Kuchh Rang Pyar ke Aise bhii - RaiNa ff thread 1

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

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thanks every one for liking and commenting on part 4...
here is part 5 keep reading and keep smiling...

love...chandni...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

***Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 5

naina:- hey bhagwaan main yeh sab kyun soch rahi hu... yeh baani bhi na... khud to pagal hai... mujhe bhi pagal kar hi degi... kuchh bhi bolti hai... kaun sa main us black shirt wale se phir se milne wali hun... naina tu bhi soja... kal office jana hai... ( she slept.. with a cute smile on her face...)...

shekhawat vila...

rajveer's room...

rajveer apne large room me apni window ke pass khada hai... aur chand ko dekh raha hai...

rajveer in his mind:- nafarat... nafarat hai mujhe pyar se... shadi se... to fir kyun yeh sab... par pooja bhi to sahi keh rahi thi... akhir ab di ke baad mom dad ki expectations mujhse hi hai... to kya main ha keh du... par jo di ke sath hua... mere sath hua... uske baad main kaise... par main mom ko kaise samjhaaun... nahi - nahi.. main apne pariwaar ko meri taraf se kabhi koi dukh nahi hone dunga... mom dad jahan kaheinge... jisse kaheinge main shadi kar lunga... kyunki yeh bhi to sach hai ki kabhi na kabhi mujhe... kisi na kisi se to shadi karni hi hai... to abhi kyun nahi... mere pariwaar aur apno ki khushi me meri khushi hai... par kabhi bhi mere maqsad k beech meri shadi nahi aayegi... at any cost mujhe mera maqsad pura karna hai... (tabhi rajveer ko raju yaad aata hai...)... koi bhi insaan is duniyaan me khush nahi hai... koi na koi dukh ya kami bani hi rehti hai... har ek insaan ki apni takleefe aur mazburiyaan hai... par fir bhi kuchh loge apne gum me bhi khush reh kar zindagi jee hi lete hai... par main, main to is cheez me bhi peeche reh hi gaya... har jagah main hara hun... par ab jeetna hai mujhe... mera dard sirf mera nahi hai... mera dard mere pariwaar se juda hai...(rajveer closed his eyes and tears flows down to his cheeks... he opens his eyes... wiped out his tears with full determined face... and left to his bed... and tried to sleep... some flashes of past came through his eyes... but finally he slept with lots of sorrow in his eyes and in heart...)

next day... shekhawat's vila...

all are having thier breakfast... rajveer came down from his room... and took his seat... for rajveer's it was great to see shalini at dining table... but shalini was only looking at her plate... but still rajveer and others are very happy...

ishita:- shalu kuchh aur legi beta... ( but shalini didnt say a word...)...

rajveer:- kya mom... aap to di se aise puchh rahe ho... jaise wo mehmaan ho... aap bhi na...

viren:- right... ( placing his hand on shalini's head)... beta... aapko jo achha lage aap wo khaao... achha ishu...

pooja(smiling):- ishu... ha... papa... how romantice...veer hume papa se training leni hogi... for future ha...

rajveer:- ofcourse... kyun dad... shikhaoge na...?

ishita:- chup... chal office ja... aur aap bhi kya...

viren:- kya - kya ha...? are bhai... u r my legally wedded wife... haq hai mera...

aalekh ( aate hue):- kyun uncle... ilegal wifes bhi hoti hai kya... kahin aapki bhi toh...?

viren:- aye... kya bol raha hai... ( ishita is staring viren) are aise kya dekh rahi ho... ?

aalekh:- waise aunty maine suna hai... ki jab pati budhaape ya jawaani me bhi... jarurat se jyada romantice ho jaaye na to samajh lo... gharwali - bahar wali ka chakkar hone ke 99% chances hai... (rajveer rolled his eyes gets up )...

viren:- are nahi - nahi... ishita...

rajveer:- aalekh... office chale...?

aalekh:- are abhi meri baat to...

rajveer:- chup aur chal... warna tu aaj hi mere mom dad ka divorce kara dega... dad see you in the office...

aalekh:- are par...

rajveer:- challl... ( rajveer aalekh ko kheech kar le jata hai... pooja is laughing...)...

ishita:- chup... shanti se nasta kar...

viren:- ishita... aisa kuchh nahi hai... i only love you...

pooja:- ok ma papa main chali apni classes... aap loge lage raho...

viren:- ishita... wo aalekh to...

ishita:- common viren... main bhi mazak kar rahi thi...( viren takes a deep breath)...

aluhwalia mansion...

naveen:- naina jaldi kar...

naina( from her bed room):- just 2 minutes...

naveen:- pichhle aadhe ghante se sun raha hu... ahhh...

ritu;- naveen... yeh aapka teeno ka tiffin... wo dopahar me mujhe kuchh kam hai... so abhi le jaao...

naveen;- ok...(naina neeche aati hai... usne simple sa elegent nevi blue suit pehna hai... looking so preity ki tabhi naveen ka phone ring karta hai... wo phone leta hai...) yes papa... ha papa nikal hi raha hu... yeh naina break fast karle... kya... ok papa...

naina:- kya hua...?

naveen:- madam aap aa gayi... to aap akele office jaiye...

naina:- kyun...?

naveen;- wo ek urgent kaam papa ne diya hai... mujhe opposite direction me jana hai... so tu breakfast karke chali jana... aur yeh lunch bhi le jana...

naina:- ok...

naveen:- byee ritu, and you naina drive safely... ( naveen nikal jata hai... aur breakfast karke naina bhi...)

in the road...

naina apni car drive karke bahut hi achhe mood me gana sunte - sunte office ja rahi thi... ki bani ka call aaya... aur wo phone pe baat karne lagi... usne apna balance kho diya aur saamne khadi gadi ko thok diya...

aalekh:- oh teri... yeh kaun hai...

rajveer:- bloody hell.. lagta hai koi pee ke gadi chala raha hai... abhi dekhta hun...

naina:- oh noo... bani call u later bye...

rajveer gusse se apni gadi se bahar nikalta hai... aur naina ki gadi ki taraf badhta hai...aalekh bhi utarta hai...

naina:- omg yeh to black shirt hai...( naina darti hui bahar aai...)...

rajveer ( gusse):- kyun madam subah - subah chada li hai... itani badi gadi dikhai nahi deti...?

naina:- aa... wo... wo... actually...

aalekh:- veer jane de na... ladki hai...

rajveer:- ladki hai to kya hua... kisi ko bhi thok degi...(to naina ) aur tum... tum wahi ho na... kal rat...?

naina:- ha main wahi hun... aur dekhiye maine jaan bujhkar... ( rajveer looks her mobile in her hand)...

rajveer:- oh now i got it... phone pe baat ha... tum ladkiyon ka subah sham bas ek hi kaam hai... phone pe third class baat karna... aur so called romantic filme dekhna... hai na...

naina( naina is shocked );- what... what did you say... dekho mr...

rajveer:- tum dekho... miss...( pause for a second) whatever you are...this road doesnt belong to your father... do you get that... isiliye dusro ki zindagi ki kadra karo... tumhari ek chhoti si galti... aur kisi ki zindagi barbaad ho sakti hai...tum jaise rahees baap ke bachhe hi...

aalekh:- veer... chal yahan se... (aalekh rajveer ko kheech kar le jata hai... naina apne charo taraf dekhti hai... sabhi loge unka jhagada dekh rahe the... naina ko sharam bhi aa rahi thi... aur rajveer pe gussa bhi...)...

naina:- wait mr black shirt... ( rajveer jo ki apni car me baithne wala tha... wo ruka aur turn hua... naina uske kareeb gayi...) kya kaha aapne mujhe zindagi ki kadra nahi hai... let me clear to u one thing... aapka loss kuchh bhi nahi hua hai... aur jahan tak sawaal hai... takkar ka.. to galtiyaan kisi se bhi ho sakti hai... par aap hai ki... lagta hai... aapki behen ya ma nahi hai tabhi aap ek ladki se is taraf...

rajveer(loudly):- just shut up... you... ek to galti karti hai... aur...

aalekh:- stop it guys... kyun tamasha bana rahe ho...

naina:- right tamasha... aapke is dost ne... ek chhoti si baat ka itna bada tamasha bana diya... he has a mental problem check up karao...

rajveer:- what the...

naina (loudly):- now you shut up... kya kaha... rahees baap ki beti na... sahi kaha... hun main... aur yeh road mere baap ki hai... gadi chalate hue mobile pe baat jarur karungi... jo ukhadna hai ukhad lo... mr black shirt... ( naina attitude dikha kar apni gadi me baith jati hai... aur reverse leti hai... jor se rajveer ki gadi ki taraf jati hai... aur ek baar aur thok deti hai... rajveer aur aalekh dono hi shocked se naina ko dekh rahe the... aur naina ek evil smile deti hai... aur window kholti hai...)... gadi aur kapdo se to tum bhi rahees baap ki hi aulaad lag rahe ho... yeh jo damage hua hai na... i m danm sure uske paise to mujhse nahi loge tum... haina...?

rajveer;- youuu... ( but naina drove off...)... dekha tune... i just hate these kind of people...

aalekh:- chhod na... tune bhi to jyada bola use... isiliye wo bhi bhadak gayi... itna kuchh bhi...

rajveer:- what kya kaha tune... tujhe pata hai na... ki ek laparwaahi aur...di ka haal dekha hai na...

aalekh:- i know... par yeh main samajh sakta hun... woh nahi... ab chal...( aalekh aur rajveer nikal jate hai...)..

aluhwalia group...

naina gusse me apne cabin me aati hai... aur apna parse fekti hai...

naina;- uski toh... samajhta kya hai apne aap ko... mr black shirt... aise react kar raha tha... jaise maine use ICU me pahuncha diya ho... sirf ek scratch aaya tha... uspe itna kuchh keh diya usne mujhe... naina ko... naina singh aluhwalia ko... ahhh... kal mujhe hero lag raha tha... aur aaj villian kahi ka...

shekhawat empire...

rajveer gusse me office me aata hai... aalekh sabhi ko gm wish kar raha tha... par rajveer nahi... dono rajveer ke cabin me jate hai... ki rajveer ki PA aati hai...

PA:- gm sir... gm aalekh sir...

aalekh:- gm ria...

ria:- sir are you ok...? aap kuchh upset lag rahe hai...?

aalekh:- are nahi ria... kaha... aaj na humne ek live... actually humne nahi maine ek live movie ka scene dekha... hero aur heroine beech road pe...

rajveer:- shut up aalekh... and ria m ok... wo kya hai na... subah - subah ek chudail ko dekha hai maine bas aur kuchh nahi...

ria:- chudail...?

rajveer:- ha now... u go...

ria:- ok sir...( ria left)...

aalekh:- main abhi aaya... use teri us beautiful chudail ki details bata kar...

rajveer( file fek kar):- teri to... ( aalekh hasta hua bhaag gaya...) kabhi nahi sudhrega... ( aur rajveer apne kaam me busy ho jata hai...)

aise hi 2 din beet gaye... sabhi ki life as usual chal rahi hai...

Four Seasons hotel...

four seasons hotel delhi ka bahut hi bada shandaar hotel hai... bahut bade corporate disions is hotel me liye jate hai... aise hi aaj is hotel me ek contract ka result announce hona hai... jiske liye aluhwalia's aur shekhawat's dono ne hi tender bhara tha... naveen rishabh ke sath pahunch chuka hai... wahi rajveer aur aalekh bhi aate hi honge...

naveen:- papa m sure yeh contract humein hi milega...humne bahut mehnat ki hai... aur is baar to jo maine chaal chali hai... uske aage,... us RV ke saare daav peeche reh jayeinge...

rishabh:- ha wo to sahi hai... par over confident mat raho naveen... wo loge kachhe khiladi nahi hai...

naveen:- nahi papa... aap hi kehte hai na... ki every thing is fair in love, war and business... mujhe RV se personally koi problem nahi hai... par is baar yeh contract main apne hath se nahi jaane de sakta hun...

rishabh:- ok beta... ( tabhi rajveer aalekh ke sath hall me enter karta hai... uski nazar naveen aur rishabh pe padi... rajveer aur aalekh ne unhe pehchaan lia... par kyuki rajveer ek mahine pehle hi india aaya hai... isliye... naveen aur rishabh ne use nahi pehchana...)

announcer:- ladies & gentleman... now its time to announce the winner of our pristigious contract... well we have seen all the quotations... and chose the qoutation with the least price... actually its really surprising to know that... the top 2 qoutations dont have major difference in bid price... the difference is of rs 1 only... and the top 2 contenders are... aluhwalia's and shekhawat's...

Rajveer(in his mind):- sirf 1 rs ka difference... how is it possible...? strange...

announcer:- so the contract goes to... alhuwalia's... ( naveen and rishabh were very happy... and rajveer and aalekh were shocked...)

aalekh:- veer yeh kaise...?

rajveer:- chal yahan se... ( rajveer aur aalekh wahan se chale jaate hai...)

naveen to another businessman:- kya baat hai mr sinha RV nahi aaya... mana ki he lost... but ana to chahiye tha use...

mr sinha:- are nahi - nahi... mr naveen... RV sir to aaye the... but announcement ke baad chale gaye... mostly jo loge har jate hai we to...

naveen;- ya you are right... achha ab main chalta hu... i have some meetings...

at parking...

aalekh:- tu kuchh bol kyun nahi raha... mujhe kuchh gadbad lag rahi hai...

rajveer:- kuchh nahi bahut badi gadbad hai...

aalekh:- ha par aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki this time he deserves this...

rajveer:- ya you are right... par yeh sirf ho sakta hai... aisa hua nahi hoga... mujhe koi problem nahi thi... agar aluhwalia's yeh contract bade margin se jitte... par sirf rs1 ka difference... some one is cheated on us...

aalekh:- not possible... qouting ke bare me sirf tujhe mujhe aur uncle ko pata tha...

rajveer:- yahi to mystry hai... anyways... gadi lekar aa... (aalekh gadi lene jata hai... rajveer wahi par khada kuchh soch raha tha... peeche se naveen aata hai... jo ki phone pe busy tha... aur naveen rajveer se takra jata hai...)...

naveen:- oh i m sorry...

End of Part 5
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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Part.😊

Rajveer and Naina Part was so Interesting.😊

The Story is getting so Interesting.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

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K2kaoK2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Great story. Loved it... Please update soon and do pm me.. And I loved the chracterisation of raj just like my sujal

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RamAayeHain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Awesome update

Naina Raj are really amazing

Continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Rainu Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Nyc update... Loved the fight scene...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
Rajveer and Naina Part was so Interesting.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

Thanks Priya

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Manveer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

beatifull & nice update
raina ki 2nd meeting to badi dhamakedar thi
well when will you reveal the past ?
Thanks for pm take care keep smiling keep writing

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rainalover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Oh,no rajveer and naveen are enemies here, rajveer ka maksad surely naveen ko barbad krna hai lgta, irade khatarnak hai janab ke, bt bechari hmari naina,ki,kya,galti hai, hope so,ki,rajveer ko naina se saccha wala love ho jaye,
Nice concept bole to ekdum hatke, dost bne dushman, and ye naveen ko kya,hogya hai cheating and all,