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Posted: 8 years ago
BTW i am sure all of you know, kareena and Saif had a baby boy yesterday and his name is Taimur!
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Posted: 8 years ago
... And I have tears rolling down my cheeks. Great relationship between the mother and the son in law. Both such great characters.
Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update as usual Nisha!
I really like the bonding b/w Amma and Dude.. I so wish dude shares this convo with II and kinda of thanks her and her Amma for trying to fill the void left by his Maa (Savvy Bhalla) in his life..
This update was a tearjerker ! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
One of the best parts
Hats of Nisha
It was really heart touching and felt so good to read
There's a special bond that Amma and dude share from starting and it is such a bliss
We have got the glimps of there bonding previously also but this was just out of this world
Dude just needed warmth of a mother and some soothing words at this time and Amma provided that...
👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
I had tears nishu...brilliantly written...👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just plain awesome
So emotional.. Made me cry

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome awesome updates Nisha. Very touching and soulful. I owe you quite a few reviews. Having a bit of connectivity issues now on travel.

Thank you very much Nisha

Merry Christmas and Happy new year wishes in advance to all folks here.

And many congratulations everyone on the oncoming Sosy Anniversary .

Thank you Nisha and all you mates here for making these threads lively and engaging to the best of our intent that's so far been great and commendable
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Posted: 8 years ago
Cotton & Kohl and Foraging for food

"This is not even healthy" "did you know you DONT need dairy?" Nivi looked straight at II as she challenged her Amma

"Well then... you dont have to drink your milk. I mean school is not necessary either" II said sarcastically

"Ammmaaa" Nivi scowled


"Whats going on II?" R&B came down through the back staircase

"Umm.. nothing" II muttered

"Why is Nivi upset?" he demanded

Sid & Ved were pulling each other yanking on each others' ties

Sahana and the dogs sat under the table eating off the floor

"Nivi?" R&B shrugged

"I am not going to say anything Dad" Nivi flicked a lock of silky buttery locks

"II?" R&B demanded
Sid choked and fell on the floor

Ranjan ran toward him

The boys screamed at each other

"II?" R&B asked patiently

"OK... I am sick and tired of arguing with her for everything... every GODDAMN thing" II said unapologetic

Nivi squirmed

"Gudiyaaa?" Ranjan hollered

Sid and Ved clung to him as he shut their ears

"u are dramatic and intolerant" R&B spoke in scissor like words

"Oh yeah? How about u try to talk to her" II said arms on her hips

Nivi pushed her full plate forward, the glass of milk fell and rolled

She looked afraid

"Kudikka vendaam nu pidivadam pidiche, ippo kottiyacha?" (u didnt want to drink, now u spill it all)

Nivi began to cry

"I hate this house" she hissed

"Well... in that case we will find you another family soon" II lashed back

"II... ENOUGH" R&B warned

The dogs licked the milk hungrily unmindful of the rolling silver tumbler

Nivi crawled despite being TWO and bend down

II dragged her up, and smacked her butt

The boys' honked outside the gate they could hear it all the way inside

They got the kids on the bus.
It was some exclusive private school run by an NGO of which Ranjan was the biggest donor
The teachers wore cotton and kohl in their eyes

The whole place smelled like jasmine and sandal

"Amma pick me up soon, I beez going to Sam Athai house" Ved yelled

II nodded expressionlessly

Sid yelled back at her from inside "Amma Mimika took my pencil bOSK (he couldnt say box)"

II was really irritated

The school was all about personal responsibility and Sid was going to have to sit it out today with no writing work

"Ayyo" she muttered angrily

"THIS is what pisses me off about her" she said thinking R&B was near her

He was inside

Ranjan was having the kitchen mess cleaned up

James & Chuck followed him faithfully hoping they will get Nivi's uneaten omelette

Sahana reached for it took a bite and fed the puppies

AND ATE THE REST

"Where is HE?" II demanded

"Oopar hona hai osne, apni bitiya ke paas" Ranjan said wearily

"YOU see what she does everyday dont you dad?" II asked in a angst ridden voice

He looked nervous and afraid

He had never had a kid that constantly challenged authority like Nivi
Nivi questioned everything

She used all her reading skills to arm herself with knowledge or so it seemed like

The tall grandfather antique struck 7:30

II leapt up the stairs

R&B and Nivi were in the 2nd floor lounge on the couch watching some rock climbing video

"Since u are not going to school today, change out of your uniform and come down u can help me in the kitchen"

"But I thought you had a job" Nivi said

"I forgot to drink my coffee so I am punishing myself by staying home too" II shot back

R&B stood up as he saw tension rise between the two

Waved a finger

"No... hang on... u hang on" II hissed
Nivi slinked back behind R&B


"Do u know how much kids all over India crave for a glass of milk every morning?" II was choked up

"II" R&B said gruffly now

"No... let me finish da... I let her be... I dont interfere with her addicted state of reading all the time. Her art work, I let her skip shabad when she wants, I let her see Greg" II fumbled

R&B sucked his breath in

Nivi looked aloof

"MY child... I never imagined we would be raising an anarchist. Some things are NOT cool"

"They torture animals when they get the milk out. they are cruel to chickens and it hurts them to lay eggs everyday. Women menstruate once a month, but these hens dont have a choice?"

R&B looked thunderstruck

He suddenly looked like he sided with his wife

He couldnt imagine his darling baby girl talk about periods

He realized she was growing

It annoyed him, no... no pissed him off

"There are a million chicken farmers that would die of starvation if we all stopped eating eggs"

"Thats a cop out Amma" Nivi said smugly

"I GIVE UP" II said her shoulders slumping

"she has missed her bus now" II said sadly

R&B had no idea how to make peace he adored both his girls
Well... the snotty two year old that ate dog fod AND dog's food...


"Can we have a moratorium on this topic until 4 PM?" he asked softly

"I am going to work" II said tearfully

"Amma" Nivi looked distraught

"I havent packed u lunch, you should probably look at foraging for food" II said quietly and walked into the bedroom










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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey you guys
Thanks for loving the last chapter so much

I veered away a bit and gave u guys a pre-teen Nivi chapter

These are always fun for me

As R&B struggles to come to terms with his darling baby growing up
II struggling to rein in a headstrong Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
Me likes the veering Nisha. It's refreshing and at times give some you a little jolt ...bare ho kar bacche! But agian so true teenage years especially for girls with all the hormonal stuff going on can be agonizing for both parents and daughters. For boys too as well, but considerig a woman's brain is far more mature, during teenage years it runs amock. This roop of Nivi even a surprise for RB...but however much a dad is involved in the kids upbringing, a mom always takes it more personably when kids act out. She loses the ability to keep herself at a distance because She judges the behaviour as a reflection of her own parenting style. These years are definitely tough!

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