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Posted: 8 years ago
Vani this one is for you

Councilor ani Mukhya Mantri
Many traditional UP rituals were performed with much pomp and show

Some women huddled in a corner and gossiped

Suvi didnt speak fluent Hindi and looked visibly nervous.

She kept looking at the open front door

She had gone into the kitchen to offer breakfast help, Ruchi and Aabha had told her not to worry

A man was making pooris in furious speed

A woman rolled the wheat flour discs on the floor and threw them elegantly on to a Navbharat Times spread on the floor a old rusty tent house pedestal ceiling fan helped keep the woman cool

Flipping the edge of the newspaper up causing Alia Bhatt to make magical appearance

The kitchen smelled like jeera and heeng

"Thoda sa bhog laga lein halwa, phir shuru karte hain mehandi ki rasam?" Amma mumbled, her saree tucked at her waist
she squeezed water out of a saree in the bathroom, wringing it

"Maasijee aap ren do, hamey pakdaayen" a young woman in her 30s grabbed the wrung out saree

"Alok ko kahen naha lein, Saksham se baat ki? Arya Samaj mandir mein parking allowed nahi hai,
shaadi mein kam se kam sau gaadiyan hongi. Bhaisaab (her own brother) ko kahen Saksham ko raaste mein Councilor ke daftar ruk kar, zara vinati karen" Amma sighed losing breath


Her bro's wife appeared "Jeeji, pehle aap bahar niklen, neeche ho chuka kaam aati hogi kaamwali, Aabha YAHAN ao beta, dekho buaji kapde dhoney mein lag padeen" her MIl scolded Aabha


Suvi appeared in the small annex's entry way

"Amma main dhoye..dhoongi" she corrected herself

"Bilqul nahi" Amma smiled

Aabha had appeared there by then, she looked at Suvi a lil awkwardly

There was no spontaneous warmth on either side

Suvi felt like a guest when she encountered Aabha

"Beta ghar se koi aavey hai?" a oldish lady quizzed her

She looked at Amma

Amma nodded "Sulekha Sunanda ki kangi kar lengi? aap?" and asked her cheerfully

Suvi nodded...

"Bhabhiji ek behen hain inki, saatvan mahina hai unka" "singapore mein hain" Amma said quietly

The old lady looked at Suvi oddly

Suvi left immediately

The living room was being rearranged by a few women rolling out dhurries and placing water bottles in the corner

"Aabha bhabhi dholki kiske yaha se laani hai bhaiya ka phone hai"

Suvi found the girls giggling at a small boy and gently told them she will do their hair

One was too shy to look at her, Sulekha stood up anda sked "Aapko French braid karna aata hai?"

Suvi nodded eagerly...

Sulekha leaned back in approval

Suvi undid the braid gently and combed with caution

Neel appeared in the open doorway carrying a Adidas tote bag

"DADEEE MUKHYA MANTREEE" sunanda squealed

He began to smile mischievously... but froze upon seeing Suvi by the door










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Posted: 8 years ago
Whats the meaning of the last line???
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Posted: 8 years ago
A double bonanza to start the day off !
and cherry on the cake an unexpected ID update with my name in the first line too 😳

Nisha..where were you all these past years ?! you perk our days up in the most wondrous way !!

What a contrast in the prep for mehendi in both homes...I can literally smell the pooris being fried ( with Aliya Bhatt popping over every other second checking...what a great touch of writing there !! ) and visualise all the ladies milling around with hundreds of household chores.
Sau gaadi shaadi main !! looks like a biggish wedding for our dear Suvi 😳

🤗 🤗
Edited by VeeIyer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Must b nihar with Neel so he froze seeing suvi
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Posted: 8 years ago
A woman rolled the wheat flour discs on the floor and threw them elegantly on to a Navbharat Times spread on the floor a old rusty tent house pedestal ceiling fan helped keep the woman cool

Flipping the edge of the newspaper up causing Alia Bhatt to make magical appearance

The kitchen smelled like jeera and heeng

Squeezing water from saree etc

It feels home.

Reminds me of good old days in childhood.

Thank you Nisha.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: charlie1950

Must b nihar with Neel so he froze seeing suvi



Or he might have frozen at sight of his beautiful soon to be wife 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry for being MIA this week. A bit of a mixed week on many fronts. Joys and sorrows overlapping each other. While we celebrated our house warming with a lot of family around, Mom in law is going thru a bit of a health concern that's kind of numbed me and has left me blank at y nature of its unconventionality ... while I'm grateful for all the support I have from my immediate family. Hats off to the gem of a lady for her AMAZING GRIT AND POSITIVITY.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kalpana the like is for the grit and positivity of your MAIL. Wishing her a speedy recovery. May her grit and positivity spread to all around her .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Congratulations on the new house Kalpana.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I did not realize ... I don't know when that ball in my throat decide to give way to tears reading Guptapaney Asha ... I think when Neels mom..., the lady radiant with wisdom in her quiet dignified way assures suvi that some dreams are just that ... just dreams ... it just kind of overwhelmed me...
Amma's character has grown on me and I don't know if it's this moment ... situation or what ... I've been drawing so much in terms of similarity of her personality to my MIL right down to the statistic of the ladies teaching the children at school. Even the nature of the complication she is going thro now has a bit of history in an accident that happened during a lab experiment with her students some 50 odd yrs bk.

Sorry I keep coming bk to it...
A beauty of an update as vani mentioned... I couldn't even bring myself to record my appreciation for the emotions Nisha drew out with that kind of writing.

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