Fan Fic .... A-K - Page 94

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Posted: 19 years ago
it awesome and regarding to the ending this fiction i would say plz don't i prefer this story to be keep going angad and kripa have a child and how they are protected about her and angad career moving on to great hightest and kripa being a house wife and a nice smooth life makes a complete family what say 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Well lucky.........Lets see where the story gets......I will continue for a little while more .......
Thanks for all of ur suggesstions......Will continue from Monday....
bye
Love ya
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Posted: 19 years ago
i m waiting 4 u 2 continue!!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Thanks Di... 😃!
Edited by Divjot_10 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
waitingg...........cont plzz 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Continue ....me waiting frm so long!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Doctor asks Angad to keep Kripa in hospital for a day more in an observation and then they can take her home....Angad is both relieved and happy to hear it and tells Kripa about it.....Priya meanwhile tells Kripa that she is taking Aarati home as she might be hungry and sleepy now....as its her nap time now....Kripa nods reluctantly and all of them leave with Aarati and Sonu with them, except Angad....

k: Angad u too go home and rest ....you have been in hospital for ever....U need ur rest...

A: I need nothing except to be with my wife.....

Kripa looked away ashamed....and tears forming in her eyes.....

Angad noticed the sudden change in Kripa's mood....He slowly made Kripa look towards him and saw tears that have started flowing from her eyes....

A: Kripa...slowly he wiped her tears.....Whats the matter?Are u feeling sick..?

K: Kripa just shook her head and looked away....

A: Tell me....

K: I have been such a fool Angad...I deserted my own daughter when she needed me most.....I did not even look back....And now even Priya is so like her mother to her...and I am still a stranger.....She was so happy to see Priya and Sonu....U see.....I missed the best part in our childs year...I missed her affection and I missed loving her.........And for all this I am the only one responsible....

A: Kept one finger on her lips....No u are not the one...I am the one who deserted u from ur daughter....Its due to me that u had a fall....Its due to me that our daughter would not be alive today........

Then it was kripa's turn to shake her head and silence Angad....Both hugged each other in a silent moment....thinking about the past.....what they lost....and for those moments when they were not together.....Slowly they felt apart and Kripa looked at Angad and asked him to tell her every thing....about their daughter......

Angad started telling her from the day she was born...as how he was stuck in snow...about Aarati being in Baby unit for 2 months....how he used to talk to her and she used to respond...the day they discharged her and he brought her to Kripa's room to meet her daughter...and then when he came back leaving Aarati at home how he discovered Kripa was gone....and then how he raised Aarati....and moments they missed Kripa....and every thing........Kripa and Angad both had tears in their eyes.....by the end....and it was almost evening till they both looked happily at each other.........there was a knock on the door and they fell apart.....

It was Josh with Aarati on one side and Sonu on the other.....both playing with his hairs.....and giggling...Kripa's face lit up looking at the children......But then suddenly she asked where they were and where is Sneha.....

A: Kripa we had to bring u to London to keep in touch with the doctor....and Sneha could not leave her grandma.....But I promised her that we will come and meet her once u are Ok.....You can talk to her through phone.......Here and he handed her his cell....

Kripa called Sneha and Sneha was so relived hearing Kripa's voice.....they had a long chat...while Angad and Josh were playing with Aarati and Sonu...besides the bed...After they both said there good bye......Kripa looked at the babies and Angad and Josh...Once again her eyes filled with tears...for the time she lost...But when Angad slowly felt her looking there way....Kripa wiped her tears and smiled at them and raised her hands in the indication to give Aarati to her.....Angad slowly took Aarati...and handed her to Kripa....She kissed Aarati....but Aarati was in mood to play with Sonu....so soon she got down and joined Sonu...Kripa felt a sense of loss...but Angad took her hand and comforted her saying she loves playing with Sonu...and Josh joined in saying that they never allow him to take them...when they are playing....and always....they need to make them sleep before seperating them from each other to take them home.....Kripa smiled looking at both of them......
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Posted: 19 years ago
wonderful part
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Posted: 19 years ago
omggggggggg...i luv ur fanfic!!!..its sooooooo good!!..some of the parts just makes me cry!!..haha..but its really rocking fanfic!!...plzzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago

Two days passed by and Kripa was discharged from the hospital.....Kartik and Angad were there to take her home.....Kartik completed the formalities and Angad took care of Kripa and her belongings and they left.....When they returned to their place.....It was full of surprise for Kripa....All the house was filled with ballons and colourful papers and big welcome back Kripa note on the wall.......Every one cheered her welcome and asked her to come in......Kripa had tears in her eyes......Looking at all this.....Then Angad came besides her......

A: I have one more surprise for u Kripa.....and he showed her to the open door next to her.....

Kripa looked towards it and then saw.....Dilip, Naina and Dadi standing there.....She looked at them....remembering hers and Angads last fight and uncertainly looked towards Angad.....Angad just nodded to her and asked her to go meet them.....

Kripa went running to Dadi and hugged her....and then touched her feet....Dadi smiling and crying at the same time......blessed her and then Naina came next to her and hugged her .....Dilip was also behind her and together they walked in the middle of the room where a big cake was waiting for her.....They all enjoyed a beautiful party that night with Sonu and Aarati.....spoiling the cake tasting it now and then and full face covered with cake....Every one laughed and had a fun filled evening with happiness filled in the air.....At last they called it a night and Angad made Kripa go to bed and rest...Then he left her and went to Aarati who was waiting for Angad to come to make her sleep....Slowly Angad went to her...picked her up and humed and Aarati was asleep in moments in his Arm....Kripa was looking at them from the door lovingly with her eyes close to tears....Angad saw her and asked her to come inside with them.....He gathered Kripa in a family hug and they had some quite moments together....Later they made Aarti sleep in her bed next to Sonu...and both kissed her as well as sonu good night....smiling at each other and slowly left the room......

Two days passed by and Kripa was perfectly fine and She and Angad with Arati flyed down to Zurich to meet Sneha and bid her bye.....Sneha was happy for Kripa and wished her well and luck and even granny with tears hugged her and gifted Aarati some toys and Angad and Kripa were back to London the same day.......They were all going to India....for a get together party and Angad's show there.....where he was relaunching his carreer in India again.....along with Josh,Priya and Sonu......After staying in London for two more days...every one came back to India......where Kripa's parents have already arrived along with her brother Bobby................

Edited by mitu - 19 years ago

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