Kuchh Rang Pyar ke Aise bhii - RaiNa ff thread 1

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@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

The up is really good

So the Flashback started

So Naina and Raj introduction came into light

Where Naina is a bubbly simple and waiting for her prince charming

Raj is completely different .The family of the protagonist is really well presented

Plz cont soon and pm me

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
Hi
The up is really good
So the Flashback started
So Naina and Raj introduction came into light
Where Naina is a bubbly simple and waiting for her prince charming
Raj is completely different .The family of the protagonist is really well presented
Plz cont soon and pm me

Thanku so much Ria

M glad u liked it

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rainalover

@mylifereality

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Thnx for the pm dear,mind blowing it was, best part of ur story is u always used song and they are lovely,
Bt raj hates naina, why, disclose it jldi na, wasie na m really love to see an angry raj contine soon, dear

Love
Shweta

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: mylifereality
Thnx for the pm dear,mind blowing it was, best part of ur story is u always used song and they are lovely,
Bt raj hates naina, why, disclose it jldi na, wasie na m really love to see an angry raj contine soon, dear

Love
Shweta

Thanks shweta

Aapka aur mera ek hi haal h mujhe b sadu khadus aur angry Raj hi pasand h

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

thankyou so muchh everyone for liking and commenting on part 2...
here is part 3...
keep reading...& keep smiling always...

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

***Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 3

Ishita:- maine bhi... bas humare yeh charo bachhe khush rahe...

tabhi humari nazar upar ke ek kamre me gayi... jahan ek ladki khadi thi... uske chehre ko dekh kar lag raha hai ki wo rat bhar soi nahi hai... wo koi aur nahi shalini hai...inki badi beti... wo bas aise hi aasmaan ko dekh rahi hai...ki koi aakar uske soulder pe hath rakhta hai... shalini uski taraf dekhti hai... aur bina kuchh kahe apne bed pe jakar baith jati hai...

Rajveer( in blue jeans and balck shirt ):- di aapne breakfast kiya...( shalini didnt say a word...)... di main aapse kuchh puchh raha hu...( but shalini didnt say a word... aur muh fer kar late jati hai... Rajveer ki aankhon me aanshun aa jate hai...) achha di aapko mujhse aaj bhi baat nahi karoge.. mat karo... main bhi aapse katti... par plzz aise mat raho... chalo theek hai main jata hu... byee di... (Rajveer shalini ke forehead pe kiss karke wahan se chala jata hai...)... kaka.. kaka... di ne nasta kiya...?...

kaka:- ji baba kar liya hai... aur memsaab ne unhe doodh bhi pila diya hai... aapka nasta laga dun...?

Rajveer:- ji nahi mera man nahi hai...

Pooja:- kyun man nahi hai...chal baith...

Rajveer:- Pooja m not hungry tu khale...

pooja:- veer shut up ha... chal... ( pooja Rajveer ko dining ke pass kheech ke le jati hai... aur jabardasti use serve karti hai...)...

Rajveer:- are par... poo... plzz...

pooja:- no arguments... tera roz ka natak hai na... le kha... ( Rajveer know her very well isiliye khane lagta hai... but he is upset pooja samajh rahi thi...) dekh veer... i know tu tensed hai... par agar apna dhyaan nahi rakhega to fir is ghar ka kya hoga... tu janta hai na ki hum sab ki hasi aur khushi bas ab tujhse hi judi hui hai... achha yeh bata kaha ja raha tha... Aalekh ke ghar...?

Rajveer ( eating):- ha fir uske sath orphange...le ab kha bhi lia ab ja sakta hu...

pooja:- ha jaa... ( raj uthta hai... aur pooja ke fore head pe kiss karke chala jata hai...)...

at garden...

ishita:-veer... breakfast kiya beta...

Rajveer:- ha mom... kar lia... abhi i am going to Aalekh... shaam ko aata hun...

ishita:- theek hai bete par aapka lunch...

Rajveer:- mom poo ne abhi jabardasti khila diya hai... aur Aalekh ke sath kuchh kha lunga... abhi i m getting late byee mom... bye dad...

viren & ishita:- byee beta...( Rajveer left...)...

Bani's house...

Naina Bani ke ghar pahunchti hai... aur abhi uske room me hai... Bani is getting ready...

Naina:- kitna time lagati hai re... jaldi kar na...

Bani:- are itani bhi kya jaldi hai aaj tujhe ha... tu to aise utavali ho rahi hai... mano apne prince charming ko milne ja rahi ho...

Naina:- ha ha ha very funny...( Bani uske kareeb aakar baith jati hai...)...

Bani:- waise Naina main tujhe bachapan se janti hu... tu humesha se hi pyar me jeene waali ladki hai... par Naina aaj main tujhse kuchh kehna chahti hu... dekh bura mat manna but... pyar par itna aitbaar mat kar Naina... bahut takleef hogi tujhe... aur abhi to tu apne pyar se mili bhi nahi hai... aur tune itane sapne dekh liye... soch agar tere yeh sapne pure na hue toh,,,,...

Naina:- kaise nahi honge ha... dekh mana ki mujhe abhi tak pyar nahi hua hai... par pyar ke baare me meri philoshphy hai na... tu use nahi badal payegi... kyuki pyar to ek lamhe me ho jata hai... kisi ko apna pyar pehchanne me sadiyaan lag jati hai... to kisi ke liye ek pal hi kaafi hota hai.. aur is dar se ki wo mujhe pyar karega ya nahi... main pyar se pyar karna kaise chhod sakti hu... bachapan me jab ma thi na... woh humesha hi mujhe kaha karti thi, ki ek din ek rajkumar aayega aur apne safed ghhode me bitha kar mujhe le jayega... par ma hi chali gayi... janti hai baani main to chahti hu ki mujhe aisa pariwaar mile... jahan mujhe meri maa mil jaaye...

Bani:- tu aur tere yeh pyar ki definition mujhe to aaj tak samajh na aayi... yeh bata ki pyar hota kya hai... aur tu kaise janegi ki wahi hai wo jiska tujhe bachapan se intezaar hai...

Naina:- hmmm... pyar... woh lamha hai jis ke liye hum puri zindagi uska intazaar kar sakte hai... Pyaar woh ehsaas hai jis ek pal me hum apni puri zindagi ji dete hai... Agar aapne is duniya me pyaar na kiya to kya kiya... Aur sachcha pyaar dhundha nahin jata woh to bas aapko mil jata hai kahi bhi... Pyaar ko parkhane ke liye bas ek nazar hi kafi hai...aur phir hamara dil hai na woh hume sab raste batayega... Jaise tum aankhe bandh karo...

Bani: Par kyun...

Naina: Tu sawaal bahot karti hai...(Bani closed her eyes...)

Naina: Tumhe koi chehara dikhai de raha hai...

Bani: Nahin...

Naina: jab tumhe bandh aankhon se bhi ek hi chehra nazar aaye uska matlab hai ki wohi hai tumhara pyaar... samjhi...

Bani: pata nahin lekin mere dimag me tere yeh philosophical thoughts ke liye koi jagah nahin hai... ab yeh apne pyar ki ramayan band kar humein late ho raha hai... chal... dekh mausam bhi kharab sa hai...

Naina:- ha ha... chal... chal... ( both Naina and Bani left...)

Aalekh's house...

Rajveer:- Aalekh its not fair yar... ab mujhe gussa mat dila samajha...

Aalekh ( coffee laate hue):- mr RV apne yeh gussa aap office tak hi rakhiye samjhe aap... yahan tu veer hai,,,, yeh le pii...

Rajveer ( taking mug ):- oh god yeh dono namune meri hi kismat me likhe the...

Aalekh:- kya bola be...

Rajveer:- nothing... yeh le pii li... ab chale... ( Aalekh coffee ko wapas touch karta hai,...)...

Aalekh:- abe saale itani garam hai... aur tune... tu pagal hai...

Rajveer:- tujhe aaj pata chala hai...

Aalekh:- par mujhe to peene de... waise tujhe aaj itani jaldi kyun hai... kahin koi...

Rajveer( raises his eyebrow):- what...?

Aalekh:- u know kahin tu humare darshan humari bhabhi se to nahi karane wala hai... kahin tujhe pyar...

Rajveer:- shut up... pyar aur main... u know mera naam RV hai... is janam me to kya, ab saat janmo me bhi mujhe pyar nahi ho sakta... ( there are only hatered in Rajveer's eyes.. and Aalekh very well knew why he hates love that much...)...

Aalekh:- achha chhod... chal meri coffee bhi khatam ho gayi hai... chal... par ha humein wahan se jaldi aana hai... tujhe yaad hai na... singhania aa raha hai... mujhe use pick karne jana hai...

Rajveer:- ha theek hai... tu wahi se nikal jana main aa jaunga...( both left...)...

at orphanage...

Rajveer aur Aalekh pehle pahuch jate hai... humesha ki tarah raj bachho ke sath busy ho jata hai... dono Aalekh aur raj bachho ke beech baithe the... pata nahi kya tha in bachho ki hasi me ki Rajveer apne saare gum apni sari takleefe bhool jata tha... dono hi bachho ko gifts de rahe the ki Aalekh ko call ata hai...

Aalekh:- veer... i have to rush... flight land karne hi wali hai... main nikalta hu...

Rajveer:- par tu jayega kaise...?... office door hai...

Aalekh:- taxi jindabaad...

Rajveer:- rehne de...( giving his keys) yeh le... meri gadi le ja...

Aalekh:- fir tu kaise...

Rajveer:- i will manage... tu jaa...

Aalekh:- ok... but lunch kar lio samjha...

Rajveer:- ok... u take care...

Aalekh left... from there... Aalekh bahar ki ore ja raha tha... Naina ander aa gayi thi dono ne hi ek dusre ko nahi dekha... Aalekh ko fir call aya kisi ka... wo phone ko dekhte hue aage badha ki kisi se takra gaya... Aalekh ka phone gira... aur usne saamne wale person ko pakda... wo koi aur nahi Bani thi... Bani ki awaaz se Naina ne turn kiya... aur use dekha...

Naina:- Bani...

Aalekh:- are u ok... ( Aalekh held her by her waist... now Bani stands straight...)... look m sorry miss...

Bani:- dekh ke nahi chal sakte kya... abhi main...

Aalekh:- maine kaha m... ( tabhi Naina aai...)...

Naina:- tu theek to hai...

Bani:- ha... iski wajah se...

Aalekh:- dekhiye main aapko kabse sorry bol raha hu... ( to Naina)... dekhiye miss maine jaan bujh kar kuchh nahi...

Naina:- its ok... Bani chal yaha se...

Bani ( looking at Aalekh):- hnnn... ( muh bana ke Naina ka hanth pakad ke aage chali jati hai...)...

Aalekh:- tewar to dekho madam ke... thank god main tha... veer hota to seedhe kheech ke jhapad marta ise... apni friend se kuchh seekh... ( Aalekh bhi chala gaya air port...)...

yahan orphanage bahut bada hai... Naina aur Bani ek side pe the... aur raj dusri side pe... bachho ke sath inka bahut time beet gaya... kisi ko apne lunch ki bhi sudh na thi... ki achanak se Bani ko huda ka phone aaya...

Bani:- ha huda bol... what tu pagal hai... achha theek hai main aati hun... ( to Naina) achha Naina sun... wo huda ka phone tha... ali aur usne phir kuchh pange kiye hai... huda ki mummy ji mujhe bula rahi hai... tu bhi chal na...

Naina:- no mera man nahi hai... tu ja,...

Bani:- par Naina dekh na shaam ho chuki hai... thodi der bad andhera bhi ho jayega... chal na...

Naina:- ha yar... shit tu ja... main seedhe ghar jaungi aaj bhabhi mujhe chhodengi nahi...

Bani:- pakka..?...

Naina:- ha baba... yeh le meri car ki keys...

Bani:- nahi main taxi se jati hun... fir huda mujhe ghar chhod dega... byeee...

Naina:- byee... ( Bani left...)...

yahan Naina fir bachho ke sath busy ho gayi... ab andhera ho chuka tha... Naina orphanage se bahar aayi... aur apni car me baithi... wahi rajveer bhi bahar aaya... Naina aage apni car se chali gayi... rajveer jiski car Aalekh lekar gaya.. usne taxi bhi nahi li... aur apne hi khayalo me bas beech road par chal raha hai... subah se mausam bhi kharab sa tha... isliye barish bhi hone lagi... rajveer pura barish me bheeg chuka hai... uski shirt uski well toned body se stick ho gayi hai... Rajveer kuchh door bas aise hi chalta hai aur fir anjaane me hi wahan road side par ek trolly pe baith jata hai...

jaan veee... jaaannn leee...
haal - e- dill...

jaan veee... jaaannn leee...
haal - e- dill...

jaaan vee... bolll dee...
haal - e- dill...

aaja...mahiaa aaja...
aaja...mahiaa aaja...
aaja...mahiaa aaja...
aaja...mahiaa aaja...
bebasiyaan aajaa...
aaja...mahiaa aaja...
aaja...mahiaa aaja...

jaan veee... jaaannn leee...
haal - e- dilll...

Rajveer us trolly me baitha hai aur bas suni road ko dekh raha hai... na koi ummeed na koi aas... bas ek tak dekhe ja raha tha... uski aankhien num hai... par barish ki wajah se kuchh samajh nahi aa raha tha... tabhi kisi ki chhuan se wo hose me aaya... usne apne right side me dekha to ek kareeb 8 ya 9 saal ka ladka khada tha... jo apne saath chhata liye hue tha... wo ladka ek safed color ki Baniyaan me tha...

boy:- saab ji aap aise kyun baithe ho bimaar pad jaoge... ( Rajveer use upar se neeche tak dekhta hai... aur ek smile deta hai... aur halke se uske sir pe apna hath rakhta hai...).. are saab ji ander aajao...

Rajveer:- sukriyaa... main theek hun...( Rajveer uthta hai... aur jane lagta hai... fir turn karta hai...).. tera naam kya hai... aur tere maa baap...??...

boy:- mera naam raju hai saab ji... aur mere maa baapu to nahi hai... yeh jo chai ki hotel hai na... wahan kaam karta hu...

Rajveer:- aur padhaai...?

raju:- nahi saab ji... ab pet palna jaruri hai... padhaai se pet thodi na bharega... (Rajveer felt bad for him... wo apne pocket se... apna wallet nikalta hai... aur saara cash raju ki taraf badhata hai...)... nahi saab ji... gareeb hun bhikhaari nahi... (Rajveer ko us bachhe ki yeh baat kahin na kahin acchi lagi...)...

Rajveer:- bheekh nahi hai yeh... dil se de raha hu... bas dua karna ki... tere yeh ( Rajveer uske hath me lagi ek chhot ki taraf dekhta hai... ) bahar ke jakhm bhar jaaye... aur mere ander ke...

raju:- sukriyaa saab ji...

Rajveer:- saab ji mat bol... tujhse jyada gareeb to main hu... itna mazboor hun ki...(rajveer closed his eyes with pain)... khair chhod... in paiso se night school me admission kara le... ( Rajveer turns to go...)...

raju:- bhaiya... ( Rajveer again turns to him...)... us bhagwaan se dua karunga ki aapke ander ke is tufaan ko kinara mil jaaye... ( Rajveer was astonised)... kya hua bhaiya aap hi ne to kaha ki saab ji na bolo... aur jahan tak sawaal hai... aapki pareshaani ka toh... chhota jarur hu main par bahut kuchh dekh lia hai... duniyaan ko jaan gaya hun... (Rajveer ruffles raju's hairs and walks aways...)...

Rajveer kareeb 2 minute tak raju ki baaton ko me khoya hua sa aage chal raha tha... barish abhi bhi thi... ki uski nazar saamne khadi ek car par padi... koi ladki us car ko sayad banane ki kosis kar rahi hai... sayad barish ki wajah se us ladki ki car kharab ho gayi thi... Rajveer us ladki ki taraf badhta hai... aur jakar uske peeche khada ho jata hai...

Rajveer:- excuse me may i help u...?..

Rajveer ki awaaj sunte hi wo ladki turn hui... aur dono ne ek dusre ko dekha... wo ladki koi aur nahi Naina thi... dono hi ek dusre ki aankhon me dekh rahe the... Rajveer jo apni black shirt me tha... pura bheega hua... wahin Naina apne white chudidaar me puri bheegi...barish joro ki hai... ki achanak se bijali ki awaaj aati hai... Naina ko hose aaya...

Naina:- ji wo barish ki wajah se meri gaadi kharab ho gayi hai... aur yahan koi taxi bhi nahi mil rahi hai... kya aap...

Rajveer bina kuchh kahe Naina ki gadi ki taraf badhta hai... Naina side ho jati hai... aur Rajveer uski gadi ki fault dekhne lagta hai... Naina gadi ke ander se ek chhata lekar aati hai... aur Rajveer ke sir ko barish se bachane ki kosis karti hai... Rajveer ek nazar Naina aur us chhate ko dekhta hai... fir uski gadi me problem solve karne lagta hai... kareeb 5 minute ke baad wo gadi ka bonut band karta hai... aur gadi ke streeing side ja kar gadi self start karke dekhta hai... gadi theek ho gayi thi... Naina ke chehre me million doller smile aa gayi... Naina ne chhate ko band kiya aur back side pe rakha aur turn karke dekha to Rajveer wahan nahi tha... usne aage road ki taraf dekha to Rajveer apne pocket me hath daale chala ja raha hai...

Naina:- (laudly) oh hello black shirt... (but rajveer didnt heard, naina to her self)kaisa insaan hai... main use thanks bhi nahi bol paayi...

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