Luv Finds Its Way PART-22on PG-47 - Page 13

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nm16

wonderful part.

Best of luck. Will b waiting for 1st may after u finish with ur exams.

thx 4 liking it yar...u guys make my crp feel sooo spl n important...i ll post the part latese by 1st may n thts a promise...thx 4 all ur luv n praise

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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful par. It was really good. 👏

BEST OF LUCK FOR UR EXAMS. STUDY HARD.

will wait for 1st May.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Varallikka di!!!!!!! Finally abhut dino baad hum aapki story read kar rahe hain. Sorry for being late.........But you know it's too good. I loved it totally.............har cheez ko, har expression ko aap itne ache se present karte ho ki hum kya kahein!!!!
🤗 ..............Love you di, missing you
Yours
Khyati
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi di.....sorry for commenting late....actually story late se padhi....
story was toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo guddddddddddddd toooooooooooo explain by words.... 👏 great part ............will b w8ing for nxt part.....
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: krazy_khyati

Varallikka di!!!!!!! Finally abhut dino baad hum aapki story read kar rahe hain. Sorry for being late.........But you know it's too good. I loved it totally.............har cheez ko, har expression ko aap itne ache se present karte ho ki hum kya kahein!!!!
🤗 ..............Love you di, missing you
Yours
Khyati

thx soo much 4 liking it....

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev-bigfan

hi di.....sorry for commenting late....actually story late se padhi....
story was toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo guddddddddddddd toooooooooooo explain by words.... 👏 great part ............will b w8ing for nxt part.....

thx sooo much 4 ur appreciation... i ll post nxt prt by 1st of may

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: golu_1677

wonderful par. It was really good. 👏

BEST OF LUCK FOR UR EXAMS. STUDY HARD.

will wait for 1st May.

thx sooooo much

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Posted: 18 years ago
hi varallika srry 4 replying late...da part was jus fantabulous n esp da bond both da frnds share is potrayed beautifully.. 👏 ..bst of lck 4 ur exams n will be waitng 4 ur nxt part on 1st may...do ur bst.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

hi guys

m really srry...i no i promised u guys the part on 1st may..but was sooo busy in shifting n exams ke couldnt so plzzz dunt kill me 4 tht...am really srry...

not talking ny more time of urs...m posting the prt is couple of mins..hope u guys like it n enjoy it...plzzz do comment

Edited by varallika - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

part:-9

Finally after an hour Arjun and Abhi reached home. No body had called Alya so she was very much tensed. She was continuously trying Arjun's no but it was coming switched off and Abhi had forgot to take his mobile in hurry. So she was in great tension she was continuously trying their no. and was moving to and fro near the gate. Arjun stopped the car in front of gate from where Abhi saw Alya

Abhi: bap re aj to mar gaye… Arjun tu jaldi se behosh ho ja

Arjun: kya?

Abhi: maine kaha tu jaldi se behosh ho ja.

Arjun: kya bakwas kar raha hai?

Abhi: beta meri ye bakwas man le nahi to wo narak ki atma hume nahi choregi.

Arjun: Abhi teri tabiyat to thik hai na?

Abhi: Abhi tak to thik hai but age ka bharosa nahi wo dekh humari maut kahri hai darwaze par

Arjun: [luks toward door where he sees Alya] are wo to Alya hai

Abhi: filhal to wo Alya nahi yam dut hai. hume yamlok lene ai hai

Arjun: Abhi kya bakwas kiye jar aha hai tab se?

Abhi: Arjun hume gaye 4 ghante ho gaye

Arjun: ha to

Abhi: tere pas cell hai

Arjun: ha but battery khatam hai

Abhi: mere pas bhi cell nahi hai

Arjun: kya? Iska matlab Alya…

Abhi: pichle 4 ghanto se humara intezar kar rahi hai. Arjun tu ander ja mai kal milta hu

Arjun: come on Abhi kuch nahi hoga tu mere sath a

Abhi: dekh tujhe to wo tera hal dekh kar chor degi but mera soch mujhe to ek kharoch bhi nahi ai hai waise bhi mai sara din use cherta rehta hu mujh par to use daya bhi nahi ayegi. Wo mujhe kaccha kha jayegi. Yar mai marna nahi chahta meri to Abhi shadi bhi nahi hui hai.

Arjun: yani shadi ho jati to tujhe marne me koi prob nahi thi. Right

Karan: right… wht... nahi… wrong... mera matlab

Arjun: chor tera matlab aur ander chal dekh Alya kitni pareshan ho rahi hai.

Abhi: yahi aj tu mujhe marwa ke hi chorega.

Arjun: kuch nahi hoga mai hu na tere sath

Abhi: pakka

Arjun: ha baba pakka

Abhi: aur agar usne mara to

Arjun: tere hisse ki mar mai kha lunga ok

Abhi: already itni kha chukka hai aur kitni khayega… telll me something tujhe mar khane me maza to nahi ane laga hai na

Arjun: Abhi

Abhi: okay baba chal

Dono ander jate hai Abhi dar ke mare Arjun ke peeche peeche chal raha tha. Arjun jo Abhi tak bahadur bana hua tha wo bhi ab thora thora darne laga tha coz it was Alya use se sAbhi darte the to kya Arjun kya Abhi.kisi tarah darte darate wo ander pahuche hall me koi bhi nahi tha. Dono ne rahat ki sans li.

Arjun: are yaha to koi bhi nahi hai

Abhi: kyou tujhe us sherni ki bahut yad a rahi hai

Arjun: nahi wo

Abhi: wow badme karna abi uske ane se pehle nikal le kahi wo a gai to choregi nahi

Both of them moves speedily to their rooms…. But alya akhir alya this she came their just on time…

Alya: abhi Arjun….

They both turn to face alya….she saw them and was shoked…. Still she said nothing just made Arjun sit on sofa gave him a hard stare and went sumwhere directing him not to leve the place….

Edited by varallika - 18 years ago

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