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Posted: 8 years ago
Thia update's last line too have a bomb getting ready to explode...😔
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Simple pleasures seem hard to comeby for Suvi...i was almost choking when she hears the DPS Principal congratulate her and now this series of poignant calls from Amma, Ruchi and Neel.
Very beautifully crafted.

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Posted: 8 years ago
"Bus ek tareeqe ki nahi hoti khushi Suvechha" he said confidently
Wow this indeed Is deep. Fantastic NISHA.
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Posted: 8 years ago

"TV serial jaisa shirt mein button bhi maangne ka kya?" she laughed hysterically

Husky... throaty... enjoying herself""


Oh I love this BAROBAR 👏 😆 . Instantly draws a chuckle out amidst the heavy air surrounding the convo they just had.

On expectations and needs ,what would any individual's expectation or needs be , both of the man and the woman from matrimony. I would assume , be committed and loyal, spend time together, take care of each other and communicate with the other. I understand that these would be the most basic needs

Of course there would be other expectations , realistic and unrealistic, intrinsic for ex... like wish I get a hug now or it would be bliss if I get a foot massage from him now ... it's been such a kind of a day...and then some silly and ... not so silly ones like the button one above 😆 and not all of these needs do the duffer spouse realize to meet at all times ... so you put out out your need that moment which a good spouse then meets but as long as there's an effort made by the man to seek and understand one's expectations like what Neel did and as long as there's an effort by the woman to help the man seeking understand that ... it's good because then the basic expectations are met.

Neel's experience of basic expectation from his marriage to Nupur was met which has shaped him to believe that there's another original out there for him and suvi' experience with Rutwik ...because her simple basic needs were not met leads her to be skeptical making her want to give herself six months in the corner of mind if things don't work out ...

Nisha you have been churning out belter of updates 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: VeeIyer

<font color="#0000ff">"I dont expect, I dont expect others to expect" she said quietly</font>

Poignant line of the day

And Nihar standing half awake at the door is 'earth calling' for Neel !!

These two have so many hurdles to cross constantly that I wonder how much they would have to invest in each other to seek some kind of happiness.

Please don't stack the cards too high for them Nisha ! It breaks my heart to read of their constant battles😭



Nihar standing half awake at the door being earth calling to Neel. That was brilliant vani. 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: moonwearer

<font size="3">Simple pleasures seem hard to comeby for Suvi...i was almost choking when she hears the DPS Principal congratulate her and now this series of poignant calls from Amma, Ruchi and Neel.</font>

<font size="3">Very beautifully crafted.
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Sri I was thinking as I read that that would have had an impact on you. The series of poignant calls hits home. So well put
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was, poignant, deep, heavy , pregnant and light ... everything rolled in one single update as we all felt. Loved reading all the reviews. 👏

Good day and Evening all
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shaadi ani saree

Neel was at the airport to receive her. She was extremely self conscious, thinking everyone at the airport knew she was dumped by her cheating husband and now she was rushing to tie the knot with another man
She turned around and gazed at the crowds in all direction

"Hum idhar hain" Neel texted

She looked at her phone and then straight up

She smiled nervously

Aadhya was delirious

"Nihaad kidhad hey?" she asked eagerly

"Woh ghar par hain" he smiled warmly

Another man crept up to them, Suvi looked on nervously

It was Saksham

He was skinny and tall, with lots of hair

"Welcome" he smiled trying to do a "Hi!" a "Namaste" and trying to be modern to shake hands


Suvi was petrified she did her namaste as her mouth dried up

She wasnt sure what she would say to him

"Hindi baat kar leti hain na aap?" Saksham enquired

"Means.. mere ku Neel jaisa pakka Hindi bolne ko nahi hota" she stuttered

Saksham stared shocked

"Sorry" Suvi clarified

"Arey aap to bahut achhi Hindi bol leti hain, Mumbai ki hain, hum to mazaak kar rahe the" he laughed nervously wiping his own brow sweat

It was a muggy 44C in Mumbai

"Bus do suitcase?" Neel asked

Suvi nodded

"Arey aap inko yaha se dilaayen dheron saadiyan" Saksham patted Neel's back

Neel nodded sincerely

"Mereku idea nai tha" Suvi said

"Shaadi ka idea nahi tha ya SAREE ka" Saksham roared with laughter

Suvi giggled and nodded

"She writes copy for ads. Bhayya uve stolen her thunder" Neel warned

"Chalen ghar?" Saksham offered

"Neel" Suvi stuttered

"Hmm?"

"Mereko hotel" she whispered

"Arey bilqul nahi ghar rahengi aap hamare saath. Neel Worli apni Amma ke saath, Ruchi aa chukin hain, humne unke husband ko kaha, woh last minute mein zara vyast ho gaye" Saksham lied

Suvi nodded

They got to Saksham's Toyota Corolla

"New caad hey?" Aadhya enquired

"Aaadu" Suvi hissed

"Haan bhai aapne to ekdum jaan liya" Saksham smiled

"Mede ko golden color favreet hey" Aadhya touched the gleaming metal

Suvi quickly pulled her hand down

"Arey bache ko bachi rehne dein aap" Saksham scolded

"Aap Amma jaise keh raey hey" Suvi smiled

"Haan bhai Amma bua jo thehri hamari" Saksham, turned the AC on full blast

The car smelled like some flower... clean and spotless

"Hamari betiyon ki kitaaben hongi pichhe" Saksham peered

"No its clean" Suvi nodded

"Woh dono uchhal rahin hain" he smiled

Neel sat down by Saksham
"Amma doodh ka keh rahin hain" Neel said

"Haan woh corner se le lenge" he nodded

"Aai aamhi aata yethe rahatila?" (will we live here now?) Aadhya savored the beatiful car and the company

"Nakko shakkara" Suvi whispered

"mala hey kaka avadat" (i like this uncle)

"Aur hum?" Neel pretended to be sad

Aadhya was shy, she hid under Suvi's dupatta

"Mee nihaad aavdathey... maajhi aayi vichaaru...tee kadachit apalyala avadatila" (I like Nihar, check with my Mom maybe she likes you?) Aadhya said firmly

Suvi dissolved into millions of drops of shy crystals

Saksham was laughing heartily

"Suvechha?" Neel called her name for the first time in Mumbai











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Posted: 8 years ago
Sweet update. Absolutely loved it.
Aadhya was the best

Nisha, hope All is well at your end?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the update Nisha !
Just posted on SOSY page this morning enquiring about you and your whereabouts 😊
Hope all is well with you and your boys...

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