ISHMUD (DIL KI DOR ) WITH SAMUD AND ISHVEER - Page 46

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aanahat

No saras kumud scn 😭
Updt aacha tha but saras kumid chahiye


sorry dii...many scenes coming in some days...thanks for reading...Love you..be happy...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome udpate..
welcome back dear..
hope ur xams gone well
continue soon


they were good dii...now worried for result...thanks for the comment...Love you...be happy...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .Piyali..


sorry dii...many scenes coming in some days...thanks for reading...Love you..be happy...😃

I m in waiting mode😃
Jaldi krna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 35:

IshMud reached hostel and entered their rooms...they both were tired by all the activities of the day and so immediately changed up and got into their beds...Kumud smiled as she remembered the events of the day and thought : thanks for this day god...

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she soon fell asleep while Ishani wasn't able to sleep...though she was tired...she got up and sat on the bed eyeing a sleeping Kumud and thought smiling : my cute angel looks more cute while sleeping...

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she then got back and again tried to sleep...this time too she wasn't able to... ok so let me try that old method..." Ishani thought as she started doing counting" 1...2...3...4...5...20...35" she soon fell asleep ...

A boy is seen...he is standing in the middle of a garden while fog is all around him...his backside is only seen ...its night...yet we can see his leather jacket and blue jeans...he turns and only his eyes are seen as a dim light is falling on his eyes...a girl standing far away was eyeing him...hre face could not be seen...

Ishani woke up from the dream while the eyes occupied her mind...she was sweating and continuously thinking about those eyes..." who was he???" Ishani asked herself sitting up and taking a glass of water kept at side table...she was confused when she saw a blank sheet kept on the side table...she didn't knew when she had that paper in her hands with a pencil...soon she started drawing something...maybe those intense eyes...


Ranveer was usual to sleeping late so he was busy playing games on his smartphone relaxing on his bed when suddenly cool breeze from the open window hit his face...his face turned towards the window and he kept the phone on the bed moving towards the window...he leaned towards the window and enjoyed the cool breeze for quite some time...then suddenly he saw something unusual...a girl was banging the door of his car which was parked in the parking area which was clearly visible from Ranveer's room...he was shocked and eyed the girl from quite some time..." Ishu...??" he automatically spoke seeing the girl...he closed his eyes in tension and thought " now this is a dream for sure..." he was really scared and praying that it turn out to be a dream and so after some time he opened one of his eye to see weather it was a dream...to his surprise , Ishani was gone...he was relieved as he opened both of his eyes and smiled remembering Ishani...

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He got an idea and ran towards his drawer...he took out a paper and a pencil and sat near the window pane..." i know...i know i am not good at drawing but let me try na..." he spoke looking towards the sky probably talking to his friend, GOD...

Ishani was an artist from childhood and used to love drawing and so she had a smile on her lips while she was drawing those eyes...

Ni ni sa sa ni ni sa sa
Ni ni sa sa ni ni sa sa
Ni sa ni sa ni sa ni sa
Ni sa ni sa ni sa ni sa

Ranveer too didn't knew when he started enjoying drawing what he was drawing and was smiling continuously while drawing it...

Ni ni sa sa ni ni sa sa
Ni ni sa sa ni ni sa sa
Ni sa ni sa ni sa ni sa
Ni sa ni sa ni sa ni sa

Ishani completed drawing one eye..." huh...good job Ishani...you are marvelous but whose eyes are these...???" Ishani asked herself totally confused as to whose eyes she was drawing...she was having her fingers on her lips thinking this...

Jisko dhoondhe baahar baahar
Woh baitha hai bheetar chhupke
Tere andar ek samandar
Kyun dhoondhe tubke tubke

Ranveer was drawing the face and thought " though Ishu gave this idea but really i don't know whom i'll end up drawing..." he smiles as he eyes the small details in the photo that he made till now...

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Jisko dhoondhe baahar baahar
Woh baitha hai bheetar chhupke
Tere andar ek samandar
Kyun dhoondhe tubke tubke

Ishani completed the drawing soon...she was eyeing the eyes...those eyes seemed to be so familiar yet she wasn't able to recognize whose eyes they were...she was eyeing it ...something in them attracted her...she was feeling like those eyes were calling her ...she stood up from bed taking that picture...still trying to get who he is...

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Akal ke parde peechhe kar de... ae..
Akal ke parde peechhe kar de
Ghoonghat ke pat khol re
Tohe piya... piya..
Tohe piya milenge, milenge, milenge..
Tohe piya milenge, milenge [Tohe piya milenge] milenge

Jisko dhoondhe baahar baahar
Woh baitha hai bheetar chhupke
Tere andar ek samandar
Kyun dhoondhe tubke tubke

Ranveer soon ended his drawing...he was shocked...never had he drawn anything in his life fearing that he was a horrible artist but seeing the pic , he couldn't even think that it was drawn by him...it had a girl in it...it seemed she would come alive...the portrait had such a potential..." Ishu...i seriously ended up drawing her..." Ranveer said totally amazed as he was already wondering about his sudden found new talent...


He smiled eyeing her and thought :i never knew you can look so pretty...

Akal ke parde peechhe kar de... ae..
Akal ke parde peechhe kar de
Ghoonghat ke pat khol re
Tohe piya milenge, piya milenge milenge
Tohe piya milenge, milenge, milenge..
Tohe piya milenge, milenge [Tohe piya milenge] mileng

Ishani stood up in the dim light of the moon holding the portrait...only she and that portrait were visible...the moonlight graced the eyes further making them look the most intense eyes in the world...seeing them a tune rang in Iishani's heart which was closed in the cage of her chest...

Sa.. sa sa sa sa ni ni sa sa ni ni sa sa
Re re sa sa re sa sa re sa sa ni ni sa
Ga ma pa pa ni sa re..
Sa re ga, sa re ga, sa re ga, sa re ga sa..
Ga ma pa ni re sa sa re sa sa re sa sa
Sa re ga re, sa re ga re, sa re ga re, sa re ga re sa
Pa ni sa re sa, pa ni sa re sa, pa ni sa re ga re re sa
Pa ni sa re re re re re re re
Aa.. dha ni dha pa ma ga dha pa dha ni sa
Dha ni, dha ni sa ma..

Ranveer was eyeing the portrait smiling but unknown the him the breeze outside took the shape of wind...high wind and the paper flied in the wind out of the window...Ranveer's heart sank seeing that fly away...he banged the door and ran out as fast as he could he climbed down the stairs and ran outside the palace...

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Paa ke khona, kho ke paana hota aaya re
Paa ke khona, kho ke paana hota aaya re
Sang saathi sa hai woh to
Woh hai saaya re
Sang saathi sa hai woh to
Woh hai saaya re
Dagaa tune ki na
Bas jee se jee mere yeh
Bole seene mein woh tere dheeme dheeme re

Tohe piya milenge, milenge, milenge [milenge..]
Tohe piya milenge, milenge [Tohe piya milenge..], milenge..

Ranveer was running for quite some time but couldn't get the poster...he was disheartened as it even fell out of his sight now...he sat on a bench in the palace's garden and soon a tear escaped his eyelid...


Something bumped into him from back...he turned and found the page fluttering over his hair...he held the paper...no need to tell that as soon as he saw it the smile came back running...he hugged it tightly" i won't let you got away..." he spoke hugging it feeling that he was hugging HIS ISHU ...

jisko dhoondhe baahar baahar
Woh baitha hai bheetar chhupke
Tere andar ek samandar
Kyun dhoondhe tubke tubke

Asad Allah mera hai, Il Allah
Asad Al Mohammad Rasool Allah

Dha ni sa sa ni dha pa ma re
Pa dha ni sa sa ni da..

Ishani was standing when the wind came to her too...taking the message of love send by Ranveer...she enjoyed the wind...in a different than usual way and was enjoying standing near the window pane with that paper when suddenly her hair came bumping into each other on her face...she closed her eyes due to this sudden change and the image of Ranveer came in her mind...she immediately opened her eyes..." Ranveer...???" she spoke totally shocked at her own discovery.


Jo hai dekha, wohi dekha to kya dekha hai
Jo hai dekha, wohi dekha to kya dekha hai
Dekho woh jo auron ne na kabhi dekha hai
Dekho woh jo auron ne na kabhi dekha hai
Nainon se na aisa kuchh dekha jo kahe
Naina meecho to woh sab dikh jaata hai
Tohe piya milenge, milenge, milenge [milenge..]
Tohe piya milenge, milenge [tohe piya milenge..], milenge..

" no...this can't be Ranveer ...he is so lovely and that Bandar(monkey) ...no...this can't be Ranveer..." she said as she hugged the image of eyes...though she refused to believe yet her heart had selected whom to love and whom she belonged to...

Usi ko paana, usi ko chhoona
Kahin pe woh na, kahin pe tu na
Usi ko paana, usi ko chhoona
Kahin pe woh na, kahin pe tu na
Jahan pe woh na wahaan pe soona
Yahaan pe soona..

Tohe piya milenge, piya milenge milenge
Tohe piya milenge, milenge, milenge..
Tohe piya milenge, milenge, milenge
Tohe piya milenge, milenge, milenge..
Tohe piya milenge, milenge [tohe piyaa milenge..]

Ranveer hugged HIS ISHU's portrait and HIS ISHU hugged his eyes's portrait...so intense was their love that their destines were connected just like their heart and soul were...

Edited by .Piyali.. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Aanahat

I m in waiting mode😃
Jaldi krna


Aww...enjoy IshVeer till then please...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Kumud starting part was so Nice.😊
Ishveer part was so Interesting. 😊
Ranveer draw the Portrait of Ishani,it was so Interesting.😊
Ishveer feeling towards each other was so Nice.😊
The Pics were so Nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaSweety-Anu

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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it but saras again missing!!
Ishveer se kam chla lia meine
Loved them
Ranveer made her pic!
Their romance was cute
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was again an AMAZING update. Every scene was well written. Again I really missed Samud...I hope a Samud scene is there in the next episode. Thanks for the pm and update the next part soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Ishani unable to sleep
Both ishani n ranveer draw each other
N r lost in each other's thoughts
Can't wait for them to meet face to face
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for pm 😛

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