ISHMUD (DIL KI DOR ) WITH SAMUD AND ISHVEER - Page 25

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hy dr
Its awesome
Love your ff dr
Now ishani and saras gonna be friends
Update soon dr
And pm me when you update
Keep smiling
Take care 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Payal
I came to know about your work by Jasmine
its really love to read
another good story of my favorite couple Ishveer
keep updating
lovely work by youšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago
I recently joined India forums. I read your ff and it is truly awesome .😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
WOW!! nice update dear...loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful long update
thanks for the pm...





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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...loved how Ishmud were playong and teasing each other...Waiting 4 the next update...Thank u 4 pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice story
Can you please pm me when you update
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Posted: 8 years ago

So coming to the episode:

The episode starts with Saras and Ishani standing while Ishani says : saras...


She suddenly takes a bottle of water from her hand bag and gives it to him.

Saras tries to stop his tears and takes the bottle , he starts drinking the water and after that he says : Ishani... i am sorry... its just that tears flow from my eyes whenever i think of those times...

Ishani eyes him confused and says politely : why saras... what happened...???

Saras eyed her with tears while he starts : i , Kumudini and harsh used to be best friends , actually i and harsh used to like her but her nature was as if every person she meets is her best friend ...(he paused as he remembers some memories of the three of them playing and then continues) she used to be a normal girl though being a princess , i never saw that attitude in her eyes which i used to see in other princesses eyes and that was the reason i fell for her cute , innocent and lovely actions... she was a rebellious girl ... but with a dignity to share her views...( Ishani smiled as she remembered that she's totally opposite , what her neighbors used to tell about Ishani that she is so sweet but always a shaitan she always points out the wrong but if the person who did wrong is not taken from her eyesight , it would result in dangerous situation of that person)

At one side on the screen small Ishani is seen taking a water gun behind a boy while saying : i'll not leave you teased my friend, i'll not leave you

While the other side we see small Kumud saying to her father : bauji , the mistake was of sheena , she pushed priya... and i only stopped priya from pushing her back but sheena should be punished na????????

Saras continues : we grew up happily playing ... while i and harsh never used to do anything except for fight though we were great friends but we always fought for Kumudini... she never understood it... and one day it so happened that harsh needed to go to his region with his father and i also had to go with my family ... we both had to go at same time just next day to her birthday... i was really waiting for everything to sort out so that i can go back to Kumudini and play with her like before but destiny had some other plans for us... the next day itself i got to know the news of maharaja , maharani and Kumudini's death...i was broken ... my soul reason for being alive was snatched from me in 2 days... i never got in contact with harsh after that so i don't know how he felt...i was broken ... for 1 month i couldn't even gather hope to come out of my home... i always found her in all places so close to me but still so far from me... i started to hate god , he snatched my happiness , he only did it , i became of stone...i forgot to smile and only knew how to get angry... my anger became my solution to all my sadness ...it helped me to divert my mind...i came to be known as a bully ... and then we shifted to Mumbai ... i became just like that in Mumbai too and coming in contact with aniket and we both together... you know we both raged children... on the first day , when just like i did in my second year , i thought to rag children ... i saw her(he paused as he remembered how on Kumud's first day of collage he saw her eyes , fearful eyes trying to hide herself , he was lost in those eyes and those mesmerizing eyes just made him remember Kumudini)...

i tried to make myself believe that no one is like Kumudini but still my heart was pushing myself towards her and to get out of this feeling called her in between that crowd...wearing those heals she felt the pain of falling , the fear of getting hurt but my heart was killing me from inside... what i was doing with her was just killing me but i just couldn't stop because if i did that, i would betray my Kumudini , my heart told this to me( saras smiled as he thought how his heart felt Kumudini's presence but his mind refused) ...

i tried my best to ignore that face whose every feature reminded me of Kumudini , my Kumudini except for those fearful eyes just the opposite of my fearless Kumudini... i tried my best to make myself hate her, sometimes by telling myself how fearful person she is and sometimes by telling myself that she's nothing more than a maids daughter but still i couldn't resist her... and i just found my Kumudini in her...on that night i was shocked when i got t know that she was portraying as Kumudini...my heart again was shocked , the girl in whom i found my Kumudini was the one portraying as Kumudini, again my heart betrayed me but to make myself believe , i shouted on her, now i don't even remember what i told her that day but still...i know what i did was so wrong...i behaved so badly with her...



He couldn't speak more and was just on the edge on crying while pool of tears were already flowing from her eyes...

Ishani was also in the same position as she could feel his pain...his pain of losing her forever... and then finding her just to lose her again...

So guys i end this part here , time shortage, guys i know my writing skills are not at all good but still i tried to explain saras's pain, i know it was not described in a good way but i hope that it was not the worst piece of writing, sorry if it was guys and thanks for always being there to support me even though i am such a bad updater...

Edited by Piyaliiii - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashelly

Hy dr
Its awesome
Love your ff dr
Now ishani and saras gonna be friends
Update soon dr
And pm me when you update
Keep smiling
Take care 😳


Thanks a lot dear , I am happy you liked it , will pm you for sure...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ritishna

I recently joined India forums. I read your ff and it is truly awesome .😊


Hello dear , you recently joined India forum and liked my ff ,t hat was a great compliment , thanks a lot lot lot for it...😃

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