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Ashu25 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sooo cute!!!
How I wish each one of us has a fairy tale of this sort instead of a real life.
I can live in these tales...breathe through them.
Just the way you write Nisha...I imagine them all moving and talking. It is one great sight for my mind.
You know, when you are so done with life, you want to just abandon every damn thing and run away...this space for me is the lee way mentally.
I wish I had more coming every day .
I hope I enjoy many more updates as this .
Thanks a lot N!
This space means a lot to me!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashu25

Sooo cute!!!

How I wish each one of us has a fairy tale of this sort instead of a real life.
I can live in these tales...breathe through them.
Just the way you write Nisha...I imagine them all moving and talking. It is one great sight for my mind.
You know, when you are so done with life, you want to just abandon every damn thing and run away...this space for me is the lee way mentally.
I wish I had more coming every day .
I hope I enjoy many more updates as this .
Thanks a lot N!
This space means a lot to me!



It sure is a pensive me this mrng wondering if this alternate world of this modern literary fairy tale does offer more where a guy doesn't give in to # impulse , resists temptations and instant gratification with his eyes on future rewards than the immediate reward that he could get had he given in.

Compare this to the real world we live, where powerful people who matter make decisions that defies sense propelling a negative momentum without thinking thro wanting instant gratification for their divisiveness and the hatred they harbor instilling fear, this instant grantification though is leaning more towards future punishment and not rewards.
Edited by Errantnomad - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
For the ones you love...

The Friday morning began with II tripping over Nivi's board book with a plane embedded in the pages, sending her careening backwards
to the door, her elbow hitting the door knob

She was so mad she forgot her choices Tamil cuss words

The girls were torturing Ranjan when she went down, his laptop keyboard had a heap of fruit loops on it
They smacked the keys as they pretended to talk to whoever

She smacked both got them off the laptop as they screamed

Mr Sitaraman was coming in at 2 ish to cook the dinner

Amma had informed 30 of her friends, II hada sked Sam for 20 or so names

Looked like Manya was back, her Chanel bag sat on the kitchen table

Ranjan chuckled as he was being taught yoga in the backyard

II lit the lamp, sang a couple of kritis
Her elbow hurt like crazy

She went up to clean up the 2nd floor before another accident happened

The girls were acting out every trick in the book in order to get off the high chair.
Amma called, followed by Akka.
Janaki Athai called, Lakshmi ka called

The string of phone calls left II lost and confused

She gave the girls a bath, fed Ranjan and them breakfast and saw him walk down the back stair case

"Can I have eggs please?" he said gruffly clearing his throat

"Nope, not today" she said firmly

"Can I atleast have coffee?" he sulked

"If there is no poultry or sea food in it, then sure" she said shortly

He glared at her, as he waited for her to bring him her coffee

"Where are the girls?" he asked slowly

"Yaad aa gayin dono? Aaafat hain dono, they make mess after mess after mess, lasya is the leader" Ii was upset

"I asked where are they" he said patiently

"Pehle meri baat suno..." she proceeded to narrate everything they did from teh time she came down at 7:20 to... now

Sam had texted her twice asking her when she will bring the girls for kanya pooja


"Can u do urs at 1 or something please? Dad has promised we wud go to Chachi's" she texted pausing from narrating


She looked up at him

"I gave u ur coffee no?" she said

"But not the kids" he said

"they are upstairs with Manya" she said makinga face

"All dressed?" he asked

"yenn? if they are not dressed u wont watch them or what?" she asked frazzled

"Probably not" he said smugly

"Paavi" she cursed audibly

Mahavir made him toast, and potatoes and granola and yogurt eagerly

She went up and helped the girls down as Manya was gettinga head/scalp massage in her room
II had no idea when the girl came in

Nivi was dressed in a parrot green kanjeevarm with a ornage blouse with puffed sleeves, hair tied in two clumps above her ears and flowers strung in between

Lasya was too bossy to get her hair done, so she wore her peach and purple kanjeevaram lehanga with no flowers

Nivi was even wearing a tear drop like gree bindi

II couldnt help but smile every time she saw the girls

"I am going to do my best to raise u like Iyer chicks and keep u away from Punjabi men. They are stink pots" she whispered going down the grandstaircase

He waited at the bottom

"Wow" he sucked his breath in

Nivi let go of her feet, hanging swaying from II's grip

Too excited too go to R&B

II pushed the gate aside left them downstairs and went up to pick out her matching saree combination
Popped a pill for her elbow...

She wore parrot green and orange with a gorgeous emerald choker, four rows of emeralf with one row of sparklers in between

Paired with her emerald jhumkas it looked like she was going to rock


The blouse required a hand knot at teh back, it had no buttons

He appeared by the bath sink closet area and found her struggling

"My arm wont reach, I fell on her toy" she said irritated

He leaned on the dor jamb and just ogled

"I shud have known" she said a lump in her throat

Bending down to undo her underskirt's knot, deciding to wear another saree with a normal blouse

He was behind her

"What do u say when u ask for help II?" he asked

"Can u do it?" she said purposely

"Is that it?" he asked fingering the two tails

"Pannina pannu illena naharu" (move out of my way) she said disgusted

He began to knot it, quietly

Turned her around

"Now?" he asked

"Ek kaam kiya tumne mera subah se" she reminded him that she never got that kiss

He bend down, she turned her face away

He cupped her curves boldly and began to move on her

"I am already late. U shud save ur horny fantasies for" he kissed her finally

He felt her choker like it was some sex toy... when he finally let go, she was weak and squishy

"Now?" he urged asking for the "please and thank you"

"Now" "was that it?" she repeated the word provoking him

He undid her knot at the back

He found her head buried on his chest

"Thanks" she said breathlessly.

He knotted her blouse again and left her alone, hot and glowing

They arrived at Chachu's after 11

Ranjan went with them, R&B decided to drive, Ranjan was surprised R&B would even go with them

"For the girls' sake I bet" Ii provoked R&B loudly reminding Ranjan he would do anything for Lasya & Nivi
as Ranjan speculated why R&B was going to green park with them


the house was full with Green Park glitterati.


There was an Iyer girl in green that was glittering too

Tall luscious and stunning...



Heads turned most definitely

"I am happy" Chachi said swallowing unwilling to compliment

"What a surprise betaji" Chachu was all over R&B

He nodded urging Nivi to say hi to her young cousins, chachu's grandkids

"She looks like a pwincess aunty" Harish's grand daughter exclaimed

"Aunty? No betaji, she is your chachi" Chachu was all gushy

The pooja happened

The sons wandered aimlessly making arrangements for some family party in the weekends

They ignored R&B mostly

Ranjan tried not to talk shop with Chachu, Chachu insisted he would only talk shop

"He is so busy, he even refused to be home today. Its good bhaisaab is home" Chachi took her first pot shot

"He has a good work life balance mostly" II nodded

The bahus wanted to know about II's necklace earrings and bangles, ii admitted it was Ranjan (& Savvy's) wedding gift. One of many...


Ranjan was overjoyed to be going to his brother's house with his son

That was a rare, umm.. an "im"possibility actually


"Are u spending more time here? U have a gudiya now?" Chachi interrogated II's texting husband

He wore navy slacks and a white cotton shirt
Refusing to wear the traditional garb II had set out on the bed

"I try" R&B said quietly

Lasya was leading a troop of 4, and 5 year olds in running across the house

Nivi was cautious she ran as far as her eyes cud see her Amma or daddy and promptly returned for a cuddle

She was timid and frightened easily

Chachi gave II a gold coin and Nivi a gold chain

II had bought silver trinkets for the girls in the family and sandalwood figurines for the women

Samar and Trehaan began a convo about how much crisis they had handled the past few weeks

Trehaan made it known to II that buying Transpro was the worst decision Excelsior ever made

"U wudnt know" R&B said under his breath

Trehaan looked confused

"Uve been with the company what? two years now?" R&B said firmly

Jo bhi ho..."Aapse se zyaada bhai" Trehaan tried some snide humor

"Ofcourse" R&B nodded not bothering to defend himself or his role as a managing partner at a seed capital firm


Ranjan felt bad for his son, he wanted to lash out and protect his son

R&B looked unfazed

Nivi sat on his lap as he showed her something on his phone

"Bijwasan ke paas 150 acre aaya hai, baat karan tayaji?" Trehan salivated

Ranjan looked rattled, he had no plans to invest anything jointly at this time

"Inne acchee achhe soney deals aate rehte hain paisaab, we shud all live together" Harish linked his fingers to display closeness

"Aaj khabar aayi, kal deal ho jaana hai, agar asee immediate response nahi dein tey del tey nikal gayi? sahi gall haigi nahi?" Chachu urged Trehaan


"Tayaji woh Meerut waali purani Eicher tyre waali factory building ka deal to nikal gaya, bus 7 crore mein aapne mana kar diya" Samar was distraught

"I am going to go round up Lasya" II told R&B

"I can go get her" he offered unwilling to listen to the tripe

Chachi wandered in with a giant silver tray with bowls of kheer

the bowls looked like GOLD to II

SERIOUSLY?
WHAT THE...


"Bache inne sincere haingey ne paisaab, u are so lucky" Chachi praised her progeny

Ranjan nodded "Jee... jee"

"Itne dil se kaam karne waale aaj kal warna kidhar?" she took a pot shot at R&B

"They do it for a price" R&B said quietly

Chachi looked a bit shaken

"between stock, commission and salaries he probably pays them more than he/Ranjan pays himself" R&B said getting up

"I am going to go get Lasya" he told his wife

Chachu's expression smoldered

Trehaan looked like he would take a swing at R&B

"Umm... everybody should be valued beta" Chachi defended her sons in a shrill patronizing tone as if they deserved every bit of the remuneration
... as her own husband fumbled for words,

"Agreed... but not grossly over valued" R&B said leaving the opulent garishly furnished living room

Ranjan stared at his son astounded

He had to lower his gaze lest Harish would notice the expression of sheer joy in his




moonwearer thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
The long overdue invitation and response and R&B's response the icing on the cake.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh woow
Wht was that dude on fire
But it was needed to show them there place
And a happy Ranjan on this auspicious day... wht a sight
👏
Lovely nisha
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Posted: 8 years ago
Annd yes description of the girls attire was so astonishing i want the same for my girls too
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
So happy to read about a happy ranjan as a morning update...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Guns and gunfire.who won this round of course non ruffable rb
Kyun yeh dakoo family takes panga when they always get Naga but still they r so shameless.
Even in auspicious gathering they had to take potshots now he bazooka ed u all hope u have a lovely evening dakoos
Its time for bhalla family to move and go back to their loved ones and to have a happy time.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad



It sure is a pensive me this mrng wondering if this alternate world of this modern literary fairy tale does offer more where a guy doesn't give in to # impulse , resists temptations and instant gratification with his eyes on future rewards than the immediate reward that he could get had he given in.

Compare this to the real world we live, where powerful people who matter make decisions that defies sense propelling a negative momentum without thinking thro wanting instant gratification for their divisiveness and the hatred they harbor instilling fear, this instant grantification though is leaning more towards future punishment and not rewards.


Sorry hai ji
Maiinu samajh ni aaya kuch
Saral bhasha mein bolo.na
Ashu25 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Naaaiiceee
RB does talk 🤣
Why we no give him dialogues???
I like this giving back dude.
I can sooo imagine II's jewellery
I am yearning foe more updates!!!
Please give us all a treat sometime if possible N!

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