ArShi Angst OS:A man who hates...

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Originally posted by: arshina223

Okay...So before saying anything, I would like to tell you this is one damn good writing. Every emotion was portrayed flawlessly. I was feeling every thing you've written from my heart. Huge applause for this Master piece.

Now, i m gonna rant about what i've felt while reading this OS.

I hate, from the core of my heart, hate Arnav Singh Raizada.

Who gave him the right to f**k with the life of others. That sadist maniac, is worse than Shyam, even he changed after marrying Khushi.

And Arnav what he did, if lost his di, so this f**ktard made his mission that nobody in his vicinity, or who, unluckily is in contact with him, will not be happy.

He loved khushi? IS THIS A f**kING JOKE? What he did, did not seem funny to me!! How dare he use Khushi like this?? That girl is human not a toy that Arnav can use her to avenge his di.

That maniac forced Khushi to marry shyam, so that eventually he can kill his baby. That innocent child.

How bloody can he say that he loves her? He forced that girl to marry that murderer, to sleep with him. I can't express how much i hate this Arnav.

An he had the audacity to say that khushi should be with now that he had avenged his f**king DI!!!

How sick is that????

He should DIE...or better Khushi should kill him.

That f**ktard can't see even his brother happy. So he made a situation that will only lead to the separation of Payal and aakash.

Even if he wanted to avenge his sister thenwhy use Khushi, whom he supposedly loves? He cannot love her. No that's a lie. Not even a enemy would something like this to someone, and here he claims that he loves her?

What is her fault that shyam changed for khushi and not for his sister? What is her fault in that?

And that khushi, i just want slap her tightly. For what kind of person you are sacrificing so much? Who doesn't even love you. Who want you to sleep someone else, bear that man's baby and get it killed? Who can kill you to get his revenge? Get some brain, girl. He didn't love you. Any number of the suffering he had in his childhood doesn't give him the right to throw anybody under the bus, nor it is her responsibility to pay for whatever pain he had endured in his childhood or even today.

Khushi wasted her love ...she wasted her life on one f**ked up person. He should have been in jail. For killing her child even if it was of shyam's but it was hers too.

One request, if you gonna more part of this OS, please, please, do not let arnav get away after doing this. He should be punished. And I ABSOLUTELY DON'T WANT ARNAV KHUSHI TOGETHER. IF YOU COULD JUST LET KHUSHI HAVE REAL LOVE IN HER LIFE, AWAY FORM THAT MANIAC.

AND SUPERB ANGST.

Originally posted by: cute_monaya_fan

Why did nobody pointed it out to arnav that he's the root cause of everything happened in khushi and anjali's life...it was because of the video he leaked that shyam got to know about khushi...the story didn't start from shyam meeting khushi...it was arnav leaking the video...all throughout. ...somebody needs to show him the mirror...he is a bloody lower...not a winner...a snatcher. ...a curse in khushi's life...in akash-payal's relationship

He needs to accept that it WAS HIS FAULT...ONLY AND ONLY HIS...NO BLOODY ELSE'S. ... .in the name of love this is slaughter. ...brutality

Absolutely unacceptable

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved the os, take a bow you managed to bring out all sorts of emotions👏

Cruel Arnav, hope he spends his life in loneliness😡

Want Khushi to move on with her happily ever after with someone😭

Please do part 2, where Arnav is wallowing in his loneliness, would like a happy closure for Khushi.

Thank you for the pm😃

Originally posted by: BlackWidowBaby

reswa

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though i am speechless... but hats off to you for writing this OS... i really wanted him to suffer but now i can kill him in my version of story... though i am not good at expressing i will say this OS was really heart wrenching... how can one person be so cruel... and still at the end he was acting as 3 months was nothing then both can move on... nice stand taken by Khushi... or i dont know i would have gone mad if the opposite wd have happened... but i felt for that innocent girl... at least he would have told her.. this scenario could have been produced as an act but no he was so damn foll to do all this things to her 😭😭

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i have lot to catch up with ur wok... will soon do... can we have a small epilogue for this... i want to see Arnav suffering and Khushi moving on... NO I DONT WANT THEM TOGETHER AT ALL

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Khushi should have died instead. No body to fight for.. And both the fools can kill each other.

Omg..such angst...death was better for Khushi...and why should she have to be a sacrificial lamb?? Only coz she loved him...hats off for this piece of angst even if I hated it with full energy..TBH, I loathed the os yaar!!!!

Fantastic

Arnav 😡

reswa

Sry hina
I lived all ur storied but this i hated it
Not because of the concept but because of such weak khushi
Like she was forced for so much things and she did
And for arnav who for once did'nt felt guilty
I dnt knw but my heart feels heavy after reading this

No matter how much you are in love. Everything is not fair in love and war. It never was and will never be.

Shyam murdered Anjali because he loved Khushi, wrong. He accepted the crimes he had committed because he loved Khushi, he couldn't see Khushi in pain he loved her too much for it, right. He accepted the crimes he hadn't commited because he was in love again wrong. His unrequited love for Khushi was, the cause of his doom. Though he had done the gravest mistake of committing a murder, but I feel more sympathetic towards him for his love because he could love without the condition to be loved back.

Khushi according to me is the weakest character of this OS. I actually didn't understand why did she even marry Shyam, he was a bloody murderer. Why was she even ready to accept jail when she was not involved in the murder. I can understand Khushi forgave Arnav for the unborn child she lost but why did she accuse Shyam of the crimes he didn't commit.She literally made Arnav her God who would decide everything not just for her but for the two families.

Arnav in this story is a completely lost cause. It was as if he didn't lose his di. He completely lost his sanity. Why did he even punish Khushi for the crimes she didn't commit. He let Shyam live the life he always wanted, which would have been impossible if it wasn't for him. He gave Shyam 3 blissful months with the woman he loved, and more importantly the woman Shyam himself wanted to live in with, the woman for whom his di was murdered. At the end when he said he wanted to marry Khushi I was like what the f**k, what did you wait for it then Khushi to have sex with Shyam, and an unborn child in Khushi's womb to kill and blame Shyam for it.

You should swap the places of Arnav and Shyam. I think it would be more befitting for this OS.

oh poor soul what was her mistake that she got the worst punishment for others sins...I hate Arnav for doing this to her for his own revenge...please continue if you can

So much pain ... and why would you continue it ... if I was khushi I would never let asr back in my life even if he kill himsef