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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks a lot dear...
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Originally posted by: ameena671

wow wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.


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Episode3:

The episode begins with Kumud going to a room . its a grand room but seems like its not renovated since years . its dark inside ,


Kumud goes there and pulls the curtains away and sun rays fall on the huge machines kept there and a lady lying on bed (you can imagine her to be rajmata of Dekha Ek Khwaab)


Kumud says to her(with a smile): dadisa , chacha ji and chachi ji permitted me to go to collage , now i can fulfill maa baujis dream for me to become a doctor


(and now sadly), i don't know what was your dream for me, you know na how much i was afraid of you and then you became like this , please get well soon , promise now i'll surely talk to you please.


The lady is shown and screen freezes on her face . the voice says" rajmata , she used to be a tiger when she was well but one day she got the news of her son and daughter in law's death in an accident along with her granddaughter kumudeshw... no , no sorry Kumud when Kumud was 3 years old . you would be thinking that Kumud is alive , this was the trick of choti rani (Kumud's chachi) when she got to know that maharaja , maharani died but Kumud is alive and so rajmata went into coma, from that time she' s in coma and Kumud only takes care of her." The screen starts and Kumud says : now , i should prepare for collage . Kumud goes .

Ishani reaches Mumbai and into the collage hostel area , falguni and harshad have already taken a room for her in the hostel on the 1 st floor . ishani is trying to pull her bag in stairs when a helping hand joins her. She turns , its a boy (you can imagine him to be shikhar of meri ashiqui tum se hi , arjun bijlani))

the screen freezes on his face . the voice says' nishant , i don't know much about him as he's not from rajparivar but yes i know that he is a person good at heart and is from a rich family ."

The screen starts and

Ishani says: thanks

Nishant : no need , i am also going in the hostel only so friends .

He raises his hand to shake hands but doesn't see when ishani 's bag falls down as he left it .

He bites his lips and runs down saying :sorry , sorry , sorry , sorry...

Firstly ishani gives him a fake angry look and then smile and shakes hand with him. They talk and tell each other about their life and background.



Next day :

The day starts with the voice saying " i don't know what happens when two hearts meet but you'll surely get to know what happens when two mischievous minds meet.

The scene then shifts to rajmahal and aniket is talking to somebody on phone . the screen freezes on his face and the voice says" aniket , rajkumar aniket , he s not bad at heart but doesn't like Kumud due to the reason that despite of him being the elder son of the family, rajmata in her will has specified that Kumud is the yuvrani as she's the daughter of maharaj and aniket is the son of chote raja ,so lets see what they are planning" (you can imagine him to be ranvijay of veere). He talks on phone : first day of collage new comers and new enjoyment , lets see to what extend our freshers can go.


He gets the reply from other side: we our rajkumar , we will do whatever we want.

Aniket : yeah.

And they both cut the call .

After some time :

Aniket , Kumud ,ishani and nishant come out of their respective rooms at same time .

In rajmahal;

Choti rani: Kumud , come back from collage on time . you have to do a lot of work .


Kumud complies .


Aniket leaves in his car again warning Kumud to stay away from him in collage and Kumud leaves in an auto.

ishani and nishant go to the corridor together.

After some time :

Aniket reaches the collage first and gives a hi'fi to a boy there and the screen freezes on the boys face and the voice says " yuvraj saraswatichandra , as we say rich spoilt brat , he is the only son of his parents and lives life to its fullest , he's good at heart but doesn't show anybody as he feels that a yuvraj should be strict "


then the screen starts and saras says to a boy passing by(angrily) : i am your senior , you will have do whatever i want .


The boy looks like a bhegi bhili (wet cat) in the starting itself and agrees instantly.

Saras : so dance .

And he plays the song dance basanti..."

Till that time many students have accumulated to see the scenario and in between them is a shivering kumud .

The boy dances as he's really afraid and everyone laugh at him.

ishani and nishant are at a distance . they also see it.

Ishani (angrily) : how dare him, such heartless people exist now also, see how all are laughing at that boy and he doesn't care .

She's about to go to stop it but nishant stops her showing fake shivering and saying : please don't go or they'll rag you also , see how gunda type they are.

Ishani turns to make him understand and in between kumud tries to leave for class as the bell rang while she's still shivering but unfortunately saras sees her . the episode ends on saras eying her angrily.


Edited by Piyaliiii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
very nice update...
gud gng...
well writtenšŸ‘šŸ‘
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Rajmata was told a lie by chachi that along with her parents Kumud also died n since then she is in coma.so sad.Kumud talking 2 her was touchy as she shares everything with her dadisa tho she doesnt respond.Ishani Nishant becoming friends was sweet.waiting 4 Ranveer's entry.So Aniket is jealous of Kumud as Rajmata wants her 2 b yuvrani ignoring him.Hope he will accept his sis.Saras' avtar as a brat is so diff.He is ragging juniors.He saw Kumud.Will he rag Kumud?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
nice chapter
so ishani has found herself a new friend
funny scene when nishant dropped ishanis bag
hope kumuds brother warms upto her later
oh no n now she has caught saras attention hope he doesn't start bullying our poor kumud
thinking maybe kumud will make friends with ishani n nishant then they can join forces against Aniket n saras
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hmm...So thats Kumud's story!!!Basically a Damsel in Distress waiting for Knight in Shining Armor...lets see how Saras will save her and how ishaani helps her!!!But Saras is gng to rag her at d very first meeting!!!!Ishaani and Nishant became friends!!!Would love to see how their fndship grows up!!!!Thanks for d PM...Update soon!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start..
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update...šŸ‘šŸ¼...Saras is a senior and is ragging all the freshers...😔...Ishani is angry and tries to stop him but Nishant tells her to leave it......Saras sees Kumud going and is angry...😲...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...

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