ARHI FF :Just don't hold it back

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone!
M not new here but just had left the forum to concentrate on my studies. I still need to concentrate on that but I can't stop myself from writing this one. I am feeling the urge to post a new one that's why m here.
So here is the glimpse of what I am gonna serve you - My first ARHI FF.

This is the unedited version, will edit it later.


She was putting her one year old child to bed so he could sleep soundly which she couldn't do by herself at least not now. After she laid him there on bed she patted him on back just to made him realize that she was still there. Then she straightened herself and reached near the window where she could watch the one who was still there with her 'the moon'. No matter what it has been there only witnessing all the ups and downs in her life most importantly the downs in last four years of her life - the miserable ones. Even her parents had abandoned her for the crime she had committed by marrying a person not of their choice. Actually they were very sure of his not so good nature. So only this moon knew what had happened with her. Maybe you will find it silly to call the moon your partner. But it is like that with her at least. Though that moon wasn't helping her in any manner but accompanying her and that was enough for now. She before going to sleep set her alarm for 7 AM so she can be on time at her workplace which she joined just a week ago.



She was on her feet as soon as she heard the alarm. After switching it off she turned to her little baby who was sleeping peacefully after disturbing her sleep at midnight. She smiled a little looking at his cute face as his mouth was open. After kissing him a dozen times she went to bathroom to get ready for the office.

When she opened the bathroom door what she saw was frightening for her as she saw vivaan who was already awaken sitting on bed with her phone which she had left near him only. And in that instant she knew what was coming next and he did the same, he threw her phone with all the force he had in his little arms. In next moment the phone was in her hand. Catching it was like catching a ball that win the match for her so she jumped a little high and clapped for herself. And from the other end she heard lots of laughter from her baby who was smiling like a coach of winning team.
"You idiot you, laughing on mamma's expense hmm? " She asked pointing him and started tickling him.




So now need your feedback.
Should I continue it or not?
If not then thank you because now I will give my whole time to my studies and if yes, then also thank you to make me smile.





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HGArtistwriter thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
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Seems good
Would love to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice pro
Plz add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start so plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: HGArtistwriter

Seems good
Would love to read more



Thank u will continue soon

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