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"The Chase"

Act 1 Scene 1

He grinned at himself as he checks him last time on the mirror. Today was Angad khanna's with the love of his life Kripa Sharma no soon-to-be Kripa khanna. It was hard for him to imagine falling for Kripa Sharma despite all the lovely and hot girls in his college. There was something in her that attracted him; she was his type of woman.

She hated him because they were sworn enemies from the start of school year despite being family friends. It was like a dream come true for his and her family when Angad suddenly announced his love for Kripa. She couldn't even refuse especially when he had created such circumstances for her. He felt guilty but part of him being was selfish and greedy to get her. No one could have her except Angad Khanna. He was sure that he could make her fall in love with her after their marriage. After all who could avoid Angad khanna? He has its own ways and charms to work with woman as if he was "Woman administrator." He was surprised when Kripa agreed so easily to his offer, he expected her to argue or run away but she simply smiled and agreed with the proposal. At some point, he is sure that she was planning a way to get him back? Kripa Sharma would never back away when It come to him.

Come on, Angad get ready for your night! He thought. He was dressed in silver and white sherwani simply looking stunning and hot. He was sure girls would go crazy over him but he only wanted her. He sighed only if she was in love with him.

Act 1 scene 2

The wedding hall was decorated with various different traditional decorations. It simply looked outstanding as many objects were un- identified yet beautiful, showing how much the wedding means to both families.

The both families belong to upper-class and were involved in their private Company. Their company held 75% shares of the market showing their passion for the business. It was impossible for every competitor to win them. People simply envied their great relation and lugubriousness as they had nothing to worry about. Some dreamt of working with them as it was their own chance to improve their career.

In the middle of hall, was the beautifully decorated mandap with various roses mainly red and white giving the theme of love and romance? Angad khanna has specially told the decorators especially to over all have the feeling of Love; he wanted it to be special for his soon going to be wife "Kripa khanna". He wanted to make it special and memorable for her that she won't forget this or regret her decision of marrying Angad khanna. Inside it was small wooden decorated square where there were few logs.

Soon the wedding hall was filled in with hundreds of people. People were waiting for the Groom first and then bride. Suddenly few gasp of girls, married women and even Grandmothers were heard as they watch Angad khanna enter hall followed by his family.

'Oh my, I wish I had him… she's so lucky to have him. Look he's looking Hot!'

Angad khanna heard girl's comment and smirked. He was simply looking dashing, handsome. He was wearing maroon sherwani which had golden works on it. On top of that he was wearing a crme scarf (Duppatta?) that hung on his neck. He wore the traditional groom cap (I don't know what it has called!). He on purpose didn't wear Sehra because he heard Kripa saying to her friends, "they simply to hide their embarrassment and it looked simply hideous on men!" He sat down on his place and waited for his love.

Act one Scene 3

Pundit: Call the bride, the time's running out.

Angad's face showed worried, what if she ran away? He forced her but then decided she won't do that as she won't let their families down. Deep down, there was a fear of losing her.

Boy: Is she Kripa or an Angel? She's so beautiful!

Angad heard it and smiled and concluded it was his Kripa. He turned his head round and felt his heart beat stop, his mouth opened showing that he was greedy for her, her love. In front of him, stood a beautiful sight;

Kripa Sharma entered the hall with her friends beside and her mother on one end. She was wearing a beautiful, striking red lengha that had heavily golden works on it. It was simply stunning yet attractive and appealing to the men. She was heavily loaded with gold jewellery. She smiled.

Angad saw it and felt his heart tear. She was simply putting a plastic smile. As Kripa sat next beside him he once again took a glance and saw it again. Her eyes were beautiful but simply showed no emotion as if it's dead. Was he doing all right to her? He wondered. No, he decided but later on he'll keep her happy and makes sure she is in love with him. He knew she'll love him sooner or later on.

The pandit read As the pandit read the prayers, Angad khanna vowed to make her happy at any cost, give her freedom but at the same time love and pamper her to the most that she'll come to him. At one point, their hands touched when the pundit put garland on her hand. He felt her hands cold and simply gripped it. There was something wrong, he thought. They both stood up and did the seven rounds and finally Angad happily put the sindoor on her forehead and gave her the name of Mrs Kripa Angad khanna. He felt it again. May be he was just imagining he finally concluded.

Act one Scene 4

After finishing the many traditions Angad cursed the man who invents all those traditions. He wasn't being rude; it was his impatient heart that wanted to go to her. He was simply irritated and annoyed. Some laughed at him and finally pushed him to his room, "their" room.

Angad entered the room and looked at Kripa, who beautiful sat at the middle of his bed. His room was decorated red and white. She was sitting on red rose petals that were beautifully laid on his bed. Angad sighed, he couldn't wait any longer. He made sure the door was closed.

Angad sat beside the bed and looked at her although her face covered as she had pulled the duppatta bit down. May be she's shy he grinned at the thought.

Angad (softly): Kripa, I know I forced you to marry me but I couldn't help it. I didn't know how it happened but it did, we were enemies from our school but we didn't try to make step to clear our misunderstanding but instead went for deeper hatred towards you. When ever I fought with you, it does me anger me but I also realized I felt closer, comfortable with you. You are everything, smart, clever, attractive and at the same time you act like child (he laughs). Whatever you are Kripa I am in love with you, it's you I want to be with. You are the woman I have been looking for, it's is as you are "only" made for me.

He looks at her to see some reply but no response. Angad: Well am I the one who's going to say all?

He then understood she was bride after all. He slowly removed the duppatta of her face and her eyes looks up at him, she was smiling.

Kripa: Oh Angad, you don't know what you have given me today. I fell in love with you the very moment I saw you.

Angad feels the happiest person in the world but the happiness doesn't reach his heart. He looked at her seductively. He hugs her tightly. As her body presses on his chest, he felt her heavy? May be it's because of the jewellery she's wearing. He looked confused.

He slowly pulled her away and started raining kissing all over her face. Again he felt the same nevertheless he concluded he wasn't feeling well but he wasn't going to ruin it for her. He laid her down and went on top of her.

Kripa: Angad…

Angad: (putting fingers on her lips) sssssshhhhh

His hands went back and came across her zip of the blouse. He slowly un-zipped her blouse not leaving her eyes for once. His hands lingered on her back as he presses his lips on her neck. His hands freeze when he felt something. He looked at her with a mixture of emotions swimming across his eyes.

Kripa looking at him: What happened?

Angad: Kripa do you trust me?

Kripa: more than myself?

Angad: Can I see your back? I mean what happened there.

Kripa (happily): sure!

Angad was lying on the bed when Kripa stood beside him on the floor. His eyes were watching her. His mouth fell open when Kripa unzipped her lengha and it fell on the floor, revealing her long legs. His eyes shone at her in amazement.

Angad muttered! Wonderful.

Kripa smiled at him as if nothing has happened.

Kripa then slowly took her blouse off. Angad immediately put his hands on his eyes when he realized what Kripa was doing. He was horrified! She's a woman! At the same moment he felt proud that she trusted him but that's too revealing!

Kripa: stop it!

Angad: stop what?

Kripa: that you're putting your hands on you eye. I don't mind!

He gulped in nervousness and slowly removed the hands from his eyes. He gasped. She was looking wonderful showing her slim body but she was wearing lingerie. He felt attracted towards her as he moved towards her. She stood there.

Angad scanned his eyes up and down again and again not believing what he was seeing in front of his eyes. A beauty! He thought. It was that easy for him. He turned her around to see her back but he froze there.

He knew it there was something wrong all along. It was not her. At the back, on her body was four screw drivers tightly fitted in to secure the cover.

Angad (horrified): you're a robot!

The robot angrily turned around: Don't call me that, I have a name!

Her eyes warmed again, she was programmed to love him! She looked at him,

Appearance: hot

Job: To make him his and have baby with him.

Eyes: brown

Kripa: I want to have my baby with you!

Angad looked at her in horror and walked backward. She moved towards him. Angad tried to push her back but her wig fell down. He wanted to scream she looked so horrifying to him. Then suddenly the tune came up playing from her,

yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana,deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana,aata hain mujhko pyaar main chaljaane,mushkil hain pyaare tera bachke jaane yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana,yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana, Dil woh jaahe jise, jaahe jise use paayapyaar woh yaar ke joh naam pe hin mitjaye-2jaane kyun badle main, jaan loon nazrana yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana,deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana, pal pal ek har chal, dil main ek tufaan hain,aane ko hain woh manzil jis ka mujhe armaan hain,-2bhool ka na tujhe dil ka yeh nagrana yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana,deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana,aata hain mujhko pyaar main chaljaane,mushkil hain pyaare tera bachke jaane, yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana,deewana deewana pyaar ka parwana,

Robot chased him all around trying to seduce him. 'I want to have a baby with you!.

Finally she got hold of him, she was too fast for him. He stopped to breathe. As he looked up, he realized what was happening, when her hands on his waist – he screamed at the top of his lungs!

Downstairs:

The Sharma and Khanna family sat together to share the happiness of their son and daughter. They were finally married. And when they heard scream of Angad, the khanna's were grinning as if we got the right bahu for Angad. Then the scream is heard again, the tension can be seen clearly on Mr and Mrs Sharma.

The room quietened again followed by more screams, tension were on each but they put fake a re-assuring smile. What were they be up to?

Coming up: What are they up to? And where's the real Kripa Sharma or khanna?

I hope you did enjoy the first part. Did I put any too revealing scenes which I think I didn't? You tell me! Did you guys expect the part like this? I don't have anything to say. Please comment!

The more you comment the more soon you'll get new part.

Love

sanya

Edited by *Izzy* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow another awesum story frm u.....just lov it..!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow wonderful stori is she reali a robot? wheres da real kripa 😃 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it sounds intresting!!!!!!!! PLEASE continue soon!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: virgo_gurl

Wow another awesum story frm u.....just lov it..!!

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