Euphoric Concoctions of Sparkler8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Congo again! 😃

Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Hey Sharon am one of the person who s crazy reading ure fictions. I don't know how u get those ideas... anyways u be penned it very well... do pm me also... :-)

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sharon,

When I read your lovely comment for my OS - I remembered that you had mailed the link for PKR - I vaguely remember reading it (the first part) but those days I would never start an FF that had not been completed.

I have started the pdf - as usual have read the first and last chapter - and I am praying I do not have much work in office - uninterrupted one hour should be enough to finish it off - with my favourite playlist - sheer bliss.

I will get back once I finish - promise and also to your lovely comment.😳

Best

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sharon,

I now remember - I had read the whole thing - on my iPad, no less. I had liked it then and I loved it now - I read it slower, savouring each line and sequence, completely relaxed for it was a familiar journey for me. I loved it, mostly because of the realism and the absence of negativity - there were differences of opinions and yet addressed and sorted out as we do in normal families.

And if I recollect the sequel had Sanskaar going into coma and Swara managing SK, Vivaan's engagement and Swara's meeting with Mr. Aggarwal (who was her father, not biological) and how they make peace with those ghosts.

Malignant Ardor - I am not sure, let me think and get back.

Best

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sharon,

Took a small break, stole some time and read your TS - Not Guilty 😳

It had such a breezy feel to it despite the emotional turmoil it dealt with, and the twist - Sanskaar confesses his love because he is tired and frustrated seeing Swara blame herself for her sister's actions. He really know how to love, does he not, it hurt when she blamed him for Ragini's transmutation but was furious when she blamed herself.

And thanks for the epilogue, which is actually the final chapter - maybe you should have named as Chapter 4 and renamed this as a Four Shot.😉

But that aside, loved the way you wove the entire gamut of realisation, regret, remorse, redemption and again realisation - of where they were wrong, how to make amends and finally Swara realising that she loves Sanskaar because he never asked her to love him.

Please keep writing, even if the serial is coming to an end. Do not stop writing.

Best,

Nyna