* Ek Ajnabi Rishta * Rajveer Naina (lrl) 2 thread complete - Page 17

Created

Last reply

Replies

444

Views

65.8k

Users

61

Likes

697

Frequent Posters

MANNNAYAK thumbnail
Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
plzzz update
I am waiting eagerly for the next update
RNforever thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Update




Update



Update


Update



Update


Kar rahi hu baba
RNforever thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rkchandni



Haso mat
Guest jaldi jaao
Yar thoda sa rahem kar lo
Koi update nhi kar RHA 😭
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Hehehe...
Ok ok m samjh gayi karti hu update
RNforever thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
Kar rahi hu
RNforever thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MANNNAYAK

plzzz update
I am waiting eagerly for the next update

Just 2 mints baby
RNforever thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
**Ek Ajnabi Rishta**



Part 21



Naveen Abhimanyu bhara room me baithe the aur raj muskurate ke saath andar room me naina ko jagane gaya iss baat se anjan ki anadar ek toofan uska intzar kar raha hain ...



Raj room me enter hua toh usne dekha ki naina bade aaram se bed pe soo rahi thi aur uske bagal me shalini ...
Naina ne apna ek haath apni tummy pe rakha tha mano woh apne baby ko protect kar rahi tha ... Raj naina ko yuh dekh kar smile karne laga ...

Raj phele jaa kar shalini ko uthaya par jab woh naina ke pas gaya toh uska maan he nahi kiya usse uthane ka par jab Raj ne dhayan se naina ko dekha toh naina ke mathe pe pasina tha ... Raj yeh dekh kar thoda haran hua kyuki ambala me iss waqt thand thi ...aur naina ke maathe ka pasina haran karne wali baat thi ...



Raj naina ke maathe ko chua yeh check karne ke liye ki kahi uski tabiyat toh kharab nahi hain ...



Raj : {touching her shoulder} naina utho... naina



Naina jab uthi toh woh ajeeb se shakal bana kar dekh rahi thi ...kabhi raj ko toh kabhi wall pe lage watch ko dekh rahi thi ...



Naina : {in weird voice} kya hua ...


Raj naina ki ase ajeeb se voice sunn kar thoda dar gaya ...



Raj : {concerd} tum thik ho naina ...



Naina : {sternly} haa...apne mujhe kyu uthaya ...



Raj : {little scared} woh bhar chalo ice cream khalo main le aaya...




Naina : {narrowed her eyes} ice cream ?????




Raj : { happily} haa tumne magayi thi na ...



Naina : {kuch soch kar } ok aap chalo main aati hu ...



Bechara Raj bahar wapas aa gaya ... Par Raj ab thoda pareshan ho raha tha naina ka strange behavior dekh kar ...




Naveen : kya hua raj ...naina kaha hain ...



Raj : woh bas aa rahi hain ...



Shalini sabke liye ice cream le kar aati hain ...



Naina sofe be baithe thi ...aur apne ice cream ko ghure jaa rahi thi ..





Abhimanhyu : (happily) humse toh wait nahi ho raha chalo jaldi se start karo...(to naina) naina apki ice cream melt ho rahi hain ...jaldi khaiye ...


{ Aab hue tufaan ki shuruwat }


Naina : (sternly) toh aap log ne mujhe itni raat me sirf ice cream khane ke liye uthaya...



Raj naina ki asi aawaz sunn kar samjh gaya ki aab uski aur baki sabki band bajne wali hain ...in 3 mahino me raj ne ase ajeeb behavior kayi bar jhele hain naina ke ...



Naveen : { enjoying his ice cream} arre tune he toh bheja tha raj ko ice cream lane




Naina : {angrily} toh??? Iska mtlab ki aap sab meri neend kharab karo gay...pata hain kitni muskil se mujhe neend aur baby ko neend aati hain aaj kal (abhi tak sirf raj alarmed tha but naina ki asi baat sunn kar sab alert ho gay)



Naina : dance ...



Abhimanhyu : {confused} jii ????



Naina : meri neend kharab ki hain na aap. Sabne toh ab jab tak mujhe neend nahi aati tab tak dance karo aap teeno ...





Bechare boys ki toh yeh sunn kar halat kharab ho gayi aur shalini woh naina ke bagal me maje se baithi thi kyuki woh janti thi woh safe hain ...





Naveen : { little scared} gudiya majak kar rahi hain na tu ...



Naina : {rising his eyebrows} do you think so..?????



Aaj pheli baar Raj naina ke mood swings ko enjoy kar raha tha ...bechara aaj tak sab kuch akele he jhel raha tha par aaj toh do naye bakre uske saath hala ho rahe the ...





Abhimanhyu : please naina don't do this ...hume dance nahi aata aur wase bhi apke pati hain na unhe nachaiye apne isharo pe hum chale ...




Yeh kah kar abhi waha se almost bhagne laga ...



Naina : {coolly} ok fine ...main your highness se bol dugi ki apne mujhe aur mere baby ko pareshan kiya hain aadhi raat ko utha kar




{Naina abhi ki family se bhi kafi ghul mil gayi hain ,}



Ab bechara abhimanyu wapas wahi aa kar khada ho gaya jaha woh phele khada tha ...





Naina shalini se kah kar ek song lagwati hain aur jab song play hota hain toh iss bar jor se bhi jada jor ka jhatka laga tha teeno ladko ko ...kyuki jo song naina ne lagwaya tha woh koi asa wasa song nahi tha ...
Woh tha tadakta bhadakta song ...

""" My name is sheela
Sheela ki jawani """





Bechare Raj abhi aur Naveen muh khool ke khade the ...


Naina unse item number kara rahi thi ...woh bhi sheela ki jawani ...
Par unn becharo ke pas apni apni jawani dekhane ke alawa aur koi option nahi tha ...



Rahi sahi kasar naina ne teeno ko dupatta de kar puri kardi ...teeno ne sheela ki jawani pe thumke lagaye woh bhi dupatte ke saath ...


Shalini aur naina paglo ki taraha haste jaa rahe the in teeno ka dance I mean bhayanak dance dekh kar jaha ek taraf bechara raj dupatta apne ser pe rakh kar apni haath hila raha tha actually woh dance kar raha tha jo dance kam aur kung fu jada lag raha tha ...



Dosri taraf Naveen sheela kam aur uska ex boyfriend ki tarah jada dance kar raha tha...
I mean salman khan style copy kar raha tha pairo ke beech dupatta dal le bechara ek do bar gir bhi gaya iss chakar me ...



Ab bari aayi teesre bandar ki ...
Actually bandar word toh phir bhi chota hain abhi ki dance steps ke aage toh ...

Abhi ke andar sach me sheela ki aatma ghus gayi thi...woh apni jawani se bhare steps he kar raha tha jisse dekh kar Naveen aur Raj dono muh bana rahe the...




Jab song khatam hua toh naina jhut se uth kar abhi ke pas gayi aur apni melt ice cream ka bowl abhi ke ser pe palat diya ...


Naina : {straight face} aaj tak maine itna wahiyad dance apni puri life me nahi dekha ... naa toh aap sheela lag rahe the na abhi ...aap toh dono ke beche ke kuch aur he lag rahe the ase dance karte hue ...
Please life me kabhi asa dance dubara mat karna ..{placing her hand on tummy} main aur mera baby almost depression me chale gaye the ...



Naina ab Naveen ke samne jaa kar khadi hue



Naina ; aur aap ...aap salman khan ke steps copy karne ke chakar me chanki pande lag rahe the ...
Main bata de rahi hu agar mujhe yaa mere baby ko ek bhi bhayanak sapna aaya naa apka yeh chanki dance dekh kar toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga ...




Ab aayi bechare Raj ki bari ...



Raj saase roke khada tha ...


Naina : {giving unbelievable look} apke yeh do dost kam se kam dance toh kar rahe the ... Par apke dance steps dekh kar toh lag raha tha ki mano aap kung fu kar rahe ho...woh movie hain na kung fu panda ...bilkul uski ki taraha...


{Raj naina ke muh se apni liye itni achi tarif sunn kar embarrassed ho raha tha} ...



Shalini. : {Controlling her smile} chodo naina yeh log ase he hain tum chalo soo jao kafi late ho gaya hain... ...


.

Naina : {looking towards raj} haa kisne meri neend kharab kardi ...chaliye bhabhi sote hain ...aur aap {to raj} khabardar ji room me aaye toh ...



Yeh kah kar naina aur shalini sone chale gaye andar room me raj ke muh pe darwaza band karke...



Naveen : {shocked} yeh sab kya tha ...aakhir hua kya humare saath



Raj : {still looking towards door} meri biwi ke mood swings




Naveen : {horrified face} itne bhayanak mood swings... Khud he aadhi raat ko hume ice cream lene bheja aur khud he bhadak gayi



Abhi : par humare saath asa kyu kiya ...



Phir Raj aur Naveen ne peche mood kar dekha bechara abhimanyu ser se le kar pair tak ice cream me duba hua tha ... sone pe suhaga tha
Uske ser pe rakhi ice cream ki bowl


Jab se naina ne ice cream uske upar paliti thi tabse woh ase he khada tha shocked me...




Abhi : humne toh unhe hasane ke liye asa dance kiya tha par unhone toh {apne ser se bowl uthate hue}




Raj : toh apki jawani me Chocolate ice cream loaded with chocolate chips, chocolate chip cookie dough and sweet, gooey fudge ...mila diya
Bohat excited the na aap chauhan sahab ice cream khane ke liye ab kha lejeyi ...



Raj Naveren dono jor jor se hasne lage





Abhi : aap dono hum pe hass rahe hain ...hum apko chode gay nahi ...




Yeh kah kar abhi dono ko peche bhaga...





Next morning



Raj Naveen aur Abhi teeno ki neend puri nahi hue toh woh teeno class me padha kam rahe the aur jhapkiya jada le rahe the ...
Unke favorite cadets ko bhi pata chal gaya ki kal raat kitna atyachar hua hain in becharo pe ...

Naina ne khub mirch masala laga kar btaya tha inhe kal raat ki story ...




Cadets jab jab apne teachers ko dekh rahe the woh yeh soch kar apni hasi rok he nahi paa rahe the ki kase lag ho gay woh sheela ki jawani pe nachte hue ...




Aur bechare teachers fake anger dekhane ke alawa kuch kar bhi nahi paa rahe the ...




Koi tha jo phone pe sabse chup kar baatein kar raha tha...insab ke beche




Boy : kam hua



Girl : nahi kuch waqt lagega



Boy : {angrily} waqt????kitna waqt chaheyi tumhe ...itna waqt ho gaya aur ab tak tum ek chota sa kam nahi kar payi ...




Girl : {getting angrily} galti meri nahi tumhare logo ki hain maine do bar tumhe triggers ki information de par tum log har bar nakam rahe ...wase bhi yeh teeno captains bohat teez hain itna asan nahi hone wala iss bar information nikalna...




Boy : {cooling down} ok main samjh raha hu par iss bar hum nakam nahi ho sakte



Girl : {determine voice} iss bar hume kam yaab hone se koi nahi rok sakta ...



Boy : hmm...chalo ab main rakhta hu allha hafiz...



Girl : allha hafiz...apna khayal rakhna ...main jaldi he wapas aaugi



Boy : hum sabko tumhara intzar rahega ...




Pooja ek kone me khadi baat kar rahi thi ki tabhi uske kandhe pe kisi ne haath rakaha aur woh chuk gayi ...


End of part 21





Sorry sabko wait karane ke liye
Mujhe pata h maine promise kiya tha long part update karne ka par yr abhi mere mind me koi idea nahi aa raha story ko explain karne ke liye hope jaldi aa jaye.. tab tak aap sab yeh enjoy karo ...


Love
Arti



Part 22 page 38




Edited by RNforever - 8 years ago
sona_naksh thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
awesum
update soon
thanka for pm
luvraj4ever thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 8 years ago
Hilarious update... I had a great time laughing... Poor Raj, abhi and nageen.. I can imagine them dancing stupidly and doing all Kung fu steps... Naina surely made them puppets...
Waiting for the next update
yoginisahakari thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Cute sa

Jaldi next part update Karo go bhi bad a sa.
MANNNAYAK thumbnail
Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Hey
the update was fabulous, awesome.
I can't control my laugh imagining the trio's condition.
It was hilarious.
Thanks for the pm [:)]

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Sshesha · 4 months ago

INTRODUCTION After the death of his foster mother, Rajveer makes a life-altering decision to find the parents who left him behind. He want to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: So-So · 8 months ago

One of my entries for Love-O-Rama Pyaar Ka Trope Fest Storyline: Second Chance Romance Setting: Road Trip Character: Naina Bunny from YJHD Cover...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli · 5 years ago

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".