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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Another cute update.

I was so disappointed - Arshi's honeymoon got cancelled due to Arnav - Shit !!!!

But the bedroom arrangement is really unexpected - with number of members increasing in the family, the privacy issue is certainly a big deal. Moreover, when there will be more kids in the family in future, how are they planning to accommodate all ?

This chapter's monologue , I guess is from Bubbly. I guess , she is the only kid present over here.

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Sumneet

@Zeffy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Random observations,

- Payal is smart and how. How does she keep track of schedules!

- Sheetal is Arnav's sister? 😆

- Must hand it out to the boss for now, until Khushi decides to go with Arnav to an office party. She would tear him apart.

- Making 50 Gulab Jamuns take time, especially if you are not a halwai.

- Calendars have been officially redefined for the newly weds.

- Khushi's thought process, attitude, rather her personality is twisted. Is Arnav worse?

- Nainital is beautiful place, wonder which train goes there.

Guess - It is not a child. Is it NK? 😆

Edited by Zeffy - 8 years ago

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docs

@docs

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Brilliant story... It resembles pita ka ghar in how it starts ... But it definitely is different. Waitig to read more.

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Awesome update Chaitu!!! Awww poor Arshi that was really funny and cannot wait for the next update!!!!

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#125

ohhh poor khushi.
its sooo frustating to make all the plan and packing for travelling and at last minutes everything go invain.
such wnderfully written part

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#126

This is too good 😆

Bechari Khushi... Sasural hai ya kumbh Mela!!

On top of that, honeymoon bhi cancelled.

And the calendar 🤣

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#127

There is no enough space for the people in the house and they even have a Labrador dog with them. In ASR 's language I must say unbelievable . 😲

And harsh realities of lower middle class people living in big cities.

They have to take turns about getting a bedroom to sleep alone.

Though it sounds very awkward to even talk these things out but you got to do what is needed.😆

Honeymoon plans ka to satyanash hogaya .

Lol will they ever have their Suhaag raat at this rate.

And is it Bubbli who is messing with the schedule ?

Very interesting and equally funny story Chaitali .

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#128

So true but funny take on typical middle class Indian family. Khushi seems more forward then Arnav & frustrated
Calendar idea is so funny & seems like payal's daughter messing with the color tags
This reminds me of a neighbor who got kitchen as their bedroom, last one to sleep & first to wake up with some interruptions during night & other stuff.