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Posted: 8 years ago
it's difficult to choose one when it comes to our Rosid there presence only creates magic so I love all the Rosid scenes coming to the characters I like all except that bitch dimar & prem loved the bro sis bonding both roli & rithik's & sid & nithi's update was fab sid grabbed the deal yeayyy loved the phone scene it was emotional & cute waiting for Rosid to reunite soon update next soon can't wait
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome updates
Sids company has started its climb
N theyve got their first tender with their hard work n long hours
Nice touch sid getting to hear rolis voice giving him a wee boost
Now looking forward to seeing him climb further win back his love n make their enemies pay
So far in story I liked all of sid n rolis moments b4 truth out as well as I liked when rithik confronted Sid n he spilled truth
Even though these were my fav so far I think best is yet to come
As for characters I like all except for prem simar n rolis uncle although I suppose I like to hate them so I like them too don't really have a fav although all main characters at some point in story do something to impress
Just now liking the bond between Sid n aarav n aarav a teasing
Aarav really is a nice guy
Hope to see as well as sid getting his love back he might get closer to rithik too I know even though he is on his side again their relationship isn't what it once was
Looking forward to next update
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
I love all rosid scenes. I hate that makhi simar and b*****d prem. Aarav is nice. Waiting for next and thx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
I love all rosid except seperation that was heart cracking scence..i love shiroo scence was awww..
Hate dimar. Or prem alot...wants nithi must be alive or if arav can maje her hubby just wild guess u know..
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome updates dear...i love the core...my one of the favorite story...loved all rosid scenes a lot..i like rithik character...he is so sweet n take care his sister...roli n rithik bonding it's really superb...i really miss rosid cute scenes...plz wrote more rosid scenes dear...eagerly waiting for next...thx for pm...😊
Edited by angelsaranya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Update.😊
Sid working Part so Nice.😊
About Story is Ritik and Roli bonding was so Nice.😊
Simar and Prem😡 have to Punish for what he did.
Important One Make Rosid together soon.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago


PART 70




Two weeks later. Rithik enters to Sid's cabin where he has been waiting for him. "What happened Siddhant? Why you called me all of a sudden?" he questions. Sid smiles seeing his anxiety. "Chill Rithik...Nothing...I know you're busy but I called you because it's something important...you know today is Roli's baby shower function..." says Sid. "Of course I know...I'm busy only because of that...What stupid question is this?" he asks confused at Sid's seemingly stupid question. Sid smiles, moves to the couch in his cabin and picks up a packet from it. He hands it over to Rithik confusing him. "What is this???" he questions. "This is a lehenga and matching ornaments...I wish Roli wear this for today's function...I know I can't attend the function, but I wish at least I can give her this..." he says as his face falls. Rithik looks at the packet with him and then at Sid. He knows how difficult this phase is for him. He keeps a consoling arm on his shoulder. "I'll do..." says Rithik. Sid nods with a smile but he couldn't hide the tears from Rithik who very well notices it but couldn't do anything with it...


Back at Rithik's place. Roli keeps the baby pink and light blue lehenga on herself and stands before the mirror. "oh Bhaiyya...this is superb...I'm just loving it...what a selection!!!" she appreciates the outfit. Ahaana watches Rithik with a smile when he scratches his head and laughs sheepishly. She very well knows it's not her selection. "It's like that Roli...Some people have great selection..." she comments to tease Rithik. Rithik looks at her and rolls his eyes. She winks at him whilst he smiles laying his eyes upon her. Roli notices this and furrows her eyebrows. "What's going on???I'm I being kabab mein haddi?" she questions with a naughty smile "Ya Roli..."says Ahaana surprising Roli and Rithik. "But not you...This idiot guy...just go out man...We got to change..." says her and pushes him out . Roli laughs whilst Rithik goes out with a crazy smile.


That evening. Guests assemble in the beautifully decorated hall of Rithik's and Roli's residence. Siddhant has seen through that the function takes place in the utmost glory though he isn't present there. Roli is very well dressed in Sid's gifts though she's quite oblivious that they are his selection. She is glowing in her pregnancy as her skin tone and hair got considerably increased due to the pregnancy hormones. Her seven month baby bump makes her look cuter. Everyone keeps praising Roli and her looks whilst Roli is lost in her thoughts. Unknown to herself, she craves for Sid's presence. Her subconscious mind really really wants a sight of him. But she brushes off those thoughts thinking that will cause agony and concentrates on talking to the guests who were showering her with gifts and blessings. Rithik, Aarav and Ahaana are in action as they runs around to make sure that everything goes well.

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Posted: 8 years ago


Roli is speaking with a few guests when a lady in late 40s reaches her. "Hi Roli beta..." says her as she hugs her. Roli gives her a hug in back and pulls back soon. "Seema aunty...happy to see you here..." says Roli as she accepts her gift with a smile. "I'm happy as well beta...but tell me this, where is your husband...hasn't met him yet...Where is that naughty fellow hiding after giving such a good news to celebrate? " questions her. Roli's smile fades away. She never expected a question like this. She doesn't know what to tell. She has never discussed the story with anyone out because she didn't want any unwanted sympathy. But now she got to answer. What she can answer after all? That her husband betrayed her and she broke all her ties with him? She really doesn't want to face that fake sympathy that will appear on their faces after knowing the truth. "What happened beta???why your face suddenly turned pale???' the lady questions finding something suspicious. "She might have got tired aunty..." Roli is startled to hear a familiar croon and looks at the entrance. She gets a huge shock as she spots Siddhant dressed in a black party outfit enters the hall. Same is the state with Rithik, Aarav and Ahaana. None of them expected him there. Rithik looks at Sid confused whilst Sid just blinks at him indicating that he'll manage. Roli is yet to realize if it's a reality or a mere illusion of hers. But her doubts confirm as Sid walks towards the lady and stops by her. She becomes sure; she isn't hallucinating. Her hormones reach a peak level. She looks at Rithik, Aarav and Ahaana and spots the same shock on their faces. She feels really angry. Why is he here now? What he has to do with me and my child now? She wonders. She badly wants to grab his collar and push him out of the hall but she couldn't as something stops her. Was it her own protesting mind or the care of avoiding any drams before the public? Sid looks at Roli for a while whilst she turns her face against him angrily. Sid closes his eyes at the pain of her ignorance but maintains cool. He then turns to Mrs. Seema and gives a toothy grin. "Sorry aunty..i was little busy..." he says looking at Roli who pretend to ignore him. Her nostrils are flaring now. She just doesn't want him close to her. She doesn't want him to destroy her happiness today. "oh it's okay beta...I just asked as I failed to see you..Let me walk off now...got to see some acquaintances.,.." the lay days and walks away with the other ladies. "Why're you here???" Roli hisses to Sid in rage. "why means? It's a function related to my baby and I'll definitely come..." he mumbles slowly trying to show he isn't affected by her anger. "Your baby? How many times should I tell you that it's my baby...just my baby...I don't want any cheater's name for my child or me..." Sid feels a pain in his heart as he hears it. It's not that he wanted to come there and provoke and disturb her, but he couldn't help. He couldn't hold back his mind that badly forced him to come to Roli. He wanted to be there. He didn't want anyone to raise questions to Roli about him. So he won over all the opposing thoughts and reached the place. Roli looks at him sharply as he thinks all these gazing at her. "it's not you who decide it..." he says as if he got heavy attitude and walks away from her. Roli shrinks her face in annoyance and looks at Rithik but is surprised to see him almost normal. What's happening? Why're everyone tolerating him. Bhaiyya, Aarav, Bhabhi...everyone is just allowing his presence...Why???she wonders. It's then when she spots Sid getting a mike from the event manager. As she wonders what he's is up to, he picks up the mike and starts speaking. "Dear people who has come to be a part of our happiness..I'm really thankful to all of you for attending a main event in our life... Sorry...but I can't say for long..i got some business obligations due to which I need to leave soon..." he says as he decides not to stress out Roli anymore. Roli huffs in relief as she finds he's about to leave. She can't take it long. Her heart is pouncing hard. One side is her heart which is really really craving for her presence and other side is her brain which keeps her reminded of his betrayal. "but before leaving I need to give something to my wife whom I love the most in this world...who carries my part in her womb... who's my only asset...For whom I'm living now..." says Sid as his eyes get wet somewhere. Roli starts at him disgusted. How can he say such large lies, no matte own he had done a lot already, thinks her. S he looks at Rithik and is surprised to see him watching Sid without any trace of anger. What has happened to all, she wonders. but just before she could get lost to her thoughts she hears the music and Sid singing:

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Posted: 8 years ago


Acha chalta hoon



Duaaon mein yaad rakhna



Mere Zikr ka zubaan pe swaad rakhna



(Sid closes his eyes reminisces his past with Roli.



How they met, how she reacted first time seeing him, how he teased her, how they became friendly all runs in his mind as he continues to sing.)



Acha chalta hoon



Duaaon mein yaad rakhna



Mere Zikr ka zubaan pe swaad rakhna



(Roli watches him over with shock in her eyes whist Rithik and Ahaana looks at him with concern.)



Dil ke sandookon mein



Mere acha kaam rakhna



(Sid keeps his palm on his heart and looks Roli whilst she turns her face against him. Sid smiles with tears in his eyes and continues)



Chitthi taaron mein bhi



Mera tu salaam rakhna



Andhera tera maine le liya



Mera ujla sitaara tere naam kiya



(He sings as he points as the sky and then at her)



Channa mereya mereya



Channa mereya mereya



Channa mereya mereya beliya



O piya (2)



O Piya...O piya...Piyaa...Piya...O piya...



(Sid sings closing his eyes and losing himself to the feeling of the song. Girls who had come in for the function gets elated at his song and stars swaying their bodies to dance whilst Roli watches over.



Roli gets tears in her eyes as she remembers their past.



******Sid cuddles to Roli when they sits on the couch together*****



****** he nudges her nose staring at her face lovingly******



******His lips touches her face and lips and then moves all through her skin giving her Goosebumps******



******She holds his neck and pulls him closer as he just kisses her ******



Sid continues singling looking at Roli as she walks slowly from one end of the hall to other. )



Mm..Mehfil mein tere hum na rahe jo



Kham toh nahi hai, kham toh nahi hai

(Roli looks at the tears that has formed in id's yes when he sings and wonders of what it could be. )

Qisse hamaare nazdeekiyon ke



Kam toh nahi hai, kam toh nahi hai



Kitni dafaa subah ko meri



Tere aangan mein baithe maine sham kiya



Channa mereya mereya



Channa mereya mereya



Channa mereya mereya beliya



O piya (2)



O piya...



(The girls too sing with him as they dance softly. )



Tere rukh se apna raasta mod ke chala



Chandan hoon main



Apni kushboo chodke chala



(with this Sid turns against Roli and walks towards the door. Roli feels like stopping him All their moments spent together come sot her as a gush. She badly wants to stop him but her voice doesn't come out. Rithik and Ahaana also get tears at the sight of RoSid who are struggling with their hidden feelings.



Mann ki maya rakhke tere takiye tale



bairagi, bairagi ka sooti chaula



odh ke chala



(Sid wipes the tears in his eyes and turns to Roli to take a last look of her. Roli looks at his eyes. Her eyes please him not to go. The walls between their hearts breaks they stare at each other like no tomorrow. But Sid again turns against her shocking Roli.)



Channa mereya mereya



Channa mereya mereya



Channa mereya mereya beliya



O piya



Sid gives the mike to an errand boy at the door and leaves. Roli extends her arm towards him like trying to reach him. She quickly runs to the door and sees Sid driving away. "Siddhant..." she cries. Rithik, Aarav and Ahaana comes to her as they watches her going really tensed. They try to control her but to no avail. All the guests are confused by the happenings and keenly watches the scene. Ahaana holds her whilst Roli leans on her shoulder and cries. "Bhabhi..Siddhant.,..Siddhant..Si..." her voice fades as she passes out in Ahaana's shoulders.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Cute and emotional update. Song is Very nice. I'm crying😭.hope rosid jaldi se mil jaye. Waiting for Next and thx for pm

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