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Posted: 9 years ago
Baarish & Bathroom

She stepped out of the shower on Wednesday evening, it was raining hard outside
She had dropped Aadhya off at kanika's
The whole day weather was muggy and intolerable

Delhi was different from Mumbai

In SO many ways...

She scrubbed her face in the bath sink and looked up
Rain drops slammed against the "push out" window glass, anchored to the frame with a hook

The glass was fristed and blue, bluish water dripped off the edges, or so it seemed like to her in twilight

She knew Tai was watching TV in the living room

Varsha had hung up soon after Suvi had demanded she be "happy"

It seemed as if given a choice between hanging up and being happy Varsha chose hanging up

Suvi had texted her Wed morning to ask "If there is something, will you come?"

She didnt use the word "wedding" but meant it

She was unable to use it at this time

After Mamiji's call there was no news from the Pandits or the Pants
Neel too had been spending a lot of time at the "PR" arm of the agency

Suvi had dialed down on sending and receiving comic strips the last few weeks
After the rainy Sunday meeting with Nihar and how he had asked her "So are u going to marry my Dad?" he had asked

"I dont know... Nihar... not yet" she had been honest, like she always was

He didnt like that answer

Suvi hoped he didnt like because he wanted to hear say "YES YES YES NIHAR I DO WANT TO MARRY HIM"

But she knew better!!

The kid didnt deflate because he craved for the union, he was distraught because he feared such a union was a distinct possibility

"Will you live in NOIDA after that?" he asked looking at her eyes

She couldnt conceal the sparkle in her eyes, when she had thought of that "Umm... IF it happens then I am thinking yes" she said cautiously

He shifted uncomfortably, and then picked up his water and drank, thirstlessly

"Can we go home now" he said as if he no longer wished to pursue the train of conversation

"Finish nai karega?" she asked

"No... sorry" he said politely, looking at her a tad bit nervously

"Koi baat nai... adhaya bhi barobar nai khata hai" she said

He chuckled "U said that like she is a boy" he smiled

"U have to teach me Hindi" she smiled

"If u marry him?" he asked akwardly

"U wont otherwise?" she asked softly

He didnt respond to that... just pushed his chair back and stood up

And handed her her purse as she picked up change from between the black folder

She had dropped him off at the gate, watched him go in and had gone off

She didnt have the courage to go in and meet the family... again

They would all be hopeful, as if she possessed a magic wand and somehow magically obtained Nihar's affirmation

Or who knows they were all praying she would say she didnt want to marry him anyway

It was too surreal for her... she imagined extreme behaviors just to tell herself not to get carried away

She opened the bathroom door as steam coated the mirror

She walked out like a Hindi hero walking into a villain's den

With steam all around her form

She wore a tee and had a towel wrapped around her head

There was no Aadhya on the bed... she realized she was at Kanika's

She didnt hear the TV she tip toed to the living room and peeked out and found NEEL
Walking in... the front door wide open

She slammed against the bedroom door, swearing as her back hit the wood

He heard her and walked right in

"Devaaa" she whispered

"Its Neel" he said freezing a foot or two from her

She chuckled at the bad joke

"Waise Maharashtra mein "Deyo" both popular hai she said with a thick accent

Naam badal lein phir?" he asked for her opinion

She smiled... Nahi" she said softly

He proprietorially walked up and hugged her and inhaled her neck

"Itni baarish mein nahane se sardi ho jaati hai humne suna hai" he said

"Baarish mein nai nahayi mai, bathroom mein" she laughed hysterically

He let her laugh at him fully and kissed her fully

Finally taking her to the bed

And laying her down, exploring her upper torso rolling her tee up

"Every part of you is as juicy as your goddamn lips" he groaned on her lips

His palm cupping her curves

She nodded like a drugged puppy

He rubbed and caressed and squeezed and watch her slip into sedation, only speaking in moans eventually

"Yaha kaise?" she asked finally...

"Kaam se laut rahe they, socha aapse mil liya jaaye" "Aapko to yaad aati nahi hogi"

"Ek baar aayi yaad" she smiled

He kissed her...
"Suvechha you symbolize brutal torture" he said gruffly, as he lay on her trembling controlling himself with heated urgency


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Posted: 9 years ago
Absolutely sizzling update Nisha!!! ☺️
I am very happy to see that Suvi has remained her cautious, sober self and doesn't expect Nihar to accept the changes coming without any concerns. Has Suvi spoken to Aadhya? Does Tai know now? Did she leave because Neel walked in? I really think Tai needs to go stay with Varsha, you know to "help her." 😆

Neel--she remembers you, don't you worry. And if she calls you Devaa accidentally, If I were you, I wouldn't hold it against her->its a compliment!🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nisha, hope all well?

Thank you. An awesome update. Answered lot of questions.

And and I thank you again for creating space whereby I have met incredible people. Never imagined an online forum will give me someone like SVM and NeelAsma.

Thank you SVM. You are indeed special.

Edited by PriteeMisra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

"Itni baarish mein nahane se sardi ho jaati hai humne suna hai" he said

"Baarish mein nai nahayi mai, bathroom mein" she laughed hysterically
😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Noufi, heartiest Congratulations. Have a Blessed Life.
Edited by PriteeMisra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I had refreshed my page just about a million times till I left home at 10.45 to take my amma to the dentist . Lo and behold ! Pritee texts at 11.29...ID 65 says her text ...can't read as Iam holding amma's hand at the dentist's chair 😃
And what a lovely one I come back to. Though the intervals between updates are tough and seem impossibly long, Nisha more than makes up when her pod turns green !!!

Nisha...Love the way you go back to situations that have been left with a question mark...Suvi's and Nihar's conversation... touching and heartrending from both sides ...hope in Suvi's heart and trepidation in Nihar's...beautifully put Nisha !

And of course, the long awaited meeting between N & S...sizzling and ardent...We are so used to II & R&B making out endlessly, so this was a brief hawa ka jhoka 😳

Here's to the breeze turning into a gale of stormlike proportions !!!!


Edited by VeeIyer - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome sizzling update
They so good together
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Posted: 9 years ago
I dont get it is Nihar happy or not or wht i got is he is still double minded...
And yes i dont care wether varsha come or not...period

And whenever these two r together they ate just awesome and so much in love...
Lovely nisha
Waiting for more nisha
👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
"Rain drops slammed against the "push out" window glass, anchored to the frame with a hook
The glass was fristed and blue, bluish water dripped off the edges, or so it seemed like to her in twilight"

Aaj blue hai paani paani paani ... What say Girls 😳 ...amazing scene setting girls... God !!never thought yo yo Singh will pop in my head but he did but hey ! What the heck 😆 .

My craziness doesn't end here... Again this setting below had me rolling this morning...
"She opened the bathroom door as steam coated the mirror... walked out like a Hindi hero walking into a villain's den...With steam all around her form..."

God... This is insanely funny!! Hero coming to the villains den all smoke and steam
😆 😆 ... Could literally hear the Mission impossible theme music of kabali and the James Bond
Da da tadang ... Music in my ears 😆
With only her tee tiptoeing to the living room ... Ha ha and comes in her Man... What an entry... 👏
But one kostin pleej... Did he atleast manage to kick the bedroom door shut... Suvi calling out Deva was fine but we don't want tai fainting muttering or shrieking 'Deva ' here... Okie... I better stop my imagination is also extreme...

Talking of which... Some things felt heavy too...
Suvi asking Varsha if something happens will she come and not voicing aloud the word wedding... Or her surreal imagination of extreme behaviors telling herself not to get carried away ... Was just too tugging at my heart ... Goes on to show how jittery she is with all the events that are unfolding...

Suvi taking a rain check on the doodles and comic strip exchanges with Nihar... So thoughtful and suvi like of not crowding on him and probably giving the space that kid could need with all the things flying around them like darts now...Soon enough she will be holding the Magic wand that's special to Nihar and his affirmation for the new relations ... That's my hope.
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Posted: 9 years ago
"Suvechha you symbolize brutal torture" he said gruffly,"

NISHA!! You symbolize TORTURE now for all us readers...with one in TWO DAYS OF LATE
😃 .

Thank you for the update that was a welcome shower somewhat like the rain in the update. Relief#!!
Edited by Errantnomad - 9 years ago

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