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thanks every one for liking and commenting on part 5..
here is part 6...
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***Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 6

naveen:- oh i m sorry...

rajveer ( stairing him):- dont be...

naveen:- ji...?

rajveer:- i said dont be... its just normal...

naveen:- ya...( streching his hand)... hi i m naveen...

rajveer(shaking hand):- Rajveer...

naveen:- rraajjveeerrr...

rajveer:- kyun any problem... itna bura naam bhi nahi hai...?

naveen:- oh no - no... mujhe laga jaise...

rajveer:- jaise kahin main aapka ka dusman to nahi...?

naveen:- ji...?

rajveer:- just kidding... we met first time... waise bhi ek naam ke kai loge hai is duniyaan me...(aalekh gadi lekar aaya)... got to go... nice meeting u mr naveen...

naveen:- same here mr rajveer... byee... (rajveer left...) nice man... oh no... i m getting late... (naveen also left)...

Rajveer's car...aalekh is driving...

aalekh:- kya baat kar raha tha tu usse...?

rajveer:- kuchh nahi... bas itna jaan gaya hu ki... wo mujhe nahi pehchanta hai...

aalekh:- kya... tu pagal hai... tera naam pure business world me hai...

rajveer:- wo RV ko janta hai... mujhe nahi...

aalekh:- par tu hi to RV hai...

rajveer:- par use nahi pata ki rajveer hi RV hai... aur waise bhi news me bhi meri pics nahi aati hai... sirf naam aata hai... aur wo bhi RV na ki rajveer...

aalekh:- to kya hua... hai to wo humara dusman hi...

rajveer:- ha par... use nahi pata chalna chahiye ki main hi RV hun...

aalekh:- par kyun...?

rajveer:- abhi to mujhe khud bhi nahi pata... par main aisa chahta hun...

aalekh:- ok...

shekhawat's vila...

rajveer's room...

rajveer on the phone:- jaisa maine kaha hai... waisa hi hona chahiye... tumhe tumhare paise mil jayeinge...( he cuts the call...) mr naveen singh aluhwalia... ab dekhte jaao... kaise main tumhe barbaad karta hun... (rajveer apne kamre se baahar aata hai...

rajveer:- mom main thodi der se walk karke aata hu...

ishita:- par beta khana to...

rajveer:- nahi mom... abhi man nahi hai... aap loge kha lo...( rajveer left...)

on the road...

rajveer yunhi apne khayalo me khoya hua sa road pe walk kar raha tha... aur phir use pata hi nahi chalta ki kab wo walk karte - karte kafi door nikal aata hai... aur humesha ki tarah apni favourite jagah pahunch jata hai... ek sunsaan si valley hai... jiske saamne ek bahut bada lake hai... aur charo taraf bade - bade rocks hai... rajveer realised ki wo kaha aa gaya hai... par jahan bhi wo tha... wo jagah rajveer ko bahut sukun deti hai... rajveer apni jacket utar kar rock me rakhta hai...aur khud baith jata hai... aur yunhi apne khayalon me khoya hua sa... lake pe paththar pe paththar mar raha hai...

rajveer in his mind:- kyun- kyun hota hai...? wo sab jo hum nahi chahte... aur wo sab jo nahi hona chahiye... waqt aur haalat ek insaan ko kya se kya bana dete hai... sahi kehta hai aalekh kya tha main... aur ab kya ban gaya hun... mom kehti hai ki main bahut shararati thi... bahut masoom tha... to ab kyun main waisa nahi hun...? kyun takleef aur dard sirf meri hi kismat me likhe hai...pooja kehti hai... ki main apni zindagi jiyun... par kyun jiyun...? ek wajah nahi hai mere pass Apni zindagi jeene ki... ab sochta hun to lagta hai ki kash main bachha hi hota... kash main bada hi nahi hota... yeh sab hota hi nahi...aaj di ki jo haalat hai... wo bhi... (rajveer closed his eyes in pain tears flows down to his cheek... then he opens his red eyes) par aur nahi... bahut seh lia meri di ne... mere pariwaar ne maine... ab aur nahi...( rajveer aasman ki taraf dekhta hai ) aap par sabse jyada bharosha agar koi karta tha to wo thi meri di... unhone mujhe humesha mom ki tarah rakha... mujhe protect kiya... par jab meri bari aayi... to main kuchh nahi kar paa raha... ab ghar me meri shadi ki baat kar rahe hai... par di ka kya...? unki shadi... kitne sapne dekhe the humne ek sath... kitna khush tha main di ke liye... par... ( rajveer again shuts his eyes... and some flashes of his past came before his eyes...)...

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Rajveer remembers...

rajveer apne college se aata hai... aur uske kapdo par mud laga hota hai... par wo akar seedhe shalini ke room me jata hai... aur shalini ke bed pe let jata hai... shalini washroom se aati hai...

shalini:- veer... what is this ha... uth yahan se... mera pura bed... ( rajveer ko kuchh sunai hi nahi de raha tha...) tu sunn raha hai na... uth...

rajveer :- kya di jab dekho... chapad - chapad... kitna bolti ho ha... aur meri behen ka bed hai... main leta hi to hun...

shalini:- ha main bolti hun... aur tu, tu to bada shant hai... gadha kahin ka... itani bhi akal nahi hai ki... mitti lagi hai kapdo me to bed me na lete...

rajveer (uth ke baith gaya... aur shalini ko ungli dikha kar):- dekho di... jo kehna hai kaho... gadha mat kaho ha... main rajveer hu... meri smartness ke charche pure college me hai... aur ek aap ho jise meri koi value hi nahi...

shalini:- teri value ki aisi ki taisi... uth mere bed se... ( rajveer aur pure bed me fail ke late jata hai... jisse pura bed aur kharab ho jata hai...)..

rajveer ( full of atitude):- nahi uthunga kya kar logi...?

shalini:- veeerrr... abhi mumma ko bulaati hun... wahi tujhe... ( shalini ishita ko bulane ke liye jati hi hai ki rajveer shalini ka hath pakad kar khichta hai aur uske mouth pe apna hanth rakh deta hai...)

rajveer:- no way... agar aap mom ko meri sikayat karoge to main kya karunga aapko pata hai na...? ( raising eyebrows...)...

shalini:- aisa kya karega...? aur ja- ja apni dhamki apne pass rakh... ( shalini rajveer ko dhakka de kar aage jane lagti hai...)...

rajveer:- ok go ahead... main bas mom dad ko itna bata dunga ki aapka kis ke sath affair chal raha hai... ( shalini jo ki room ke bahar kadam rakhne wali thi... wahi ruk gayi... aur shocked ho gayi... rajveer ke face me bahut badi wali naughty si smile aa gayi...rajveer gaya aur usne room lock kar diya... shalini bas rajveer ko dekh rahi hai...) kyun aise kya dekh rahi ho... mana aapse chhota hu... par ab main bachha nahi hun... aur aapki har ek baat ki khabar mujhe hoti hai... aur ha... aaj ke baad aapne meri koi bhi shikayat dad se ki na... to main aapki pol khol dunga... phir... u very well know kya hoga...hnnn...( attitude dikha kar wapas bed pe late gaya... in his mind:- di aapki kamjori hanth lagi hai... ab dekho main iska kaise fayda uthata hun...)( shalini thoda sa sahi hui...aur aakar rajveer ke bagal me sweet si smile ke sath baith gayi...)...

shalini ( lovingly):- veer... tujhe kaise pata.. aur kya pata hai...?

rajveer:- sab kuchh... aapke us romeo ke bare me... aap kitne baje usse milti ho... kahan milti ho... wo hai kaun hai...?sab...

shalini:- oh... sunn main ab kabhi bhi tujhe kuchh nahi kahungi... plzz mom dad ko abhi kuchh mat kehna... plzzz...( pleading him)...

rajveer:- kya baat hai...jhaasi ki rani bheegi billi ban gayi... ok nahi kahunga...but aapko aaj ke baad meri har baat maanni hogi...

shalini:- ok mere pyare bhai... tu jo kahega sab dungi tujhe...

rajveer:- pakka...?

shalini:- ha na pakka... par tu yeh baat kisi ko nahi batayega...

rajveer:- ok... jab waqt aayega tab mangunga... par ha... ab mujhe dantogi nahi... na mom dad se meri sikayat karogi...

shalini:- are tu to mera sabse pyara bhai hai... mera sona... main bhala tujhe kyun dantu...

rajveer:- are re re re... aisa jhuta pyar maine apni zindagi me nahi dekha... ( shalini stairs him aur uske hi bagal me late jati hai...)... waise di ek baat batao... kya aap sach me serious ho... uske liye...

shalini:- ha veer main usse bahut pyar karti hun... bahut jyada... shadi karungi to sirf usse...

rajveer ( in serious tone):- di par agar wo serious nahi hua to... i mean...

shalini:- nahi veer... tu abhi chhota hai... tujhe pyar ki parakh nahi hai... i know him... wo bhi mujhse bahut pyar karta hai... sachha wala...

rajveer:- chalo hope so...

shalini:- waise veer... yeh pyar ek azeeb sa ehsaas hai, jab ho jata hai na... to pata hi nahi chalta hi hum kis duniyaa me jee rahe hai... kab koi anjana humara sabse jyada apna ban jata hai is baat ka ehsaas bahut hi pyara hota hai...kab us insaan ki khushiyaan aapke liye khudse jyada mayne rakhne lagti hai... pata hi nahi chalta... aap khud ko bhool kar us insaan se pyar karne lagte ho... khud se jyada sab se jyada...

rajveer:- di u r in love with him madly na...?

shalini:- ha... par veer main chahti hun... ki tujhe bhi pyar ho jaye... tab tujhe main blackmail karungi... ( rajveer is laughing) has kyun raha hai...

rajveer:- di aapne mujhe pagal samjha hai... ki main in sab me padunga... aur waise aapko kisne kaha ki meri koi girlfrnd nahi hai..?

shalini:- kya... matalab...?

rajveer:- ha rina, shina, tina.. priya, anu... sab to meri girlfrnd hai...main to sabke sath khush hu...

shalini:- tu na... mujhe laga ki...sach me... par promise kar ki jab bhi tujhe pyar hoga... tu sabse pehle mujhe batayega... aalekh se bhi pehle...

rajveer:- first of all aisa hone se raha... but khuda na khasta... apke us bhagwaan aisa kar diya... to i promise sabse pehle aapko bataunga...

shalini:- aur hum ek sath shadi kareinge...

rajveer:- sath me not bad...( shalini yeh sab batien karte hue bahut khush thi...) par aapko nahi lagta ki main abhi shadi ke liye chhota hun...

shalini:- tu bhi na... abhi thoda na karni hai... waise sun tu sydney ja raha hai.. na to dhyaan rakhna... mujhe hindustaani bhabhi chahiye...

rajveer:- oh... ok i will take care of that... wahan na kisi hindustaani ko fasaunga...

shalini;- ha tu hi fasana... khud fas mat jana... ( both laughs...) ek baat bata... tu to college se aa raha hai na... to yeh mud kaha se aaya...

rajveer:- are kuchh nahi... wo main aur aalekh race kar rahe the... to bas main gir gaya... ( shalini ghabra gayi)...

shalini;- kya... tujhe lagi to nahi... kitani baar kaha hai veer aisi harkate mat kiya kar... meri jaan nikal jati hai...

rajveer:- are di aap bhi na... mom ban jati ho... look at me... ek dum fine...100%...

shalini;- par...

rajveer:- par war kuchh nahi... meri juliet... (shalini raj ko hath me marti hai...) aauu...

shalini:- kya hua...?

rajveer ( puppy face bana kar):- ek to mere laga hai... aur aap mujhe maar rahi ho...

shalini:- kya..? kaha...?

rajveer:- yeh dekho...( apna elbow dikhata hai...)...

shalini;- oh god... sorry veer... main abhi bandaid karti hun... ( shalini jaldi se jakar firstaid box lati hai.. aur apne veer ki bandaid karti hai...) tu na kabhi nahi sudhrega... abhi keh raha tha ki laga nahi hai... i m 100% fine to yeh kya hai... omg yeh to pura neela pada hai... ( shalini rajveer ko dant bhi rahi hai... aur uski bandage bhi kar rahi hai...rajveer bas use dekh raha tha...)

rajveer:- i love you di... you are the best di in this world... ( shalini also looked at him... she has tears...)...

shalini:- i love you more than i love myself... ( both hugs...) par tu aisi harkate kyun karta hai... tu janta hai na... kisi ko bhi tera dard bardast nahi hota... fir...

rajveer;- sabse jyada aapko...ek baat kahu di...? (shalini nods in yes)...jab aapki shadi ho jayegi.. aap chali jaogi... tab main kaise rahunga... ?

shalini:- tu uski chinta mat kar... maine kaha na... tere liye biwi dhoondh ke le aaungi fir hi jaungi... fir use paresaan karna... chal ab jaa... change karle...

rajveer:- ok madam... ( rajveer jane lagta hai par door ke pass ruk kar jhijhakte hue bolta hai...) di... ( shalini looks at him)... apne us romeo ko kehna... thoda door se baat kiya kare aapse... warna kisi din usko dho dunga... irrespective of his is my future jiju...( rajveer chala gaya... aur shalini muh khula karke usi direction me dekh rahi thi...)...

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apne ateet ki kuchh jhalkiyon ko yaad karke rajveer ke honthon me jahan muskaan thi... wahin aakhon me nami...

rajveer:- kaha kho gayi ho aap di...? jis veer ki ek chot aapko bardast nahi hoti thi... anjaane hi use itna dard de rahi ho... plzz di... plzz mujhe meri di lauta do... aapko is haal me dekh kar aapka veer hazaar maut marta hai... aapko is haalat me main nahi dekh sakta plzz di... plzz... ( he is crying hard...loudly)... diii... (sad tone of kuchh rang pyar ke aise bhi playing in the back ground... yahan salini jo apne bed pe leti hui thi... ghabra kar uth jati hai... paseena - paseena hai wo... shalini ki aankhon se pata chal raha hai ki uska dard kitna gehra hai... sayad usne apne veer ki pukaar ko suna... par uski haalat is layak nahi hai ki wo kuchh kar sake...wo uth kar window ke pass chali jati hai...)

rajveer kafi der tak yunhi wahan baitha raha... fir usne khud ko sambhala... aur ghar ki taraf nikal pada... wo paidal hi wapas ja raha tha ki uska dhyaan kisi ki awaaj ne kheecha... kisi ladki ki hasne ki bahut pyari si awaaj rajveer ko sunaai di... na chahte hue bhi wo usi direction me chalta chala gaya... kareeb 30 sec chalne ke baad rajveer ki nazar saamne ek ladki aur kuchh bachho par padi... wo ladki un bachho ke sath khel rahi thi... rajveer ne abhi tak uska chehra nahi dekha par... phir bhi wo bas us ladki ko uski back se dekhe ja raha tha... achanak se wo ladki palti usne red color ka salwar suit pehna tha... mathe pe bindi... hanthon me chudiya... pairo me payal wo uchal kar un bachho ke sath dance kar rahi thi... rajveer ne use achhe se dekha.. wo koi aur nahi Naina thi... jo un gareeb bachho ke sath busy thi... naina ko dekhte hi rajveer ka attraction hatered me badal gaya... rajveer peeche mud kar wapas jane laga... tabhi naina ke gane ki awaaz ne rajveer ko phir roka... wo ruk gaya... aur door khada yunhi dekhta raha wo naina ko...

pyar me lipte kitne... rang mile...
dekhe... kabhi wo rang...
jo... kabhi na mile...
(naina unme se ek chhote se bachhe ko uthaati hai... aur gol - gol ghuma rahi thi...)

pyar me lipte kitne... rang mile...
dekhe... kabhi wo rang...
jo... kabhi na mile...

(naina sabhi bachho ko kuchh flowers aur chocolates deti hai... aur gate hue hi sabko kiss karti hai...)

kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...

(wo bachhe naina ko kiss karke bhaag jate hai...naina muskurate hue unhe dekh rahi thi...)...

kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
aiseee... bhiii...

(naina aasmaan ko dekh kar apni aankhien band karke yunhi gol - gol ghum rahi thi... aur rajveer bas naina ko door khada dekh raha hai... fir palat kar wapas chala gaya... ki tabhi kisi ki awaaz se naina hose me aati hai...)...

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Edited by rkchandni - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update bt shalini ko kya hua hai??
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful & lovely update
raj is so sweet & just like my bro protective & possessive this bro-sis jodi is just amazing i just love their convo
thanks for pm keep smiling keep writting
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It's lil different bt awesome story '''

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