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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks Sona 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome, Fabulous, Superb , Splendid update di. Iske liye adjectives kaam pad rahe hai.Chalo meri dono guesses sahi hui iss baat ki thori khushiyaan manau.
1st one was that the people with Manohar would likely be Shashank & Anay. Dutta will be there evaded my mind due to the tension of the story. Its good though. It would be a lie if i say that i hadnt waited in each update for his insights and as much as i liked anika-dutta pair, i also grew fond of this extremely capable and reliable man.

2nd one. I had a very vague idea ( isliye apko pehle nehi bataya) that manjula could be the one since u gave a hint about it when anika trickly tagged along manjula for accessing the bank account.

An update laced with tremendous family drama and intersperced with shocking revelations, though they were inevitable. Manohar is a strong willed person but yog's breakdown was absolutely expected. Moreover manohar was investigating on his own gave him a much needed space and time to digest all the facts where as yog was clueless until anika told him the truth. But anika handled him maturedly and yog got the much needed support at this point.

But the thing i liked most in this update , rather which rendered me speechless for sometime was the lines yog used to compare him and anika on having manjula and her choti ma in their respective lives. Its not something we didnt know, neither that any other set of words would have been more apt in yog's lips at that time but the way u wrote it portrayed his raw pain associated with the huge loss and hit our realisations blatantly. Thats the magic u always create with ur apt choice and perfect usage of words.

Good that they confronted manjula and everything got sorted. So finally all the secrets are out and there is no more life risk. Now everybody can take a long breadth of relief and anika yog can finally concentrate on their relationship. Manohar is deeply hurt. Otherwise he couldnt have transferred the papers in such a short notice.

Hope the family members get over this painful phase soon. Lets see di what else have u got in store for us, whether there are anymore twists or not. Thanks for the pm di. I will still wait for the next update though the much awaited secret is out.

But one thing that is frequenting my mind, which i am not being able to push back is that whether manjula is the only wrong over here. We know all through the story we have criticised choti ma and now manjula will be added in the list no doubt of it, but is it the persons or the situatons at fault. Maybe if manjula could have vented out her frustrations like anika's choti ma openly, she wouldnt have gone too far like attempting to murder the father son duo. Moreover , manohar loved each member of his family and their well being was of utmost priority to him but isnt it that even then he failed to realise manjula's bubbling jealousy. Isnt it that somewhere he failed to make them understand his love and loyalty towards them. Regarding choti ma... anika grew up in her uncle's home. She avoided spending time with her family on the pretext that her choti ma doesnt create any scenes. Choti ma is at fault no doubt of it but then why girish didnt take any steps to remove her insecurities regarding anika her step daughter.
We are always first when it comes to point fingers at the wrong ones but not always give a thought at the circumstances which made them the way they are. Moreover we all expect these people to behave like ideals but we forget to remind ourselves that if every one on earth would behave like the way we want then the earth could have been something totally different. And the word 'EXCEPTION' wouldnt have found place in our dictionary.
Edited by utsha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG!! Shocking update di
Loved it
Insaan ka lalach achhe khase parivar ko tod deta hai!
Very sad. Manohar and Yog were really upset, Ani handled everything nicely. Good going girl!
Do continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantabulous update dear
Really extraordinary.. emotional yet great update
Feels bad for Manohar n Yog..
They are very much upset
After knowing manjula was the one who tried to kill..
Manohar loves his whole family
But people didn't understand
Anika is a great support for Yog..
N her love sooth all pain of Yog
Nicely written
Thanks for PM
Continue soon
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: utsha

Awesome, Fabulous, Superb , Splendid update di. Iske liye adjectives kaam pad rahe hai.Chalo meri dono guesses sahi hui iss baat ki thori khushiyaan manau.

1st one was that the people with Manohar would likely be Shashank & Anay. Dutta will be there evaded my mind due to the tension of the story. Its good though. It would be a lie if i say that i hadnt waited in each update for his insights and as much as i liked anika-dutta pair, i also grew fond of this extremely capable and reliable man.

2nd one. I had a very vague idea ( isliye apko pehle nehi bataya) that manjula could be the one since u gave a hint about it when anika trickly tagged along manjula for accessing the bank account.

An update laced with tremendous family drama and intersperced with shocking revelations, though they were inevitable. Manohar is a strong willed person but yog's breakdown was absolutely expected. Moreover manohar was investigating on his own gave him a much needed space and time to digest all the facts where as yog was clueless until anika told him the truth. But anika handled him maturedly and yog got the much needed support at this point.

But the thing i liked most in this update , rather which rendered me speechless for sometime was the lines yog used to compare him and anika on having manjula and her choti ma in their respective lives. Its not something we didnt know, neither that any other set of words would have been more apt in yog's lips at that time but the way u wrote it portrayed his raw pain associated with the huge loss and hit our realisations blatantly. Thats the magic u always create with ur apt choice and perfect usage of words.

Good that they confronted manjula and everything got sorted. So finally all the secrets are out and there is no more life risk. Now everybody can take a long breadth of relief and anika yog can finally concentrate on their relationship. Manohar is deeply hurt. Otherwise he couldnt have transferred the papers in such a short notice.

Hope the family members get over this painful phase soon. Lets see di what else have u got in store for us, whether there are anymore twists or not. Thanks for the pm di. I will still wait for the next update though the much awaited secret is out.

But one thing that is frequenting my mind, which i am not being able to push back is that whether manjula is the only wrong over here. We know all through the story we have criticised choti ma and now manjula will be added in the list no doubt of it, but is it the persons or the situatons at fault. Maybe if manjula could have vented out her frustrations like anika's choti ma openly, she wouldnt have gone too far like attempting to murder the father son duo. Moreover , manohar loved each member of his family and their well being was of utmost priority to him but isnt it that even then he failed to realise manjula's bubbling jealousy. Isnt it that somewhere he failed to make them understand his love and loyalty towards them. Regarding choti ma... anika grew up in her uncle's home. She avoided spending time with her family on the pretext that her choti ma doesnt create any scenes. Choti ma is at fault no doubt of it but then why girish didnt take any steps to remove her insecurities regarding anika her step daughter.
We are always first when it comes to point fingers at the wrong ones but not always give a thought at the circumstances which made them the way they are. Moreover we all expect these people to behave like ideals but we forget to remind ourselves that if every one on earth would behave like the way we want then the earth could have been something totally different. And the word 'EXCEPTION' wouldnt have found place in our dictionary.

Thanks Utsha dear glad you liked it so much

Yes your premonition was correct & Anika spent a major part of her life with them so they had to be there with her 😊

True Dutta is a reliable man he respects Anika for her ethics, power & maturity & so helps her in every way he can 😛

Well good that you knew who was the person behind it as some way or the other it has to be revealed

True Update was more to Vashisht Family & as culprit was from the family itself Mahonar had to take some or the other decision, thou is a strong person & got time to digest the fact.🥱

For Yog it came like a big shock he always treated Manjula as her Mother & his breakdown was bound to happen, Anika knows his state of mind & she handled everything maturely which was needed at this point of time as Yog was emotionally broken

Yog never compared Manjula & Mamta but he was talking about their intentions, Mamta never failed to show her disregard to Anika but Manjula was the one who back stabbed Family, & it reflected that how deeply Yog was hurt .

True now no more conspiracies & finally Yog & Anika can concentrate on their future moreover can know each other better 😳

Manohar is deeply hurt & lost all that he gathered in life his relations mean a lot to him & his reaction shows that he is broken to the core 🤢🤢

But hold on dear much more is coming up in the way & hope you will like that too 😆😆😉

True to your words People aren't bad but circumstances make them so ... let me clear this Manjula has seen her husband & her son bowing in front of Manohar it made her frustrated to the core that she did such a dastardly act of killing Manohar & Yog to safeguard her son's future, Manohar has always treated her like a small sister & trusted her she could have raised her voice openly but here she knew that her son & her husband will not support her in this that is why she did all this, only this break Manohar that he failed to understand his own people.

Regarding Mamta being a lady no one would choicely become a second wife and a step mother, her frustration went on Anika with a rude behavior, As she grew up she understood the exact reason behind her all this & parted herself from family for their happiness.

Girish being a busy Doctor never noticed Mamta's frustration & Anika's loneliness & by the time he did it was too late & it becomes completely visible at the time of Yog & Adya's meet when Mamta creates a scene. 😔

True exceptions are everywhere & no one is ideal we are humans & we make mistakes 😊

Stay tuned & keep commenting as I love replaying your critical appreciations 😊🤗

Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

OMG!! Shocking update di

Loved it
Insaan ka lalach achhe khase parivar ko tod deta hai!
Very sad. Manohar and Yog were really upset, Ani handled everything nicely. Good going girl!
Do continue soon
Thanks for pm

Thanks Neha dear glad you liked it
Yes a shocking & learning update for everyone
True insaan laalach main andha ho jaata hai
Yog & Manohar are broken & that's justified
Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: etfr

Fantabulous update dear

Really extraordinary.. emotional yet great update
Feels bad for Manohar n Yog..
They are very much upset
After knowing manjula was the one who tried to kill..
Manohar loves his whole family
But people didn't understand
Anika is a great support for Yog..
N her love sooth all pain of Yog
Nicely written
Thanks for PM
Continue soon

Thanks dear glad you liked it
Vashisht family is going through a tough time
True Manohar love his family but few fail to understand his love
Anika supported Yog as she knew this was required & sure she will relive his pain
Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Thanks Utsha dear glad you liked it so much

Yes your premonition was correct & Anika spent a major part of her life with them so they had to be there with her 😊

True Dutta is a reliable man he respects Anika for her ethics, power & maturity & so helps her in every way he can 😛

Well good that you knew who was the person behind it as some way or the other it has to be revealed

True Update was more to Vashisht Family & as culprit was from the family itself Mahonar had to take some or the other decision, thou is a strong person & got time to digest the fact.🥱

For Yog it came like a big shock he always treated Manjula as her Mother & his breakdown was bound to happen, Anika knows his state of mind & she handled everything maturely which was needed at this point of time as Yog was emotionally broken

Yog never compared Manjula & Mamta but he was talking about their intentions, Mamta never failed to show her disregard to Anika but Manjula was the one who back stabbed Family, & it reflected that how deeply Yog was hurt .

True now no more conspiracies & finally Yog & Anika can concentrate on their future moreover can know each other better 😳

Manohar is deeply hurt & lost all that he gathered in life his relations mean a lot to him & his reaction shows that he is broken to the core 🤢🤢

But hold on dear much more is coming up in the way & hope you will like that too 😆😆😉

True to your words People aren't bad but circumstances make them so ... let me clear this Manjula has seen her husband & her son bowing in front of Manohar it made her frustrated to the core that she did such a dastardly act of killing Manohar & Yog to safeguard her son's future, Manohar has always treated her like a small sister & trusted her she could have raised her voice openly but here she knew that her son & her husband will not support her in this that is why she did all this, only this break Manohar that he failed to understand his own people.

Regarding Mamta being a lady no one would choicely become a second wife and a step mother, her frustration went on Anika with a rude behavior, As she grew up she understood the exact reason behind her all this & parted herself from family for their happiness.

Girish being a busy Doctor never noticed Mamta's frustration & Anika's loneliness & by the time he did it was too late & it becomes completely visible at the time of Yog & Adya's meet when Mamta creates a scene. 😔

True exceptions are everywhere & no one is ideal we are humans & we make mistakes 😊

Stay tuned & keep commenting as I love replaying your critical appreciations 😊🤗



Thanks a lot for ur long reply di and no doubt i am still waiting for the future updates. Lets see what course the story takes now and if the broken family is mended or not. Whether manjulaamnd mamta realises what they lost in the process of getting what they want and if the respective families give them a chance to rectify their deeds. So jaise bhi time mile jaldi jaldi update karna di. Love u.
Edited by utsha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: utsha




Thanks a lot for ur long reply di and no doubt i am still waiting for the future updates. Lets see what course the story takes now and if the broken family is mended or not. Whether manjulaamnd mamta realises what they lost in the process of getting what they want and if the respective families give them a chance to rectify their deeds. So jaise bhi time mile jaldi jaldi update karna di. Love u.


Your most welcome dear
Well you will surely come to know this in future updates
Family can be mended but trust cannot
Let's see if they realize their mistake
Stay tuned for more fun 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome one
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon

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