ISHMUD (DIL KI DOR ) WITH SAMUD AND ISHVEER - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
loved it.. šŸ˜³ā­ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
The Whole Part was so Nicely explained.😊
The Pics were so Nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ajay227

Nice update...Finally Saras came to know d truth but still confused...But i know he will know d truth as per promo u gave!!!!SaMud's emotional cum painful scene is uber cool!!!!And yaa d story is gng good and great!!!!The thing I liked most in d story is IshMud bonding...And SaMud's story!!!!What I didnt like is Harsh(mainly due to the actor)...Even Aniket is a disappointment!!!!But till now, I enjoyed reading this and waiting for Ishaani's identity revealation and SaMud's story to move...And one more good thing abt ur writing is its moving at a fast pace with all d story intact,...So overall a Thumbs up for a good story...Thanks for d PM...Update soon!!!!


thanks a lot bhaiyaa...i am happy you are liking it but why you don't like KSG...???
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The episode starts with saras getting up from bed while Kumud is walking towards door , he holds her hand from back and turns her towards him ,they both collide while Kumud tries to free herself.

Saras (hurriedly, sweating and tensely): you are lying , it can't be true , you can't be Kumudini , you are lying na , tell me , please tell me you are lying na .

Kumud (tears in her eyes and angrily): shut up saras , just shut up , i am Kumudini , i am Kumudini , just understand it and don't ask me again.

She gets free of his hand and jerks him and again moves to go.

Saras says slowly and tensely : did aniket lied to me????

Kumud listens to him and gets shocked, she turns and says : what you said??

Saras thinks : means aniket lied , i can't tell the truth to Kumudini , she'll break knowing the truth.

He s thinking this when he's not in his senses and Kumud moves him holding his shoulders and says angrily : what you said , tell me??

Saras gets into his senses but doesn't respond .

Kumud understanding the truth and angrily says : i understood , means bhaiyaa did it all , isnt' it i am correct he did it , i just believe him every time and he betrays me but not this time , I'll never forgive him this time and you saras , you just think about a person's status not his abilities , that's you yuvraj saras not my childhood friend saras , you are just a yuvraj now not a human , i ..i just hate this royal life as it makes people heartless, first chacha -chachi then bhaiyaa and now you...

She was to say more but she eyed saras drenched in tears , she couldn't see him like this , she wanted to console him but couldn't , she just left rubbing her tears while saras stood there still shocked at whatever that happened in these 15 minutes , he was shocked , in just 15 minutes his life got upside down , he got to know about his best friends betrayal , he had so many questions in his mind , where was Kumudini in these 15 years , why did his friend betrayed him , another question that just arised , where were chote raja and choti rani and Kumud ... why did Kumud say that chote raja and choti rani were heartless , he just couldn't think anything , so many questions and he alone to solve this mystery , he lost Kumudini again today , what will he do now , he was thinking this when he heard a knock at the door...

In the hall of club :

Kumud came there , Ishani sees her and comes to her , she could easily see that Kumud had a pool of tears in her eyes just a few seconds ago .

Ishani to Kumud tensed : Kumud ... what happened why are you crying???

Kumud is shocked at the fact that Ishani recognized her tears.

Ishani understands it and says : your eyes are totally red , it seems you were crying for ages , what happened you went to clean your dress and came back crying.

Kumud(stammering and tensed): no Ishani ,i was not crying , actually something went in my eye so to take it out i used a lot force so my eye got red.

Ishani (smiling): oh , so my kumu lies also , something went in both eyes???

Kumud first remembers lucky calling her kumu in childhood and thinks sadly : oh god , atleast he should not be like these people...

Ishani (tensed and bossy): now where are you lost tell me na or i have many other ways to know the truth.

Kumud doesn't respond and aniket sees her and thinks tensedly : why did saras not come till now , if he went to Kumud then...

He goes towards IshMud and asks tensely : Kumud , you , here , i also came with saras , when will you come to home with your stuff.

Kumud sees him and doesn't respond and turns her face in anger.

Aniket again asks a little louder: Kumud , i am asking you something , and did you see saras ...

Kumud couldn't control her anger this time and interrupted angrily and loudly (actually very very loudly): you ... you Rajkumar aniket is caring for me , he wants me to return to Rajmahal , seriously , i should be obliged na , i am thankful to god that you are asking me something.. you are great...

She just couldn't speak anything while aniket understood that she came to know about his betrayal , he just listened to her quietly while the music in the club was stopped due to Kumud's shouting and everyone else shocked seeing Kumud and aniket like this.

In the room :

A waiter comes in the room and says to saras: sir , actually this room is booked by someone so if you are done then...

Saras just came out of room without listening and went to hall.

In the hall :

Aniket says with tears : Kumud , listen to me i lied it many days before on your first day of collage so i just couldn't tell the truth instantly so i needed a time that's why...

He was speaking this when Kumud joins her hand and says angrily : please bhaiyaa , no more lies , i can't take more betrayals please i plead you don't trap me again in your web of lies.

Ishani eyes Kumud confused while Aniket is just eyeing the scene , harsh is just shocked at this revelation(he didn't expected it to be so soon).

Saras too comes there and eyes aniket angrily .

Saras sees Ishani's confusion and says with tears : Ishani, i'll tell you ...

He then tells everything to NishAni who are shocked .

Kumud drenched in tears goes from there while Ishani too has her eyes full of tears, she doesn't know why someone else pains is hurting her this much , its not even a month since she met Kumud but she feels that she is equally betrayed as Kumud is , she just doesn't know what to do , she wanted to tell so many things to aniket to make him realize his mistake but words were not coming out from her mouth , only tears could come out easily from her eyes , she just forced herself to speak , atleast aniket will know his mistake- thought Ishani.

Ishani crying to aniket : i... you know i never had a brother in my life , i wanted a big brother who cared for me who loved me but today i can see what a brother is , i am now thankful to god that i don't have one but at the same time i am angry at god that he did so bad to Kumud , Kumud got such a brother , i just hate you mister and now i promise you I'll never let Kumud do another mistake of forgiving you this time and that's Ishani 's promise to you.

Aniket was left crying while Ishani holded Nishant's hand and started to follow Kumud.

Nishant was just shocked , he himself had tears seeing his lady love in tears , he didn't' t saw his own tears but only saw Ishani's tears , he didn't knew how he felt , two strangers whom he met just 18-20 days ago, he got so attracted to them , Kumud became like his sister and Ishani... he could even give his life for Ishani and Ishani she loved Kumud so much , she also met Kumud only a few days ago how can they both love each other that much , if Kumud was east , then Ishani was west , if Kumud was a traditional , discipline and caring girl then Ishani was a totally modern , chirpy and outspoken girl but they both still are attached so deeply , till now he just heard that opposite polls attract but now he could see the live example of it , Ishani's love for Kumud was limitless like as if her heart had a connection with Kumud's heart , what a lovely relationship they shared and now he started loving Ishani even more than he loved her before , how could he see her crying so he gave his hanky to her.

Nishant (with tears ): Ishani(offering the hankey) take this...

Ishani eyed him with tears , she just hugged him and he too hugged her , they both cried hugging each other , Ishani seeing Kumud in pain and Nishant seeing Ishani in pain.

Ishani felt a strange feeling , maybe love but how could she loveNishant , she couldn't , her heart disagreed due to a strange feeling for someone else

Nishant wanted this moment to stop but at the same time he wanted it to leave , after all he's hugging Ishani but she's crying he thought .

What has destiny planned for SaMud , for NishAni , what will happen next will Kumud forgive saras or will harsh's love overpower saras s love , will NishAni live a peaceful life or something else is planned in Ishani's destiny?????

Precap : a sad night for SaMud and Ishani but someone came to saras as a ray of light ...

Who is he????

Can you guess...

Hey guys i know another emotional episode but its needed for the story , sorry if you are not liking it.

Edited by Piyaliiii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Awesome Part.😊
The Whole Conversation were so Nice.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Indeed a great update dear...loved it!!!!I think d ray of hope for Saras is Lucky who addresses Kumud as Kumu!!!!IshMud bond is d highlight of this fiction and loving it totally...So ranveer will be d person in Ishani's life...get ready for a heart break Nishant!!!!The less said abt Aniket the better!!!!Felt bad for Saras...lets hope he wins back his Kumudini!!!Thanks for d PM...Update soonish!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice one
so Saras knows about kumud now n how Aniket lied to him but he still doesn't know why
kumud also guessed what happened n aint talking to her bro now
hes really upset that kumud n saras r angry at him
I still have feeling ishani is kumuds sis
would support their connection
nice ishani starting to feel for nishant but dismissed it
cant wait to see what happens next
im thinking saras visitor might be harsh
maybe hes realized saras n kumuds bond
unless its Aniket wanting to make things right
looking forward to next update
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update..
thank u for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update.
Loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Saras trying to hide the truth from kumud as it will hurt her. It shows he cares 4 her.but kumud realised d truth n the scene with aniket was heart breaking.ishani telling aniket thst gud that she didn't have a brother was heart touching.hope saras n aniket will correct their mistakes n win their hearts. Nishant consoling ishani was touching. But ishani cant melt in him bcz she is attracted to someone else? Does she have a past with ranveer? Is ranveer coming back to help saras?
Like ajay even I dont like karan.but I luv karan Jennifer gautam combination

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