Kuchh Rang Pyar ke Aise bhii - RaiNa ff thread 1 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Omg
Naina Rajveer got married
Woowww
What a nice start babes
Bt ye hua kya h raj ko
Vo naina se nafrat kyu karta h
Whats the reason behind it
Javki love marriage btaya h yar
Jaldi se update dedo
Plzzz 😳

Love millee 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
phele toh sorry ji late comment ke liye ...
omg omg ...
yeh sab kya ho raha h ...
raj naina toh phele se he shadi shuda h ...wo bhi honeymoon pe h ... 😳 par yeh kya yaha toh honeymoon ke naam pe kuch aur he ho raha h ...
raj ne naina se shadi kyuki agar woh itni nafrat karta tha toh ...
bechari naina ...wase bechara raj bhi ...
naina ko dard de raha h par wo khud bhi wo dard mehsoos kar raha h
i m sure jiss shidad se nafrat karne ka dawa raj kar raha h ussi shidad se raj pyaar bhi karta h naina se bas ehsaas nhi h usse apne pyaar ka ...
but yr mere pet me abhi se dard ho raha h yeh jane ke liye ki raj itni nafrt karta kyu h naina se asa kya h inke past me ...


first part intna suspence wala h toh baki ke parts kase ho gay ...looking forward for it
jaldi jaldi update karo plz ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Omg
Naina Rajveer got married
Woowww
What a nice start babes
Bt ye hua kya h raj ko
Vo naina se nafrat kyu karta h
Whats the reason behind it
Javki love marriage btaya h yar
Jaldi se update dedo
Plzzz 😳

Love millee 😛


Thanks millee ab to yeh past me jab takajhaki karungi tab pata chalega ki reason kya h
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: RNforever

phele toh sorry ji late comment ke liye ...
omg omg ...
yeh sab kya ho raha h ...
raj naina toh phele se he shadi shuda h ...wo bhi honeymoon pe h ... 😳 par yeh kya yaha toh honeymoon ke naam pe kuch aur he ho raha h ...
raj ne naina se shadi kyuki agar woh itni nafrat karta tha toh ...
bechari naina ...wase bechara raj bhi ...
naina ko dard de raha h par wo khud bhi wo dard mehsoos kar raha h
i m sure jiss shidad se nafrat karne ka dawa raj kar raha h ussi shidad se raj pyaar bhi karta h naina se bas ehsaas nhi h usse apne pyaar ka ...
but yr mere pet me abhi se dard ho raha h yeh jane ke liye ki raj itni nafrt karta kyu h naina se asa kya h inke past me ...


first part intna suspence wala h toh baki ke parts kase ho gay ...looking forward for it
jaldi jaldi update karo plz ...



Omg omg

Aapne read kr hi Kia kya baat hai

Anyways let's see kya hota h

Tumhare pate me dard ho rha h jhuthi kahi ki

Anyways thanks finally u got time to read n for giving wonderful comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

Update when?



Love and prayer
Yogini


On Friday night 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Wooo cute amazing update can't wait for next update plz con soon thanks for pm😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: 0913155

Wooo cute amazing update can't wait for next update plz con soon thanks for pm😛


Thanks dear
Par aapko.yeh cute laga 😲

Anyways thanks again
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing but a sad part... waiting for more. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanx every one for loving and commenting on part 1...
here is part 2 keep reading & keep smiling...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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***Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***
Part 2


kareeb 1 Saal Pehle...

Delhi... Alhuwalia mansion...

subah ke 8 baj rahe hai... ghar me ek ladki jisne nevy blue color ki saree pehni hai... baal khule hai.. mangh me sindur gale me mangal sutra mathe bindi hathon me chudiyaan hai uske she is looking very preity... wo dining table ke pass khadi bread me butter spread kar rahi thi ki peeche se ek ladka aata hai... aur use hug kar leta hai...

ritu:- naveen chhodiye mujhe kya kar rahe hai...

naveen:- apni biwi se pyar...

ritu:- are yeh koi waqt hai... chaliye baith jaiye papa aa gaye toh...

naveen:- kya yaar...( he left her...and sat on a chair after some time rishab came with a news paper in his hand... and also sat down at a chair...)... good morning papa... any special news...

ritu:- morning papa... aapki chai...

rishab:- morning bachho... nothing naveen... bas humare dusman ki takat badh rahi hai...

naveen:- matalab...?

rishab:- shekhwat's they are growing... jabse RV lauta hai... we hume maat de rahe hai... yeh dekho... last contract bhi le gaye...

naveen:- kya last contract... papa yeh sahi nahi hai... agar aise hi hum contracts khote rahe toh... i have decided papa ki ab shekhawats ke khilaaf jitne bhi contracts honge hum usme Naina ki help leinge... papa last contarct jo humein mila hai just bcz of Naina...

rishab:- ha sahi keh rahe ho... par abhi nahi naveen... abhi usne naya - naya business me shikha hai... main nahi chahta ki wo shekhawats ki politics ka hissa bane...

naveen:- par papa...

rishabh:- nahin naveen abhi naina nahi... main yeh nahi keh raha ki hum naina ki help na le... hum leinge par waqt aane pe... abhi naina ko time do...

naveen:- ok papa jaisa aap kahe...

rishabh:- waise bhi ab bas Naina ki bhi shadi kara dun mujhe retirement leni hai... aur fir tum aur Naina milkar pura business sambhalo...

naveen:- shadi... itani jaldi...

ritu:- aap bhool rahe hai ki aapki behen 23 saal ki ho gayi hai... aur naveen yeh umra hi aisi hai... jab kisi ka ban jana aur kisi ko apna bana lena bahut asaan hota hai,...

rishab:- bilkul sahi aur waise bhi achha ladka milne me time lagta hai... dekhienge socheinge... agar koi achha business man mil gaya jo humare barabari ka ho to hum apni beti ki sadi bhi kar deinge...

naveen:- ha papa u are right... kitani jaldi wo badi ho gayi...pata hi nahi chala...

ritu:- par dil se to aaj bhi bachhi hi hai... dekhiye na aaj sunday hai to abhi tak so rahi hai...

naveen:- are sone do... lo ji humara break fast ho gaya... main chala apne friends se milne... dopahar tak aa jaunga...

rishab:- main bhi club ja raha hu...

ritu:- ok par lunch tak aa jaiyega aap dono... aaj sunday special hai...

rishab:- woow... maza aa jayega...(rishab left from there... ritu utensils collect kar rahi thi ki naveen uske pass gaya aur uske cheeek pe kiss karke bhag gaya...tabhi peeche se ek awaaj aai...)...

voice:- wow... kya pyar hai...( ritu turns and find Naina in her shots and T she was just awake... and standing on stairs)...

ritu:- are Naina uth gayi... ja jaldi se fresh ho ja... main tera break fast lagati hu...

Naina( table ke pass ate hue):- kya bhabhi... u r so unromatic ha... mere bhaiya se kuchh sheekho...

ritu:- chup... mujhe kuchh nahi shikhna... jo sheekhna tha in 2 saalpn me sheekh chuki hu...( Naina aur ritu dono hi dining chairs pe baith jati hai...)... waise madam u wont belive aaj papa aur naveen aapki shadi ki baat kar rahe the...( Naina is shocked)...

Naina:- kya... shadi... wo bhi meri...?...

ritu:- ji ha,... wo bhi arranged...

Naina:- no ways...

ritu:- ha mujhe pata hai ki humari princess ko love marriage karni hai... par uske liye aapko love bhi karna hoga...

Naina:- kya bhabhi... kyun jale pe namak chhidak rahi ho...

ritu:- kyun bhai... aap itani khubsurat hai... kitane ladke aap pe marte hai... koi pasand nahi aaya kya...?

Naina:- nhhh... wo koi ladke hai...

ritu:- achha wo ladke nahi hai...?...

Naina:- are ladke hai... but not my type of...

ritu:- achha madam to yeh bataiye ki yeh aap ke type ka hai kaisa aur milega kab...?

Naina:- milega kab yeh to pata nahi... par ha... wo sabse alag hoga... mera dil kehta hai ki main use dekhte hi pehchaan lungi kyuki pyar ke liye toh ek nazar hi kaafi hoti hai... and u know what wo mujhe deewangi ki had tak chahega... bahut... bahut pyar karega... aur main bhi use toot kar chahungi... ( Naina ka face utar jata hai...)... par pata nahi yeh bhagwan ji ko mujhse kya problem hai,... use bhejte hi nahi hai...

ritu:- awww... how sweet... m sure tujhe tera prince charming jarur milega... aur bhagwan kare ki tune jo kuchh bhi socha hai... sab sach ho jaye... ( Naina still apne prince charming ke baare me soch rahi thi...) waise Naina ek baat bata, soch ki tujhe tera prince charming mil gaya to kya karegi tu...

Naina:- kya bhabhi... wahi jo sab karte hai... wo barat lekar mere ghar aayega... aur mujhe apni dulhan bana kar le jayega... main uske rang me rang jaungi...

ritu:- matalab tu direct shadi karegi...no romance before marriage...

Naina:- kya bhabhi... yeh main abhi kaise bata sakti hu... but bhabhi aap to janti hai, maine kitne sapne sajaye hai... apni shadi ko lekar... apne pyar ko lekar wo pure to honge na..?..

ritu:- ha Naina jarur pure honge... achha mujhe bahut kaam hai main tera break fast lekar aati hun... ok... ( ritu uth kar kitchen ki taraf jane lagti hai,... Naina yunhi apne khayalo me khoyi hui si thi ki achanak se ritu ko Naina ki awaaj sunai deti hai... aur wo bahar aakar dekhti hai... Naina dining ke upar leti thi... aur ceiling ko dekh kar ga rahi thi...)...

sabki baratien aayi...doli tu bhi lana...
sabki baratein aayi...doli tu bhi lana...
dulhan bana ke humko...raja ji le jana...
sabki baratien aayi...
(Naina still singing lost her own thaugts and ritu is standing at kitchen door looking at her with sweet smile... akhir Naina ke sapne kuchh bade nahi hai... bas jaise har ek ladki bachapan se hi apne jeevan sathi aur apne pyar ke sapne dekhti hai... waise hi Naina ne bhi dekhe hai..)...

bandh ke shehra tumse milke...
nikaleinge saare armaan dil ke...

( Naina closed her eyes a wide smiles appears on her lips... )...

aankhon me taarien nache...
hieee...aankhon me taarein naache...
ghoonghat yun uthana...
fir humko haule - haule bahon me chhupana...
sabki baratien aayi...

( ritu Naina ke pass aake khadi hoti hai... Naina opens her eyes and hugs her very tightly... ritu takes her to the kitchen... Naina still singing holding ritu)...

apno se juda main hoti hui...
kuchh hasti hui... roti hui...
jab chhodungi baabul gali...
tumhre angnaa aaungi chali...
jab tann - mann se teri banungi...
gori baiyaan meri dharna haule se...

( Naina sat on kitchen top... and looking at ritu.. who was busy in her work... then ritu looks at her and winks... on which Naina sharmofied and ran away to her room... on which ritu laughs...)...

mehendi waale hanthon ki...
hiieee...mehendi waale hanthon ki...
chudi khankanaa...
fir mujhko haule- haule bahon me chhupana...
sabki baratien aayi...

(Naina came from wash room in white salwar kurta... and sat on dressing table... and looking at her palms... and puuting her bangles on her wrist...)...

ahhh..ahhh...ahhh...ahhh...aa aaa aa aaahh...

fir bindiyaan ki sab chandaniyaan...
aur payal ki sab raganiyaan...
tere ghar aangan me luta degi...
dulhe raja teri dulhaniyaan...
pehle tum khelna... mere rang roop se...
fir chun dalna ang - ang ki kalia...

( firstly Naina applied a bit make up... then small stone bindi on her fore head.. then silver anklet on her feet... then goes to her bed... takes her heart shaped red pillow, covers her face with shyness... she is actually blushing... thinking about her first night...)...

kore tann ke fulon see...
hieee...kore tann ke fulon see...
sejiyaa sajanaa...
fir humko haule- haule bahon me chhupana...
sabki baratien aayi...

( she laid down on the bed... looks at ceiling and picks up a more(peacock) pankh and rotates it on her body... and same time blushing...)...

sabki baratein aayi...doli tu bhi lana...
dulhan bana ke humko...raja ji le jana...
sabki baratien aayi...

( she picks up her dairy which she used to carry with her... then finally looks at herself at mirror... and then ran towards down...)...

sabki baratein aayi...doli tu bhi lana...
dulhan bana ke humko...raja ji le jana...
sabki baratien aayi...

( Naina goes behind ritu and hugs her... who was making her breakfast she can understands her feeling... she hugs her with same love... then puts a toast on her mouth...)...

movie:- Janam samjha karo...


ritu:- madam jo aapke khayal hai na... ab mujhe lagta hai ki naveen aur papa sahi keh rahe hai... jald se jald aapko vida karna hi hoga...

Naina:- ha na... theek hai... but bhabhi... jaisa bhaiya aapko itna pyar karte hai... wo bhi mujhse utna hi pyar kareinge na...

ritu:- ohoo... wo bhi haa...

Naina:- kya bhabhi... abhi main unhe janti thodi na hu... to kya kahu...

ritu:- ha yeh bhi theek hai... aur jahan tak sawaal hai pyar ka to meri gudiyaan itani pyari hai ki kisi ko bhi usse pyar ho jaaye... aur hum humare liye aise nandoi dundheinge jo 24 ghante aapke diwaane ban kar ghume... ( Naina blushed),... kya Naina abhi se itna blush kar rahi hai... baad me tera kya hoga... tera hal dekh kar to lagta hai tu hi uski diwaani ban kar ghumegi... waise koi ho nazar me to bata de...

Naina:- kya bhabhi aap bhi... aur nahi, koi nahi abhi tak... ha prapose to bahuto ne kiya hai... par kisi ko meri khubsurati se pyar hai... to kisi ko meri daulat se... par mujhse kisi ne pyar nahi kiya... Naina se... asli Naina se...aur bhabhi.. ma to chali gayi par mujhe yakeen hai ki main apni saasu ma ko apni maa bana lungi...

ritu:- sahi kaha tune... par mera dil kehta hai... ki jaise hi tujhe wo milega na tera dil khud tujhe bata dega...

Naina:- hmmm.. lets...see... achha abhi main jati hu... aaj sunday hai na.. to mujhe orphanage jana hai...

ritu":- theek hai ja... par time se wapas aa jana...

Naina:- ha aa jaungi waise main pehele baani ke ghar ja rahi hu... usi ke sath jaungi...

ritu:- ok... byee...( Naina left from there...)...

Shekhawat vila...

hum dekhte hai ki bahut hi khubsurat sa ghar hai... bahar garden me ek couple baitha tha... aur sayad chai pee raha hai...

viren:- woww... knew it...

ishita:- kya hua... bade khush lag rahe hai...

viren:- khush hone ki baat hi hai... yeh dekho... head lines... now shekhwat's are back with bang... last contract jo hume veer ki wajah se mila hai... uske charche pure delhi me ho rahe hai...

ishita:- ha aakhir beta kiska hai...?

viren:- ji ha aap ka hi hai...

ishita:- waise viren aapko nahi lagta ki ab hume veer k liye achhi si ladki dekh kar uski saadi kara deni chahiye... ( viren dukhi ho jata hai)... viren i know aap kya soch rahe hai... badi behen ke hote hue... hum uski saadi... par... shalu ki jo haalat hai... use time lagega viren... hum shalu ke kaaran veer ke baare me sochna band nahi kar sakte na...

viren:- ha sahi keh rahi ho... hume veer ke baare me sochna hi hoga... aur main bas yahi chahta hu ki meri shalu bhi dulhan bane aur...

ishita:- jarur banegi... meri beti ko is duniyaan ka sabse achha humsafar milega... aap dekhna...

Pooja:- bilkul sahi kaha aapne...( both turns and look at Pooja who was there in her jogging suit... smile appears on both's face...)... ma papa... dekhna humari di ko sabse achha jeevan sathi milega...

ishita:- Pooja... what is this... aaj itna late...?

Pooja:- ha ma... wo aaj sunday tha na... so... waise where is veer...? abhi tak so raha hai kya...

ishita:- ha... jab subah uske kamre me gayi thi to so raha tha... waise hum veer ki saadi ka soch rahe hai...

Pooja:- kya veer ki saadi... kis ladki ko apni jaan se pyar nahi hai...? jo is sadu se saadi karegi...?

ishita:- chup... mera veer dil ka bahut achha hai...

Pooja:- ha dil ka toh achha hai... par uski jaban ka kya kare...

ishita:- aisa kuchh nahi hai... usne jo dard apne ander chhipa kar rakhe hai... usi wajah se strict hai... nahi toh bachapan me kitna shararati tha...

Pooja:- are ma... dont worry main to mazak kar rahi thi... achha i m going & wanna take bath...

viren:- wait rukiye madam... waise Pooja aap bhuliye mat ki aapki umra bhi shadi ki ho gayi hai... samjhi.. hume aapki bhi shadi karani hai... to agar aapko koi pasand ho to hume bejhijhak bata dijiyega...

Pooja:- papa... yeh bhi koi bolne ki baat hai... main sabse pehle aap dono ko bataungi...

viren:- yeh hui na baat... aur ho sake to apne us friend ko bhi kuchh akal de dijiye...

Pooja:- ha ha... are aap tension mat lo... main aur Aalekh hai na.. use sheedha karne ke liye...now bye...( Pooja left...)...

ishita:- sahi kaha usne wo aur Aalekh uske sath rehte hai to mujhe veer ki kam fikra rehti hai...

viren:- ha ishita... waise yeh charo bachhe humari zindagi hai... kehne ko to Aalekh veer ka friend hai par maine humesha use apna beta hi mana hai...

ishita:- maine bhi... bas humare yeh charo bachhe khush rahe...

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