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Posted: 8 years ago
The challenges of raising a headstrong child in privileged condition is no joke. Nivi being the best example. The rules of society especially towards animals are anything but admirable. We the human society have never treated other animals well. So Nivi does have a point about animal using /eating animal products, however she is talking with a vegetarian mother, I wonder how her father really thinks of her ideas besides the "period" dilemma? Wow Nivi is becoming more of a challenge to raise than the twins combined.
Such a provocative chapter on so many different fronts.


Thank you.
Edited by ocean28 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yep
He secretly loves Nivi the most. He wants to side with his wife and tell her tree hugging vegetarian principles off. But its not so easy, he realizes doing that as knee jerk will cause Nivi to distance herself from everyone.

Kids these days use drugs as the first and last resort.
He knows he had access to everything 20 years ago even. Its like walking on egg shells
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Posted: 8 years ago
I think that R&B is more familiar with the world that Nivi is in than II. II in some ways is more naive as she does not really know what goes on in the lives of children who come from a lot of wealth. May be this is my own middle-class mentality that sees the world as II does. II is so far removed from the world of drugs and sexual escapades used by youngsters challenging parental authority, or just experiencing life, as they have most of their desires fulfilled. Thus I think that it would be better if II listened to some of R&B suggestions in raising Nivi. I think that as parents they will be facing similar challenges later with the twins. I am already crossing my fingers.
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's not that hard to empathize with II and Ranjan's fear. Despite the best efforts of the parents there is no guaranteed outcome on the final product your upbringing stamps on your child. That's a reality as it's not just the parents who are the influencers of all things good and bad in life. We don't live in that kind of a world anymore.

But for Nivi, I would rather call her as strong willed . Head strong... yes but strong willed more.

On a personal front , I find some moments that I face with my teen daunting and frustrating that has me yelling at her with no patience wanting to pull my hair out and scream on feeling like banging in to a brick wall.

But I also have had moments where I have sat back , watched in awe at the conviction that she shows on certain pursuits. Certain things ... you as a parent get to see the drive in our own kid. Increasingly you become aware that you as a parent become a student and not her teacher / guide of late and that's not a bad thing as they go through that metamorphic stage of breaking out of their cocoon.

Yes it's time for II and dude to become students to a strong wiled self motivated fine young lady
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Posted: 8 years ago
Prickly

He drove Nivi to school, she sulked all the way, and just texted furiously

"Can u give ur phone a rest please?" he requested bluntly

"Can I go to Macy's tonight?" she asked instead

"Umm.. no you may not, didnt u miss shabad last week?" he asked turning toward her

She didnt respond

"I thought stalking me was Amma's job" she muttered

"Enough Nivi" he said gruffly

"You never worry about my school or classes" she wailed

"Umm" he thought up a retort

"Its not like you ever took shabad lessons" she argued

"I agree... I didnt... but Amma has you doing it for a reason"

"NOBODY in my class is doing shabad" she cringed

He was quiet

"I am doing a strange hodge podge of things, Carnatic music and shabad? I mean... fencing and tennis?" she ridiculed herself

He didnt say a word

"You talk to Amma all the time, now you wont talk to me"

He chuckled

His wife said those exact words all the time

"Sorry... um... u can drop fencing if u like" he offered

"NO... NO I dont want to do that" she said blushing

"Greg's in fencing?" he asked pissed

He honked at a poor auto wala

And turned towards his daughter to hide his shame for unnecessary honking

"umm... he is" she said

"U cant have it both ways Nivi. Amma lets you see him, and you want to quit something Amma wants?" he argued logically

Nivi huffed and puffed

He pulled up outside Modern School

Nivi stormed out of the car

"I have to sign u in" he said mockingly

"We have recess.. I dont want to miss" she said

"Oh yeah" he smirked

And took his time finding a good parking spot

The aging guard grinned

"Bitiya khoob lambi ho gayi" he muttered

He smiled and said namaste

They went in the attendance clerk logged her arrival

"I dont think she has lunch, is it too late to place an order for the cafeteria?" he asked
The lady nodded unconcerened

"I am not hungry DAD" Nivi was embarrassed

"Umm.. I think u shud let me judge that" he said

"No really... i can share my friends' food" she said smugly

"U mean Greg's Swedish meatballs & Gravlax (Salmon)?" he muttered

"He is eating vegetarian too" Nivi said smugly again

"Ah... ofcourse" he nodded
She fidgeted, her long smooth legs imaptient on the marble floor... pacing

"Can I go now Dad?" she begged

He nodded reluctantly

She turned and began to sprint

"Hey" he called after her

She ran back to him sulking and threw herself into his arms
Barely plantinga kiss on his cheek

"U are prickly" she dismissed
Running away...

She was gorgeous, tall and skinny and had arresting eyes like his wife

He could kill Greg with his bare hands...

Sigh!!
He grunted and drove home

The house was quiet

The dogs scampered up to him, he picked them up and got licked all over

"Where is Sahana?" he asked

They both barked

"Seriously? Dude?" We get an hour of peace when she takes a nap" Chuck announced

He went up, Mavvy polished the stair rail
The other help busy with other cleaning

"Nivi ko aaj lunchahi nahi diye rahe hum" he said

" she will learn Mahavir" he smiled gently
His wife slept on the bed Sahana was sprawled on the bed, arms and legs splayed after she got knocked out after a beer brawl at a pub

Sahana stirred and sat up the dogs went beserk

They hated her... they loved... her... they feared her... they idolized her... well they werent sure what

II opened her eyes and stared and turned away

Her rope like braid hung from the edge of the bed

She wore a saree and flowers and and chose to nap
He picked up James and dropped him on the bed
The poor dog tangled and skidded trying to avoid Sahana

"Ur hottie is here for sex" R&B muttered

"I had sex with both while you were gone" she muttered cynically referring to James Bond & Chuck Norris

He threw his head back and laughed...

Sahana grabbed James' ear and he barked...

He picked up his daughter and kissed her hard

She made a face and rubbed her fat palms on his face

"Prickly?" he whispered

She smiled
He kissed her again, and set her down.. they fled the room as she chased them

Mahavir passed by, inko neeche lekar jaayenge? Jenny aa chuki hain gate par" he said softly

Mahavir looked like he was being threatened
"Jee" he nodded

R&B bolted the door and slid under the covers

she stiffened and moved away

"II" he groaned

"Avala Farm Fresh ( a new high end fruit & veggie store in Cpuri) kootindu poi lunch vangi kudutheya?" (did u buy her lunch?)

"U are still hung up on her?" he muttered

He pulled her and rolled her on to his body

Pressing her face down on his

"Kuthardu daaa" (u are prickly) she moaned

He kissed her slowlyyy... tasting and relishing

Their tongues sparring, breathlessly

"U dressed up to take a nap?" he asked, undoing her hooks on the blouse on the back

She arched

"they drive me nuts" she said
He kissed her again

"Dog was going to bite her" II said letting him unhook... giving up her fight

"she wud have bit him back" he said

II groaned.. she knew it was the truth

He gently laid her down and bent over her neck




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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for update dee


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Posted: 8 years ago
This is so amazing Nisha I can't figure out the reason why every update every time feels like it's the new story I m reading be it present or future or anything u write
It feels so refreshing that it's hard to tell that it's an 1200 update old story
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Posted: 8 years ago
And yes it's challenging to have an teenage kid at this time and then too when u have been there and done that and know the consicuencies of every step one make
And how can u put Sahana and dogs in one line and always make it feel like that they are one and not human and dogs
It's so amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
A normal and romantic day at MM. What a treat!
Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Secure & Insecure

The boys came home first from their school. One had green paint all over his hands

Sahana and the dogs sat on the rug in the master bedroom playing eating and and generally ignoring each other

Chuck leapt from time to time trying to fly up to the bed, to cuddle with a sleeping II
She rolled over pulled a pillow over her ear trying to ignore the yelps and groans and cackle from down below

He went off to take a call after making love

She wore his tee and took a good two hour nap

"Amma I maded finger payting" Ved waved his hand
She groaned and reluctantly rolle dover

One had his tie on, though the knoct was way below

The other didnt have his tie on

Sid bend down and picked up a teddy graham from Sahana's cup, the dogs loved the boys

The boys loved Mimika

So their love wasnt reciprocated

Sahana growled and screamed

R&B appeared taking his glasses off

"So when someone is taking a nap how are they supposed to mind 3 kids?" she accused

Ved ran to his dad and got hoisted

R&B kissed him on his cheek letting his lips sink

"Me ment to the big biggg pawk and mohith dumped off the swide" Ved explained

"Did u do it too?" he asked softly

Ved smiled shyly

"There!! THATS my boy" he cooed

Sid stole Sahana's cup and she pushed him and climbed over him, letting the snack spill all over the rug

The dogs cleaned it up in a second

"Ba" II cooed

Sahana sat up and sprinted on her knees

"Podi... i meant the dogs" II said yawning

R&B bend down and picked up the puppies and handed them to II'
They were sooo thankful to be rescued from the alligator baby

They scampered and wagged their tails

"U must wonder about ur misfortune" II whispered on Chuck

"U live on the edge everyday dont u" she kissed the dog's ear

"Ur daughter... I mean" Chuck began

"Shut up and kiss up dude, we can petition later" James barked

Nivi walked up with a aloof look

II was suddenly fearful
She wasnt wearing any clothes underneath her tee

She looked at the clock and it was 3 PM

"Ayyo" she muttered

"Why were the boys late?" she asked panicking

"No they werent, Jenny took them to Sam's for a bit" he said

II draged Sid up and cuddled

"Amma can I skip shabad today?" Nivi was direct

II was afraid she was goingt o climb up

Sid "took care o that"
He slid his legs under her blanket and squealed "Amma is shame shame"

AYYYO
RAKSHASANEY
The dogs thought they were being complimented they licked Sid furiously

II looked at Nivi, she was clearly embarrassed

"how about I fix u a snack?" R&b offered

Sahana stood up and went after him

She had ONE goal in life

"To eat"

"I was vewy sweepy on the bus" Ved told his Dad, smoothing his hair off his forehead pretentiously


"Oh really?" "I am going to fix u a snack and we can lay down and read a book?" he asked

"Mo book Daddy.. stoweee" Ved said

His boys were like II they abhorred books and reading

"Ofcourse" he chuckled

He fed his troops as Ranjan returned

"Gudiya kithey?" he asked his son

"She took the day off" R&B said

"Nivi raje toone ki khaya lunchich?" he asked her

"Kale salad" Nivi said primly

R&B grunted

"Bete andey kha lete hain... jid nahi na karte, Amma ko dekha kinni meynat kardee haigi?" he reasoned with Nivi

"Dadu its cruel" Nivi said

"Kale nu chot nahi aandi?" he argued

"Dadooo u just pluck from a plant" she explained

"I beez learning pots of a twee Dadu" Sid explained

"Wah jee wah, kee learn kara aapne?" he cooed

"There beez a twunk, a wimb (limb) weaves and bwanches" he explained

Ranjan tried his best not to crack up at the unqiue vocab

"dadoo I beez wearning about OTH" (art) Ved claimed

"Pencil box to Sid ne gumaya aapni kis waaste art kithha?" Ranjan enquired

Sid suddenly recalled his sister took his pencil box

"Mimika my pencil, my pencil my pencil my pencil BOSK" he shouted

Nivi shrugged

Sid pulled her long braied

Nivi gently shoved him

Sid landed on the floor

Sahana stared in shock

"Nivi" R&B scolded

"He keeps pulling my hair" Nivi claimed

"Gudiya aapne iska pencil box liya?" Ranjan asked

"They take all my art pencils so I took his" Nivi was red, covering up her crime

"Not cool" R&B said unhappily

Mavvy was chopping veggies for dinner

Sid was crying

"galt kitha puttar... poore ghar mein har kamre mein aapka art desk haiga" Ranjan picked up Sid

"I didnt mean to" Nivi began to weep and ran upstairs through back stair case

II walked in from the grand staircase

"Veetla eppo paar rana kalam daan " (house is always a battlefield


"Daftar kis waaste nahi gayi?" Ranjan demanded

II was startled

"Umm.. uh... mera matlab" she colored

R&B chuckled

"I wanted to take the day off Dad... I was supposed to go to Malviya Nagar and Bank and Munirka, par kahin nahi gayi" "waise aap mujhe ghar rehne ko kehte rehte hain aaj daat kyon rahe hain?"

"Beta tu soti nahi na acchi lagdee" Ranjan said sadly

"I was tired" II said sheepishly

"What happened with Nivi?" Ii asked

"She hid Sid's pencil box and wont own up to it" R&B said a lil disappointed

II's face clouded with sadness

R&B went upstairs

"Nivi lo lekar bahut tension hai" II muttered

Sahana was in her godee, gently rocking herself to sleep

Ranjan fed the boys their banana bread and choc milk


"Akele ren di aadat hui onnu, phir in dono ne aafat machai, ab Sahana, aur... phir yeh dono"

"BTW we LOVE it here, dont send us away" Chuck stood erect and announced to Ranjan

"say something man!! Tell him how safe and secure we are" "Cmon dude" Chuck urged James

"Well the last part's a lie" James disapprived vehemently

"She is not acting out because she doesnt get any attention" II refused to accept

"Rab jaane gudiya" Ranjan sighed "Mainnu pakda Sahana" he took the baby as she napped

The boys followed him outside

The dogs did too

II went up

R&B sat across from a weeping face down Nivi on her bed

"Can u sit up please?" R&B begged

"I dont think she even likes me" Nivi was tearful

"Whoa?" R&B looked incredulous

"She doesnt like me..." Nivi cried

"Thats not true

"Oh yes it is... dont... dont lie to me Dad... she hates me...I knew she only likes you" Nivi said all of a sudden

R&b realized his daughter was jealous of the attention he was paying his wife
And he had no idea how to address that...



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