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Posted: 8 years ago
"Oh Really?"




Ranjan walked out tentatively.

R&B pulled his legs off the coffee table

ATLEAST HE SHOWS "SOME" RESPECT
II sighed in pleasure gently putting some space between herself and her husband

Manya dusted off the sand and got up

Nivi spazzed wanting to be lifted up


"Chath par breakfast ka plan tha aur mujhe kisi ne vi nahi kaha" he groaned

"I JUST got here Dad" II readily defended herself "these two planned it and didnt even tell me"
AND she threw them under the bus

"Manny, toone khaya puttar?" he asked

Manya smiled disarmingly

R&B sulked at Ranjan's atempts to befriend his middle child

"Chachey ne aana haiga 8 vaje dono saath chalenge.." he said

"Where?" II asked surprised

"Makarand ke parents Mumbai rehte ne, onannu mil" he turned stopping mid way "Tu chalegi?" he asked Manya

She stood frozen

R&B was shocked too... he had no idea Ranjan had planned this

"You are OK with her marrying him?" he questioned

Ranjan sat down, II poured coffee out...

"Na beta mainnu espresso reyn de, mainnu filter coffee pilayin puttar" he urged

II began to go down

"I havent had any myself I will bring some up" she smiled

Manya lingered, watching her Dad cautiously

"His parents may not agree Dad" Manya looked fearful

Ranjan grunted, feeding Nivi a string of hash brown gently

She handed a couple of squished strings to her Dad

He took it from her and ate quietly...


"Mile bagaair... kiweyn?" he sighed and stopped


"She shud just get married" R&B declared his stance

"Aap aisi advice usko de rahe ho, Ishita kar paati aise?" he challenged

R&B squirmed

II came up from half way as Mavvy was bringing up her coffee and more food

"Har ghar ka apna rowaaj honda hai puttar" he said quietly

"So u are OK if I marry him?" Manya asked with suppressed elation

"Maine... tum TEENO ki... nahi PAACHON ki khushi ke siwa wahe guru se kuch mangeya nahi" he teared up

R&B looked at him suspiciously
He had no idea what caused Ranjan's turn around

"Daddd" Manya began to sob


"Ma tuaddi kendi rahi... " he swallowed and cleared his throat "She didnt know u wud divorce him ofcourse" "Much like the many things she has missed"

He kissed Nivi letting tears flow freely

Nivi looked at him and tried to sound the words "DADU"

He kissed her joyously, she took his phone and put it on her head thinking it was her ear

"What if his parents dont agree?" R&B pressed

Ranjan didnt respond

II handed him the steel tumbler coffee and took hers and sat across from R&B

"Maan na to hai nahi... yeh gall to sach hai" he sighed

"Manya stiffened nervously

"Aaya nahi ab ke ?" Ranjan asked looking at Manya curiously

"He wants to... today"

Ranjan squirmed uncomfortably

"Shaadi taq to ren de puttar" he begged
Hoping his daughter wud practice abstinence


Chachu came up panting audibly
"Mubaarqaan... paisaab" he cheered


Manya looked at him coldly

'"Pairi pona" Chachu said LOUDLY hoping his nephew wud follow suit or his neice

II wasnt "dressed" for company, she had worn a an old pair of lounge pants and a sleeveless orange vest

"Aur jee puttarjee... DOOLLA kithhey?" Chachu asked loudddly


"Umm... hes not here yet" Manya smiled politely


"Shaadi se pelle aidar kaise?" Chachu winked

"Well he was" Manya stopped

Ranjan's plea bothered her she didnt finish her sentence

"Chachu I am planning to stay in this house and sleep with him before and until my marriage"

Ranjan poured filter coffee out and offered

"Paisaab aseee they chai peyange" he said loudly

II served omelette and hash browns
He completely ignored her

"TEY PORONTHEY" he said loudly

"I will go down and make it

"Gudiyaaa" Chachu tried to grab Nivi

She began to scream

R&B took his child from his Dad

"Aap bhi ja rahe ho Mumbai?" Manya asked unethusiastically


"Ajeee haan... saath jaayenge paisaab ke" he grinned

Ranjan got up to answer a call

II tried to slither out

"I am going down to get ready for work da" she whispered
Her husband got up too...

Ranjan asnwered his call quickly and found his son by his side

"Did u have to take him with u?" R&B accused

"Do u have a better idea?" Ranjan asked bitterly

R&B glared at his Dad

"I have to honor the man, he has stood by me the last 6 years... maybe 10 even... 20?" Ranjan said in a whisper

R&B had a scowl on his face, openly combative

"And u hope he is going to help Manny's cause?" R&B demanded

"You are jealous, and Ranjan probably senses it now" R&B cursed to himself, but he couldnt stop himself😳

"Why else would I take him?" Ranjan asked reasonably...

The men scoped each other out

"Or who would I take instead?" Ranjan asked calmly, baffled... why his son was suddenly expressing renewed hatred for Harish

"He doesnt even see you... so give it up and back off dude" a voice inside warned R&B

"Oh really?" R&B asked deeply hurt.. slighted...😭

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Posted: 8 years ago
hey Vikas and Vidya
Good to see you

I am hoping to spend more time online in the morning tomorrow. I slept too much today, so couldnt do justice to my favorite pastime

Hope all are doing well

Has Deepavali fever taken over everyone?
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Posted: 8 years ago
First time, for the very first time, absolutely first time in this 66 thread story I feel Ranjan's dcision to take chachu to Mumbai is wrong. If not RB he could have considered Tan but considering Tans own issues with his sister going on, he could have either asked RB or gone alone. He did go To II's home all by himself didn't he? To ab chachu kyun, especially when the matter is sensitive And he's known To shoot his mouth. If he's done this to make RB realize his responsibilities then i guess it's not the best way to do so. A scorned chachu won't be a happy chachu!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

hey Vikas and Vidya

Good to see you

I am hoping to spend more time online in the morning tomorrow. I slept too much today, so couldnt do justice to my favorite pastime

Hope all are doing well

Has Deepavali fever taken over everyone?


Koi Diwali fever Nani hai Nisha...too tired to even think. If I don't do it I feel guilty if I do it I have to do it properly and that gets too much...either way I am screwed.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shru
You remind me of an episode of Middle. Frances Heck finds her kids dont care for Christmas and wont listen to her wont help decorate the tree, she is tired at yelling at everyone to help, so she lays around on the couch eating and does nothing. Kids begin to worry and get antsy... she is all cold and indifferent.
Mike her husband says "Oh! I love Christmas, take a break this year if you want to, but I never had a proper Christmas growing up"

She feels so guilty the night before, she spends all night decorating and wrapping, and the next morning everyone is super duper happy

Its like an awww episode
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shru
I went and bought a bunch of clothes for the kids from Gap last night, they didnt like most of it, so it will get returned. I will make snacks next weekend

I happened to clean my garage two months ago and found a giant bag of fire crackers in it so I dont have to drive 50 miles to go buy some

How is the storm in your town. I hear Seattle might get battered


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Posted: 8 years ago
Dude blowing steam off his ears slighted at being overlooked . Hmmm...There's a story that my mother once told me when I got bk home from college hostel. I asked her to make traditional recipes that I previously used to complain eating about saying why do we always have to eat this. She told me Va ...sevithu keeraiya vazhichu podunnu naanam.

This fable talks of how a short tempered man after coming home sees that his wife's made geeens ( keerai/ saag) that day , gets angry and flings the plate against the wall.
The wife goes away quietly. After a while hunger makes the man's stomach rumble . He goes and tastes the saag sticking to the plate. Now he wants to have that. He orders his wife around that serve me saag now to which his wife responds that there's nothing left. Now comes the classic line from the husband. Wipe the saag off the wall and serve it to me.
In its sevithu keeraiyai vazhichu podadi.

No dudes not short tempered . I'm not referring to that. But Dude hissing to his Dad wanting in a way to be there for manya not being considered for the role he can play when his dad goes to Mumbai in a way reminded me of this fable. The value of what you miss comes bk to haunt you when it's taken off you .

Anyways, Ranjan with all the experience proves why he is the sawa
See here in the sense of thinking ahead of the next steps though his decision to take chachu along almost has my stomach churning. Agree with Shruthi here.

While I don't expect him to have requested his son to come along after being accused of not being happy for anything his children do. But chachu here is a slippery customer to take the place of dude. Tan , Sam , even II are better troops .

Not sure What abstinence from manya's end at this stage would serve but I don't see what harm could be done to have Makarand come home and discuss with Ranjan as to what's his plan of approach to his parents, get an idea about his family.
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Posted: 8 years ago
"Ma tuaddi kendi rahi... " he swallowed and cleared his throat "She didnt know u wud divorce him ofcourse" "Much like the many things she has missed"

If only words could express the weight it carries...

Only Ranjan would know that he's under the bus everyday... is he referring to the scandal here... probably for the first time he is implying something here saying 'much like the many things she has missed'.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Why do I have this protective surge In me for Manny ...now that they are planning to go the traditional route of visiting the groom... prayer on my lips sort of ...that her to be in law's are half as perceptive and decent as Mrs.Iyer here.
Wanting Manny not to be hurt because of her single status as that might come up as does Ranjan Bhalla's shame. She has high hopes from Makarand proudly boasting that her bandha is also macho and handsome. I am a little scared here as I don't want him to be just another jerk with whom she has sex with as she often derides herself .

If I have to look at this positively Makarand's parents are in Mumbai and should be more approachable
as the city moulds one to be more adaptable in a non traditional kind of outlook towards things.

And if I have to dig a positive for Chachu in this whole scenario, I go bk to this one instance during one of the marriage rituals for dude I think where Ranjan hesitated to go first to offer his blessings, Pushing chachu instead to take the lead, there in that situation , chachu for once magnanimous , told Ranjan that it's actually his brother's haq. May be inspite of all the Jing bang with his wife , sons and his Daughter in law's, there's still a slim pure sibling connect that has earned Ranjan's trust .

Don't know, if chachu is going to be the one who's really going then I would like to dig on the same positivity and happiness for his brother that he once showed at the time of marriage override all the insecurities and don't spoke at anything here when the alliance talks are on.

But one thing that I read that left me chuckling was
Imagine this scenario . Terrace , chachu is all smiles and beaming feeling happy that he was considered , Manny sulking. Ranjanji going to take the call, II slithering out to get ready for work, dude stepping away to hiss his displeasure at the turn of events... so who's left for chachus company... it's Manny 😃 😆 😆 can't imagine what she will have to say to him. 👏

Another thing that had me chuckling was dude promptly taking Nivi from His dad's Lap when chachu starts cooing Gudiya to Nivi. There's no way dude letting chachu gets his hands on his angel anytime 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Have always loved possessive and jealous dude
And this was just a treat seeing him all jealous of chachu going with Ranjan
And pulling nivi so that chachu cannot take her
Woow he is amazing I love him
He is one of his kind

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