PrAja/ RoSal FF:- Yeh Kahan Aagaye Hum (Chapter 47 Page 51)

AMereWanderer thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Hello PrAjajans!😊
I am new to this forum and have read many of the fanfictions posted here. Like everyone else on this forum, I too am a RoSalian and a MRPian! Inspired by all writers here, I have started a fanfiction of my own. This is my first one, so I wanted to receive as much feedback possible. What's a better way than posting my ideas and opinions here?😉

The story is set in modern time, with Faisal Khan and Roshni Walia as the main characters. Since I started following these two talented superstars, I wanted to know what their daily routine on set looked like. So, I imagined and made up something based on their pictures posted everyday. Hope you all like it. 😛

Without any further ado, presenting to you Chapter 1 of 'Yeh Hum Aagaye Hain Kahan'. ( This title is purely temporary. I was so confused as to what title to put in, so this was the first thing that came into mind. Ideas on the permanent title are most welcome!)😆

Chapter 1:- Surprises

My life has been full of surprises. I haven't regretted for anything, not yet. When my mom exclaimed that I had been selected for the role of Ajabde Punwar, the brave and valiant Maharana Pratap's wife, my happiness knew no bounds. We had heard a lot about his bravery, back in school, and I was pretty excited and anxious to see what it really looked like. Those massive palaces, heavy jewelry and rich attires, the style and elegance those queens and kings carried were an experience to gain.

Through my look test for the Contiloe Productions' show, I was introduced to Faisal Khan, who was playing the lead role; Kunwar Pratap. I had heard about him through media, he had won the trophy for DID Little Masters 2. Since then, he was the buzz of television. I had predicted that he would remain in the field of dance. But seeing him there, I was taken aback. A few days back, my mum had shown me a few episodes of the show so that I could get an idea, and undoubtedly, I was quite impressed. Never thought that a dancer would be such a fine actor.

"Hi" was the only word I personally said to him. He seemed a bit shy as he replied with the same. Nervousness crept in me as the director was finalizing the cast. Many talented girls had auditioned for the role but not selected.

Dear Mrs. Walia,

Your daughter, Roshni Walia had auditioned for the role of Ajabde in our show a few days back. We are happy to announce that your daughter is absolutely perfect for the role.

See you next week Monday...'

I re-read the message again and again as I couldn't imagine that I got the role.

"Di, please pinch me... I don't believe that they accepted me!"

"I am proud of you Roshni!" my mum whispered in my ear. I could see the happiness in her eyes.

I won't let you down Maa' I promised myself...

This is a rather short update, but I can guarantee that the chapters will get longer and more interesting as the story unfolds. Hope you all liked it. Comments and Feedback are mostly welcomed. 😃



INDEX

Introduction & Chapter 1:- Surprises- Page 1

Chapter 2:- You?! - Page 1

Chapter 3:- The New Me! - Page 2

Chapter 4:- Eagerness - Page 3

Chapter 5:- Knowing You... - Page 3

Chapter 6:- Friends? - Page 4

Chapter 7:- Roll, Camera, Action! - Page 5

Chapter 8:- Uncertain? - Page 6

Chapter 9:- PrAja a.k.a RoSal - Page 7

Chapter 10:- Wedding Bells - Page 7

Chapter 11:- Betrayal - Page 8

Chapter 12:- Heartbroken - Page 10

Chapter 13:- Regrets... - Page 12

Chapter 14:- The Maharani of Mewar? - Page 13

Chapter 15:- My Everything - Page 14

Chapter 16:- It's Time... - Page 15

Chapter 17:- Live or Die - Page 17

Chapter 18:- Dreams or Reality? - Page 18

Chapter 19:- Maa! - Page 20

Chapter 20:- Lies! - Page 21

Chapter 21:- Wait, What? - Page 22

Chapter 22:- Double Identities - Page 23

Chapter 23:- Transformations - Page 25

Chapter 24:- The Development - Page 26

Chapter 25:- When I See You Again - Page 27

Chapter 26:- Dawn of Realization - Page 29

Chapter 27:- Invitation - Page 30

Chapter 28:- Can I Have This 'Dance'? - Page 32

Chapter 29:- Unexpected Revelations - Page 32

Chapter 30A:- The First Sacrifice - Page 34

Chapter 30 B:- Distant Memories - Page 36

Chapter 31:- Now or Never - Page 37

Chapter 32:- Something New - Page 39

Chapter 33:- Unknown Allegations - Page 39

Chapter 34:- A New Venture! - Page 40

Chapter 35:- An Unusual Visit - Page 40

Chapter 36:- Take off and Landing...Wait, What?! - Page 41

Chapter 37:- Secret Getaway - Page 42

Chapter 38:- 'Cause I Know I Can Treat You Better - Page 44

Chapter 39:- New Beginnings - Page 46

Chapter 40:- Mission Rajputana! - Page 46

Chapter 41:- Never Meant to Be? - Page 47

Chapter 42:- Inner Battles - Page 48

Chapter 43:- Battling Between Fantasies... - Page 48

Chapter 44:- Twists and Turns - Page 49

Chapter 45:- The First Step - Page 49

Chapter 46:- Ki Main Hoon Hero Teri... - Page 50

Chapter 47:- Making Connections - Page 51

Edited by Muskan2001 - 7 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

393

Views

35k

Users

19

Likes

571

Frequent Posters

Nonie12345 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Hi Muskan
Welcome to the forum🤗
Nice to see a new writer here
Your concept is nice😃
Awesome chapter
AMereWanderer thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Hi Muskan

Welcome to the forum🤗
Nice to see a new writer here
Your concept is nice😃
Awesome chapter


Thank you so much Nonie! I am honored to be part of such an amazing forum! 🤗
Will surely continue!
Ramya_98 thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Pro Thumbnail 10th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Hi dear,
Very interesting start! Do continue soon.
By the way, i'm Ramya. Welcome to the forum.
AMereWanderer thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
I just saw 36 views on my first chapter!😃 I would like to thank everyone for such a warm welcome to the IF!🤗 I could not resist any longer, so I decided to update Chapter 2 too! 😉

Chapter 2:- You?!


For the past couple of weeks, I have been so busy that I am unable to catch up with my life. It feels as if there is a train to catch and I can't pause for a single breath. But seriously, these weeks might have been the busiest but surely were the most memorable weeks of my life. I couldn't thank more for giving me such an opportunity.

Flashback. 1st day of shoot. Film City.

I entered the set with my mom by my side. For some reason, this nervousness wouldn't leave me. My mum was constantly trying to calm me down

"Roshni, you will be fine! And anyways, it isn't your first show right, you are my brave girl..."

But my heart refused to accept this fact. Why was I so scared?

We reached the sets and the first thing I saw was the palace. The amazingly beautiful Bijolia Palace. Decorated with vibrant pink drapes and yellow flowers, the place looked no less than heaven to me!

"Hello, we were waiting for you! It is a pleasure having Roshni play the role of Ajabde" greeted the director.

He showed us my vanity room and told me to get dressed for the scene. When my mum asked for assistance, he said that there would be people helping me.

I stood in front my vanity room, not believing what I saw! My hands softly touched the walls of the room, scanning each and every brick. I proceeded towards the door, stepping into the room...

SURPRISE!

My eyes were in for a shock. I stood there dumbfounded and what I saw in front of me!

JANNAT!!!!!!!

I rushed to hug her! Questions bombarded me in my mind... what was she doing here? How did she know that I was here? Was this all planned? Did my mom know anything about it? How did this happen?

Jannat, my best friend. I know her for as long as I can remember. We have been doing everything together, from celebrating our birthdays, to going to school. If we weren't together, one of us would surely start crying. I hadn't informed her about my role here as I wanted to surprise her... but I was in for a surprise!

"How are you here? How did you know about my role? When did you plan all this? Answer me Jannat, tell me everything!"

Tension grew around me as I waited impatiently for answers.

"Offf! Roshni!, Patience! Okay, so your mum told me about your success in getting this role. So that's why I came!" She gestured through her hands. "And rahi baat meri...I had auditioned for a role in this show as well."

"What!" my eyes grew wide! "So you got selected?" I exclaimed!

"Yes! I got selected as the role of Phool Kanwar, Ajabde's best friend!" She replied, equally excited!

"Oh My Goddd Jannat!!!!!!!" I screamed in joy. I was so delighted to see her here. I twirled her around and around, expressing my happiness. Now that she was here, I knew nothing could go wrong. I realized that my nervousness that was bugging me all this while, vanished. Suddenly, something struck in my mind.

"Jannat! My best friend in real life is portraying my best friend in the show!" I cried.

"Oh My God yeah Roshni" she smiled.

Look at how destiny plays its role! Bhagwanji knew that I was very anxious and nervous about this show and He sent my closest friend to me!

"Thank you Bhagwanji" I whispered a silent prayer.

"Come on now, enough of our reunion! Go and get ready!" Jannat informed.

In all this, I had forgotten what my main purpose was for coming in this vanity room. I had to get ready quickly; no one would want to get scolded for being late on the first day of shoot.


So as promised, this chapter was longer than the first one. Hope you all like it! Comments and feedback are most welcome!😊
Edited by Muskan2001 - 9 years ago
AMereWanderer thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: ramya06

Hi dear,
Very interesting start! Do continue soon.
By the way, i'm Ramya. Welcome to the forum.


Thank you sooo much Ramya! I am not sure if I should address you as 'di' or no, so please don't mind if I don't😕😛
I have read many of your fanfictions and have enjoyed them to the fullest! Hope you like mine too!😊
Nonie12345 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Amazing chapter Muskan😃
U described how nervous Roshini was feeling and her happiness at Finding her best friend jannat playing her best friend in the show very well❤️

AMereWanderer thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Amazing chapter Muskan😃

U described how nervous Roshini was feeling and her happiness at Finding her best friend jannat playing her best friend in the show very well❤️


Thank you so much Nonie (di)! I am extremely glad you liked the second chapter. I felt like Jannat's and Roshni's relationship and bonding should be expressed in order for the story to move on. 😳
Thank you so much!❤️
Ramya_98 thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Pro Thumbnail 10th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Muskan2001



Thank you sooo much Ramya! I am not sure if I should address you as 'di' or no, so please don't mind if I don't😕😛
I have read many of your fanfictions and have enjoyed them to the fullest! Hope you like mine too!😊

You're welcome dear. Well i am 18 years old and i definitely won't mind if you don't call me di. 😊
Thank you so much, muskan(?). That really means a lot! Glad to know ypu like my works.
Yeah dear, you're going great! Loved the second part too. 👏
AMereWanderer thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: ramya06

You're welcome dear. Well i am 18 years old and i definitely won't mind if you don't call me di. 😊
Thank you so much, muskan(?). That really means a lot! Glad to know ypu like my works.
Yeah dear, you're going great! Loved the second part too. 👏


Well, then it is Ramya di for me as I am 15 years old!😛 You are truly a great writer with amazing ideas and concepts!
I am glad that you liked the second chapter too! 😊Will update soon!

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington · 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary · 11 months ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: abavi · 4 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 1 years ago

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 1 years ago

Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7

Introduction Although the family background of this fiction is the same as of the original series, there are slight changes in the plotline....

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".