breakfast and then we'll leave together!

Sahil: Kripa I cant take you with me can you please go with the driver.

Kripa: sure bahi but why cant I go with you?

Sahil: because I have to pick up someone on the way and I don't want you to be late for your first class.

Kripa: alright bi then.

They reached the end of the stares and Sahil left while Kripa walked toward the dinning room just to see Shiv getting stuffed by Gyatri

Gatri: come on Shiv betta you've got to go for atleast one more pancake!

Shiv smilled like a brat when he saw Kripa stand at the door

Shiv: ofcouse aunty I'll take more then just one more

Gyatri smilled and gave him the last 2 pankcakes

Right then Suraj came out of the wooden kitchen door with a chef hat on and slightly covered with flower. Suraj took of the hat and brushing the flower off of him and grabing his breifcase

Suraj: sory kids we're out of flower! And I am getting late for work.

Kripa was extreamly mad at Shiv for eating all the food. She quicky grabbed an apple of the table giving Shiv a look as if she was going to kill him. Shiv smilled at her annonence as if he had gotten just wat he wanted.

Kripa: dad I need the driver to drop me off to school

Suraj: sorry hun the driver was sick last night so I told him to rest for today.

Kripa: o crap.. hmm then can you drop me?

Suraj: alright I guess since there is no other way.

Right then Shiv walked up to Suraj

Shiv: by uncle I'll see you latter

Suraj: by son heading for school are you??

Shiv: yap

Suraj: then do my a favour u would please drop Kripa too since you guys are going to the same place.

Shiv looked at Kripa for a second as she stared back in anager.

Shiv: sure why not

Kripa went and sat in Shiv's car and she waited for him to come out of the house.

They weren't late infact they were about 45 minutes ahead of schedule. Kripa was planning to get to school early so she could meet up with her friends and take a tour of the school. Just then shiv entered the car smiling… Kripa just looked at him and turned to face the window Kripa had a tingly feeling in her stomach.. And that wasn't because she was nervouse but because she was really hungry. Shiv didn't bother to say anything either but just silently drived … after about 5 minutes kripa noticed Shiv wasn't heading toward Gordon High but instead he drove in timhortons and ordered a cream cheese bagel with an orange juice through the drive way.

Kripa gave him the most disgusted look and the started talking

Kripa:shiv ur such a pig how can u possibly eat soo much! U just had like a dozen pancakes and now this too holly u need to go on a diet or u know wat nvm cus I'd love to see the fat version of you

Kripa said with a little giggle.. shiv knew she was trying to get back at him for eating her breakfast. but he didnt want to start anything at the momment.

After taking food from the the next window Shiv drove in the empty parking lot and stopped.

Shiv: here I was getting this for you not my self gosh.

Kripa just stuck her tang out at him and grabbed the food

Shiv: ah u little ungreatful brat

Kripa: shut up **bight** don't call me that *bight*

After that shiv didn't bother to say any thing back cus he just found it really gross of kripa to be eating with her mouthful.

Shivt noded his head and thought: god help this girl!!

Kripa noticed Shiv looking at her and nodding his head. She looked up at him after she swallowed her last bight.

Kripa: what??

shiv just ignored her again but still looked at her and smilled she had creamscheese on her nose!

she looked soo cute like little girl he thought.

when the reached the school and shiv parked the car and before Kripa steped out he gave her some tissues.

Shiv: u have cream cheese on ur nose!

and saying that he walked out

Kripa qickly looked in the miorror and smiled looking at her self.

she wiped it off and then got off the car and walked towards the building.

well here the first part!! i hope u guys like it!!

and PLEASE PLEASE do comment!!!

luts of luv and sugar

Hina and Nalni😛

Edited by goldi2 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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2nd part will be wednesday!!!! 😊
lot's of love,
Nalni ❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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interesting fanfic n cooool first part!!!! ehehe shivs so funny 😆 great part cont sooon 👏

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