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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: krazy_khyati

Varallika di!!!

It's your fan-fic, it had to be better than my expectations and trust me, it is!!! Such a superb writer you are di!! I wish I could also imagine like you do!!!

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And for the kind of writer you are di, this applause is nothing, you deserve even more

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thx 4 this maska khyati..but believe me u r the only one to think like this😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

PART-4:-

its a new day now.... Arjun and Abhi are sitting on table they are waiting for rest to come. Abhi was thinking some thing Arjun notices this

Arjun: Abhi kaha khoye hue ho?

Abhi: kuch nahi mai to bas ye soch raha tha ki tera accident aise hi hua tha ke kisi ne karwaya tha

Arjun: leave it yar. Do mahine ho chuke hai us bat ko

Abhi: aise kaise leave it wo to kismat achi thi ke tu sahi salamat hai warna kahi…

Arjun: chor na yar kyat u abhi bhi waihi atka hua hai

Abhi: but Arjun

Arjun: but wat kuch nahi tu ruk. mai dekh ke ata hu ye Alya aur Khushi Abhi tak neeche kyou nahi aye

Abhi: tu baith mai jata hu[Abhi sees Alya and Khushi coming down] ye lo a Gaye dono

Alya: good morning

Abhi: ye lo din ke sarhe nau baje (9:30) madam good morning bol rahi hai. Pata nahi ise doctor babnane ke galati kisne kar di?

Alya: usi ne jisne tumhe insan banana ki galati ki hai. Waise bhi mai late apni nahi Khushi ki wajah se hui hu uth hi nahi rahi thi.

Abhi: Ram Ram ghor kalyug hai apni galati pakri gai to bachi pe iljam dal diya. Alya dekho bache bhagwan ka rup hote hai unke bare me jhoot nahi bolte pap lagta hai

Alya: Arjun tumhare dost ko bol do apna muh band kare warna bhagwan ka to pata nahi par mai ise shaitan jaroor dikha dungi

Abhi: wo to mai roz dekhta hu

Alya: kaha aine me?

Arjun: u both shut up. Jab dekho bacho ki tarah larte rehte ho

Abhi: to tu mujhe kyou bol raha hai is nakcharhi ko samjha na

Alya: WO mujhe kyou samjhayega jhagra to tumne shuru kiya hai

Abhi: ha ha tum to but banke meri bate sun rahi ho Na

[Arjun apna sir pakar ke baith jata hai]

Khushi: chachu masi pl zap dono chup kijiye

Abhi: hai la bap to bap ab ye chutki bhi Hume shut up bolne lagi

Khushi: mera name Khushi hai

Alya: but Hume to chutki jyada pasand aya kyou Arjun

Arjun: yes I think it's a cute name

Khushi: mera name Khushi Garewal hai. Aur aplog bahut gande ho hum apse bat nahi karenge

Arjun: ok baba we are sorry Miss Khushi Garewal. Ab chale

Khushi: mujhe kahi nahi Jana.

Alya: ok Arjun to chalo hum log akele hi chalte hai

Abhi: ha ab Khushi naraz hai to hum kya kar sakte hai

Arjun: but Khushi ki ice cream kaun khayega

Abhi: mai hu Na. I mean humlo adhi adhi bat ke kha lenge

Arjun: ha great idea

[Just then Naina comes down]

Alya: are Naina tum bhi humare sath chalo

Naina: kaha?

Alya: Khushi ke hisse ki ice cream khane. WO gussa hai to uske hisse ki ice cream humlog khane wale hai

Khushi: nahi. Meri ice cream mai hi khaungi. [Saying this she goes to Arjun's lap and hids her face in his coat all laughs at this]

Arjun: bahut shaitan ho Gaya hai mera bacha.

Alya: Arjun chale mamma wait kar rahi hongi

Arjun: oh yes ek kam karo tum aur Abhi Khushi KO lekar jao mai Naina KO ghar chor ke ata hu

Khushi: but mere ko apke sath Jana hai

Arjun: Ap bhi chahu ke sath jao papa aunty KO chorke jaldi se a jayenge

Khushi: promise

Arjun: pakka promise

Abhi: par Teri tabiyat thik nahi hai tu akele kaise jayega

Arjun: I am fine u don't worry. Mai jaldi a jaunga

Abhi: tu jid bahut karta hai

Arjun: kya karu tumdono ke sath rehte rehte ye adat bhi lag gai hai. Anyways tumlog jao late ho raha hai

Arjun and Naina are in car. Both are silent. After sometimes Naina speaks up

Naina: apki beti bahut pyari hai. Lagta hai apse baut payr karti hai

[Arjun says nothing just gives her a smile] par khushi ki mom

Arjun: khushi ke janam ke bad unhone dusri shadi kar li

Naina: oh I am sorry

Arjun: apka ghar a gaya

Kashih:[leaning on window] thx

Arjun: Naina agar kuch raz raz hi rahe to acha hota hai

Naina: par raz ko raz rakhne ki keemat deni hogi

Arjun: kaisi keemat?

Naina: ap humare office ke annual day function pe ayenge. Bhale hi Kisi KO mat bataiyega ke AP kaun hai par aieaga jaroor

Arjun said nothing just drove away his car to Alya's home

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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
wht yar no comments...sab busy hai lagta hai...ya phir part bekar hai.....plz tell me if it is so
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
part was really good 👏 varallika don be upset.....lagta hai sab busy he honge...waisey the prt was a nice one 👏 ...continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
hey dii... luved reading this part.. 👏
khass kar abhi aur alya ki nokjhok.. 😆 😆 😆
gr8 going !!! 😊
Edited by starbellz_21 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
wonderful part 👏 khushi is so cute 😛 😛 i hope arjun goes 4 the function 😉
good job varallika 👍🏼. can't wait 4 the next part 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
varu going just too good... me liking it very much.. you keep up the good work going.... 👏 ab please continue soon..& me very sorry for the small comment..my next comment will be long sorry... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Paru_M

wonderful part 👏 khushi is so cute 😛 😛 i hope arjun goes 4 the function 😉
good job varallika 👍🏼. can't wait 4 the next part 😊

thx 4 liking the part...yup khushi is cute hona hi tha arjun ki beti jo hai kyou.... hmm dekhte hai arjun function me jata hai ya nai ab naina ne bulaya hai to... i ll try to post it soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: sun_423

varu going just too good... me liking it very much.. you keep up the good work going.... 👏 ab please continue soon..& me very sorry for the small comment..my next comment will be long sorry... 😃

thx 4 liking it

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx so much

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