Six(AK) Mistletoe in the Mansion--p.24 - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: erier101

great part!! OMG, he is gonna punish her cuz she doesnt like him...thats just sad...and its sorta funny how gross u make him sound...talking with his mouth full 🤢 😆 ..cont soon 😛 👏

Well... I made Prithvi as a spoiled brat in here😛😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome parts! they r all great 😛 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

awsome parts! they r all great 😛 👏

Thanks! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: .:Kiran:.


I know, I alway's hated Prithvi for some reason😆😕



same here..

i have alwayz portrayed him as evil in my head.. lol.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: brainychild92


same here..

i have alwayz portrayed him as evil in my head.. lol.

😆 The first time I saw him, I thought "he HAS to be the bad one"😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
omg jus read it alll sorry i havent commeneted since u began 😭 😭 neways omg its sooo goood lol everytime the doorbell rang i was hoping it was angad but it werent.....n omg prithvi is such a jerk bet he gunna try 2 do sumthin 2 kripa but angad will save her 😃 neways cont soooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
prithvi 😡 aargh 🤢 🤢 i just hate himmmm. get a life prithvi, leave kripa and angad alone 😡 fab part. continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98

PART 9

RECAP: Prithvi was angry that Kripa was ignoring.

Prithvi followed Aaliya's car, soon the 2 car's reached the beach. Aaliya looked around while Kripa saw that there was a car behind some bushes, it had been crashed up. The driver was hurt badly. Kripa ran to Aaliya and told her there was a car right there; they both ran to the car. Kripa opened the door, and saw the person's head was bleeding. She ripped up a piece of her scarf (dupata) and bandaged it around the person. Aaliya came and was shocked at the scene.

"Kripa, ye mera bhai hai!" she yelled.

"Mein ambulance ko bulati hoon" she dialed up a number in her cell and told the ambulance the directions.

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Prithvi had just came, he looked everywhere in anger. Prithvi looked like he could do anything right now. Something caught Prithvi's eye, he saw Kripa and Aaliya getting on an ambulance, he followed the ambulance to the city hospital.

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Kripa and Aaliya arrived to the hospital; Angad was admitted in the ICU.

Prithvi just entered, he ran up to the receptionist "Kripa aur Aaliya kahaan hai"

"umm, voh ICU ke bhaar hai" the receptionist replied.

"thank you" Prithvi ran toward the ICU. He only found Aaliya there. "Kripa kahaan hai?" he asked Aaliya/.

"voh to bathroom chali gaye hai, abhi aati hogi" Aaliya replied.

Prithvi's cell rang, "hello"

"umm, Mr. Bose, aap ki jo Delhi mein factory hai, usse aaj aag lag gaye hai" Prithvi's PA said.

"Oh no, mere liye abhi ek ticket Delhi ke book karvoao, mein abhi aara hoon" Prithvi exited the hospital.

Kripa came out of the bathroom and sat next to Aaliya. She put her hands around Aaliya's shoulder's "Aaliya, don't worry, sab theek ho jayega"

Aaliya couldn't believe all the shocks she had gotten on this day. The doctor came, Kripa got up "Doctor, vo kaisa hai, (she still didn't know his name).

"Umm… aap mein se Kripa kaun hai, vo kissi Kripa ka naam le raha hai baar baar"

"Mein hoon, liken vo mujhe kaise jaanta hai?" she asked.

"Vo mein nahin jaanta, liken aap usse andar milne chali jaae"

"Ok," Kripa went towards Aaliya's brother's room….

I hope you all liked the part, LEAVE A LOT OF COMMENTS!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow it was great angad is going to blab out evrything poor him continue soon 😊 yay prithvi left kill him there plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

wow it was great angad is going to blab out evrything poor him continue soon 😊 yay prithvi left kill him there plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😛

If I kill him, he'll kill the story😆

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