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VeeIyer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

Kalpana !! great minds etc etc

I also had this vision of tai walking into a 'devaa' scene and actually the Hindi hero entry had me grinning too !! 😆

and it was a tee and a towel...in my hurry to read, i read it as teatowel 😃

the 'devaa' can be followed now by "ishhh" and "agah bai "...'kharach" !!!

* all exclamations in marathi !!

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charlie1950

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

Neel even suvi thinks u symbolize brutal torture .the things u do to her and make her tremble under u what do u think it is pure bliss nopes with no release its the worst torture a woman endures.well it seems u both r waiting for wedding b4 u both give in to each other just like ll and r&b

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VeeIyer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#483

HI Nisha,

Note that the last two updates have long gaps in between.

Hope no health issues are plaguing you and bringing you down. In any case, whether it is health, work, kids or any other form of concern, please do share in the forum to set our hearts at rest.

A bit of ranting, venting and drumming of heels has always been the greatest therapy for the daily mountains that we have no choice but to climb !!

I speak on behalf of each and every one of your readers as Iam sure they all concur with what I have said 😊

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namratha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Was on a catch-up spree for both sosy and indradanush

I like the name indradanush suits the story so well...a rainbow of emotions and a site/story to behold.

I like the easy camaraderie and understanding that suveccha and neel share. It's like they have built a world of their own and its like a cozy home they have found in each other.

The way he walks into her house to visit at the end of a stressful day is such a loud symbol that she gives him that serenity.

And whatever may come their way they look like they can understand each other well and can express without too much fuss.

I see a lot of different roles that suvi is playing

She is the center of this story in my head and unlike other stories where the both the leads find a balanced place here I find neel as a character in suvi's story, it's a welcome change.

She wants not just neel but a family, another kid and a friend like husband.

I see that for her this marriage means a lot more than what it means to neel.

Bihar looks like a matured kind carrying his matured head and being a kid at the same time. I like him and shows how neel is a clear thinker in the way his son has learnt it all from him.

It's moving fast and I like the pace.

And talking about all other characters, each of them is closely similar to those we find in everyday life. And as usual nisha writes it like she has seen these people move around her.

And that's that

I felt a lot but I couldnt word all of it...some things are good kept in and reflected upon.

Great work yet again nisha

I like suveccha

She isnt heroic but she is strong and frank and openly expressive when it comes to things that bother her.

Love

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Srividya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Hey Nams welcome back ...the story gets a new hue with your review.

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VeeIyer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#486

Hoi !!!! Eid ka chand dikh gayi !!

Namratha Shree 😳😳😳

Hope this is going to be a reasonably regular feature as your reviews and analogies have always been a joy to read !!

Anddd...one more on Suvi's side of the ring !!!!

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namratha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: VeeIyer
Hoi !!!! Eid ka chand dikh gayi !!
Namratha Shree 😳😳😳
Hope this is going to be a reasonably regular feature as your reviews and analogies have always been a joy to read !!
Anddd...one more on Suvi's side of the ring !!!!

isnt it quite obvious V

ive signed up the membership for your side of the party for a lifetime.

aap jao election lado...ham aapke karyakarta sada raheenge

SV thanks for the welcome 😊

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VeeIyer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: NSB7

isnt it quite obvious V
ive signed up the membership for your side of the party for a lifetime.
aap jao election lado...ham aapke karyakarta sada raheenge

SV thanks for the welcome 😊

woh tho mujhe pata hai 😃

not election lado'ing...that is too rich for my blood !!

lekin you being on my side of the ring is a 'given' 😳

Sorry for the gushing ladies ! but we are part of a mutual admiraton society 😃

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Nisha0604

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Posted: 9 years ago

#489

OK I thought summer would be relaxed and quiet and I can write more
Its just the OPPOSITE

Its KWA----ZZEEE

So tonight I am going to write a chapter of each just to feel like old times