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Posted: 8 years ago
Breaking rules
"It wont work" R&B said clearly chewing quietly

Sid & Ved didnt even pretend to eat, just pushed their dal rice around with their hand, Ved pushed a grain with his thumb it landed on Sid's head as he had bend down at that moment

Sahana broke into hysterical laughter

Ved did it again to evoke more laughter

Sahana choked and burped and coughed and spit up her carrots

II looked at R&B

"Really?" she questioned

Ranjan got up wavingt o II

Nivi ate sulking about something
Teen years had hit before teen years...

"Can u two finish please?" R&B asked NOT LAUGHING

Sid turned serious first, and then picked up a handful of toordal rice and set it on top of Ved's head

"Enough" he said pushing his chair back

Sahana screamed as Ranjan unstrapped her and picked her up
She wanted to have a food fight too

II sat motionless

R&B and her had had a YUGE fight this morning over disciplining the kids
It never went well

Too many kids, and balance tipped in favor of sympathizers, namely Ranjan and II herself

"I am done arguing with u, U need to let me handle this" he had hissed

"ur handling is all about punishing them" she pleaded

"Do u have any other ideas? " he challenged hands on his hips as they glared at each other

They are FIVE and Nivi is only 11" II tried to fight tears

"Do u wnat to tell me Sahana's age too?" he mocked

She turned and wlaked away in a huff

Sahana was makinga mess off the 2nd loor living room she sat in the center of a BIG pile of "stuff" she had pulle dout of the chest of drawer by the wall

The bottom shelves were "baby proof" but the twins had gotten to it and sabotaged it and now Sahana was having a field day

R&B walke dtowards her she screamed knowing the tall man was goingt o pick her up

Flapping her arms like wings, she held on to some old RayBan sun glasess that belonged to dude flapping it angrily as he picked her up

"OK, uve had enough fun for one day, we need to get u cleaned up" he said firmly

"Ammmaaa" she screamed

"U know what, she is going downstairs so I am going to get u ready for lunch and a nap" he said as she cried more

The house was always a mess, II always lived on the edge, Ranjan had turned the terrace into a fortress after he found Ved climbing over to the other side one morning, literally inches away from falling down to the ground

Mavvy had been watering the plants and had accidentally left the door open a crack, and Ved had wandered out wearing his race car jammies, holding his sippy cup with bournvita and a hot wheels car in his hand
He had been trying to run the car in the narrow cement track on which the waist length clear fiberglass balcony wall was constructed, the
car had raced out of the narrow path into the other side, he "had" to go over the wall to get it, according to him

The car was yello and new, it cost a buck, but II's kids were like II they fell in love with inexpensive presents

Sam had bought him that when they had gone over the previous month, it was Ved's life

Mahavir had kept his composure, dropped the hose and flew over to where Ved was and had quickly grabbed his wrists tightly and lifted him up

R&B was on a call in the home office, II was fixing breakfast, Nivi was reading as she ate her oatmeal not even noticing one of her siblings and left teh table and climbed up the staircase

Sahana was playing on the rug on R&B's office floor

The second Mavvy air lifted him the car got knocked off the lil ledge and flew down towards the grass tennis court, Mavvy also knocking over Ved's bomeeta sippy
a guard that had opened the gate to let a Excelsior officeworker in stood stunned

Ranjan cried uncontrollably after the rescue

R&B had spent the day supervising the job of the balcony wall being raised 10 feet all around

Trying to keep the leading door locked was futile... they had discovered this morning

"My COR My CORRR" Ved grumbled anxiously

Mavvy had brought him to R&B's office and had broken down while confessing his mistake

"This is so unacceptable" he said to his lil 5 year old son, arms folded across his chest

"Amma tolded me its my CORRR" Ved insisted

He summoned his wife on intercom, Ranjan had come up too

II sat down unable to control her shaky body

Mavvy stood weeping

"Thanks bhaiyya aapne bacha liya" II whispered

"This is just so horrible" II lamented wringing her fingers painfully

"Did Nivi not see him leave?" R&B demanded

"BOOKA KEEZHAVE VEKARDU ILLE AVAL" (She does not put the book down) II shouted

Ranjan groaned

"Can I talk to her please?" R&B said, Sahana wandered out carrying R&B's bose headset, tripping over the long cord

R&B picked up Ved and hugged him "My CORRR" Ved repeated

"Bua ne diya wohi na?" Ii asked mavvy

He nodded

"Beta ja neeche se Nivi nu layin jara" Ranjan requested

"Sir hum bahut sorry hain" Mavvy whimpered

"Kis gall dee sorry puttar? Jaan bachaan waaste?" Ranjan hugged him, "Shabaash beta" he said sniffling

Mavvy ran down enthusiastically

Nivi came up looking lost, one of her braids undone, I had braided it and asked her to tie with with a scuncie she had let her hand go to turn the page

II was furious with her

she was tall, skinny and poised... she was unlike her rowdy brothers

AND out of control sister

sahana was wrapping heerself around R&B's legs demanding he set Ved down

ranjan picked her up as she began to cry

II realized if everyone was upstairs that meant Sid was by himself downstairs watching a spongebob

But Mavvy was smart he brought Sid with him when he returned

The 3 other help were cleaning or in the yard tending...

"Amma will u take me to school?" she asked softly

"Talaya ennadi pannine? Pinni vittenono?" (I braided ur hair right?) II was angry

"THIS... THIS... complete disconnect from the real world scares me Dad" II shouted

"II" R&B shushed her

"Agar yeh kuch bhi karegi isko woh baat kabhi galat nahi lagegi, I asked her to hold down the craft flags on the Thailand poster board last night, she nodded, and let go
ALL the flags and the currency images, it all FELL OFF" II complained

"Shhhshhh U dont need to shout" R&B warned

"Why? Beacuse its ur darling that didnt follow the rules?" II was almost envious of the protectiveness he felt for Nivi

"I am not saying that" he was plainly irritated

The house was a zoo...
Sid rolled on the living room floor, Sahan slid down Ranjan's arms and rolled with him, hitting artefacts and furniture along the way

"Bhabhiji aur laayen kaa bomeeta?" Mavvy asked kindly

II nodded

"If she messed up her poster board she cant submit today" R&B exhaled

"YOU KNOW ITS A LIE" II hissed waving a finger "On the way to school u will buy super glue fix it and drop it off in flawless condition" II said agitated

"So u want ur daughter to fail?" he challenged

"rabbba" Ranjan sat down holding his head

Sid rolled off to the giant French windows wrapping himself in and pulling on the voluminous layers and layers of rich curtains

Sahana tried to find him

Ranjan grabbed her before the rod came crashing down

"Na puttar" he urged Sid

"Cam we play idamshik" (Hide n seek) Sid enquired

"Neeche bache" he cooed, grabbing him too

"I dont want her to fail, I want her to become responsible she doesnt seem to be getting it" II argued

"Not the best way to go about it IMO" he said derisively

More bomeeta came, along with trays of coffee and breakfast

"Bhabhiji aap bhi kha lo" Mavvy urged

"Mujhe kangi karke nikalna hai" Ii said leaning back wearily

"Amma finish my braid" Nivi begged

"Vaa dee inge" II scolded
"Shammi lagayin puttar daat hun ren de" Ranjan ordered R&B and stoppe dhim from scoling Nivi

"No go get a blue scuncie from Amma's closet" she ordered

"Its not Modern School blue" Nivi insisted

"Too bad... its the only choice u have, u can go with one braid done one undone" II said flatly

"Its OK love" R&B urged

"I saw Mimika's booo crunchie" Ved said pointing a fat finger at the chest of drawer

R&B went over and pulled it open and found it in the "lost and found" drawer

Well... every storage space at MM was a lost and found now

"Mimika is going to be... so hapy... yeah... so happy" he cooed to his son

He threw it on Ii's lap

II secured her braid

"Gidu gidu nu po, thatha drop pannuva onna" (hurry Dadu will drop u) Ii said

"No I can" R&B offered

Nivi's face lit up

"In that case, u take ALL the kids with u" II said devil like

Ranjan ate like he was famished

II poured out his filter coffee... "i am so sorry Dad" Ii said softly

"Teri koi galti nahi gudiya, dono ekdam shaintan hainge ne" he said Sahana chowed down a giant idli

Sid sat between Ranjan and II flipping through R&B's Outside magazine, upside down, sitting one leg over another just like R&B

"Onakku venuma dee idli?" II cooed to Nivi finishing up her braid

Nivi shook her head raising her head from her book "Amma I ate in the morning too... I dont want idli tomorrow I want hash brown and omelette" Nivi said

Ii was generally disappointed with Nivi, her rejecting Iyer food was the last straw to her on this emotionally roller coaster morning.

Ranjan handed her Ved and coralled his fave child and asked her where her poster board was violating rules of parenting as father daughter walked towards the grand staircase

She leaned back and began to cry...


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Posted: 8 years ago
All, I can say after reading this is Aiyooo!!!! Elegant, expensive, beautiful MM has turned into a railway platform. I wonder if they entertain at all, all the chef nights, fancy Diwali party's I guess are things of the past. And I sooo Loveee Rb and Nivi's bond. It's priceless. Would love to read more of this. Bechaari Ii, can't pick favourites, has to disciple all of them. Can't imagine she's still holding on to her job!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Well it happens if you hav four kids...
And at some point it's easy also for them coz of all the help and money!!!
But they r so so so cute
I think it's all coz of ranjan's wishes as poor man was hell bored of no living being at MM besides him
So god granted him wish of house full of kids and stuffs
He must be loving and enjoying it
😆

Fighting and dude& II hav becomes synonyms
But I love them
👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Innocence & Innocent



He was obsessed with his kids there was no doubt about that, she realized bitterly

They clamored to get into the SUV like Savvy had, fighting to get the "best spot"(SERIOUSLY!) though three were supposed to sit on CAR SEATS

Chaos ensued by the car doors, Nivi giving up stepping back

"Its MY school Daddy" she said sadly

He chuckled picking her up, and kissing her cheek, seating her gently

II heard scowls and screams from the car until he shut the door

The poster board with this 3D objects placed neatly in the trunk

He turned to look up

They stared at each other for a second

Walked towards the tennis court picked up Ved's broken sippy cup and the lil yellow hot wheels car, handing the kid his car and handing a help the sippy cup

Got in and drove off

They returned after II left for work

Ranjan went in on some days and not on the others

He watched R&B sermonize his twins in the lawn

Child safety was becoming a huge issue, this morning bringing yet another endangerment event
They couldnt catch up fast enough

The lil devils were too quick for the adults in the house

There were too many and too smart

"U think there should be someone following them everywhere?" R&B asked Ranjan as the kids rolled on the grass

"Mushkila haiga... teeno katthe nahi khelte" Ranjan muttered

"Lets reinforce the house and then think about bringing in additional help?" R&B asked

"Sahi baat hai, contractor ne aana haiga 10 baje, he will clip another 6 or 10 feet of fiberglass on to teh existing parapet wall

"Get combination locks for the balcony doors?" R&B wondered

"Helper galti se khulla chhadd dein?" Ranjan countered

"Agreed" R&B nodded

Sahana punched Ved in the eye trying to hold on to the foam NFL football

Ved screamed

Ranjan rand after her, R&B was exhausted... he couldnt say it aloud

He took his phone out and extended his wife

"Hey" he texted

She didnt respond

He called her

"What do u want?" she asked hissing, sulking her cube

"Are we still going to go back to that?" he was irritated

"Shud I let go then? Since her poster board was fixed by Daddee and she got dropped off on time?" II argued

"II" he warned

"Edukku panniney nee? I never call u" she lied (why did u call me?)

She did... many times...

"Not to have a pissing match... thats for sure" he said angrily

She was hurt... she just hung up

They carried their sulk until 7:30... she returned to find Nivi reading a book on the lounge settee
Sahana following a help as he collected toys strewn across the floor

The twins were missing

Her heart thudded...

AAYYOYO
ARE THEY ON THE TERRACE?
SHITTT

"Niveee" she shouted

Nivi threw her book and sat up

"Enge dee rendum?" (where are they?)

She shrugged and went back to her book...
R&B returned as she was fixing herself coffee... her head was pounding, she had cried in the Spectrum staircase letting out her relief at Ved being safe

"Kaarthala onnala avan keezha vizha ponaan" (cuz of u he almost fell off the terrace)

Nivi looked shocked and sad

Ranjan had extracted a promise that they would jointly preach the kids

II had just broken it...

"U are extremely careless... if u dont listen to what Amma says, no more books for u kanna" she said coldly

Nivi began to cry, she ran up the grand staircase sobbing


"What did u just say to her?" he asked coming down the back staircase

"She has NO idea where the rakshasans are" Ii said dismissively

"Do YOu know?" he demanded

II looked shame faced for a second...began to take a sip from her davara
sahana was sucking on a blue lollipop
She stuck it on Ranjan's SHIRT nad slid off Ranjan runningt o II for a evening hug

"Go to ur Daddy... naraya hug kuduppa" (he will hug u a lot) II declared between sniffles walking over to kiss Ved on his head and went up the back staircase

"Har baat par us se kyon ladta hai tu?" Ranjan demanded upset

"She could be wrong too" R&B said cynically "she makes mistakes" he said upset

"Saara din daftar mein kaam ghar aate hi tujhse behes" Ranjan defended his gudiya

"She was in the kitchen too, i Nivi did not see him slip away SHE DIDNT EITHER" he said in his characeteristic logical style

II was stunned...
"maine kaha tha RUK JAO" ranjan was angry at both adults now

"Dont look at me, she started it" R&b said gleefully

"Sharm kar khotheya" Ranjan cursed

R&B's expression tightened

"My head is pounding I stopped to make coffee... fine... I wont drink it" she set it back on the counter

"Are u happy dee?" she accused Nivi beginning to cry

Nivi looked ashamed

ranjan and the boys walked in the boys each had a nerf gun in their hands

II sprinted up the back staircase, as the golden bubbles on her steaming hot filter coffee burst one by one...
The kids had no idea what just happened...

"Hoon ki kitha?" Ranjan asked his son unhappily, he was sure there was no other reason for his gudiya to cry


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Posted: 8 years ago
Just back from work,mhavign acupmof tea and lo and behold there's an update! Thanks Nisha. Just reading this gives me the chills. How tired and emotionally drained both are. Gosh will they ever have any time to themselves? Poor Ranjan, excelsior Gaya bhar mein...it's all kids ki duty now.
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Posted: 8 years ago
An early update...r we getting another one 😉
Never have enough..!!
You sometimes take out all your frustration on your kids but being a parent I can say that for surely that after that till you apologise and make your kid happy you cannot take even a single breath of relief
Hmmm both r exchausted mentally and physically both ... Nisha unhein kahin holiday pe bhejo..
According to me II should take a break from job till everything is settled
I m giving this advise coz I know dude will never say that.. And raising kids is a full time job and when you hav four u hav to be always on your feet.. And it's getting all messed up so why not take a break

And yes if Ranjan is mostly home and as we know II is doing her job and dude is as usual going up and down then is chachu managing 'excelsior'???

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Posted: 8 years ago
4 kids after being all set to stop with one.
A Husband that is busy and loves his first born like her Father loves her.
Twin terrors 😃 and a podgy little rowdy.
A job that doesn't give much satisfaction and something that only she knows why she needs or wants and a temprament that still far away from her own mothers 😉

I so get why II is exhausted and with RnB Aging well and she getting mauled {{phew}} can't be easy for her.

Or you Nisha .. You must be busy too. Take care and thanks so much for being this regular!
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Posted: 8 years ago
These last couple of future episodes have been a mixture of both happiness and some dilemmas. The children are so naughty. Poor II she is so overwhelmed. However, she has the most supportive and loving father in law. Poor Ranjan has to be the referee for both the children and the two adults. And on the plus side the increasing dialogue and conversations between the father and estranged son seems to be drawing them closer and hopefully they will have a relationship in the future. Fingers crossed!
Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Emotional distress and physical exhaustion, perfect recipe for falling sick! I hope that doesn't hapoen , but if she does fall sick,mi can just imagine fat little hands and golu little cheeks tending to her. Amma amma they will call out to her! Awww.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poor nivi she is bearing the brunt of being daddy's favorite

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