Stories on Sujal-Kashish! Pg27 updated on 23.5.2017 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Mrumi

At last i got time to read it..

This was my first FF of Sujal which i read..

Honestly speaking maine kabhi KTH religiously dekha nahin.. jitna dekha utna sirf Sujal keliye.. lekin usne bahot jyada suffer kiya tha toh maine jyada dekha hi nahin... dekha hi nahin gaya mujhse..

Back to your OS... It was amazing.. just amazing..👏

I can feel typical attitude of Sujal in your OS..😳

You used perfectly all Thoda sa pyar hua hai poems and background scores..

and especially.. that aa aa tune.. typical Ekta's serial..😆😆

So thanks for bring my Sujal back and giving him happiness...😃

I would like to read more on Sujal and ofcourse on Rajveer also..😳

Love and Hugs..🤗

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Nice ending

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Thank you Riya dii for writing on Sujal-kashish😳

I have no words to express your work😊😊

But, it was truly amazing😛😛

I know, I may sound a bit selfish, but please write an OS on SK imagining there was no misunderstanding between SK due to hrishi and kashish did not marry piyush and how things would have gone in the normal course without ekta kapoor's twist😊😊 (ONLY IF POSSIBLE AND YOU WISH TO WRITE)

But your this os was beautiful and beyond words😊😊

With lots of love

Aditi

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Oh No! Khatam ho gaya ! *widens eyes* *everts lips* *weeps* I had craved to read a better version of this epic Sujal Kashish moment but couldn't find a single one ! :-( And then I felt, agar koi hai Jo meri yeh demand puri kar sakta hai, ya jisse main demand kar sakti hun toh Woh sirf aap hi ho !

This OS had things similar to the original track and also things different from it.. The actual consummation was more like Sujal fulfilling Kashish's request of being loved by him.. There was great amount of reluctance from his side.. Somewhere he knew she's going to regret it once she comes out of her trance.. But ultimately he had to succumb to her wishes ! If you have noticed, even after blaming Sujal for every trivial thing, Kashish doesn't blame him for the consummation. She knew that he had only fulfilled her wishes, soothed her pain, it was she who had wanted it ! That is the beauty of that scene! Sujal's love had finally succeeded in making her feel love again, albeit for a short while! AND also the fact that it happened on ush'sh's barsi and PK's 2nd marriage anniversary, made it look like some heavenly justice ! How could God have forgotten the pain Piyush had inflicted on Sujal's soul by that public declaration of sleeping with his wife! He did get it back, marne ke baad hi sahi..

This one had a bit different context, but was an absolutely delightful read ! Thankkk youuu sooo much Ria, for this one !

Love you a lot !!! :-*

Originally posted by: agm1998

Wow dii

U have written it soo well

Be back wid another story soon

Originally posted by: npksk8495

beautifully written sujal pe ye song perfectly suit karta hai 'deewana mujh sa nahi is amber ke niche' ria maine abi sujal ke kuchh secne dekhe yaar rajeev is just marvellous his acting his expressions are mindblowing & so intense that i am fallen in love with him