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Posted: 9 years ago
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Have been reading this story since 25th, while I was on vacation, on my cell phone. Awesome writing Nisha... Interestingly, the interactions between protagonists are far from reality.. There are chances that a real world Neel would only want physical relationship and nothing else, while real world Suvi will once again succumb to emotions and then tell herself "kitni gadhi thi main, what was I thinking when I thought taking the physical route headon will bind us emotionally too..."... Alas, men do not think from down below... They accept what is offered with little remorse, knowing well that saamne wala is emotionally invested, very few have that conscience in today's world to not take advantage.. People these days do not judge you much but then they dont think too much n dont just believe in "do the right by other".. Ofcourse I agree that Nisha is writing fiction... And a brilliant one at that.. I "unfortunately" know how this whole thing ends in real world... The Suvi of real world is left shattered, scarred and alone... The Neel of real world lies through his teeth to his in-laws about his emotions(just in case he has any) for Suvi...
Read these somewhere, n felt Neel of real world would act like this...

Koi tumse pooche kaun hoon main,
Tum keh dena koi khaas nahi.

Ek dost hai kaccha pakka sa,
Ek jhooth hai aadha saccha sa.
jazbaat ko dhake ek parda bas,
Ek bahana hai accha sa.

Jeevan ka ek aisa saathi hai,
Jo door ho ke pass nahin.
Koi tumse pooche kaun hoon main,
Tum keh dena koi khaas nahi.

Hawa ka ek suhana jhonkha hai,
Kabhi nazuk toh kabhi tufaano sa.
Shakal dekh kar jo nazrein jhuka le,
Kabhi apna toh kabhi begaano sa.

Zindgi ka ek aisa humsafar,
Jo samandar hai, par dil ko pyaas nahi.
Koi tumse pooche kaun hoon main,
Tum keh dena koi khaas nahi.

Ek saathi jo ankahi kuch baatein keh jaata hai,
Yaadon me jiska ek dhundhla chehra reh jaata hai.
Yoon toh uske na hone ka kuch gham nahi,
Par kabhi-kabhi aankho se ansoo ban ke beh jaata hai.

Yoon rehta toh mere tassavur mein hai,
Par in aankhoon ko uski talaash nahi.
Koi tumse pooche kaun hoon main,
Tum keh dena koi khaas nahi...


Sorry girls, I know am being the pessimist...but somehow this has uncanny similarity to the real world stories I know and how they have ended...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Hey Hershey's, how have you been. Good to see you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

Hey Hershey's, how have you been. Good to see you.


Good to see you too, Preeti!! Howz you?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hershey's jo asal zindagi mein nahi milta wahi to hum kahanio mein dhundte hain.
I agree in real life Neel might just take advantage of suvi and move on without any emotional investment. Maybe 1 or 2 percent might be who will actually commit. Not sure.
But in today's world you have many girls as well who take advantage of guys and move on.
Yeh Saab chod enjoy the ride.
I am loving the way this story is shaping up. I wouldn't want to read where the girl is dumped by hero towards the end.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshita27



Good to see you too, Preeti!! Howz you?



Zinda. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woh Kavita aapne likhee?
Aachi hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

Hershey's jo asal zindagi mein nahi milta wahi to hum kahanio mein dhundte hain.
I agree in real life Neel might just take advantage of suvi and move on without any emotional investment. Maybe 1 or 2 percent might be who will actually commit. Not sure.
But in today's world you have many girls as well who take advantage of guys and move on.
Yeh Saab chod enjoy the ride.
I am loving the way this story is shaping up. I wouldn't want to read where the girl is dumped by hero towards the end.

The story is soo similar to a real life situation that I cant seem to enjoy the advances... The begging.. The persuit...
When I said Neel would take advantage, what I meant was either of the protagonists could be persuing the other but only for physical/material gratification... N all the while the other would keep getting emotionally invested, bit by bit...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

Woh Kavita aapne likhee?
Aachi hai.

Meri itni aukat kaha... Itni achchii kavita ke liye dusra janam lena hoga... Though the emotions in them touched the chords so well...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
I agree Hershey's.
The only point differ with you I am enjoying the story.
Come to think of it why are fictions best sellers?
Harry Potter can't ever be reality but we enjoy reading it. While reading it we visualise and become part of that world.
You are unable to relate coz I guess you might have come across instance where people might not act as our characters. I am enjoying for the very same reason. In real life we have no control over other person whereas in story characters can be shaped as we would love real people to be.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Mr. Misra...this was nice !!
Mrs. Misra needs some time I guess for the fact to seep inside her system!
Its absolutely fine but am sure it will come around eventually!

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