Kuchh Rang Pyar ke Aise bhii - RaiNa ff thread 1

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

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thanks every one for liking and commenting on part 7
here is part 8... keep reading... keep enjoying... n keep smiling always...

love... Chandni...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

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*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 8

Naina in her heart:- Rajveer...nhh... Raj...

aalekh:- hi naina hum to mil chuke hai na... i m aalekh... aur yeh pooja... hum veer ke childhood frnds hai...

pooja:- oye aalekh tu naina se kab mila...?

bani (to naina ):- ha... kab ha...?

aalekh;- wo actually... mera, naina aur veer ka accident ho gaya tha... ( to baani) aapki frnd ne humari gadi ko thok diya tha...

naveen:-what...? naina...

naina;- sorry bhaiya...

bani:- are chhodo na... hey rajveer hum sab sath me baithe...?

rajveer:- ya sure...

sabhi sath baith jate hai... ali bas pooja ko dekhe ja raha tha... jo aalekh ne notice kiya... aur use bilkul bhi achha nahi laga... but wo chup raha... naveen jo ki pehli hi mulaakat me rajveer se impress ho gaya tha... wo rajveer se baat karne me busy hai... naina kabhi rajveer ko dekh rahi hai to kabhi pooja aur baki sab se baat kar rahi thi... aise hi sab lunch karte hai...

huda:- hey naina chal na games zone chalte hai...ali bani pooja... aalekh chalo na...

pooja:- ha chalo- chalo... chal veer...

rajveer:- tum loge jaao...

ritu:- oh common rajveer ji... plzz chaliye na...

ali:- ha rajveer ji chaliye...plzz...( rajveer nods in yes... aur sabhi game zone me jate hai...)...

huda:- hey naina yeh game khele...

naina:- ok...

naveen:- so rajveer i hope so humari wajah se aap sabka plan to kharaab nahi hua hoga...

rajveer:- ofcrz...not...

naveen:- oh... i thought...

rajveer:- aap sochte bahut hai... ab isme achha hi to hai... hum sirf teen the... aap aaye... humne jyada enjoy kiya...

sabhi loge games me busy hai... huda naina ko dumbles ki taraf lekar gaya... naveen ki nazar udhar side hi thi... rajveer ne bhi naveen ko follow kiya...

rajveer:- you love her alot na...?

naveen:- ji...?

rajveer:- your sister...

naveen:- ya... jaan hai wo meri... ya yeh keh lijiye... meri beti hai... jab naina paida hui main 7 saal ka tha... enough old to handle her, pamper her...

rajveer:- sahi kaha... bade bhai... ya behen ma - papa ka hi role ada karte hai... agar bhai bada ho to pita ban jata hai... aur agar behen badi ho to ma...( pain is evident in his eyes)...

naveen:- bilkul...( tabhi naveen ki nazar wapas naina pe gayi... aur mazak - mazak me naina ke pair me ek dumble gir gaya...)...nainaaa... ( naveen daud kar gaya...)... naina tu theek to hai bachha... ( rajveer bhi tha...)...

naina:- are bhaiya i m fine... kuchh nahi hua hai... mere pair ke pass gira hai... mujhe bas touch hua hai... lagi nahi hai...

rajveer:- are you ok miss naina...?

naina:- ya i m ok... raj...veer...

naveen;- huda hazar baar tujhe kaha hai... apni in faltu harkton me meri behen ko...

ritu;- naveen its ok...

huda:- i m sorry naina... i m sorry bhaiya...

naina:- are koi nahi huda... bhaiya aap bhi na over react karte ho... look... i m absolutly fine... dance bhi kar sakti hu... kar ke dikhau...?(smiling...)

ritu:- naina...

pooja:- hey naina... tum dance bhi karti ho...

bani:- sirf dance nahi professional dancer hai humari naina...

aalekh:- really... thats great...

pooja:- wow... tum to perfect ho... kyun veer...

rajveer:- yup...

naina:- thanks...

naveen:- chal ab wahan chal kar baithe... ( sabhi wapas ek table me baith jate hai...)...

ali:- rajveer ji... aap loge apne bare me kuchh bataiye na...?

rajveer:- hum...?

pooja:- are kyun nahi... ab hum sab dost jo ban gaye hai... ( rajveer stares pooja.. which is noticed by naina...) sayad...

naina:- nahi koi baat nahi... ali to aise hi...

rajveer:- why not... pooja is right... but lets starts from you all...

ritu :- kyun nahi...( sabhi apne - apne bare me interesting batein share kar rahe the...now its turn for naina)...

naina:- main kya kahun... yeh sabhi meri duiyaan hai... inke alawaa... mere papa... mera kaam aur mera dance... bas inhi sab me main khush hun... aur aap rajveer...

rajveer:- jaise aapki duniyaan aapke pariwaar aur aapke yeh dost hai waise hi meri duniyaan bhi family hai... mera koi dost nahi hai... ( all are shocked...not pooja & aalekh)...

ali:- are aapke frnds to aapke sath baithe hai na...?

rajveer:- kisne kaha... yeh mere frnds hai... yeh meri family hai... main jaldi kisi pe trust nahi karta... ha pooja aur aalekh ke alawa meri family me mom dad dadi aur di hai...

ali:- aap sab sath rehte ho na..?

rajveer:- ha par dadi ludhiyana me hai... wahan humara pustaini ghar hai so...

ritu:-ok but di... means aapki badi behen... wo kyun nahi aayi yahan...?

pooja:- ahhh... wo di ki tabiyat sahi nahi thi... aur dadi to ludhiyana me hai... warna unhe jarur laate... she is the best dadi in this world...

aalekh in his mind;- aakhir yeh veer ke dimaag me chal kya raha hai... pooja ko abhi kuchh pata nahi hai par main sab jante hue bhi kaise...(loudly) oh god... veer... i think its getting late... ab humein chalna chahiye...

ritu:- u r right aalekh...humein bhi ab late ho raha hai... chaliye naveen... naina tum sabko aur time spend karna ho to you can... but hum chaleinge ab... mujhe ghar me bahut kaam hai...

baani:- bhabhi... aap aur bhaiya jaao... hum thodi der me naina ko ghar drop kar deinge...

naveen:- are u sure naina...?

naina:- yup bhaiya... you dont worry...

naveen:- ok then... rajveer aalekh pooja... it was nice meeting you...(all smiles... and naveen n ritu left...)...

aalekh:- ab hum bhi chale...?

pooja:- tujhe itani jaldi kya hai... veer aaj ise...

rajveer:- pooja he is right... ( to others) ok we shall also take leave now... you guys enjoy...)...

bani:- rajveer ji... can we call u only rajveer... you know rajveer ji is... you are about our age... and...( rajveer smiles..) ha to rajveer tumhe aur aalekh ko kaam hai na... to pooja ko humare sath chhod do hum use drop kar deinge... pooja kuchh bolo na...

pooja :- i cant say... veer kahe to... ( pooja looks at aalekh & rajveer...)...

rajveer(strictly):- pooja 8 baje se pehle tum ghar pe dikho mujhe got it... byee guys...

aalekh:- bye... byee poo... take care...

all:- byee... ( aalekh & rajveer left...)

huda:- movie chale...

pooja:- no mujhe 8 baje se pehle ghar pahunchna hai... warna veer meri band baza dega... aur ma papa bhi...

naina:- hey pooja... he is your frnd kuchh nahi hoga...

pooja:- no naina... he is not just frnd of mine.. he is my world... ( naina doesnt liked it...bcz she has taken her word in another way...)...

huda:- oh kya baat hai... kuchh - kuchh hota hai...? ( pooja ko gussa aaya...)...

pooja:- chup kar ha... agar ek ladke aur ek ladki ke beech dosti se badhkar koi rishta ho to jaruri nahi hai ki Gf ya Bf wala ho... mera aur veer ka wahi rishta hai jo naina aur naveen ka hai...

naina:- what...? matalab...

pooja:- bhai nahi... bhai se badhkar hai wo mere liye... usne sirf mujhe hi nahi... balki aalekh ko bhi family di hai... meri aur aalekh ki duniyaan veer se suru hokar veer pe khatam hoti hai... log sirf dosti me jaan dene ki baat karte hai... par agar mujhe aalekh ya veer ko aisa mauka mila na to ek baar nahi socheinge...khoon ke rishte bas mayne nahi rakhte hai... dil ke rishte sabse juda hote hai... sabse bade hote hai... mera aur aalekh ka veer se kuchh aisa hi rishta hai...aur jahan tak sawaal veer ka hai... uska sabse jyada gusaa bhi hum hi jhelte hai...

ali:- really pooja aapne bilkul sahi kaha... dil ke rishte sabse upar hote hai...aur hum bahut khush hai ki aaj hum aap sab se mil paaye... pyar aur dosti ki ek nayi paribhasha sheekh paaye... aur jahan tak rajveer ka sawaal hai... wo kam bolte hai... par i m sure unka dil bahut achha hai...

huda:- kya baat hai ali... ab yeh emotional baate chhodo yar and pooja sorry yar maine...

pooja:- its ok...

baani:- right...hey commom...pooja... hum short film chalte hai... hollywood ki... tum 8 baje tak apne ghar pe hogi... haina naina... ( baani looks at naina... par naina to apni hi soch me gum thi...) aye naina... tujhe kya hua... tu naina... naina...

naina:-ha ha...

baani:-kahan khoyi hui hai...chale film...

naina:- ha.. chalo... pooja main tumhe ghar drop karungi dont worry...

in car...

aalekh:- yeh sab kya tha... pooja ko wahan kyun chhoda... aur us naveen se...

rajveer :- reklax aalekh... just a second... ( rajveer make a text to pooja:- poo galti se bhi kisi ko di ke baare me ya humari family ke bare me business ke bare me kuchh mat kehna...) poo ko text kar diya hai... wo unhe kuchh nahi kahegi...

aalekh:- par...mujhe samajh nahi aa raha... naveen se tune dosti kyun ki... aur wo sab i just hate them... wo sab naveen se related hai... veer tu bhool gaya...

rajveer:- kuchh nahi bhoola hun main... jo kar raha hu... soch samajh ke kar raha hu... u trust me or not...?

aalekh:- veer par...

rajveer:- you trust me or not...?

aalekh:- khud se jyada...

rajveer:- to bas... thoda waqt de mujhe main khud sab bataunga ki main karna kya chahta hun...

aalekh:- abhi kyun nahi...

rajveer:- kyunki main abhi khud nahi janta ki main jo soch raha hu... wo hoga bhi ya nahi... aur jahan tak sawaal pooja ka hai to... abhi bhi use bahut kuchh nahi pata... aur main chahta bhi nahi hu ki use kuchh pata chale... atleast wo to apni zindagi jiye... jaisa wo chahti hai... i know wo humesha mere sath hai... yahi mere liye kafi hai... abhi use main pareshaniyon me nahi ghaseetna chahta... tu samajh raha hai na... ( aalekh nods in yes... with love...) bas ab jab bhi teri jarurat padegi... bina kisi sawaal ke mera sath dena... bol dega...?

aalekh:-bolne ki jarurat hai...?( rajveer smiles and both reached aalekh's house he droped him in his house and left to his own house... aalekh is out side the house... and thinking something...) dar sa kyun lag raha hai mujhe... mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki kahin veer is badle ki aag me khud ko hi na jala le... hey bhagwaan... ab ise aur dard mat dena...

wahan sabhi movie dekhkar bahar aate hai... sabhi bahut khush the... pooja apna cell check karti hai...

pooja in her mind:- veer ne aisa text kyun kiya... kahin kuchh...

baani:- oye kya hua tujhe...?

pooja:- nothing... lets go...

naina:- hey guys... tum loge niklo... pooja bhi humare sath hai to main use chhod kar apne ghar chali jaungi... huda tu baani ko drop kar dena...

ali:- are sath chalte hai na...

naina:- nahi ali time dekh... 8 baje se pehle pooja ko chhodna hai... sath jayenge to bahut der hogi tum sabko... ab niklo...

baani:- ok then... byee...

all said good bye to eachother... aur naina aur pooja taxi me nikal jati hai...

naina:- pooja ek baat puchu... if you dont mind...?

pooja:- ha ha pucho na...

naina:- do you have any Boy frnd...

pooja:- are nahi - nahi abhi hum sab single hai...( sweet smile appears on naina's face...)...

naina:- sab...?

pooja:- ha main aalekh aur veer... ( bites her lips... and thinking- oh know veer ne kuchh bhi info dene ko mana kiya aur maine... shit pooja...)... bhaiya yaha se right... waise naina... tum sab frnds bhi kafi acche ho... i like ur bonding...

naina :- thankyou... ( in her mind :- chalo yeh to pata chala ki mr black shirt single hai... waise honge hi... itane sadu jo hai... khud se ek baar bhi baat nahi ki mujhse... jabki kitani baar mil chuki hu...)

pooja:- bas- bas... thanks naina...

naina:- oh common we are frnds now... to yeh tumhara ghar hai... woww nice house ha..

pooja:-thanks & byee...

naina:- bye... ( pooja left... n naina's eye fall on the name plate of shekhawat vila...) shekhawat... kahin yeh... are nahi - nahi... wo to koi RV hai jiske bare me bhaiya ne bataya tha... par rajveer ki family me to koi Rv nahi hai... aur waise bhi itane bade seher me hazaro shekhawats hai... ab sab humare rivals thode na hai... ( aise hi soch me gum naina apne ghar pahunchi... pure waqt naina ke dimaag me sirf rajveer hi rajveer tha...)

shekhawat vila...

rajveer's room...

rajveer apne room ki window me khada hai... uske hanth me uska cell hai... sayad abhi - abhi kisi se baat ki hai usne... aur wo apne hi khayalo me gum tha...

rajveer in his mind:- aaj jo kuchh bhi hua uske baad jo main karne ki soch raha hu kya wo sahi hoga... kya... nahi main kamzor nahi pad sakta... mujhe mera maksad pura karna hai... mujhe koi fark nahi padta ki mere saamne kaun khada hai... i have to do it... and i will... abhi aalekh ko kuchh bataunga to mujhe rok dega... kyuki wo achhi tarah se janta hai ki... jo aag main lagana chahta hu... usme mere khud ke hath jalne wale hai... ya yun kaha jaye ki, main khud hi jal kar raakh na ho jau... par koi fark nahi padta hai mujhe... waise bhi ab mere dil me koi bhi jajbaat nahi baki hai... jinki parwaah main karu... ab tak jis raah se main door bhaag raha tha ab usi taraf mujhe apne kadam badhaane hai... ha... sirf aur sirf apni behen ke liye... apne pariwar ke liye...

a bright new sunny day...

End of Part 8
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priyanka...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#283

very nice update.. eagerly waiting for next part 😛

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#284

Awesome update 👏
Update soon

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Prasanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#285

Nice ud.naveen ki wajah se kuch hua shalu ke life mai.

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Part.😊

Raj Part was so Nice.😊

The Whole Conversations were so Nice.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

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Manveer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#287

superb update
day by day your story is getting intresting
chandni you are a amazing dialogue writer i just love your writting
thanks for pm keep smiling keep writting

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1069050

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Posted: 9 years ago

#288

awesome update...bt missed RN scenes...this story is getting more n more interesting day by day...😊

bt raj kya krne wala h ye dekhna abi baki h...bt wo jo b kre mujhe to raj ki hr adaa pasand h

loved it...n eagerly waiting for next part😊

Edited by anju_panghal - 9 years ago

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RamAayeHain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#289

oh god

rajveer kuch bahut bada karna chahta hai

hope itna bura na ho

awesome part

continue soon and thanks for the pm

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ria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#290

The up is really good

So Rajveer , Alekh and Pooja too joined with Naveen's family. Though Naina was busy in looking at Rajveer hoga he hehe but Rajveer was lost in his thoughts

Wan some Raina scene in the next part

Plz cont soon and pm me

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