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Posted: 19 years ago
Two days pass by and still Kripa is out...On third day...Aarti is with Angad....and she is asual playing around in the hospital room...as she did for last 2 days...Angad was lost in thoughts....and suddenly there were moments in Kripa and Her hand began to shake.....Angad was still lost in thoughts....while Aarati was standing near to Kripa holding on to her hand and grabbing her......making sounds......And Angad then saw Kripa shaking.....He quickly took Aarati......and went to bring the doctor....Doctor came in and checked on Kripa and said that he is happy...atleast she responded a little...He asked what triggered Kripa for this to happen and Angad told him what happened.....Doctor said that it will be good...if Aarati keeps comming here....we may get some response to start Kripa's treatment.......2 Days pass by and Kripa starts responding well to the doctors and on Aarati's sounds.....and touch....some time in the evening.....Aarati is playing around.....near Kripa...and Angad just left Aarati for a min to bring some coffee.....suddenly Kripa....gets conciousness.....and first thing she sees is Aarati.....She remembers Sneha telling her that Aarati is Angad's daughter...........and then.....After that she did not know what happened....but now she wondered why Aarati is here near her bed....Her head starts hurting badly...she holds it tightly and tries to concentrate on Aarati......And sees that Aarti is going near the electricity board just a few steps away....She knew that the little girl was in danger......her head was hurting very badly........and she started going towards Aarati.....slowly....to grab her....and then Angad entered the room.....He was shocked beyond his life....He saw Kripa walking towards Aarati...Who was very close to the electricity board...He quickly ran and took Aarati from there and kept her away....cursing why he left her alone....and then ran towards Kripa who was about to fall down......He supported her quickly and then there eyes met....Till then Kripa never realised that Angad was there........

They looked at each other.....both lost....tears in both of them's eyes.............bluring there vision....and then Kripa fainted.....Angad slowly took her in his Arms and placed her on the bed. He wiped his eyes and but happy tears flowed down his cheek....He slowly went near Kripa...and kissed her on her cheeek...He took Aarati in his arms and bought her near Kripa.....

A: Kripa...both of us need u....Aarati is ur daughter Kripa.....wake up......we need u......but Kripa was unconcious....but she could hear Angad talking............

Angad slowly got up and went to tell the doctor about this new development and after a check up....doctor said that kripa was perfectly fine and out of any danger,....and she will gain conciousness soon.....Angad thanked him.....and informed others who were at home.....All were happy.....Mishti was there and told Angad to go and freshen up and rest and come in the evening.....Angad agreed because Aarati looked sleepy...He took her home....and in the evening was back with Aarti at the hospital...Mishti had some work...so she left......Angad in the meanwhile went to get Aarti some ice cream.......but when he was back.....he saw,....Kripa trying to get up and walk .....He suddenly went in the room....

A: Are u trying to run away again......Kripa?
Edited by mitu - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Amazing n Superb parts!!!keep it up Mitu sis!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx its really awesome thanx for updating thank u didi take care of urself &ur son
luv u
anu 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
very very nice
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Posted: 19 years ago
mitu di awesome parttttts

i pray for ur sons speedy recovery... and welcomebak 😊😊😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
wooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww i love ittttttttttttttttttttttttttttt thank u soooo much for continueing plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue and dont make kripa loose her memory plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
wooohoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo loved it!! thanxss alottt ❤️ U!!!muahhhhhhhhhhh u made ma day. 😃 😛 cont fast plzzz 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks friends here is the next part....
Kripa freezed in her place......She never wanted to face this day....the day when Angad would tell her he had remarried or had a daughter,.....She did not want to think that Aarati is not her daughter but Angad's and his .......But the day was here.....She couldn't move...Her whole body was stuck there....She could not see in his eyes.....afraid to see any thing in there...afraid to not see the love they have shared...Afraid to see that love for some one else.....She just closed her eyes and stood rooted to the place....without turning her face....She could hear Aarati....calling mum mum mum.......and tears started flowing from her eyes....This could have been there daughter......only if she would not have been so careless....only if....but she is not.....silent tears came....but she remained calm......Seconds passed by...but no one spoke....atlast.....Kripa could not wait any longer...So she turned around.....She wanted all this to be over and she could go back to her life.....She slowly raised her eyes...and saw angad...and aarati in his arms.........There eyes met and no one could break the spark and contact......but then....Aarati held Angads....hairs and Angad winced.....

Kripa came out of the spell and looked aside ashamed of her behaviour......she tried to hide the tears....fresly gathering in her eyes.....After some time....Angad came near her....She could feel the heat ......and knew he was approaching............
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Posted: 19 years ago
He slowly......raised his hand and tried to keep it on Kripa....but kripa moved away.....Angad's expression filled with pain.......too....

a: Kripa ....Don't u want to meet Aarati?

Kripa Ingnoring Angad...and behaving as if they are old friends.....

K: Angad...how are u? Oh yes I met Aarati....She is lovely little girl......She faked a smile at both of them, but could no longer go on....so she just turned around continuously trying to stop her tears.....

A: You can't fake smiles....or supress ur sorrow before me Kripa.....Remember....I can catch u in a second....

K: Then why don't u understand ur self and leave Angad?

A: I can't?

K: Why not? You have ur life....U have ur daughter....What else u want? If u are still worried about me, then don't...I can take care of my self...I am fine....Good luck and bye.....and she waited for him to leave..............But Angad did not move....He kept looking at her.....but never moved...

Kripa turned around.....with the same question.?

A: Yes u are right.....I have my life.....I have my daughter.....but still...I want one thing in our life.....Mother of my daughter.....who is not with us still...?

k: kripa looked at Angad with confusion.....Where is she..then?

A: In front of me.....

Kripa looked as if Angad would laugh out any moment now and tell her he was joking....and if this was a joke, she would never forgive Angad for one....

K: Angad.....Don't do this to me....Please go away...I can stand this any more....Please go away..............and she just kept her eyes closed and her hands on her ears ....refusing to hear any thing more......Angad slowly came near her..........

A: This is no joke Kripa....Meet your daughter....Our daughter....Aarati...whom u have given birth.....Who has come in this world due to our love,....
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was lovely

do cont. soon!!!

Luv
Vibu!

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