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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sonalgupta2004


U don't know dude is a thorough gentleman.. he knows she has an engagement to attend
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Posted: 8 years ago
Looks like wait will be longer
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey everyone
Sorry I was MIA

I had to go to California for work
And I happened to have THE BEST food ever

A hole in the wall place in Milpitas called Naan and Masala

6 of us ate the bill was less than $100
Entrees were $6 a bowl

Naan, the world's best, $1.99 cents

Seriously good food

Punjabi owned I saw
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Posted: 8 years ago
Will be posting the next part of ID soon
I know Vani asked for a wedding part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow what a update
I love this story
So unique n interesting
Too emotional
II lost her baby
Update asap

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Posted: 8 years ago
Pimple & Buggers

He was bent over a box made of wood, the twins were on their belly, fat cheeks resting on her hands looking at him intently

"This beez a big KAHHH" Siddu gesticulated

Ved "My car fost" he said scratching his butt

The dogs "guarded" the shed door

The warehouse room in the back of the house on the side behind the tennis court was a workshop now

He spent weekend afternoons teaching the boys to woodwork

Nevermind they were less than 5

"Cam we make one for Mimika?" the boys asked slowly

He lifted the solderguard off his face and nodded

"Sure if u promise to stay in that spot

"How about for the baby"

"No for baby... we beez selling her" Ved said all knowingly

"Huh" he grunted

The twins didnt get along with the baby, but they idolized their older sister

Strangely the baby idolized them and the older sis was too wrapped up in her own teen angst

She had spotted a pimple on her chin earlier in the morning, an ungodly hour of 5 AM and had pounded the master bedroom door

II was asleep face down with no clothes on her body

She had sat up and worn his tee and slithered back in
The baby had woken up screaming in her crib

Though she woke up many mornings with no disturbance, just to ruin her parents peace

R&B usually took her down sat her on Ranjan's bed and returned to join his wife so he could wake her for his own "business"

"What happened?" R&B mumbled searching for long locks

"Where is AMMA?" Nivi had demanded tearfully

"shes asleep" he said indignantly

"I wantt o talk to her" Nivi said fidgeting

"Ammmaaa" SHE SCOWLED

Sahana screamed louddly and stood up on her crib and wanted to be picked up

II grabbed her blanket and pulled it up to her chin

"Ennadeee aachu?" she said hoarsely

"Ummm" she turned to R&B

"What?" he asked hands in his track pants

"Umm... I want to talk to Amma. Can I have some privacy please?" she said sulking

He looked at his wife like "Really?"


"Poyendaa" II begged

He picked up Sahana and left

"Amma look what I have?" Nivi began to cry loudly

II didnt see at first, well it was close to invisible anyway

II tried to look shocked

"Its a pimple raja... its normal" II cuddled her

"I dont want any Amma... first the period and cramps and now this" "My life sucks... its the worst" she sobbed
"I agree" II mumbled

"Dont mock me. NOBODY in my class has pimples" Nivi accused

"Wowww" II nodded in mock awe

"U think its a joke? U have no idea how rough my life is" Nivi grumbled

He had handed his youngest to his Dad who had also woken up hearing a distraught Nivi and had come up

"I know ur have a rough life" II mumbled

He listened outside the room and rolled his eyes

"I have too many brothers and sisters. You make me sing Carnatic music and grow my hair I cant wear short skirts. I cant even shave my legs. U wont let me buy the bras I want" Nivi listed everything

II sighed and leaned on the headboard and shut her eyes

"Ammmaaa toongaade" Nivi said sternly

"And I made you learn Tamil" II mumbled

"Greg likes it when I speak Tamil" Nivi said shyly

"Phew!!" II mocked in relief

He on the other hand almost entered the room to tell his daughter she doesnt need to talk in Tamil anymore

"I cant do what I want, my room has no lock, my brothers are gross" Nivi said

"Onnu pannalama U either go to Periamma's house or to Athai's house?" II offered

"U think my life is funny" Nivi waved a finger and felt her pinple

"Whats going on?" he entered

"My life is the suckiest... I am going to be the most unpopular in school and I dont want to go back after Christmas avaction"

"Whoa?" he looked at II

II shushed him


"U dont have to go to school if u dont want to. A pimple is a big deal" Ii agreed

Nivi looked at her face and wept more "I hate this family" she said

II slid off the bed with the sheet wrapped around her like a sarong

"EEEUUU gross" Nivi made a face seeing that

"Podi" II let go of the sheet to reveal her lounge pants, II had worn it under the sheet

"I was cold" II said sternly

Nivi looked apologetic

"Well u guys kiss all the time" Nivi mumbled

"U dont like this family so why do u care?" Ii demanded

"II" he said sternly

"nee pesu da... apdiye pesi pesiye kolluvo" (she will talk u to death) II made a face

He smiled sardonically

"Dont look at ME seriya? I NEVERRR talked until I met you" II lied

He nodded mock agreeably

RAKSHASANEY

"Someone has to talk in this mad house" II went on the defensive "neeyachu onn ponnachu" (u and ur daughter)


"Nivi" he called she got off the bed and went and hugged him

"Dont worry about it, we can get u something for it" he promised

"If he cant, pinne onn Daddy edaanum invent pannuva onakosram" (he will invent a cure for his daughter) she smirked

"II" he scolded

"Good idea no? She hates this family all because of a pimple" II rolled her eyes

"Not because of that, because no one understands my feelings, and I have gross brothers" Nivi said primly

"I will make sophisticated ones next time" Ii promised

"Nooo I dont want any more" Nivi shouted

"Daddy, Sid picked his nose and rubbed it on my bed" Nivi gagged

R&B smiled.. and let out a audible chuckle...

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Posted: 8 years ago
You know i have an idea...
Why not an episode where Ranjan gets enough of all this non sense and gives away Sahana for adoption??
No one likes her in this family...god knows why!
I strongly feel the youngest needs most attention!
She is being denied!
The dogs are being cared for more
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Posted: 8 years ago
A double bonanza this morning ...an ID update too 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waw what a wonderful update...I was just 😆 through out...
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Posted: 8 years ago
So much has happened here. Manya on her way to getting married, RnB doing contactless karate in Manya her for what she thought of his Wife and adorable melle with the kids in all those future updates!
Truly feels like Homecoming on a Sunny Sunday here!
Thanks Nisha all that you have created !
Edited by blue5sky - 8 years ago

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