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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: drshabnam3

hiii chandni...mai IF pr bhut din bad aayi due to shortage of tym pr aate hi sabse pehle tumhre ff k parts padhe...outstanding story on RN...loved it...hopefully rajveer pta lga le ki naina kis prblm hai aur dono mil k ye prblm solve kre...aur dono k beech me jo bhi duriya h wo jldi se khtm ho jaye taki hme thoda romance dekhne ko mile inke beech😃😃...Wonderful work Chandni👏👏...

Hi di
Welcome back
N thanks allot
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rajveernainalov

First of all...Happy new year...and thnx for pm...and...
I m sad.Ye ritu aur huda ka track...wese hi RaiNa itne pareshan he..unki life me ye nayi musibat..I hope ki in 6 months me kuch accha ho inki life me...I m feeling bad for Raj.He doesn't know whole truth.
Plzz inki pareshaniya kam kijiye.Apki story me hamare RaiNa ki life me mushkilo ki kami ni..But story is nice.I always wait for next update eagerly.
Good one.and plzz update next paet with RAINA's some khatti mithi nokjhonk.
Thnkew..


Thanku so much
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: prasannakamila

Superb ud
Yeah kya ye ritu aur huda kabhi sudarenge nahi
Plz jaldi se raj ko huda air ritu ki planning batado
Raina kab milenge
Aur naveen-shalu inko bhi jaldi se couple bana dho
Hpy new year
Cont.soon


Thanks Prasu happy new year
N.i will
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rajveernainalov

First of all...Happy new year...and thnx for pm...and...
I m sad.Ye ritu aur huda ka track...wese hi RaiNa itne pareshan he..unki life me ye nayi musibat..I hope ki in 6 months me kuch accha ho inki life me...I m feeling bad for Raj.He doesn't know whole truth.
Plzz inki pareshaniya kam kijiye.Apki story me hamare RaiNa ki life me mushkilo ki kami ni..But story is nice.I always wait for next update eagerly.
Good one.and plzz update next paet with RAINA's some khatti mithi nokjhonk.
Thnkew..


Thanks dear
Happy new year
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sridhsc

What an update dear, uspe Yeh twist.

Vaise tumhara irada kya hai.
Naina ka behaviour kuch zaada rude hai na.
Hope Raj and Aalekh find out about it and come to know that she is doing for their good to save all
In the mean time Raj should not feel disgust for Naina
Happy New Year
Update sooon
Take care

Thanks Sri mere irade nek h 😆
Sab theek karungi dontworry
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Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Raina divorced each other...😲...Raj divorced Naina for her happiness......Naina is being blackmailed by Ritu and Huda by kidnapping Ali and Bani...😲...both Raj and Naina are broken...🤔...loved Naveen and Shalini's moments...👏👏👏...Naveen realises Raina's true love for each other and asks Naina to save her marriage...😎...glad that Shalini understood something's wrong behind Naina's weird behaviour......waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...



Thanks allot dear
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thanks every one for liking and commenting on part 31... here is part 32...
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*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 32

rajveer:- aap log tension mat lo... main dekhta hun... (all nods in yes,,,,, n rajveer left to his room...)

naina room me aakar samaan rakhti hai... aur apne kapde nikaal kar washroom me chali jati hai... rajveer aata hai... use naina ka

behaviour samajh nahi aa raha tha... wo jakar window ke pass khada ho jata hai... thodi der baad naina bahar aati hai... rajveer ko ek

nazar dekh kar bed ki ore jane lagti hai...

rajveer:- kyun aayi ho wapas,,,,,,?

naina:- sayad aapko padhna nahi aata... un orders me likha hai... (rajveer turns to her)...

rajveer;- oh really... yeh baat tum bhi janti ho... ki agar do loge sath na rehna chahe to koi court kya bhagwaan bhi unhe mazboor nahi kar

sakta... aur wo jo tumne neeche kiya... wo sab kya tha...?

naina:- m not interested to answer u gn...

rajveer:- just stop it naina... kal tak jab main tumse keh raha tha... ki wapas aa jao... tab to tum nahi maani... ab in chand dino me aisa kya

ho gaya... bolo...

naina:- meri marzi... (rajveer naina ke pass jata hai use elbow se hold karke apni ore pull karta hai... naina ek pal ke liye dar jati hai...)...

rajveer:- tumhe kya lagta hai... main tumhe janta nahi hun ha... mere sath kuchh bhi karo... main samajhta hun... par meri family ke sath

tum kabhi misbehave nahi kar sakti... kya reason hai... naina bolo... kya problem hai... kis liye kar rahi ho yeh sab...

naina:- woh... (naina ko bani aur ali ka face yaad aata hai... wo jhatke se rajveer se apna hath chhudati hai...) woh kya reason hai... yeh

main aapko batana jaruri nahi samajhti mr rajveer... aur ha... mera yahan aane ka maksad... (she turns)... aapki khushiyaan chhinna...

(dhamaake on rajveers face)... ab tak aapko sirf lagta tha ki maine aapse shadi sirf isiliye ki taki main aapko barbaad kar saku... to ab yeh

sach hai... jitani takleef aapne mujhe di un sabka hisaab lekar rahungi... kyuki ab nafarat se bhi jyada nafarat karti hu main aapse...

rajveer:- theek hai manzoor hai... tumhari nafarat bhi manzoor hai... jo karna hai mere sath karo... mere pariwaar ko beech me...

naina( turns to rajveer):- karungi... jarur karungi... aapne mere pariwaar ko baksha tha... jo main aapke pariwaar ko baksh dun... mr

rajveer main wo naina nahi jo kabhi aapse paaglon ki tarah pyar karti thi... aapke saamne wo naina khadi hai... jo aapse had se jyada

nafarat karti hai... aur ab aapse jude har insaan se...

rajveer:- achha... it means sabse nafarat apne aap se karti ho... main bhi dekhta hun... tumhari nafarat jeet- ti hai ya mera pyar... (naina

bed pe jakar baith jati hai... aur apna phone dekhne lagti hai... rajveer kuchh der tak naina ko dekh raha tha... naina bahut hi

uncomfortable mehsoos kar rahi thi... fir rajveer jakar apni pillow utha kar sofe pe jakar late jata hai... aur apni aakhien band kar leta

hai... naina rajveer ko ore dekhti hai... aur fir late jati hai... aur jaise hi apni aankhein band karti hai... uski aankhon se aanshun behne

lagte hai...)

naina in her mind:- ha... raj sahi kaha aapne... main sabse jyada nafarat apne aap se karne lagi hun... kyuki yeh naina to kabki aapme

sama gayi hai...

next day...

sabhi dining table pe baith kar breakfast kar rahe the... siwaay naina ke...

ishita:- veer naina kaha hai... itani der ho gayi hai,...

rajveer:- so rahi hai...

dadi:- kya abhi tak... aisa toh pehle usne kabhi nahi kiya...

viren:- ma thaki hogi isiliye so rahi hogi... hota hai...

rajveer:- mera ho gaya... main chalta hun... bye... (rajveer office chala jata hai...)...

shekhawat office... about 2 pm...

aalekh:- kya... par... i dont believe this... usne ghar walo ke sath...

rajveer:- ha mujhe khud samajh nahi aa raha ki wo chahti kya hai...

aalekh:- tune usse pucha nahi...

rajveer:- puchha par wahi dailogues... main batana jaruri nahi samjahti... n i hate u n all ki ramayan...

aalekh:- kuchh gadbad hai veer.. naina aisa kabhi nahi kar sakti... soch agar use yeh karna hi hota to wo din rat ek karke tujhe theek nahi

karti... main maan hi nahi sakta ki wo tujhse nafarat kar sakti hai... tujhse uska naraaz hona uska hak hai... par nafarat kabhi nahi... aur

ghar walo ke sath to aisa kar hi nahi sakti...

rajveer:-to kya main jhuth bol raha hun...

aalekh:- are maine kab kaha ki tu jhuth bol raha hai... par ho sakta hai ki uski mazburi ho...

rajveer:- exactly... yahi maine usse puchha... but nahi... jungli billi ki tarah katne ko daud rahi thi... (aalekh smiles...)...

aalekh:- just wait for some days,,,,, uska gussa khatam ho jaayega to sayad...

rajveer:- i think so too...

aalekh:- hmm...

rajveer :- ruk tujhe kya hua hai... kal se dekh raha hu... baat kya hai...

aalekh:- wo meri phoolan devi apne relative ke yahan gayi hai... yar phone bhi band... how could she... (rajveer smiles)...

rajveer:- tu bahut lucky hai aalekh... atleast tu aur pooja apni love life me khush to ho... yahan meri toh lagi padi hai... (after a pause..)...

one minute... ek taraf bani apne relative ke yahan aur ek taraf ali bhi out of india gaya hai... pooja bhi complain kar rahi thi...

aalekh:- they are frnds na... jo kareinge ek sath...

rajveer:- main naina se puchunga... uske pass sayad bani ke relative ka no ho...

aalekh:- ha plzz puchh ke batana... chal kaam kar... (then both got busy in their work...)

shekhawat vila...

pooja apni class me thi... shalini apne check up ke liye yudi se milne aur viren kisi dost ke pass gaye the... ghar pe is waqt sirf dadi aur

ishita the... naina apne kuchh frnds ko ghar bulati hai... for chilling and like kitty party...

ishita:- are naina... tumhare frnds aaye hue hai... its great... aap loge enjoy karo main apne kamre me hu...

naina:- aap kaha ja rahi hai... agar aap aur dadi nahi hongi... to khana kaun banayega... aur serve kaun karega... aapka wo beta...

ishita:- naina tum...

naina:- kya ha... chalo lag jaao dono kitchen me... sabke liye chai coffee aur snakes... aur fir thodi der baad sabka lunch... get it... hey

common girls have a seat... patte khele... (ishita dadi ke pass jati hai... )...

ishita:- ma naina...

dadi:- puri badal gayi hai... mujhe to abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki yeh is tarah...

naina (to ishita & dadi):- aap log behere ho gaye ho suna nahi...

one of naina's frnd:- are naina yeh teri saas aur dadi saas hai...

naina:- ha toh... yeh ghar mere pati ka hai... is hisaab se main is ghar ki malkin hun... aur yeh dono naukar... (dhamake on both dadi's

and ishita's face)...

ishita:- ma aap apne kamre me jaao... main dekh lungi...

dadi:- par puttar...

ishita:- ma aap jaao...

yahan naina apne frnds ke sath patte khelne me lagi hai... wahan ishita sara kaam akele kar rahi hai kyuki naina ne sabhi servents ko bhi

leave de di thi...

sabhi log lunch kar rahe hai...

naina's frnd:- are wah naina tere toh jalwe hai... normally bahuye saas ki sewa karti hai... yahan to tune apni saas ko hi... great ha... aur

kya khana banati hai teri saas... kash meri saas bhi aisi hoti...

naina's another frnd:- to theek hai... tu hi naina ke pati se shadi karle... mil jaayegi aisi saas... waise bhi naina ka pati kya dikhta hai...

(she winks... all are laughing... including naina...)...

night time...

sabhi dinner kar rahe the... ishita ne dadi ko kisi ko kuchh bhi batane se mana kia tha... to we chup the...

naina:- yuck... itna ganda khana... main nahi kha sakti...

pooja:- naina khana toh achha hai... ma ke hath ka hai...

naina- wahi toh lunch me inke hath ka sada hua khana khana pada meri frnds ko... wo to maine apne frnds ke saamne inhe kuchh kaha

nahi...

ishita:- naina unhe khana achha laga tha...

naina:- wo sirf mera man rakhne ke liye kaha tha unhone...

rajveer:- ek minute... tumhare frnds ke liye mom ne khana kyun banaya... sare naukar kaha the... aur kaka kahan hai...?

naina:- unhe maine leave di hai aaj ki... kya main kisi naukar chhutti bhi nahi de sakti...

viren:- beta... veer ka wo matalab nahi hai... par agar tumhe apne frnds ko bulana tha to naukaro ko chhuti kyun di.. aur di bhi toh hotel se

khana mangwa leti...

naina:- m fed up... mere frnds ko ghar ka khana khana tha isiliye...

ishita:- are rehne dijiye na aap log bhi... koi baat nahi beta... abhi sab khana khao...

naina:- mujhe bhookh nahi hai... (aur naina apni spoon patak kar chali jati hai...)

rajveer(shouted):- naina... (rajveer gusse uth kar kuchh kehne wala hota hai ki ishita use rok deti hai,...) mom wo aise kaise...?

ishita:- are kuchh nahi hua veer... chal khana kha tu... (rajveer baith jata hai...)

rajveer naina's room...

rajveer aata hai to dekhta hai ki naina dressing table pe baithi thi... aur apni bangles utar rahi thi...

rajveer:- bani kaha gayi hai...? (naina shockingly rajveer ko dekhti hai...)...

naina:- kyun...?

rajveer :- wo aalekh pareshan hai... bani jis bhi relative ke yahan gayi hai uska number chahiye use baat karni hai use... bani ka phone lag

nahi raha hai...

naina:- mujhe nahi pata...

rajveer:- are u sure...?

naina:- kaha na nahi pata... aapko samajh nahi aata...

rajveer:- naina tum chilla kyun rahi ho... tumne mom ke sath bhi... (naina rajveer ke saamne aake khadi ho jati hai...)...

naina:- kya ha... agar ma ne meri frnds ke liye khana bana dia... to kya pahaad tut gaya... kya mera ab is ghar me itna bhi hak nahi hai

ki... main apne frnds...

rajveer:- naina tumhe pura hak hai... jo man me aaye wo karo... par mom papa dadi... yeh sab humare bade hai... hume unki sewa karni

hai... unhe humari nahi... janam diya hai unhone hume...

naina:- ek minute... wo aapke papa... aapki ma... aur aapki dadi hai meri nahi...

rajveer:- naina... how could... tumse to baat karna hi bekar hai... leave it... (rajveer washroom me chala jata hai...)

next day morning...

break fast table...

viren:- are itna achha nasta... maza aa gaya...

ishita:- naina ne banaya hai...

viren:- sach... (yahan naina kitchen se aati hai... wahi rajveer apne kamre se...)

rajveer:- good morning... pooja kaha hai...?

viren:- wo uske institute wale un sab ko camp lekar gaye hai wahin gayi hai...

rajveer:- kya akele...

shalini:- puri class ke sath veer...

rajveer:- par usne mujhe bataya nahi...

dadi:- are ab bachhi nahi hai wo... kal rat wo bhul gayi thi... subah usne tujhe disturb nahi kia... chal ab kha...

shalini:- veer yeh kha... naina ne banaya hai... (naina hadbada kar... bolti hai...)...

naina:- di... wo thanda ho gaya hai... yeh lijiye raj... (naina jo abhi plate me lati hai... wo raj ko deti hai...) maine bahut pyar se banaya

hai... specially aapke liye... aapko pasand hai na...

rajveer ko naina ka itna sweet ho jana azeeb laga... par wo khane lagta hai... jaise hi ek bite leta hai... uske muh jal jata hai kyuki naina ne

uske naste me kam se kam 10 spoon mirch dali thi... rajveer ko khashi aati hai...

naina:- kya hua... pasand nahi aaya...

ishita;- veer yeh le pani pi...

rajveer:- nahi mom... m fine...

naina:- oh teekha hai kya...? mujhe aap kha loge...

rajveer:- nahi bilkul theek hai... (aur rajveer pura nasta kha leta hai... yahan naina ne apni fist ko clintch kiya hua tha...)... mera ho

gaya... main chalta hu... bye all... ( wo ek sip pani pita hai... aur chala jata hai... aur bahar jakar vomit kar deta hai...)yeh chahti kya

hai... sabka khana sahi tha... usne janbujhkar... crap... ( he drove off...)...

rajveer- naina's room...

naina on phone:- kar toh rahi hu... ek din me sab nahi ho jayega... dekho... theek hai... ha... (wo call cut karke phone patak deti hai...)

i m sorry... ( she has tears)... nahi mujhse nahi hoga... in do dino me hi mujhe itani takleef ho rahi hai... main kaise... but i have to...

i m sorry...

shekhawat office...

rajveer:- ha... uske pass number nahi hai...

aalekh:- koi baat nahi... achha wo mujhe kuchh kaam hai... aata hun...

rajveer:- hmm...

night time...

rajveer ghar aata hai... to dekhta hai ki sab apne kamre me the... sabne diner kar lia tha... kyuki aaj rajveer ki ek dinner meeting thi to

woh late aaya tha... jaise hi wo apne kamre me aata hai... naina uske saamne khadi thi... rajveer ko shock lagta hai... kyuki naina ne ek

hot si black aur silver dress pehni thi...

rajveer:- yeh sab kya hai...?

naina:- kya hai matalab...

rajveer:- yeh kapde,,,,, tumne kaise kapde pehne hai...

naina:- kyun achhi nahi lag rahi hu... (woh rajveer ke kareeb jati hai... apni bahe uske neck me dalti hai... ) kyun mr husband... ladko ko

toh ladkiya aise kapdo bahut achhi lagti hai... toh fir aapko... (rajveer uske hath ko push karta hai...)...

rajveer:- mujhe nahi pasand... go n change...

naina:- what... no ways... main party me ja rahi hu... chaliye mujhe drop kijiye...

rajveer:- what the... pagal ho kya... tum aise bahar jaogi...

naina:- ha toh...

rajveer:-naina... look... mera dimaag kharab mat karo...

naina:- theek hai nahi jana aapko mere sath... mat jaao ,main ja rahi hu... ( tabhi naina ko call aata hai... wo phone pick karti hai...) ha

priti... ya... heaven disc ok... fine thodi der me aati hu... (she cuts the call... n to rajveer) bye mr husband... so jana mujhe der ho

jayegi... sayad subah... (aur naina attitude dika kar chali jati hai...)

rajveer:- naina... (but she left... rajveer ko had se jyada gussa aa raha tha yeh uski aankhon se saaf - saf pata chal raha tha... par

woh control karta hai... aur jakar khud change karke bahar chala jata hai...)

heaven disc...

naina bahut hi uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi... aisa nahi tha ki wo disc nahi aayi hai... par usne jis tarah ke kapde pehne the... aur jaise

ladke use ghoor rahe the... wo sab azeeb tha naina ke liye... priti use dance floor pe le jati hai... ladke uske aas pass hi dance kar rahe

the... ki naina ki nazar enterance pe padi jahan rajveer khada tha... wo naina ko hi dekh raha tha... fir jakar bar counter pe baith jata

hai... naina rajveer ko dikhane ke liye has rahi thi... dance kar rahi thi... tabhi priti ka frnd naina ko drink deta hai... aur woh peene lagti

hai... after some time naina khud bar counter pe aati hai... rajveer sirf gusse se use ghoor raha tha... naina aur drinks leti hai... aur peene

lagti hai... rajveer uska hath pakad leta hai...

naina:- leave my hand...

rajveer:- pagal ho gayi ho... khud ki haalat dekhi hai... chalo... (naina rajveer ka hath jhatak deti hai...)...

naina (in drunk state):- i wanna dance...

na na na na na...
he he he he he...
la la la la la...
na na na na na...
naina jhumte hue floore pe chali jati hai... naina ko is tarah dekh kar... kuchh boys... uske kareeb aane lagte hai... aur usse chipak kar

dance karne lagte hai... naina bhi kar rahi thi... (rajveer wo sab dekh raha tha... uski aankhein gusse se laal thi.. wo bhi kuchh drinks

peeta hai... yahan naina ko uncomfortable lagne laga... wo unlogon ko push karti hai... ek ladka naina ka hath pakad leta hai... aur use

apni ore pull karta hai ki rajveer aakar us ladke ko push karta hai... aur naina ko dekhta hai aur use kheech ke slap karta hai... itna tez ki

naina gir jati hai... aur uske honthon se bleeding hone lagti hai... aur behose ho jati hai... fir rajveer un ladko ko push karke marta hai...

tab tak guards aa jate hai.. aur un ladko ko pakad lete hai... rajveer naina ko dekhta hai... wo ,move nahi kar rahi thi... use utha kar apne

sath le jata hai...

naina behose thi... rajveer use lakar bed pe lita deta hai... uski sandle utar kar alag rakhta hai... aur use blanket se cover karta hai...

uske headpost side pe jakar baithta hai... uske balon ko sahi karke... uske lips ke pass touch karta hai... jahan pe dry blood laga hua tha...

fir uske forehead pe kiss karke sofe pe jakar naina ko dekhte hue baith jata hai...

rajveer:- kyun naina... kyun kar rahi ho... sirf mujhe takleef pahuchane ke liye... ?? par tum sirf apna nuksaan kar rahi ho...

next day...

next day naina jab subah uthti hai to use hangover tha... par usne jyada nahi pi thi... use sab yaad tha ki kal rat kya hua... wo rajveer ko

dekhne ke liye sofe ki taraf dekhti hai... par wahan koi nahi tha... wo watch dekhti hai jisme 12 baje the... rajveer office ja chuka tha...

naina apna sir head post pe rakhti hai... aur uske aanshun uske chehre ko bhigo dete hai...

a restra...

aalekh:- what...

ragini:- ha... par reason kya hai yeh nahi pata... par naina jo kuchh bhi kar rahi hai... sirf us huda aur didi ke kehne pe... wo mazboor hai

aalekh...

aalekh:- par reason...?

ragini:- sayad raj... kahin raj ko marne ki dhamki... par jo bhi ho... naina ko rokna hoga... naina ke kehne pe main chup thi... par ab nahi

aalekh... i cant see them like this... specially raj... main uski khushiyaan chahti hun...

aalekh:- bahut pyar karti ho veer se na...? (ragini apni nazare jhuka leti hai...)... kash tumne tab wo sab na kia hota ragini to sayad aaj tum

aur veer sath hoti... aur yeh sab kuchh na hota...

ragini:- sach kaha tumne aalekh... kash... kash... yeh ek kash ne hi toh meri duniyaan badal di hai... raj mujhpe trust nahi karta... par

sach me apni jaan se jyada chahti hun main use... aur main yeh bhi janti hu ki woh mera nahi ho sakta... na hi use meri sachhai ya mere

pyar pe vishwaas hai... par main bas use aur naina ko ek karna chahti hu... ek waqt tha jab maine raj se uska pyar chheena tha... par ab

mera khud se wada hai ki raj ko uska pyar dila kar rahungi... use naina lauta kar rahungi... (aalekh pressed his hand on her...) bas tum

kuchh karo...

aalekh:- dont worry main dekhta hu... aur main tumhare sath hu ragini...

ragini:- do u trust me,...?

aalekh:- agar tum par ab trust nahi hota toh main yahan nahi baitha hota... u know what ragini ek waqt tha jab mere dil me tumhare liye

sirf kadwahat thi... sirf tumhara bura chahta tha main... par aaj takleef ho rahi hai tumhare liye...

ragini:- ise hi zindagi kehte hai aalekh... bas ab sirf ek ichha baki hai apne liye... ki raj mujh par yakeen kar le...

aalekh:- karega jarur karega... ab main chalta hun... (Aalekh left... and fresh pair of tears were pouring ragini's face...)

its about night...

shekhawat office...

rajveer:- kya...

aalekh:- ha...

rajveer:- par ragini bharoshe ke laayak nahi aalekh...

aalekh:- mera yakeen kar woh jhuth kyun bolegi...

rajveer:- kyuki... (he stops kyuki use khud pata nahi tha...)...

aalekh:- dekh veer agar uska maksad tujhe aur naina ko alag karna hota to yeh na kehti ki naina ki mazburi hai... balki wo naina ki burai

karti... naina ko galat batati... aur khud soch naina sirf chand dino me itani nahi badal sakti.. aur tu us huda aur ritu ko janta hai... tu

samajh raha hai na...

rajveer:- ha ab samajh aa raha hai... to yeh sab naina se karwaya ja raha hai... aur iske peeche huda aur ritu hai... main unhe nahi

chhodunga... (rajveer phone lekar naina ko call karta hai... but uska phone lag nahi raha tha...) naina ka phone nahi lag raha... mujhe

usse baat karni hi hogi...

aalekh:- hmm.. but sambhal kar...

rajveer:- hmm...

shekhawat vila...

rajveer ghar aata hai... aur apne kamre me jata hai... naina wahan nahi thi... sabse naina ke bare me puchhta hai par kisi ko nahi pata

tha... rajveer frustate hokar yahan se wahan kamre me ghoom raha tha... tabhi uski nazar pillow ke neeche pade naina ke phone pe

padi... usne dekha to phone discharge tha... wo phone ko charge pe lagata hai... aur turn on karke last msg aur call dekhta hai... msg me

kuchh nahi tha... par call ne rajveer ko ek rah dikha di thi...

rajveer:- huda...

huda's place...

naina:- yahan itna andhera kyun hai... huda... huda... (tabhi ek bahut hi low volt ki light on hoti hai...),...

huda:- aa gayi tum naina...

naina:- ha... kahan hai bani aur ali... tune kaha tha na... tu batayega... bata na... bol...

huda:- bata dunga... sabra kar... par naina main tujhe chahta hun naina... (naina ke kareeb aakar...) aakhir us rajveer me aisa kya hai...

plzz naina mere pass aaja... (wo naina ko pakdta hai... naina uska hath jhatak deti hai...)

naina:- khabardar jo mujhe chhua toh... dekh maine tujhe pehle bhi kaha hai... aur aaj aakhiri baar keh rahi hu... main tujhe nahi chahti...

main sirf raj se pyar karti hun... main sirf raj ki hun... aur jahan tak sawaal tera hai to nafarat karti hu main tujhe samjha... sirf nafarat... ab

yeh bakwaas band kar... aur ,mujhe bani aur ali ka pata bata... i promise ki sirf ritu ko saza milegi... tujhe kuchh nahi hoga...

huda:- oh... theek hai fir... aise na sahi... waise hi sahi... tujhe to apna bana ke rahunga... aaj main tera wo haal karunga ki wo rajveer teri

taraf dekhega bhi nahi... (dhamaake on naina's face... huda naina ko pakad leta hai...)...

naina:- k.. k... kya kar raha hai... chhod mujhe...

huda:- nahi...

huda naina ko ek slap karta hai... naina gir jati hai... uske honthon se khoon behene lagta hai... wo uth ti hai... aur bahar ki ore bhagne ki

kosis karti hai par huda full force se use apni ore kheechta hai... ek hath use pakadta hai... aur dusre hath se naina ki blouse ka sleeve fad

deta hai...

naina( crying):- huda... nahi,... huda plzz... chhod mujhe... hudaaa...

End of Part 32
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Edited by rkchandni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg
double update
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bs aise hi update krti raho aap :)
Edited by Arohi6 - 8 years ago

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