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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SWAN123

I'm guilty of not being Super active on the thread. But sure there are many who miss the camaraderie of those days. I'm sure we are a comfortable bunch now writing in when we can.
Looking at form Nishas end .. I'm sure she knows the regulars and the ones who write regularly and ones that write when they are moved.

Writing is a lot of hard work! Nisha totally appreciate your efforts and the quality of your prose 😊

Back to the story I find the contrast in M and II so interesting ... M probably regrets what didn't work out for her or Had moved on and has no issues seeing her ex- beau married and with a Bebe!!and dude is cool because he probably means no malice. I would have bought that if he's equally cool and secure with all those virtual Iyer sonsinlaw that live in Appa's head. But our man loses his cool and is ready to kill anyone who looks at his teen Nivi!!

Interesting I learnt today double standards are endearing in stories!! Too hard in real life.

Nisha a big hug for you.. I would love to reach across the ocean and wave a magic wand to make your rocks and big talking gas bags at work disappear 😳.

Talking about Your story, this thread and Poland brought a whiff of fresh air into my life. Right Pritee??



Absolutely 😃

And you ensured that someone like me to gets to reap the fruit of your Poland airport lounge meeting 😉


Edited by PriteeMisra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Sonal some times its only a near approximation i can conjure...listen to the song Yamunai aatrile from the Rajini starer Thalapathi...its a soul stirring composition

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Thoonga vendum naan thoonga vendum

Need to sleep I need to sleep

Yamunai karaiyil Rajini odu paadi aada

To sing and dance with Rajini on the banks of Yamuna

Thoonga vendum naan thoonga vendum

Need to sleep I need to sleep

Raghuram Rajanudan demonetisation vivadhika

To ananalyse demonetisation with Raghuram Rajan

Thoonga vendum naan thoonga vendum

Need to sleep I need to sleep

Ennai kuliyal iyer saaditirukku pin

After an oil bath and Iyer saapaadu

Thoonga vendum naan thoonga vendum

Need to sleep I need to sleep

En naal inidhi sella unda pin enakku Tamizh channel vendum pin

After a filling meal, for my day to be complete i need my Tamizh TV channel

Thoonga vendum naan thoonga vendum

Need to sleep I need to sleep

Nimadhiyaga naan thoonga en mazhalai pattalam meika avan ingu irukka vendum

To sleep in peace i need respite from my little brood, I need him near at hand to manage them

Thoonga vendum naan thoonga vendum

Need to sleep I need to sleep

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Posted: 8 years ago
Woow thanks Sree
It was wonderful
Lyrics are so apt for II as if it was written for her only...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Here is another twins discovery take

"One stupid test"

"Akka we tried everything. I am at apoint where I dont want to talk about it anymore.
I am almost 36 now, its not like I can get pregnant next month" II mumbled rinsing off the pots and pans in Akka's kitchen

The maid had the day off the sink was piled ceiling high

It was Pongal afternoon. The winds were not letting up. It was cold, moist and rainy.

"I cant believe Delhi is getting colder" II made a face

"Appa was saying Ambala was freezing. He cudnt last more than a week" Akka said gruffly

She had taken a nap, not II

Nivi was finishing up a sewing project on Akka's fancy machine

She was making a quilted dress with embroidery, an extreme project

"Akka I will go home after chai" II mumbled

"Take some pongal home di" Akka urged...

"Give me only a little" II said


"Amma is too far now in Rohini, no Tamilians I know of in DDA" Akka chuckled walking out to the dining area to get milk from the frig


"Ka Shravu varaana for Spring break?" ( is he coming?) II asked shaking water off her hands


"Its not a foriegn college ... who knows" "GRE solraan, India solran, who knows where he wants to go from BITS" Akka said

"Ask him to apply to Vanderbilt... looks like Nandu will be there only" II told her

"Nandu can be anywhere... I cant spend 40 lakhs a year for Grad school" Akka whined

"Vandu chai taraya ma?" (can I have chai?) Thatha asked

"Do pa" (yes soon) Vandu hollered

"No solreya? Seri seri... tiffinoda kudikaren" (are u saying no? thats OK i will have it with my afternoon snack then)

Thatha's hearing was almost fully gone

Bala was asleep inside with Shubhang... who was recovering from flu

II's phone rang

"Kya hai? Ghar par tyohar mein bhi nahi aate ho" Akka yelled at R&B

"I am sorry Vandita, hey... can I talk to II please?" she asked impatiently

"Pehle mere se baat karo" she urged "Adula pannade chai, adu teenjudum" (dont make chai in that pot it will get burnt)

"I already started... I am so sick of sweet pongal, do u have any murukku or mixture ka?" II asked opening and closing tins

Thatha waddled by "Kondey nee eppo de vandey?" (when did u come?)

"Umm... oru 1 maniku?" II crinkled her eyes thoughtfully

"avan varaleyo?" (is he not here?)

"Ille thatha... eppo paar book alla computer" (reads a book or is on his PC)

"Yaaroda scooter?" (whose scooter) he asked

"Ayyo thatha... BOOK AND COMPUTER" II shouted


"Naraya thhotham kudipane kudikarano?" (does he still drink water a lot?)

II laughed heartly and nodded safely not talking

"Ketten sollu" (send my regards) Thatha mumbled

II handed him a warmed up bowl of chakara pongal


"Eduthundu po... nambathu Vandu nanna pannuvo" (take some with u Vandu is a great cook) "Raghavana? avarku kudu" (is ur FIL's name Raghavan? take some for him)

II laughed delighted

Thatha was packed from head to toe in monkey cap, multiple layers of socks, a pajama, thermal and two sweaters

His hand was old and wrinkly... he held the bowl with trembling fingers


II grabbed it back and waited for him to be seated on the sofa and handed to him
Tried to work Akka's sapce heater and couldnt

The apartment was freezing

Thatha was watching some Pongal special on Sun without interest

Coconut tree emoji chased a pot of bubbling pongal as they scrolled at the bottom

"Akka Suriya movie I am going home" she yelled

"Abhi deti hoon ruko"


"What did u do to chai" Akka yelled

II grabbed the phone... Akka poured out a bubbled over chai in mugs, and thatha's in davara tumbler

"Hey" he greeted

"Thank u for waking up" she mocked

"I was willing to sleep, you woke me up at 7 AM for Pongal" he shot back

"Hey Nivi to idhar chhod doon?" she asked

"Why?" he demanded

"Akka is tired of Shubh, she is saying I can take him home" II requested

"Bring both" he said

"Ek din usko kahin rukne do"

Thatha was pouring chai back and forth, back and forth between davara and tumbler, spilling a lot

Finally he sipped noisily and nodded

"Fusht class" he said and smacked his lips

II sat by him with her mug

The smell of spillover chai catching the flames in the burner in the kitchen got to her nostrils and her stomach rumbled

She drank her chai trying to hold down her nausea

"Main rakhoon? Dono ko laati hoon" she said mellow


"No tantrum?" he asked

He teased her a lot these days

He found her deflated and disappointed many evenings

Found her going through Nivi's baby things...

Found her having searched Baby center for secondary infertility on the ipad...

There was no issue... and there was no baby...

"Mujhe pata hai, main Munirka rukoongi to tum lene aa jaaogey... I am not fighting" she said smiling weakly

"Lets go out tonight?" he offered

"Rohini jaayen?" she asked cheerfully

"Umm.. I was thinking we cud go to the new pub on Kautilya Marg?" he offered

"Woh ghar ke itne paas hai If I dress up mujhe dor jaana hai" she claimed

"Fine how about Matheran?" he asked

"Dont be so extra" she mumbled

"Get home soon II" he said achingly

She hung up and went to Thatha Paati bath sink and retched for 20 minutes

Returning plump and red faced

"I burnt the chai" she told Akka who was cooing with Athim near a sleeping Shubh on the bed

"whatt?" Akka asked confused

"I dont feel good ka" she said quickly not saying she threw up

"Pati ki yaad aa gayi, bhej yaar isko" Athim teased gruffly

"Nahi" II lied

Jaise taise she left Akka's at 6 ish and got home at 6:30, it was raining harder

Only Nivi returned Shubh got a fever...

She threw up again in the ground floor guest powder bathroom

"Amma is sick" Nivi said confused

He ran down...

"Whats going on II?" he asked as she lay on the chaise lounge chair

"U cast a sickness spell so i wud get home" she muttered

He felt her cheek... with the back of his fingers

"OK?" he asked

"Nahi boli to bahar nahi lekar jaaogey" she said

He gathered and hugged her

"Silly girl" he muttered

Ranjan came down the grand staircase and found them in a clinch

R&B let her go reluctantly

"Ki hoya gudiya... bimar haigi beta?"

"Umm.. no... Nivi's a motor mouth Dad" II lied

"Wonder where she gets that from?" R&B asked curiously

"Shut up" she was nauseous again

When she returned the men wanted to take her to the Doc

II refused and went to the kitchen

"Lets go II" he ordered

"Chancey ille poda"

"Lets go" he said

"I am fine"

"Then go up and test urself" he muttered stroking her neck

OMGGG!!!

A quick jolt stunned her as her mind calculated madly the various days and dates and hours

wave after wave of nervous excitement swept through

"Kaise? I am too old now" she said fighting tears

He held her face in his palms... and laughed... "No u are not" he whispered thumbing her lips

She looked tired in her gorgeous crimson Pongal saree, she had ditched jewelry and just wore the ruby nose ring and ruby jhumkas to Akka's

"U are not a doctor" she whispered raggedly

"I agree" he nodded

"I dont even buy those stupid tests any more" she said lowering her gaze, causing the rivulets to flow down rapidly

"There must be one stupid test some place" he wished

Ranjan walked by and grabbed a bottle of juice

"Kee hoya beta" he asked

"Shes OK" R&B promised, but not getting Ranjan's hopes up

"I dont have to pee" II chuckled and sniffled

He laughed

They stayed downstairs for the next hour as II assessed leftovers from the morning, and began dinner prep

She went up to pee

He dug through her many bath cabinets and had found a test

She couldnt look at the result as her eyes fogged up quickly with tears, otherwise she wud have seen the two dark blue lines...






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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful verses Vidya
I miss those days too

Soon when I switch to a faster computer I will be on it all day

I hope

I am glad so many are still here

THANK YOU FOR THAT
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely chakra pongal treat...i am eagerly hoping for the new thread to begin today or tomorrow.
Come on ladies lets see how fast we gobble the pages left...
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Posted: 8 years ago
vairu mutta chakarai pongal thindradaga aval enni
Thigattum vaaiku kaaram thedinaal
Avalai avan manam theda
Akka avanai saada
Theenga teain baathipu endrenni
Medhuvaaga eedu vandaal
ulle iru poraligal suttri suttri avalai vaata
undadhanaithayum velliye aval konarndaal
Ammavin nilai kandu magal elloridam koora
maruthuvar kaana valiyuruthal
Avvalo veliye sella enni adhai marukka
Uraithan avan karanam avargal edhir paartha varavai
naatkalai kanakkittu namamudiyamal aval thinara
Thedi irru kosugal kandu avan thilaithu nindraan.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Beautiful verses Vidya

I miss those days too

Soon when I switch to a faster computer I will be on it all day

I hope

I am glad so many are still here

THANK YOU FOR THAT


We will always be here Nisha, rain or shine. This addiction is not the kind which needs to be kicked. As long you keep supplying, we will be lapping it up. SOSY, ID Dono.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh God!!!
My eyes too got foggy n teary after reading the last line❤️
Edited by ishruhi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: taramira


We will always be here Nisha, rain or shine. This addiction is not the kind which needs to be kicked. As long you keep supplying, we will be lapping it up. SOSY, ID Dono.


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