Arranged Marriage (ArHi) Thread 11 Pt 65A Pg82 NEW! 21/02

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KRISGEET

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#551

At the outset let me begin to tell you that this story is awesome. Am a very late entrant to IF having joined in 2016. Started reading FFs pretty much late.

Came across this FF a couple of days ago and enjoyed reading it. It was so reassuring to see that you have painstakingly kept this FF going and are taking steps to complete this inspire of various hurdles. Thanks to you for this. Couldn't comment on other threads as they were closed.

Coming to the story.

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Mystery of Arhi marriage deal has been retained by you till now. Wow what a feat. Keeping readers guessing the intricate details. The back story on Arhi also yet to come out.😉

Instead of making Khushi a doormat forgiving Arnav despite his many atrocities, loved that this Khushi has a backbone and is taking steps to maintain her individuality while wanting to be an equal with Arnav to keep the marriage going. Have a feeling that Khushi is also artistic and will bring the Zing back in Arnaav's designs with a touch of her Indianness.

Waiting to see how the little steps help them in making most of the situation they are in

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KRISGEET

@KRISGEET

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#552

A lovely chapter

Arnav slowly realising that though Khushi is middle class n poorly educated, she is a sensible person bringing maturely the point to Arnav that he needs to think before he acts given the situation that AR is in.

Lots of grief in Arnav's past. Unless Arhi share their fears n insecurities they cannot move forward.

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KRISGEET

@KRISGEET

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#553

Lovely update

Arnav slowly changing in front of Anjali's eyes. Anjali has realised that Arnav has became conversant with Khushi's needs of reassurance about her Dad's health. Arnav's 'aunty rankles Khushi though.

Will this calamity bring them closer?

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KRISGEET

@KRISGEET

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#554

Insightful update.

So the grandparents have kept a divorce clause.

Having started accepting Khushi, will Arnav be able to consider the option?

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#555

I faintly remember I think reading part of the story at some point in time... will re read again and then comment...

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#556

Caught up with the story. Well, speed read from Thread 5 onwards 😳

So I still don't know about the mystery behind their marriage! 😛

Lovely so far!

I love the characterizations of Arnav and Khushi. And love their journey. No I don't think the pace of the story is too slow. Yes I would like to see them confess but to me falling in love is not just about "I love Yous" but about the journey, about getting there and you have captured that so beautifully. Arnav is changing, in more ways than he or even Khushi realizes (cos Khushi hasn't known him for too long) and you can literally see them falling in love. Beautiful.

And I do hope Arnav is able to resurrect his failing business - I liked that bit of realism but I would be nice to see him recover 😉

And while I completely understand that you have an asli duniya that takes over often enough, I do hope you will update more regularly.

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siamesecat

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Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#557

I just can't beleive it...you are back! And actually posting new chapters. Miracles do happen...God bless you... Keep on writing and complete this story.

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DilLoveRomance

@DilLoveRomance

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#558

This is going to hurt khushi so much.

Why didnt Arnav kissed her? Arghh

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Anu179

@Anu179

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#559

Welcome Back Krani... Thrilled beyond measures, can't believe you have updated two chapters.. This incredible story indeed needs a closure.. Hope and Pray that you get enough motivation to see it through.

Baby steps, but at least they are moving ahead! Can't wait for next chapter!