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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG indeed.

Does wine and Football get you to talk this rough... Boy that was wicked. Loan shark and all knowing Iyer dudette 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
All it took was some wine!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
"WILL YOU ALLOW ME TO TAKE OFF LIKE THAT WITHOUT TELLING YOU. HOW ABOUT I RELOCATE TO CHENNAI TO SING?"

"Do you want to do that?" he walked over to her menacingly

"Oh no... bilqul nahi... MUJHE KAHAN HAI IS BAAT KI AZAADI" "U rotten stinking jerk, you pile it on thick and steamy about being an uncaring wife, while you expan your loan shark business?"

"U wudnt know the venture capital industry even if it bit u in ur butt" he said furiously, insulted at being called a loan shark

"Asshole" she cursed "If I too charged an arm and a leg , and violated fair lending practices I could annihilate your company" she attacked him vengefully""
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First order, Brilliant piece of Writing by the author. This piece is a Template for provocation pushing the readers to the edge of their seats. Excellent craftsmanship. Kudos. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cookieg

All it took was some wine!!



Damn true!! All it took was that to get it all out 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago



The ceasefire proves to be FRAGILE as some of us feared. The FAKE TRUCE receives new blows, new lows, strikes, heavy fire of artillery. WATCH IT THOUGH GUYS, amidst all this shelling and CROSSFIRE, both of you don't want to wake up in the MORNING to the news of finding Ranjan Bhalla slumped over his screen at his desk with the Stitch giving off his recently repaired heart. First time unintentional can be still overlooked but second time oversight despite Tan's waving the finger kind of warning , God forbid!! Both of you will not be able to forgive yourselves ever.

II in her elements, truly in 'HIGH SPIRITS" and Dude PRO when it comes to STONEWALLING . No holds barred expletives... Now why is it giving me a perverse pleasure reading these two mouth them. Rotten stinking Jerk, Asshole and Loan Shark , extremely provocative finds response in EQUAL MEASURE of bite in the Butt remark.

ACTUALLY I'm okay with this no holds barred heavy shelling saturating the area except for Ranjan Bhalla's presence at MM. Chachu's house and Sam's home with her inlaws kind of limits his movement. May be it's better if they book a hotel room and take all their kundak and badaas out on each other.
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Posted: 9 years ago
NOW COMING TO LOAN SHARK COMMENT ... This is as BRUTAL A BLOW from II similar in impact to HIS INFAMOUS DIG OF A FACE THAT LAUNCHED A THOUSAND SHIPS.

That's Not SMART II ...TO BITE OFF more than you can CHEW transcending personal and professional boundaries . That was pretty HARSH. Hitting on His Bread and Butter slighting him with no credit for his BUSINESS ACUMEN... perhaps the lingering effect of their PROFESSIONAL kundak carrying over from their trade offs from their Transpro software installation time as she dished it out in the pub.

DUDE ... If you keep stonewalling your wife it's going to BITE YOU IN YOUR BUTT TOO. SHE DOESNT NEED AN ISLAND . But AT LEAST THROW her some amount of SEED CAPITAL FOR HER TO WORK WITH ... WHEN IT COMES TO CONVERSATIONS. Neither her pleading nor her provoking is working with you .

PENNY FOR YOUR THOUGHTS... whats going on Inside you DUDE!! IS ALL THAT SHE's ASKING... On that front for all her attempts and trying she isn't getting a penny even let alone the Island. Continued defiance will lead you headed the same way as your friends discord with their marital lives.

IN LIGHTER VEIN, the term LOAN SHARK IS NOT ENTIRELY WRONG. If II had used the term to attack him in their PERSONAL capacities it was still fine ... Meaning ..solely when it comes to Loans of 'PERSONAL NATURE ' like when she owed him Rupees Five and Rupees two hundred odd , there's no denying that he has very much been the Loan Shark as she claims ...ha ha ...Fair enough an accusation as she still is paying the EMI's with high interest rates till now for the Five Rs and will continue to pay so for the recent 250 odd her entire life term 😳 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Koshish & CAGR

"I challenge you to pour your blood sweat and tears into a venture and get to where I am at" he warned on her face

"If I didnt give a damn about my family, didnt care for anybody except myself I could do way more than where you are at" she swung back at him

"Oh you think I dont give a damn?" he hissed

"NO you DO NOT, u couldnt be bothered to go to Chennai with me. You cant be bothered to stay in Delhi even after you have had a baby. I believe my opinion is accurate"

"So u are looking for a husband that will ride his wife's coat tails?" he asked

"What a gigantic ego you have R&B... one f**king trip to Chennai, your self esteem felt apart and crumbled" she spat

"I did notice you took the man whose self esteem seems to be intact" his eyes glittered with malice

"DONT U DARE bring my Appa into this. He is a honorable decent man that does nothing but care for his kids" she began to weep, pissing him off further

"And does not forget to rub it in and let the daughter's husband know what a scum bag he is"

"You lying bas***d" she shook "He has never said anything to you. He asked you to walk around and read the articles on the wall this morning, you acted like he was insane" her eyes shot fire balls


Ranjan went up the stairs, he climbed 4, turned around and went to the ground floor nervously

"He has it on display for the whole world to see, my not reading it wouldnt have mattered one damn bit" he said

"So thats how much you are invested in your wife's success?" she challenged

"More than she ever will be, cuz she just equated me to a loan shark

"You left Delhi went off to Paris, then went off on a off the grid vacation, then started arranging an office in LA?" she accused

"Its been in the works for 3 f**king years" he bit out

"You pile on success after success and yet u bemoan MINE? Dad found me this opportunity, you dont have to be appreciative, but will it hurt you to engage with him one goddamn hour?"

"Is that who you think got u the opportunity?" he asked furious

"Tum to kabhi mere liye karogey nahi... tumhe meri shaqal se nafrat hai..." she wept intensely

He grit his teeth and paced the lounge

Ranjan stood at the head of the grand staircase

"Bache ko ja chhoda Sam ke ghar aur dono phir shuru?" he asked disappointed

II sniffled and didnt even look at him

"Stay out of this please" R&B warned

"Shaadi kyon ki tooney? wahi rehne deta isko?" Ranjan accused

"It has nothing to do with you" R&B said

"Dont talk to Dad like that" Ii shrieked

"Aur tu? Badi fiqar rendi hai tujhe meri?" he said tearing up "Do mahiney kisi ne mudke vi nahi dekha"

"I am sorry... " II blurted, squirming, hiding the facts about why she left

"Rehm karo dono" Ranjan begged "Kadi tey samjhaute di koshish karo?" he demanded stunned

"Umm.. main" II began

"Tujhe Rohini jaana hai tu jaa... aithey na sukh haiga hai na shaanti haigi" he cursed

He left, she went into the closet and angrily pushed the hangers to the side

"Packing already?" he provoked

"U would love that wouldnt you?" she asked her eyes glinting with suppressed ridicule and rage "U have a ready made life waiting for u in Paris... and most recently LA" she finished

"Like ur Appa is going to worry and help sort it out and help us reconcile you think?" he smirked

"I will stop him HE SHOULDNT... why the f**k should he? you should go back to Marliese, I can go back to Rohini, what ever the f**k I do with my life is none of your business" she lashed

"Enough II" he warned

"Kyon? Sach chubhta hai tumhe?" she asked

He took a step forward

"U take ONE STEP I will hurt you" she said

"Cmon take a swing at me II" he coaxed his lips twitching derisively

She picked up an umbrella from the long tube like container set in the corner of the giant closet

"I am tired I am going to go to bed" she whimpered bending down using the curved handle like a walking stick, "u have ur phone back now you shud just
go off take that call, so u can unseat Bill Gates" she said smirking

He reached out and touched her elbow to turn her around so he cud see her face when he lashed out,
she swung the umbrella at him he was able to grab it, but not before she had struck one of the hibiscus like lamp shades on the giant chandelier shattering it

She shoved him to step out of the way, he grabbed her by her waist and picked her up like she was an oblong body pillow or a laptop

"Let ME GO" she hissed
Afraid Ranjan would show up... kicking his thigh and butt as she spazzed in his arms, Taking them both down...
crashing down by the closet's entryway, landing on the plush carpet, covered with a soft fur like rug

He pinned her arms over her head after a longish struggle and bend down "I am going to offer some seed capital tomorrow and I challenge u to
grow it 17% CAGR for 5 years, since thats impossible for you, how about I give u TEN instead?" he said his eyes glittering like glass chips ridiculing her, reinstating his challenge.

"I will see you in hell first... oh yeah give me the hand out I will withdraw it and burn it in your swing" she whispered, gasping, twisting under his weight

He bend down, exhaling... she turned her head to the side and shut her eyes, her writhing slowing down considerably, embracing his hard weight quite naturally


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Posted: 9 years ago
They r crazy couple
They fight like crazed people
The don't mind hurting each other emotionally physically
They are EXHAUSTING

Poor Ranjan have to bear it all.i would love to see them fight
like this in front of appa.really dude if u have guts do that in front of iyers and even ll u too
U both take advantage of bhalla family and do what ever u both want to do without really thinking about those who r related with u
Well I really hope u both mature soon as it's not a great environment for kids to grow to see their parents fighting like crazed people all the time
And by the way SEX does not solve problems that u both have.talking and sorting out like mature people does to some extend but not what ur doing
You both r exhausting

I need Neel and suvi .I just miss them .they have their fights but not like u too.they r soothing on my nerves.I really wanna know Nisha when ru updating ID.i really do
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Posted: 9 years ago
Charlie

Its justa story yaar

Its not a violent story in any way

They are very argumentative and they are very intelligent and have ginormous egos

Itna dil pe mat le


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Posted: 9 years ago

Sword finally out of the sheath. Good they spit out what they have bottled up.

They dont realize that war has casualities :(

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