ISHMUD (DIL KI DOR ) WITH SAMUD AND ISHVEER - Page 33

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Posted: 8 years ago
Your ff is not very nice but it's awesome. I like both kumud and Ishani. They both are good in their own ways. I like saras because he is so dedicated towards his love. I like nishant as he is an entertaining character and I like to read his parts. I don't like aniket because I don't think that he is a good brother and selfish in a way . I just hate Harsh...arey yaar use hamesha kabab mein haddi banne ki kya zarurat hai? Door nahin reh sakta Woh samud se?! I really don't have any idea of how will Ishani's truth of being a rajkumari will come out. I think samud must have met in the palace in their childhood. I grade your ff 5. I hate harsh's character in your ff. He is too irritating.
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It was a amazing part. I really have never thought that ishveer will meet in this way...it was a surprise for me. I think ishveer will have a love quadrilateral in their story! Their is nishant already present in the story who secretly loves Ishani and now you introduced aaliya. I am really eager to read your next part of the story, so update the next part soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww...RanVeer first meet is dramatic but superb...ZaYa's spl entry is superb..i think its Zain who kidnapped Aliya...Nd nw answers to d quiz... 1.Very nice...i njoy reading this ff... 2.Hugs for u for this beautoful writing...I am hooked from d start... 3.Kumud 4.I dont have any opinion abt d supporting characters,,...U stopped writing their scenes long back..so i am neutral.. 5.Nishant is a cool guy...he is a best fnd everyone will wish to have nd a good lover too.. 6.I dont like Aniket..he failed in his responsibilities as a brother.. 7.I dont like Harsh..he is kabab mein haddi for my SaMud from childhood,.. 8.I didnt think abt Ishani's identity revealation..so no guesses on that part... 9.SaMud first meet was in clg, I think...Saras was raggind d freshers nd Ishani helped Kumud then... 10.4.5 11..Harsh...for obvious reasons..the quiz is good!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Ishani mu ranveer thinking he was an accomplice to a kidnapping
Whilst he himself gets kidnapped by her lol
Both arguing so much they not watching road n crash
I'm thinking the guy on the bike n the girl r boyfriend and girlfriend
I'm thinking it was his plan to surprise her for date maybe propose
As for ur quiz
I like this story it's good
I like both ishani and kumud both like opposite sides of coin kumud is kinda shy quite type whilst ishani is loud n confident
As for other characters i like nishant because he's a good friend to girls n might give us a little jealousy track when ranveer comes
I m not so perticular about aniket because of what he has done in past to kumud maybe if he comes back n redeems himself somehow
As for harsh Ollie him because he's competition for Sara's n quite a funny guy
I hope ishani truth about being second princess comes out little later after we see her meeting ranveer again n having their cute fights maybe half way through Sara's wooing kumud back
Didn't Sara's n kumud meet when they were very very young if my mind remembers correctly from start Sara's thought of kumud as his n harsh was always his rival for her
I'll give this story so far a 4.5 as it's a really good storyline
Looking forward to story continuing
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful update dear
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago


Nice update
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing and Vibrant Update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dr
Episode of ishveer 😃 thanks for giving this beautiful chapter dr
Their first meet was awesome. I think zain only kidnapped aliya for surprise
Loved ishveer cute fyt. Love you dr. And for your polls i will reply you later
Keep smiling dr 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...so Ishveer met each other first when they were teenagers...😎...Aliya gets kidnapped by a man...😲...Ishani thinks that man is Ranveer's friend...🤣...she takes him along with her to find them...😛...then she comes to know that he's not that man's friend......but they keep going with their nok-jhok...😉😆...waiting to see how they save Aliya......


I think ur ff is really good...👍🏼...it's interesting...⭐️⭐️⭐️...I like Ishani more as her character is more entertaining...👏👏👏...yes I like Nishant as he's a great friend as I feel he truly loves Ishani......no don't like Harsh as he's a wicked guy...😒...I have no idea how Ishani's truth will come true...😕...but m truly looking forward to it......Samud first meeting, as far as I remember was when Saras rags Kumud...🤔...I will give a 4 to ur ff...😃...I hate that poor Nishant's love is a one-sided one...😭...and another is that Kumud is trusting that Harsh...😡...thank u 4 pm...😃...


AWWW...thanks a lot dear , really thanks a lot for the comment...well you went wrong with the answer of SaMud first meet...it never happened na...they were childhood friends...😛 Ok , It was a trick...I am sorry but thanks a lot for answering the Quiz...aww...don't worry the trust may break soon and alos Nishant may get love...😉😉 You see...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ritishna

Your ff is not very nice but it's awesome. I like both kumud and Ishani. They both are good in their own ways. I like saras because he is so dedicated towards his love. I like nishant as he is an entertaining character and I like to read his parts. I don't like aniket because I don't think that he is a good brother and selfish in a way . I just hate Harsh...arey yaar use hamesha kabab mein haddi banne ki kya zarurat hai? Door nahin reh sakta Woh samud se?! I really don't have any idea of how will Ishani's truth of being a rajkumari will come out. I think samud must have met in the palace in their childhood. I grade your ff 5. I hate harsh's character in your ff. He is too irritating.

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It was a amazing part. I really have never thought that ishveer will meet in this way...it was a surprise for me. I think ishveer will have a love quadrilateral in their story! Their is nishant already present in the story who secretly loves Ishani and now you introduced aaliya. I am really eager to read your next part of the story, so update the next part soon.


Thanks a lot for such a sweet comment dii...well right answer for SaMud first meet...thanks a lot for answering all the questions...well Harsh will be there for some time...thanks a lot again...Love you...be happy...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...loved it.
Thanks for pm & sry for late.

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